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WD: Criticism Squad


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Well, I'm still up for being mentored by someone. I don't have any ideas though. I'm my own biggest critic, so when I do manage to get a few lines down, I re-read them and delete them. Busy on something right now but I dunno what it's about.

 

Regardless, anybody willing to help would be appreciated. Thanks.

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Well, I'm still up for being mentored by someone. I don't have any ideas though. I'm my own biggest critic, so when I do manage to get a few lines down, I re-read them and delete them. Busy on something right now but I dunno what it's about.

 

Regardless, anybody willing to help would be appreciated. Thanks.

Wait wasn't i your mentor? biggrin.gif

 

@Phusion - You never put me on the Mentor list on the first page? You asked me to be a mentor for Lance-Ryder but unfortunately he never PM'd me back. Then i was a short time mentor for Mark-2007 and previewed his stories.

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Well, I'm still up for being mentored by someone. I don't have any ideas though. I'm my own biggest critic, so when I do manage to get a few lines down, I re-read them and delete them. Busy on something right now but I dunno what it's about.

 

Regardless, anybody willing to help would be appreciated. Thanks.

Wait wasn't i your mentor? biggrin.gif

 

@Phusion - You never put me on the Mentor list on the first page? You asked me to be a mentor for Lance-Ryder but unfortunately he never PM'd me back. Then i was a short time mentor for Mark-2007 and previewed his stories.

Yeah, you were. I never PMed anything else though because I haven't written any non-BUYG stuff since. What I need most is someone to help me develop things I write into decent plots. I normally open Word and, if inspiration comes, just write about the first thing that comes to my head without thinking what the plot will be.

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I can help. I still have to get you back, ronmar... I haven't had time but I haven't forgot.

 

Also, I'd like some help, criticism from someone who wants to do that.

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I can help. I still have to get you back, ronmar... I haven't had time but I haven't forgot.

 

Also, I'd like some help, criticism from someone who wants to do that.

Haha, surprised you still remember.

Anyways, I hope some of the newer people are actually engaging in the thought presented in this thread. One should not just ask one mentor, but instead, ask questions to all. I doubt one of the mentors would say that they are the best, we each have good qualities and bad.

 

Good luck to those new writers.

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I'm changing the front page now so its more understandable.

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Gabriel Constantin

I would like to nominate myself for a Mentor position, if you wouldn't mind?

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Certainly, just PM me a description of yourself. I am going to stop accepting people to crit work after Gabriel, the list is pretty long and I'm sure theres enough people to PM for help now!

 

~Phusion

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