Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas Stories

[Lochie_old]

I'm hoping you kill Donald Love, I never liked him.

[Mr. Mcreary]

 

I'm hoping you kill Donald Love, I never liked him.

how the hell would you kill DL? and how can you hate DL?? hes like the COOLEST character ever hahah and how can you kill him? hes already in LCS as in III

[Lochie_old]

I'm hoping you kill Donald Love, I never liked him.

how the hell would you kill DL? and how can you hate DL?? hes like the COOLEST character ever hahah and how can you kill him? hes already in LCS as in III

Kill off/Make go away.

 

Its all the same thing.

[Mr. Mcreary]

wtf? billys a stitch? lame....

[Mr. Mcreary]

I'm hoping you kill Donald Love, I never liked him.

how the hell would you kill DL? and how can you hate DL?? hes like the COOLEST character ever hahah and how can you kill him? hes already in LCS as in III

Kill off/Make go away.

 

Its all the same thing.

Oh i see

[The Unvirginiser]

I had a good think about the next few chapters...

Mafia wars-a-comin'... get ready, you don't wanna' miss the next few chapters!

I'm gonna' write them up today, then post one later on tonight

Edited July 23, 2008 by The Unvirginiser

[Lethal Nizzle]

 

how the hell would you kill DL? and how can you hate DL?? hes like the COOLEST character ever hahah and how can you kill him? hes already in LCS as in III

Brucie beats Love hands down. Sorry.

 

Once again UV, awesome. I'm glad to see you've included multiple choice missions, like the body hiding one.

[TonyZimmzy]

Good mission. I was starting to like Mike, ah well. I'll be back in five days.

[The Unvirginiser]

Sweet, he was that moron from Vice City who messed up the timer on the mall bomb.

 

The next mission is heavily inspired by this scene...

 

 

[sick-vice]

I hope you update the char-bios.

 

Anyway,That was a good mission

[TonyZimmzy]

Oh, so that's who Mike is! The bumbling idiot from Vice City. The fat c*nt. The scumbag. Probaly a rapist.

[Mr. Mcreary]

but can the player have the option not to screw over DL?

[GROVEISLS]

Mean Topic dude

[The Unvirginiser]

but can the player have the option not to screw over DL?

I guess you will have to see...

There's two final missions, one for Love, and one for Avery... I want to write them both and have them both in the game, so maybe I will have you lot decide which one comes first

[Mr. Mcreary]

c'man c'mon i need to read another one of these thing c'mon what the f*ck is this???? lol i need my gta fix!!

[The Unvirginiser]

c'man c'mon i need to read another one of these thing c'mon what the f*ck is this???? lol i need my gta fix!!

Thought I'd let everybody catch up

 

Okay.. I'm about halfway through the bios, so expect them soon, I'll put a new chapter of this up soon

[The Unvirginiser]

 

Head to the T for a mission with Tommy

 

The First Hit

 

Cut Scene

 

Ken answers the door as you approach the office.

 

Ken: Billy! Billy, Come in, just who we wanted to see, things are bad.

Billy: What’s wrong?

Ken: That thing with Mike has completely threw us off, Tommy will explain better upstairs.

 

Billy enters Tommy’s office, Tommy is frantically pacing up and down… Cocaine Blues by Johnny Cash Plays on the radio.

 

Billy: Tommy…

Tommy: Devil, thanks a lot for killing that rat… how much was in the case?

Billy: Five Grand..

Tommy: Five grand, f*ck knows what he was telling that asshole for that money, I asked my man on the inside in the Pink Swan, he’s been opening his big mouth to the Forellis too. They know everything now, where we are, how many guys we got… we got to strike first before they do!

Billy: How do you know they will attack?

Tommy: Billy, I killed their don, a member of their family, they want my head. But Tommy Vercetti doesn’t cut and run like that, were going straight to the mattresses.

Billy: Mattresses?

Ken: It’s a mafia term, it means when all your guys sleep together, in one room, on mattresses, so there constantly on call for hits and jobs during war, and they can’t get hit themselves.

Tommy: Ken, get downstairs and get set up with the mattresses, give Avery and Cortez a call, I want all the guys we can get. Big Mitch Baker is in town, get him and his boys on the horn.

