Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas Stories

[TomVDC]

I can't choose so I use them both.

[Carbine23]

I like the signatures and i think it's an awesome promotional idea. I wish i could make one but i don't know how to.

 

And might i say that your edited avatar is awesome

[BlOoDStReAm101]

I haven't gotten a chance to read this, but I will definitely begin to read it sometime soon. It looks great man. Keep it up.

[Rhoda]

Man, I had some catching up to do and I'm glad I did. Nice work, though I do feel the way Tony does; it's starting to lose it's game roots and I don't know why. You've got much more action though, so don't worry too much about it mate. Still like how the British are involved, they're always at the back of my mind. Do yourself a favour; take a brief stay in San Fierro, plenty to do and lots of people to meet. Los Santos is only a short drive away...

[Mr. Mcreary]

Ahh . . . I want to play this soooooooooooo bad you have no idea . . . . . . wow amazing. Just reading this gets me all hyped up . . . . . . why???????? this game and story would have been so good . . . . mahn you should write for rockstar. supurb stuff.

[TomVDC]

Ahh . . . I want to play this soooooooooooo bad you have no idea . . . . . . wow amazing. Just reading this gets me all hyped up . . . . . . why???????? this game and story would have been so good . . . . mahn you should write for rockstar. supurb stuff.

I agree.

Rockstar should really use this script as a base if they ever make a game like San Andreas Stories.

 

grtz

Tom

[The Unvirginiser]

Thanks a lot guys

 

So let's discuss what direction this is going in..

I know it's losing the game element slightly, and maybe ending up a bit like a movie... would you prefer more gameplay or do you like it in the unique way it is?

 

I'm finding it hard to udnerstand why your saying theres no gameplay though.. I'm doing plenty of missions

[TomVDC]

Keep it this way. But make sure it still feels like a game and not like a movie.

Because it still is a game.

Just my opinion.

 

grtz

Tom

[The Unvirginiser]

Writing the new chapter now, I'll get it up before I begin my Friday night of drinking...

[TonyZimmzy]

Good, good. I fancy having another read through of this.

[TomVDC]

Can't wait for the next chapter.

[The Unvirginiser]

Sorry lads, got to dash out, chapters 80% complete, when I stumble through the door ina few hours i'll put it up

[TomVDC]

Oke, I'll be waiting.

[Mr. Mcreary]

Nice Aliens reference.

What aliens reference?

dude your so good . . . its like playing a gta . . . . . . i actually can't wait just to read the next missions man . . . .thanks so much your the best just thought i'd let you know cheers

[The Unvirginiser]

 

Gameplay now begins in front of Caligula’s, your phone begins to ring

 

Billy: Hello?

 

Tommy: It’s Tommy, can you come over? I got a friend who might have some work for you

 

Billy: Sure

 

Head over to Tommy’s and pull up in the orange marker

 

Leap Of Faith

 

Cut Scene

 

Billy walks up to the front door of Ken’s office and knocks. A slider on the door and opens and Billy is met with two eyes

 

Guy Behind The Door: Yeah? Who is it?

 

Billy: Billy Hogan

 

Guy: Yeah? Who you here to see?

 

Billy: Tommy

 

Guy: Never heard of him

 

Billy: Are you on crack? Go ask him if he’s expecting me, asshole.

 

The slider shuts for a few seconds… then the door opens

 

Guy: Hi, I’m Mike, c’mon in, sorry about that, you can never be too careful can you?

 

Billy: Whatever man

 

Billy walks in, staring Mike straight in the face as he passes.

The camera cuts to Tommy’s office, Avery Carrington is hiding behind the door with a shotgun.

The door opens and Billy steps in, Tommy is sat behind Ken’s desk with his feet up.

 

Tommy: Devil! Come on in

 

Billy: Hey wa’sup, what’s with the peephole on the door man? It’s like a goddamn-

 

Avery hits Billy with the butt of his shotgun and he falls to the floor. Tommy pulls out a Colt Python and aims it at Billy.

