Grand Theft Auto: San Andreas Stories

[El Zilcho]

These scripts are big, serious stories. You can't get a half arsed idea and start writing without planning can ya?

Well I did, it involved a lot of copy and paste.

That's not writing

 

Anyway, this isn't a discussion topic about ripping/writing/stealing stories. this is SAS, and let's not clutter it up. When Will's got something to post, let him. Otherwise, let's leave the topic unless it's for feedback. K?

[The Unvirginiser]

These scripts are big, serious stories. You can't get a half arsed idea and start writing without planning can ya?

Well I did, it involved a lot of copy and paste.

That's not writing

 

Anyway, this isn't a discussion topic about ripping/writing/stealing stories. this is SAS, and let's not clutter it up. When Will's got something to post, let him. Otherwise, let's leave the topic unless it's for feedback. K?

I'm not arsed mate, at least they're taking about scripts and not spam. Maybe it should boom over to writer's ideas though.

[The Unvirginiser]

 

Three days later…

 

Cut Scene

A completely different Billy enters Sweet’s house, carrying a large bag over his shoulder. He drops it on to the kitchen table, in front of a silent Sweet. The two men are totally different, the last week had changed their lives. Two brothers were dead and a third had left their lives forever.

Two, new men sit at the table. Freshly carved from wood, bitter and revengeful.

Billy unzips the bag to reveal an impressive armament of weapons: two Ak-47’s, two Desert Eagles, grenades, a rocket launcher and a sea of ammunition. The two men look in to each other’s teary eyes for a moment, then nod in mutual agreement that they are ready to go.

 

A crude, torn tourist map of Los Santos lies on the table. Billy withdraws the machete that Oxi had left him, he admires the razor sharp blade for a few moments and reads the Arabic writing on the side; wondering what it said. Then, with a cold feeling of anger, he stabs it deep in to the area marked ‘Verona Beach’.

 

End of Cut Scene

 

The Verona Beach Massacre

 

Get in Sweet’s car and head to the red dot on your radar. There’s absolute silence between the two throughout the journey. When you arrive, the marker is Burger Shot, outside is a huge gang of Grove Street members, sit in and around three cars.

 

Cut Scene

 

One of the Grove members stands on a car roof, holding a huge AK-47.

 

Grove Member: Alright fellas, we all know why we’re here. We all know what’s happened, and we all know what we’re gonna’ do about it. These boys aren’t bangers, they aren’t just a typical hood gang. These guys are driven by hate, hate for us, hate for the black man. These are successful people, with careers, expensive cars and houses. There’s never been beef, there’s never been trouble. They’ve over stepped the poverty boundary and outright attacked our people. Two of us are dead, a child making his way home from school and an innocent boy, driving to aid another brother.

 

The gang looks around, saddened. Sweet and Billy remain silent.

 

Grove Member: So today, we’re on a battlefield. They’ve taken it too far, and we’re gonna’ wipe them off the face of the Earth. The Verona Beach skinheads won’t have any place in Santos tomorrow.

 

The camera cuts to a long road, with houses on either side. Skinheads are in every garden and around every car; lounging around and chatting. The camera cuts to a house at the far end.

 

This is Max Stark’s house, reach it and draw him out.

 

The camera slowly pans around, at the other end of the road, we see the silhouette of the Grove gang in the sunlight. The skinheads gradually notice, one by one. More come out of houses, armed with a large assortment of weapons.

 

End Of Cut Scene

 

There’s about ten, large, detached houses on each side of the road, with Stark’s being the last on the right. Cars line each side, with trees and lampposts. The street turns in to a war zone. Hundreds of bullet zoom in all directions as both gangs open fire, blowing holes in everything. Shrapnel and debris fly about, everybody dives for cover. Using cars and trees as cover from the gunfire, make your way slowly up the road towards Stark’s house; eliminating the skinheads in front of you on the way.

