Canofceleri Posted June 26, 2008 Share Posted June 26, 2008 (edited) Edited July 16, 2009 by Candarelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanted Assailant Posted June 26, 2008 Share Posted June 26, 2008 I would like to hear of this adventure. I'm ready for the many moral fables that await. Let's just make sure they aren't disturbingly creepy. Because to a nine-year old, that would be...creepy. Nice work, it appears to be innocent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted June 26, 2008 Share Posted June 26, 2008 There's definitely a perverse undertone, and already this sounds sinister. I await more of this, that was just enough to make me ask more questions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted June 26, 2008 Share Posted June 26, 2008 Interesting. That's all I can really bring myself to say. As Masterkraft pointed out, the tone is what catches me. The story, so far, is an innocent children's tale but yet the reader feels disturbed. I guess we'll see how this goes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted June 26, 2008 Author Share Posted June 26, 2008 Part Two will be on this weekend, probably Sunday. I'll update when it does. Thanks for taking the time to check it out, hopefully you'll like what's coming. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 26, 2008 Share Posted June 26, 2008 I've been told time and time again that your probaly the best writer on here... the award speask for itself, and because I'm relativly new to WD I've never read any of your stories Hope you can live up to your rep with this intresting piece Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted June 26, 2008 Author Share Posted June 26, 2008 (edited) Well Edited July 16, 2009 by Candarelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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