 

Avery: So, you’re the smart son of a bitch who think’s it’s okay to steal my property and hit me with guns, well I can play with guns too boy.

 

Billy: The f*ck you talking about?

 

Tommy kicks Billy over so that he is facing upwards

 

Tommy: Recognise him now?

 

Billy: You, you’re the one at the airport-

 

Avery: That’s right you god damn asshole! Get your sorry ass off the floor and sit down.

 

Billy gets up and sits down

 

Avery: Well, the way me and Tommy look at it, you owe me one white Rancher and I owe you a smack with a gun, since I’ve already given you that, we can move straight on to the money situation.

 

Billy: You want a car?

 

Tommy: Shut up and listen!

 

Avery: Hell, kid I like you, you got style, you did what you had to do in a dangerous situation. I was telling’ Tommy, you landed a goddamn chopper right on my airstrip and came running over to me in a god damn hospital gown, then had the nerve to hit me right across the face, I like that, you got balls.

 

Billy: Thanks, you have to understand man, police where everywhere, I had to-

 

Avery: You had to do, what you had to do! Ain’t that right Tommy?

 

Tommy: Yeah, since you are in Avery’s debt now, we thought maybe you can do us a few favours. You do well, we might throw some money your way.

 

Avery: And if you don’t.. well your gonna’ find out why they call my friend the Harwood butcher.

 

Billy: Right.. So what’s up?

 

Avery: There’s a guy I know, just became a multi-millionaire, much like myself, he’s an apprentice of mine, I taught him everything I know, which make him very dangerous. He’s so good, he’s made one successful company and made it big already, you heard of Love Media?

 

Billy: Yeah

 

Avery: Well, Donald Love, used to be my apprentice, and he’s moving in to the West Coast from Vice City, just as me and Tommy are. You see, were in the property market… and were not being bought out by some little four eyed asshole, so sometimes, you gotta’ do what you have to do. This is where you come in.

 

Tommy: Love is setting up all kinds of deals, making connections, we gotta’ put a stop to that. He’s already got one skyscraper here and he has another under construction in San Fierro.

 

Avery: That’s right! Today he’s buying some ridiculous amount of cocaine from the Leone’s, you know who the Leone’s are right? Michael, Peter, Sal?

 

Billy: Yeah

 

Avery: Good! I want you to take them drugs and take them over to my warehouse, alright?

 

Billy: Alright

 

Tommy: Billy, you do a good job, and there might be some money in it for you, if not well..

 

Tommy spins the barrel off his Colt Python

 

Tommy: Understand?

 

Billy: Sure

 

Avery: Do a good job for me boy

 

Billy: I will..

 

Tommy: Wait! Forgetting this?

 

Tommy hands Billy a MP5 from under the desk

 

Billy: Thanks

 

Billy leaves through the door

 

Avery: God damn punk

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

 

The camera cuts to the freeway, the truck is driving, surrounded by black Leone cars.

The camera cuts to a bridge over the freeway…

 

Get a car and get to the bridge

 

Drive to the bridge, there is a timer in the top left corner, you have to get to the bridge before the timer runs out, or else you will miss the truck.

 

When you reach it, the truck with it’s convoy passes below you. Get lined up and time the jump very very well.

 

You leap spectacularly off the bridge, and land on the trailer of the truck. You lie straight down, clinging on to the sides. You have to use the analogue stick to roll right and left as the truck changes lanes, so that you aren’t thrown on to the highway and swept under the wheels. Push the stick forward to edge forwards, towards the cab.

 

After a few heart stopping minutes of edging forward, you eventually reach the front of the trailer

 

Cut Scene

 

The driver of the truck is singing along to the radio

 

Driver: Countin' flowers on the wall… That don't bother me at all… Playin' solitaire till dawn with a deck of fifty-one…Smokin' cigarettes and watchin' Captain Kangaroo-

 

Billy climbs down from the top of the cab and through the passenger window

 

Driver: What the f*ck are you doin’ here you little asshole?