Ken: Right, got it Tommy, got it.

Tommy: Now Ken!

Ken: Right, right, right.

Tommy: Billy, your gonna’ do the first hit.

Billy: Fine man

Tommy: I’ll pay good, don’t worry, I’m gonna’ make a few phone calls and tell you where a few of the Forelli guys are, hit them all, leave nobody alive.

Billy: Right

Tommy: Go, go, I’ll call you in a few minutes. Wait! Billy, take this…

 

Tommy cocks a XM1014 shotgun, and hands in to you

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

You get outside, after a few minutes of waiting, Tommy calls.

 

Billy: Hello?

Tommy: Billy, first guy is called Lorenzo, he’s dining at the little Mussolini on the North End of the strip, go in and take him out.

 

Head over to the Little Mussolini, it’s on your radar.

When you reach the restaurant, there is a table in the middle, with three men sat down, eating, one has an orange marker above his head. Casually you walk in and approach the table, shotgun in hand… the three men look up. You blow them all away before they even have time to reach for their guns, everybody in the restaurant either hit’s the deck or make a run for the door. Chairs are knocked over, pots are smashed, people are screaming and Forelli blood is spilt.

You know have a two star wanted level, get out of there before the cops show and quickly drive out of their search circle.

 

You give Tommy a call

 

Tommy: Yes?

Billy: It’s me, took him out, where’s the next guy?

Tommy: Good, good, next guy is called Mario, he’s holed up with some bitch at the last dime motel, south of the strip, room 14.

Billy: Got it

 

Head to the last dime motel, park up and head for room 14. Blow the lock and run in, a man comes out of the bathroom in a towel, brushing his teeth. Blow him away with the shotgun.

Where’s the girl?

From your left a woman hits you with a bottle, she’s jumps on your, clawing and scratching, wearing nothing but her underwear.

Tap square to get the upper hand of the grapple move, you throw her on to the bed, then shoot her as well.

 

Tommy: Got him?

Billy: Yeah, where’s the next guy?

Tommy: He’s driving up the strip at the moment, he’s in a green Comet, find him and take him out

 

Head back up the strip and be on the look out for a green Coment.

After a few frantic minutes of searching you see one parked up next to a sex shop. Quickly park up and run to the side of the shop… wait very patiently for your victim to exit.

 

Eventually a woman walks out, carrying a huge bag full of sex toys. She giggles excitedly as she crosses the car park and enters.. The green comet.

Just as you notice… another green comet races past, straight through a red light.

Quickly dash to the comet and press triangle to throw the woman out, jack it and head after the car.

 

This guy drives insanely fast, it’s gonna’ take some serious driving skills to catch him! He moves between traffic, through crossings full of pedestrians, red lights… the only thing he stops at is the railway crossing because of the on coming train.

 

Speed after him and ram the back of his car, he smashes forward, through the barrier, and straight in to the path of the train.

 

Mission Passed

 

+10,000

Edited July 29, 2008 by The Unvirginiser

[2Gee69]

Some serious sh*t back there...Little Italy wars.A question uv.Have you decided where you will go next after LV is completely shot down?If you have any thoughts about the future of your stories

[The Unvirginiser]

Some serious sh*t back there...Little Italy wars.A question uv.Have you decided where you will go next after LV is completely shot down?If you have any thoughts about the future of your stories

I'm thinking through a number of different situations at the moment, concentrating on LV at the moment... your all going to enjoy it.. dont worry

[The Unvirginiser]

 

Drive to Love in your green Comet for the next mission

 

Cut Scene

 

You enter Love’s office, escorted by a bodyguard.

 

Billy: Donald..

Love: Hello Billy, thank-you

 

The bodyguard nods and leaves

 

Love: I have more work for you, but this one is a dangerous job..

Billy: Go on

Love: What Carrington is importing is catastrophic to my business.

Billy: What is it?

Love: That’s none of your concern, however, one thing he is also importing, is explosives, and lot’s of it.

Billy: Why?

Love: Who knows? Maybe he wants to blow up rival companies or damage by skyscraper, whatever is it for, we can use it to our advantage.

Billy: How’s that?