 

To your right, a group pour out of a front door, carrying shotguns and machineguns. Quickly take them out before they start shooting with one focused burst. The man at the back manages to throw a grenade before he drops dead. Quickly sprint away, you make it to a tree before it explodes - Sending a car flying through the air, until it slams on to the road, crushing two Grove members flat.

 

Sweet: The roof! Over there!

 

On a distant roof a few houses down, a skinhead has a sniper rifle and begins to take headshots. Get down on the ground and hide, try to blind fire back. Just after he fires, aim and get a lucky headshot, sending him sliding down the tiles and on to the lawn below. More men climb on to roofs and begin to fire out of windows, pinning you down behind cars. Sweet pulls a rocket launcher from his bag and takes a shot. The rocket swirls in the air and drifts off course, slamming in to a house and making the it collapse; causing some skinheads to fall to their fiery death. The street is now filled with debris like glass, brick and wood. The house hit by the rocket begins to burns intensely. Keep moving forward, fighting through the heavy lines of gunfire.

 

Sweet: F*cking suck this!

 

Sweet fire another rocket, which hits the center of four cars. The explosion is huge, it blows a hole in the front of one of the houses and knocks several trees down. The cars shoot off in different directions and smash all over the street in giant fireballs. It’s absolute chaos, bullets still zoom all over. Most of the skinheads are now dead, keep moving forward to Max’s house. At least half of the street is now burning, the determined Grove members are illuminated by an eerie orange glow. A man comes out of a garage up ahead, brandishing a huge flamethrower. More skinheads come out of the remaining homes, some aim out of windows and other climb on the roof.

 

Skinhead: This is our street! You wanna’ get to Max? You’ve gotta’ get through us first!

 

He lets out a twenty foot flame, causing you all to duck. The skinheads open fire again, with lots of machine guns. One has a grenade launcher on the roof, sprint forward towards them. As you move, grenades hit around you, causing cars to explode and shrapnel to fly everywhere. The guy with the flamethrower jumps on top of a car and begins to ignite everything around him. Keep covered and concentrate on the other skinheads. When he turns around, shoot him in the backpack; causing him to blow up in a giant, towering fireball.

 

 

Cut Scene

 

The street is a state. The fires rage on, houses barely stand, and the remaining Grove members move forward. The once beautiful street, lined with green, tidy lawns has been replace by flaming debris and mutilated bodies. The storm drains are filled with a steady, red blood stream.

 

The Grove members surround Stark’s house, Sweet stuffs a cloth in to a liqueur bottle.

 

Sweet: Last chance to come out before we burn you alive!

 

There’s just silence, for a few seconds everybody just waits anxiously. Sweet pulls a lighter out of his pocket and goes to ignite the cloth. Suddenly, the front door is blown apart from gunfire, coming from inside. It’s hanging on it’s hinges, barely. The distinct sound of a motorbike engine revving up is heard. A Sanchez bursts through the shattered door, the driver has a white helmet, with Max sitting on the back. As it jumps down the porch stairs, they slam straight in to a Grove Street member, knocking him to the curb in a gory spray of blood. Max withdraws two Colt Pythons and begins shooting as the bike speeds off around the corner.

 

Billy and Sweet sprint through the garden over the street, hoping to cut them off on the next road. They both jump over a high fence, past a barking dog and break through the black smoke, out in to the sunlight. The Santa Maria pier is in front of them, with a beautiful sunset reflected off the sea. They catch the bike just in time, it roars towards them with Max firing the Pythons. Billy shoots the front wheel, the driver loses control and violently smashes in to a car in front. He goes in to the back window, while Stark falls off. The distinct sound of his leg snapping can be heard. Billy and Sweet run closer, reloading their weapons. The driver slowly lifts himself from the cracked window and falls to the ground. Sweet lights the Molotov cocktail…

 

Sweet: Here you go motherf*cker!