 

Billy: Shut the f*ck up, get out or I’m gonna blow your f*ckin’ head off!

 

Driver: You know this truck belongs to Michael Leone don’t you?

 

Billy: I don’t give a f*ck, get out or I’ll blow your head clean off.

 

Driver: get out? But were on the-

 

Billy: GET OUT OF THE f*ckING TRUCK!

 

The driver jumps out, the truck jumps slightly as he falls under the wheels. Billy climbs over to the driver’s seat.

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

You are now driving the truck, the Leone’s begin to open fire. Use the truck’s size against them, cross lanes, making cars spin and block their path… ram them in to the walls, barriers, other cars, anything. Stick the MP5 out of the window and shoot the pursuing cars.

Get off the freeway as early as possible, the narrow streets will make it hard to follow because the truck can easily crush them against walls.

 

Eventually the Leone’s give up and back off, leaving you to drive to Avery’s warehouse. Park up in the orange marker.

 

Cut Scene

 

Mike is waiting at the warehouse for the truck, Billy pulls up and gets out.

 

Billy: Here you go man

 

Mike: Thanks, Tommy will be happy

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

Mission Passed

 

[The Unvirginiser]

 

Cut Scene

 

Billy pulls away in a car that Mike supplies, the camera flicks to a first person view from Billy’s perspective, we see his hands as he taps along to the beat on the radio.

 

Oh yeah, all right

Take it easy baby

Make it last all night

She was an American girl

 

Out of nowhere two cars skid in front of Billy and him dead in his tracks, armed men get out of each car and aim their guns. A man, dressed smartly in a suit approaches with a MAC-10 in his hand.

 

Man: Mr. Hogan?

 

Billy: f*ck you want ni**er? How you know my name?

 

Man: I’d prefer you don’t refer to me as “ni**er”, please step out of the car and enter that one just there, without a fuss.

…

Man: Mr Hogan, please don’t make me use this, get in to the car.

 

The camera goes towards the car as Billy walks, he gets inside and sits down. The smartly dressed man get’s in and sits next to you. He smiles, then pulls out a cloth from his pocket.

Chloroform…

He shoves the cloth in your face and the camera moves back, a man in the driver’s seat holds you down and eventually you stop struggling and pass out. The camera fades to black.

 

The camera then fades in on top of a skyscraper, looking face down, over the edge still in first person view. The controller vibrates like a heartbeat racing.

 

Man’s voice: Alright that’s enough, let him up.

 

The camera pulls back as if you have been dragged to your feet. The camera turns around and there is a big bald man in a suit either side of you. In front of you is a helicopter with an apache (hunter) chopper on.

 

A man in a suit steps in to view from the left.

 

Man: Mr. Hogan?

 

Billy: Yeah, who the hell are you? Where the hell am I?

 

Man: This is Love Tower, and I’m the owner.

 

Billy: Donald Love?

 

Love: Yes, I understand you were the one who stole the drugs from me, well, from the Leone’s hlf an hour ago?

Silence? I think we understand each other. So your working for Avery Carrington and Tommy Vercetti? Am I correct?

Well here’s what’s going to happen, you are going to help me establish myself as top of the property market here in Las Venturas, you agree now, or I give you a choice. I hand you over to Michael Leone and his Nephew Peter, or you go over the edge.

 

Billy: f*ck you man! I didn’t come to this city for this bullsh*t!

 

Love: Yet you stole my cocaine? I’m not forcing you to do this, you can go free and face Peter Leone, even Vercetti and Paulie Sindacco could not protect you from that man. Yes, I’ve done my research on you.

 

Billy: You work fast ni**er…

 

Love: Well, I monitor all contacts associating with Carrington. I am willing to pay you for your service, I’m not holding the gun to your head. Peter and Michael are probably turning over every hole and torturing every rat to know where their cocaine is. I will pay them still, as long as you work for me, I will pay well, don’t worry about that.

 

Billy: Right…

 

Love: And maybe I can offer some protection against Damian King?