Love: Well’s he’s importing it by plane, instead of chopper..

Billy: …

Love: …

Billy: So?

Love: So? We can use it to destroy the whole plane.

Billy: How the hell am I going to blow a plane up?

Love: Well…

 

Love stands up, and opens a foot locker behind him.

 

Billy: You must be f*cking kidding me!

 

The camera cuts to the locker, it contains a heat seeking rocket launcher

 

Love: No, I want you to climb Mount Chilliad and shoot it down.

Billy: F*ck you Love, find somebody else, no way am I doing that sh*t

Love: Fine, if you don’t want the twenty grand..

Billy: F*ck your twenty grand, you must be f*cking crazy

Love: Oh, your quitting, fine, I’ll get Pete Leone on the line and tell him how you stole his cocaine, do you have four million dollars to repay him with? I’m sure when the rottweilers bite your balls off they could sell for two million each..

Billy: F*ck you! How about I blow your f*cking head off right now?

 

Billy pulls out his gun

 

Love: Billy, look out the window, see the man planting the bomb under your car?

 

He’s right, outside there’s a man in a suit under your car.

 

Love: Do you know who that is?

Billy: Donald, your gonna’ have to excuse me, I gotta’ go and kill a nigga’ for f*ckin’ with my car..

Love: I wouldn’t do that if I were you…

Billy: Love, how the f*ck did you know a guy is under my car planting a f*cking bomb? Who the f*ck is he.. What the f*ck-

Love: That is the mafiso

Billy: Mafiso?

Love: Yes, Giovanni Brasi, probably the most dangerous Italian man on the planet… except maybe Peter Leone of course..

Billy: F*cks he doing under my ride trying to blow me up?

Love: Your ride? Am I correct in assuming that’s the car that belonged to Tony Forelli? One of the mob bosses you just murdered? How about Alonzo Leone.. Think his car has a bomb under it? While it’s parked in Paulie Sindacco’s garage?

Billy: So I’m marked?

Love: Afraid so.. How about you do my jobs, and I’ll stop the Sicilian capo from murdering you?

Billy: Fine, who the hell is he?

Love: The man, the Sicilian mafia sent him over to calm down what is about to be a very large mafia war in Venturas.

Billy: How does he do that?

Love: Cut off the head and the body will follow… your one of the main catalysts, kill you, maybe a few men from either side… and you scare everybody in to a cease fire. Look Billy, either you do this for me, or you spend the night in a tank of boiling water, you won’t be the first guy that Pete Leone has done that to… it’s your choice!

Billy: Give me a minute to think man..

 

Edited August 26, 2008 by The Unvirginiser

[Carbine23]

Well i haven't read this for a while so i just skipped a long and read your newest chapter, and i must say that it makes me want to read all the chapters before it. I might as well get started on reading it later this week. I want to know how Tony Forelli died which i assume is a man related to Sonny Forelli (son, nephew who knows. I'll find out)

[boothy]

the scripting is rather good, i can vision the characters saying those sentences

[The Unvirginiser]

 

You are outside Love’s office… step in to the L marker to activate the mission.

 

Ain't No Mountain High Enough

 

Cut Scene

 

Billy: Fine, I’ll do it, but I want thirty grand, and I want protection for my entire family too

Love: It’s done… experience has taught me that a man like you can be very loyal for the right price, but groups of men get greedy.

Billy: So what’s the plan?

Love:Well, I’ll call my men and bribe Giovanni for the time being, you get to the train station and head to Angel Pine, it’s in the country side, just near the mountain. I have a Rancher waiting for you there, it’s parked in front of the hospital. Get to the top of the mountain, the planes gonna’ pass at 11 PM sharp… hit it with the launcher, twice if necessary. Once it’s down, not damaged, when it’s down, make your escape, understand??

Billy: Half of the f*cking military will come for me after I shoot down a plane, what the hell am I supposed to do?

Love: There’s a parachute in the car, use that to get down the mountain..

Billy: Parachute? This get’s better and better…

Love: If it were me, I’d rather parachute in to the wilderness, it’s better than driving back down an 800 Metre mountain with half of the Whetstone police department after me. There’s some guns in the trunk too, your more than capable of outrunning some rednecks.