 

Without fear or hesitation, he smashes the flaming cocktail over the driver’s helmet. Flames engulf his body and fly up Sweet’s arm. Billy helps Sweet pat them out, while the driver runs around in circles, hysterically screaming as the helmet melts in to his head. Stark makes a daring break for it, shooting a Grove member in the chest and limping over the road. Billy pulls out Oxi’s knife and throws it, the camera follows the deadly blade and it zooms through the air and plants itself firmly between Stark’s shoulder blades. He drops to his knees in pain, but still, continues to move up the pier.

 

End of Cut Scene

 

Stark slowly move backwards, bleeding all over. He keep shooting with the two pythons, causing havoc. Keep in cover, the firepower of the two pistols is deadly, keep shooting back and blind firing. He moves back gradually, to the dead end of the pier. Keep shooting, but don’t let yourself come out of cover. Keep moving up, running from benches to lampposts to kiosks. After a few harrowing minutes, he comes to the end of the line.

 

Cut Scene

 

Four Grove members, Sweet and Billy surround Stark. His two pythons are smoking, out of bullets.

 

Sweet: So you like to beat kids to death do you? Real big man aren’t you?

 

Max spits blood at Sweet.

 

Billy: And you like to sneak around planting bombs in cars do you?

 

Stark looks up, bewildered.

 

Billy: Do you?!

Stark: I haven’t planted any bombs, what am I? The f*cking Mafia?

Billy: You’re lying! You’re f*cking lying!

Stark: Go f*ck yourself, why would I lie? I’m about to be shot to death, I’m not gonna’ take the blame for something I’ve not done.

Sweet: Shot to death… you wish. Devil - May I?

Billy: Be my guest.

 

Sweet steps forward and yanks Oxi’s machete from Max’s back. The screen fades to black.

 

The sound of a phone ringing can be heard.

 

CJ: Hello?

Billy: It’s me, I’m coming to Liberty City.

 

Suddenly, a point of view shot flashes on to the screen for a few seconds. We see Max’s view, looking up towards the sky. Around him are the Grove members and Sweet. The Grove are brutally stamping and punching him, he holds up his arms in defence, but one has a hand missing and a bloody bone protruding out. Sweet viciously chops downwards, again and again with the machete. With a final, soul tearing scream, everything fades to black.

 

 

 

 

[Oxidizer]

Feral badassery for the masses!

 

Very epic and hardcore; I'm hyped for the last chapter(s).

[The Unvirginiser]

Here we go then lads!

Sadly, San Andreas Stories is drawing to an end, or rather, three ends. I've written three separate fates for Billy. The last mission will be the same, no matter what happens, but the small narrative chapter afterwards won't be. You get to decide, so cast your votes.

 

Ending One

Ending Two

Ending Three

 

I'm not saying when the poll ends or what happens in each ending, the winner will be posted and the other two may or may not be.

 

[TomVDC]

I really liked the chapter and I bet Peter Leone will make an appearance.

I've voted for ending 2.

Btw we'll stop spamming your topic Will.

[The Unvirginiser]

What did you like about the chapter?

[Rhoda]

Jesus.

 

That's probably the only word I can use to sum all of this up. This hasn't been a game-script at all, it's been a journey and it feels just as epic as San Andreas itself felt as I first got the game at 15. Aside from saying this is a great piece of work, I've got to say thank you too, for bringing back memories of my San Andreas experience.

[radicell]

I love where you're going with this, Will. I love how you eradicated Stark, very fitting of the entire way SAS has been.

 

Reading over the introduction, I've noticed one small problem though. This takes place between Vice City and San Andreas, yeah? But the Da Nang Boys only arrived in San Fierro during the events of San Andreas. So how come they're warring with the Triads right now?

[The Unvirginiser]

I blame the Enterprise.

[El Zilcho]

What a way to finish off the skinheads! I voted Three, can't wait for what you have in store. I'm pumped!

[TomVDC]

I really liked that you could feel the anger in everybody.

All the Grove-members were really motivated to get back at those Skinheads.

It was epic...

 

grtz

Tom

[sam33]

 

im the only one who put ending one.

[nerner]

The ideas look sick mate, can't wait for the last chapter.