 

Billy: I don’t need protecting from that motherf*cker.

 

Love: I disagree, if your brother was murdered I doubt you will take it very lightly, and your not exactly as high up in the criminal underworld as King.

 

Billy: You don’t even know my brother.

 

Love: I’m sure Peter would get to know him quite well.

 

Billy: Fine! I’ll do it!

 

Love: Excellent, when you leave here, call up Avery and tell him that you do not wish to work for him anymore, then come back and see me in a few days.

 

Billy: Right

 

Love: You're making an excellent buisness decision here.

 

Edited July 19, 2008 by The Unvirginiser

[TonyZimmzy]

Very intense and original mission. Forced to work between Avery and Donald, very good idea. Also you used Tommy a lot better this time around - that was definitely Vercetti style.

[Mr. Mcreary]

Very good. Nice, keep up the fantastic work man - -can't wait for the next chapter. So I'm guessing the player has to make some decissions like off of IV? This is gonna be interesting.

[Jonesizzle]

Why does Hogan use "ni**er" a lot? I guess I can understand if he was racist, but he usually says it to white people. What's up with that? Other than that, this is a excellent story.

[Mr. Mcreary]

Why does Hogan use "ni**er" a lot? I guess I can understand if he was racist, but he usually says it to white people. What's up with that? Other than that, this is a excellent story.

C.J. said ni**er a lot too, C.J. to johhney sindacoo " Damnnn dat n***a f*cked up!" i donno ehy im just guessing im just enjoying this because this is my new GTA fix

[TomVDC]

I really loved the chapter.

KUTFW. (Keep Up The Fantastic Work.)

[Struff Bunstridge]

 

Writing the new chapter now, I'll get it up before I begin my Friday night of drinking... 

...because you sure as hell won't be able to get it up afterwards.

 

I kind of half expected this to trail off quality-wise after a while. Looks like I underestimated you dude, nice one. This continues to read really well.

[crazymodder]

nice story. keep up the work.

[Danni]

Incredibly nice. I love the Carrington-Love thing, and I'm just glad to see Donald Love making another appearance. He's one of my fav characters. Keep it up, UV.

[The Unvirginiser]

Thanks so much for the replies guys, I'll have the next chapter up soon

 

• Carl and Sweet all said the N word a lot, as do a lot of black people... so that's why that's in there.

•Yes, there will be some points like in IV where decisions have to be made... so what will happen is, I'll set a time and everybody has to vote on what to do before that time, then whatever has the most votes get's posted.... then I may or may not post the alternative mission.

 

Then as I've disucssed before, the ending will be a vote, however it will be turned in to a poll, and I'll give it about a week for everybody to decide the ending

[The Unvirginiser]

 

When you come out of Love’s office you get a phonecall

 

Billy: Hello?

 

Unknown: Hello, am I speaking to William Hogan?

 

The voice seems scrambled, so their voice is unclear and computerized A bit like the unknown phone calls in Vice City.

 

Billy: Yeah, who’s this?

 

Unknown: I am your new employer

 

Billy: Oh is that right?

 

Unknown: Yes, that is correct

 

Billy: Well I got enough bosses right now thank you very much, so f*ck you-

 

Unknown: Ten Thousand Dollars

 

Billy: What?

 

Unknown: Ten-Thousand-Dollars… that’s what I’ll pay you for each job you do me

 

Billy: How the hell did you get my number?

 

Unknown: It’s been floating around, you bring a lot of attention to yourself… your details are shooting round the Venturas police department, between rings of business men such as myself, and certain organized crime circles.

 

Billy: So? What do you need doing?

 

Unknown: Not here, get to the payphone outside The Four Dragons casino

 

[radicell]

Good update man sounds a bit like the assassination missions from VC. I like the idea you have with the alternative missions. The poll sounds like a really good idea. KUTGW

[The Unvirginiser]

Was just about to get the next chapter up, but got called in to work tonight

When I get home I'll get it up, it's one of my most favorite so far, so I'm sure you will all love it

[The Unvirginiser]

 

Jack a car and drive to the Four Dragons Casino and get to the payphone

 

All Aboard

 

Cut Scene

 

Billy arrives at the payphone, it isn’t ringing, he steps out of his car and waits.