Billy: S*it is crazy… I can’t believe this!

 

Cut Scene

 

Jack a car and head to the train station. Get on the train and let it take you to Angel Pine. While your riding, you get a phone call.

 

Billy: Hello?

Andrew: Sup, it’s your brother

Billy: Andy! Nigga, what up?

Andrew: Got a big surprise for you man, I’m at the last dime motel, come to pay you a visit dawg.

Billy: Man, you don’t understand, I got these mob cats all wanting my head man, if they know you here then what’s telling what the f*ck they gonna’ go do

Andrew: Relax man, you worry too much, no mob after you man

Billy: Nigga, f*ck you, I got some f*cking asshole blackmailing me in to shooting down f*cking planes over here and your telling me I’m tripping?

Andrew: Relax man, relax…

Billy: You don’t understand, once things are sorted here, I’m coming home, I’ve been getting paid nigga’, sh*t’s gonna’ be looking up!

Andrew: I’ll believe it when I see it man, room fourteen, see you soon.

 

The train arrives in Angel Pine, get off and head over to the hospital to get in the Rancher. Inside is a M4 carbine, some grenades, a Desert Eagle, armour and a parachute. Head up the mountain, all the way to the top, make it fast, to get there for 11 PM.

 

You make it all the way up, get out of the car and wait...

You start to hear the sound of a jete ngine, coming from the south west, get ready with the rocket launcher.

 

The plane comes over, it’s a huge cargo carrier, flying high up, across the sea, towards the mountain, heading for Verdant Meadows. Aim the launcher and wait for the lock on, fire a rocket. The engine is hit, erupting in a huge fireball as it passes over head. Hit it again, aim for the centre, where the cargo is.

Boom!

The explosives ignite, taking out the entire plane. It blows up just as it passes the mountain, thousands of pieces of burning debris rain down, the explosion can be seen for miles.

 

Cut Scene

 

A cop runs out of the Angel Pine sheriff’s office.

 

Cop: God dammit!

 

He picks up his radio

 

Cop: All units, all units, anti aircraft fire coming from the top of mount Chilliad! Every unit we got, get here now!

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

What’s left of the burning planes crashes in to the trees below, starting a huge fire. Get the parachute, hold your breath, and dive off the mountain.

You now have four stars, a chopper is on the way, the police search circle is huge, spanning miles. On your map, at least twenty cop cars are closing in on the mountain.

 

Open the parachute and land in the wilderness, away from the dangerous, smoky fire.

You hit the ground about half way up a hill, covered with trees. The police Ranchers are closing in, all the lights are heading your way on the radar. Run through the trees, down the hill, the police are closing in.

 

At the bottom of the hill is a small cabin, with a Sanchez parked up outside. Jump on and speed off, with all the Ranchers in pursuit. Go straight cross country, through the trees, the Ranchers follow, not far behind.

 

You call up Love

 

Love: Billy?

Billy: Yeah, I got half the f*cking San Andreas police after me, f*ck do I do?

Love: Alright, relax, I have a boat waiting in the river, get on board, there some guys with enough fire firepower to scare off the cops.

Billy: This is the last time Love, I’m not spending the rest of my life in jail for you!

Love: I can make the boat comes back if you wish, let’s get this straight, you work for me.

Billy: F*ck you Love! You blackmailing motherf*cker!

Love: Yes or no?

Billy: Yes! F*cking yes! Fine!

Love: Get to the boat

 

Love Hangs up

 

Billy: F*ck! F*ck!

 

Head to the marker that just appeared on your map, the boat is heading East, through the river.

The Ranchers are closing in on your Sanchez, keep speeding towards the marker.

Just beyond the cliffs is the boat, a long Tropic, cruising down the river. The marker leads to a slanted rock, pointing out towards the river. Speed up the rock and jump to the boat.

 

Cut Scene

 

The Sanchez sails through the air, towards the boat. Three Ranchers hit the rock, colliding with each other and all flipping in to the river below. Billy leaps off the bike in mid air and lands in the water, the bike keeps flying and smashes in to the hull of the ship. Billy surfaces, and swims to the boat, a man reaches down and pulls him aboard.