[Lethal Nizzle]

Don't fret Sam, I voted one.

 

Cracking ending to the Stark saga, brutal and full of descriptive richness. I can't wait for the finale and the ending(s).

[Chunk]

I voted for Pedro three.

 

And I must say Will, well done in that last mission. You told me on MSN you needed some help with it, but it turned out great without my help. Great job man.

[nerner]

Don't fret Sam, I voted one.

 

 

So did I... You are not alone...

[The Unvirginiser]

 

Two and three are neck and neck!

[Omnia sunt Communia]

Not anymore.

[TomVDC]

Oke, then ending two is winning at the moment.

When will the poll be closed?

 

grtz

Tom

[El Zilcho]

Yes, will be the ending be up by this week?

 

I would say that the poll should be closed this Friday, Midnight. A reasonable date for something as epic as this has been, and will continue to be for many generations to come. Nice work, I'm dying to see the ending and really wondering what will happen. Good luck.

[Oblivionz]

I've already seen all three endings, and I must say I prefer two overall.

[TomVDC]

That makes me very happy, I voted ending two although I haven't seen then.

Hopefully Oblivion has a bit the same taste as me.

[The Unvirginiser]

I've already seen all three endings, and I must say I prefer two overall.

Libel.

[The Unvirginiser]

 

The sun is setting in Liberty City, a beautiful red giant lays to rest in the western sky. A white Lear jet casts a long, dark shadow across Francis International’s runway as it touches down. Discreetly, a black Washington pulls up beside a hanger. Five Mafia thugs step out, equipped with M4 rifles. The jet slowly comes to a stop in its parking zone. The thugs stay secluded, behind a hanger wall. After a few anxious moments, the door folds down to create a staircase. The thugs make their move.

 

 

The pilot tried to start the jet back up, but it all happened too quickly. A burst on gunfire came through the glass, hitting him in the chest and sending him crashing to the ground. His beautiful plane was being destroyed around him, what seemed like thousands of bullets penetrated the walls and windows. Glass and metal flew all over the cockpit and cabin; bullets flew through and ripped the furniture apart. After three or four horrible minutes of gunfire, the men outside stepped aboard. For a few desperate seconds, they searched the cabin, looking for someone.

 

The pilot was lying on his back, with a smoking shotgun barrel aimed at his face.

“And where is he?” The thug demanded.

“I told you-, I dropped him off-, private airfield, he said something about getting a boat the rest of the way-” He struggled to breathe, let alone speak.

“Where?” The cold voice asked again.

“Just outside the city-, then he told me-, to come here-…”

Without hesitation, the thug pulled the trigger.

 

Back at the Leone house, a phone rings. A little grey haired man puts down his paper, approaches and answers.

“Hello?”

“Fredo? It’s Peter, is my Father home?” The cold voice was overcome with panic.

“No, he went out a while ago-”

“Get Tony on the phone, ask him to pick up Joey and take him out someplace, anywhere. Then call everybody up, I think there’s gonna’ be an attack on the house. Get some sandbags from the cellar and anything else you can find. Board up the windows, doors, everything. Get all the guns, grenades, armour – Anything you can find!”

“Yes Peter, I understand.”

“Block the driver with cars, I want men stationed at the gate, on the roof, everywhere. Turn over all the furniture in the house to use as cover! That place better be a f*cking fortress when I get back Fredo.”

“I understand Peter, I understand.”

“Oh, and Fredo…”

“Yes?”

“Why are you still on the phone?”

 

[El Zilcho]

This is in tense! I can't wait for the mission, I know it's gonna be epic!

[Lethal Nizzle]

Looking good Will, roll on the next chapter.

[TomVDC]

Damnit, I want more!!

I knew it was going to be something with Peter Leone...

 

grtz

Tom

[Greenage380]

Nice teaser Uv. Can't wait till the final mission is posted although I will be sad that it has to end .

[VCRules86]

Gonna be epic. I can't wait for the finale.

 

"why are you still on the phone?" was funny, great line