Gutslab Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Today was another hard day of work. I got up at 6:00am and washed up. I kissed my wife and hugged my kids. Drove my '89 rusty but still forgiving Fortune to the factory. Met Jim, and he gave me my deliveries list that had all the locations I had to hit today. 7:20am, I head out to work, and wave to Jim and the other drivers on standby. My rotation will consist mostly of spots in Broker, as well as a few places in Algonquin. 8:00am, I am well into my shift. Heard there was a huge accident on WKTT, apparently a carjacker led police on a chase in the wrong lane on one of the bridges and hit a bus head on. So far, several injuries are reported and the congestion is terrible. Ended up taking a detour to the other bridge, which is north of here. I've done half the deliveries, and no other problems so far. Truck is fine, might need to refuel soon and get some grub from Burgershot or something. 2:00pm, I have eaten and it's been a good day. Still, I have had my fair share of horns and middle fingers tossed at me, as the afternoon rush sets in, I have drive a bit more carefully. I almost hit this f*cking homeless man who was asking for money in exchange for cleaning windshieds. "f*ck off ya bitch, get off the road!" I've had food, and am currently talking to an old friend on the cellphone. My bud who's come up from Vice City, we will be hanging out this weekend. 7:00pm, it's finally over. I am heading back to the factory. Ended up in a fender bender with some punk ass kids. It's a day job, but someone's gotta do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishermanGTA Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Ok. Get outside a little more ok? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
burnsy Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 tl;dr Looked dumb, I respect your writing, but imo I do not believe that GTA is about writing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TW Cypher Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Ok. Get outside a little more ok? C'mon it was a good story. Don't ruin it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blitsbebop Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Ok. Get outside a little more ok? I knew it would be a matter of time befor someone who say something like that... It was a good read imo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gutslab Posted June 4, 2008 Author Share Posted June 4, 2008 No, are you kidding me this is a fun pasttime. I like this place. But it's not crowded or maniac as it used to be just before gtaiv/and after gtaiv came out, I might blow away soon. AND you know what, everyone always say I am high. Every single f*cking forum I go on, I post like this and people say i'm f*cking high. Even my real life friends think I go about things 'high'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishermanGTA Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Ok. Get outside a little more ok? I knew it would be a matter of time befor someone who say something like that... It was a good read imo. What? Reading about someone role playing as a truck driver in IV in their head? Please.. :feigns masturbation with hand: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFire Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Today was another hard day of work. I got up at 6:00am and washed up. I kissed my wife and hugged my kids. Drove my '89 rusty but still forgiving Fortune to the factory. Met Jim, and he gave me my deliveries list that had all the locations I had to hit today. 7:20am, I head out to work, and wave to Jim and the other drivers on standby. My rotation will consist mostly of spots in Broker, as well as a few places in Algonquin. 8:00am, I am well into my shift. Heard there was a huge accident on WKTT, apparently a carjacker led police on a chase in the wrong lane on one of the bridges and hit a bus head on. So far, several injuries are reported and the congestion is terrible. Ended up taking a detour to the other bridge, which is north of here. I've done half the deliveries, and no other problems so far. Truck is fine, might need to refuel soon and get some grub from Burgershot or something. 2:00pm, I have eaten and it's been a good day. Still, I have had my fair share of horns and middle fingers tossed at me, as the afternoon rush sets in, I have drive a bit more carefully. I almost hit this f*cking homeless man who was asking for money in exchange for cleaning windshieds. "f*ck off ya bitch, get off the road!" I've had food, and am currently talking to an old friend on the cellphone. My bud who's come up from Vice City, we will be hanging out this weekend. 7:00pm, it's finally over. I am heading back to the factory. Ended up in a fender bender with some punk ass kids. It's a day job, but someone's gotta do it. 7:30 PM an Eastern European looking gentleman is standing in the middle of the road. I slow down to find that he has a grenade cooking in his ha- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moncs Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Don't worry man I liked it.... it's kinda cool to think that everyone in Liberty City would have their own life....adds more immersion to the experience. I wonder how many kids I've turned into orphans? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr3 Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 No, are you kidding me this is a fun pasttime. I like this place. But it's not crowded or maniac as it used to be just before gtaiv/and after gtaiv came out, I might blow away soon. AND you know what, everyone always say I am high. Every single f*cking forum I go on, I post like this and people say i'm f*cking high. Even my real life friends think I go about things 'high'. are you high? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JasonThummel Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 "Ok. Get outside a little more ok? " Maybe this is how he shows appreciation for a quality game. Okay? maybe don't be so harsh. It was interesting, kind of short... But interesting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BiGsMoKe18 Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Still, I have had my fair share of horns and middle fingers tossed at me That made me laugh. Nice one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The_Prestige20 Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Well why dont we finish the story for him instead? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moncs Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Well why dont we finish the story for him instead? yay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishermanGTA Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 "Ok. Get outside a little more ok? "Maybe this is how he shows appreciation for a quality game. Okay? maybe don't be so harsh. It was interesting, kind of short... But interesting. Showing appreciation for a f*cking video game by writing a short story? Jesus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Californian Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Good read. Post it in the Writer's Discussion section, though. or just ask for a mod to move it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gregrein Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 nice piece of writing. Its ok, your not a loser at all... At all............... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
--Vega-- Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Ok. Get outside a little more ok? I was gonna say the same thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFire Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 "Ok. Get outside a little more ok? "Maybe this is how he shows appreciation for a quality game. Okay? maybe don't be so harsh. It was interesting, kind of short... But interesting. Showing appreciation for a f*cking video game by writing a short story? Jesus. Different strokes for different folks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAaddictforever Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 this is what our beloved Grand Theft Auto series has turned into. a freaking role-playing game starring the most EMO and whiny Niko Bellic. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blackjack2 Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Very nice writing I really liked it the way you described it. hey just some advice the people in this section will flame you as theya lreadfy have it would be a better idea if you place this in the writers discussion section. Good read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FrozenFire Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 this is what our beloved Grand Theft Auto series has turned into. a freaking role-playing game starring the most EMO and whiny Niko Bellic. You are aware that SA was about 10x more "RPGish" than IV, right? At least do some research before you troll, jeeze. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gutslab Posted June 4, 2008 Author Share Posted June 4, 2008 this is what our beloved Grand Theft Auto series has turned into. a freaking role-playing game starring the most EMO and whiny Niko Bellic. Actually this wasn't about Niko. I was describing a random ped's day in LC. To the others, thanks for the positive comments, it was going to be longer but I had to get to sleep. I might try to improve/lengthen it but not until after my finals on Friday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MobStaL Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 hey mate You High? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SantiagoDomingo Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 I think more people should get high, maybe so many people wouldn't be so uptight and un-fun. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karambalaya Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 hey mate You High? Moral hypocrisy alert... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mixmaster Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 I think more people should get high, maybe so many people wouldn't be so uptight and un-fun. i am in total agreement 125% , the world would be a nicer , more mellow blue/green spinning orb Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drpacifist Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 aw man, im gonna shoot up every sprunk truck i see now. that sprunk driver needs some more interesting stuff to happen to him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holyhal2 Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 tl;dr Looked dumb, I respect your writing, but imo I do not believe that GTA is about writing If it wasn't for people writing creatively there would be no GTA. It's people like him who have an idea and are willing to put it on paper or the forums, for people like you to rip apart because you aren't that creative to come up with your own stories. To the poster good job keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soleil Posted June 4, 2008 Share Posted June 4, 2008 Today was another hard day of work. I got up at 6:00am and washed up. I kissed my wife and hugged my kids. Drove my '89 rusty but still forgiving Fortune to the factory. Met Jim, and he gave me my deliveries list that had all the locations I had to hit today. 7:20am, I head out to work, and wave to Jim and the other drivers on standby. My rotation will consist mostly of spots in Broker, as well as a few places in Algonquin. 8:00am, I am well into my shift. Heard there was a huge accident on WKTT, apparently a carjacker led police on a chase in the wrong lane on one of the bridges and hit a bus head on. So far, several injuries are reported and the congestion is terrible. Ended up taking a detour to the other bridge, which is north of here. I've done half the deliveries, and no other problems so far. Truck is fine, might need to refuel soon and get some grub from Burgershot or something. 2:00pm, I have eaten and it's been a good day. Still, I have had my fair share of horns and middle fingers tossed at me, as the afternoon rush sets in, I have drive a bit more carefully. I almost hit this f*cking homeless man who was asking for money in exchange for cleaning windshieds. "f*ck off ya bitch, get off the road!" I've had food, and am currently talking to an old friend on the cellphone. My bud who's come up from Vice City, we will be hanging out this weekend. 7:00pm, it's finally over. I am heading back to the factory. Ended up in a fender bender with some punk ass kids. It's a day job, but someone's gotta do it. So your wife and kids were up at 6:00am, or at least right after you washed up? What time does school start for your kids? That's pretty early. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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