 

The phone rings, Billy steps forward and answers

 

Billy: Hello?

 

Female Voice: Oh hey baby! I had to call here, the reception on your cell is terrible!

Billy: What? I think you got the wrong number-

Female Voice: Oh you joker! Billy baby? Outside the Four Dragons? I got a surprise coming for you baby!

Billy: Huh?

 

The line goes dead…

 

Billy looks around suspiciously, the street is busy, packed with people, Billy backs against the wall, looking worried.

A man carrying flowers approaches Billy.

 

Flower Man: Are you the lucky man receiving the flowers?

Billy: Nah, man

Flower man: Oh you are

 

He shoves the flowers in to Billy’s hand, inside there is a small card with something written on it.

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

A card appears in the bottom right corner

 

Press triangle to read

 

Sorry for the confusion, you have to appreciate how careful we have to be, I cannot speak properly on an unsecured line…

Get to Fort Carson, behind Cluckin’ Bell there is a red Rancher, it’s unlocked, get in and play the cassette.

 

Get back in your car and head to Fort Carson, when you arrive in the Cluckin’ Bell car park, park in the orange marker.

 

Cut Scene

 

Billy walks in to the car park, the red Rancher is there, suspiciously, Billy looks around. There is a man leaning against a wall smoking a cigarette and reading a paper.

Cautiously, Billy opens the door, and gets in to the car. He looks around, and takes a deep breath, then slowly turns the keys that are already in the car.

 

No bomb… the engine starts and the cassette begins to play. The same computerised voice speaks.

 

Cassette: There is a train leaving for San Fierro at 4pm, there’s a map in the glove compartment of where you can catch it. Intercept the train before it reaches San Fierro, if you catch it before it reaches the destination, then it will be forced to divert. Your ticket is in the trunk.

Hand this cassette to the man catching up on current events, he will dispose of it appropiatly

 

Billy: The f*ck?

 

Billy gets out of the car with the cassette and throws it to the man, without even looking upwards he catches it and slips it in to his pocket, then continues to read the paper.

Billy gives a puzzled look, shakes his head and then opens up the trunk.

 

The camera cuts to inside

 

Billy: Holy sh*t

 

Inside is a rocket launcher with an open box full of rockets.

 

Billy: No f*cking way!

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

Get to the spot on the map and shoot the train when it passes.

 

Two new blips are now on the radar. A blue one for the train, and a red one for the location.

Head towards the red one, it takes you up the cliffs near the big ear, to a spot overlooking the bridge between Fort Carson and Las Barrancas, park up the car and get out.

Patiently wait for the train, you can hear it approaching, getting closer and closer, the blue dot on the map approaches.

 

Get the rocket launcher ready, when the train comes aim carefully, it’s a freight train, so shoot the driver’s cab… when it crosses the bridge fire!

The rocket hit’s the train, the carriage is blown off the track, straight in to the water, the rest of the train twists and falls off the track or smashes in to a flaming pile up.

 

Get away from the area

 

Get back in to your car and get back on to the highway, towards Venturas.

 

Cut Scene

 

Billy pulls up to some traffic lights, a man pulls up next to you looking very angry

 

Man: What the f*ck you lookin’ at boy?

Billy: Boy?

Man: Yeah!

Billy: Bitch, I’ll split yo’ f*ckin’ wig right now!

 

The man throws a suitcase at Billy, just as Billy draws his gun. He then speeds off down the road.

 

Billy: F*ckin’ crack head

 

Billy opens the case, there is a note inside, on top of ten thousand dollars cash

 

Good Job, I’ll be in touch

 

 

Mission Passed

 

+ $10,000

 

Edited July 20, 2008 by The Unvirginiser

[Greenage380]

nice mission kinda reminds me of the mission green goo from san andreas but without destroying the train