 

Billy: Thanks

Man: Get a gun, start shooting!

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

There are a few guns aboard, quickly choose one and start shooting with the rest of the crew.

 

The guns are:

M60D

M249 PARA

Steyr AUG

 

Use the M60D, it’s long range and powerful. Get to the back of the boat and join the rest of the men on the deck. Two choppers are chasing the boat, firing miniguns down at the crew. Following on either embankment are police cars and Ranchers, men are hanging out of the window and firing. As well as that, boats, that are faster than the Tropic.

 

The other men have similar weapons to you, except one has a rocket launcher. Keep shooting at the pursuing boats, aiming at the drives and gunners. The M60D is very powerful, it easily puts holes in the boats big enough to sink them. It has a very high recoil, making it hard to hit anything specific, just aim and let loose.

 

Once the boats are sunk and the cars have crashed, focus on the two choppers above.

They rain down fire and out manoeuvre the boat, circling and shooting, flying up high and doing shooting runs. Keep covered behind the sides of the boat, the chopper’s firepower outmatches yours.

 

The two choppers make a simoultaneous run, speeding past the boat on either side and firing. Half the men aboard are ripped to shreds, quickly you dive for cover, and only take a few bullets.

 

Man: You! Love said you had an RPG!

Billy: Yeah!

Man: F*cking use it!!

 

Get up and withdraw the heat seeking rocket launcher, aim at the first chopper, wait for the lock on and then open fire. The chopper explodes, spins around, and collides with the other one. They both spiral to the river below in a burning fireball.

You hear the officer’s last words on his megaphone..

 

Officer: This is Bravo Seven going down! Repeat, Bravo Seven Down!

 

Man: Good job, we’ll drop you off at a little beach just north of Venturas.

 

Mission Passed

 

+ $30,000

 

[mr__grimer]

I finally caught up. this is a really great read keep up the good work

[Lochie_old]

 

Officer: This is Bravo Seven going down! Repeat, Bravo Seven Down!

 

I c wut u did thur.

[The Unvirginiser]

Officer: This is Bravo Seven going down! Repeat, Bravo Seven Down!

 

I c wut u did thur.

Ah, yes..

From now on, can you please give me helpfull feedback?

I'm glad you guys are reading and writing.. but please.. if your going to write something.. make it a bit more meaningfull

 

Maybe telling me what you thought of the mission? Comment on the storyline, guess at what will happen next.. tell me the good and abd points and ways that I can improve

 

Quick question, hows the pace? Am I posting too frequently for people to catch up or too slow that you lose intrest?

 

Love you all

[Lochie_old]

Feedback?

 

Its interesting, but I feel some parts are really lacking to capture Donald Loves depth, hes a sinister character so he'd definately have something more to say to our friend Billy other then just the general "Go explode this guy or I'll blackmail" conversations we're seeing here now.

 

To me, the missions breath some fresh air to the original "Drive here, collect this from a guy, guy has run off, run him down" missions. But some are still feeling un-realisitc (eg. This one where Billy and some guys manage to take on a whole police department.)

 

And sometimes I feel the missions you've made are just to please some of the regulars of WD (That gay sex one in particular, you could of played the scenario one hundred different ways and still have the same effect you wanted but you went with that one.)

 

Also:

 

Love: I can make the boat comes back if you wish, let’s get this straight, you work for me.

 

Shouldn't this just be;

 

 

Love: I can make the boat come back if you wish, let’s get this straight, you work for me.

 

Other then that, I really enjoy the fan script! The pace your posting it at is something I really admire because you can update it so frequently with fresh ideas.

 

~Phusion

[TonyZimmzy]

As I said last night, I wasn't a big fan of this mission. I'm not really sure why, but I'm anticipating the brothers meeting up .

[2Gee69]

I really like most of the missions..There's something new in each one.Not some same sh*t like in GTA IV.I'm cathing up quickly so if you have spare time continue with the missions.Bravo seven COD4

[GTArv]

Excellent work, like 2Gee69 said, there's something new in each mission. San Andreas Stories might not be confirmed yet, but this will sure make a great storyline for it.

Edited August 1, 2008 by GTArv