Lochie_old Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 Theres a kid named Alvin Lee in my school I dare you to ask him if he has any new leads on what QC means. Just cos he'll have no idea what you're talking about. And then you punch him in the face! Or be like "OH NO, THERE ARE STREET RACERS COMING AFTER US!" And see what his reaction is. Then punch him in the face. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 Theres a kid named Alvin Lee in my school I dare you to ask him if he has any new leads on what QC means. Just cos he'll have no idea what you're talking about. And then you punch him in the face! I don't have any idea what you're talking about, but i'll take the consideration Alvin in the story has to find out what QC means. If you say it to the Alvin in your school he'll have no idea what you're talking about, but you will, and it'll be funny. Then you punch him in the face because you're raging. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 21, 2008 Share Posted June 21, 2008 radicell, explain to your fans what we talked about over PM mate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 22, 2008 Author Share Posted June 22, 2008 TonyZimmzy you little prick of a rat bastard. Just kidding. You're way off. And then you punch him in the face!That's probably not too good of an idea, seeing that after that you'll have him chasing you looking to running you over with a car. And yes, Unviriginiser is up to now the only person who knows the (planned) identity of the Mystery Caller. But I'm not planning on releasing his identity, just yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 And yes, Unviriginiser is up to now the only person who knows the (planned) identity of the Mystery Caller. But I'm not planning on releasing his identity, just yet. No,no,no I mean about the collab/crossover thing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 22, 2008 Author Share Posted June 22, 2008 And yes, Unviriginiser is up to now the only person who knows the (planned) identity of the Mystery Caller. But I'm not planning on releasing his identity, just yet. No,no,no I mean about the collab/crossover thing Ah yes. Since we're both doing game-scripts, and they're both fully/partly based in San Fierro, Unvirginiser and I are collaborating on making our scripts set in the same universe - namely, having one character recur in both our scripts. The character is the Mystery Caller ?, but his identity will not be released until the very end of SFS - so if it is the case one might have to look in SAS for clues of the mysterious man's identity. But all is not guaranteed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 And yes, Unviriginiser is up to now the only person who knows the (planned) identity of the Mystery Caller. But I'm not planning on releasing his identity, just yet. No,no,no I mean about the collab/crossover thing Ah yes. Since we're both doing game-scripts, and they're both fully/partly based in San Fierro, Unvirginiser and I are collaborating on making our scripts set in the same universe - namely, having one character recur in both our scripts. The character is the Mystery Caller ?, but his identity will not be released until the very end of SFS - so if it is the case one might have to look in SAS for clues of the mysterious man's identity. But all is not guaranteed... Yeah it's a working progress, got to finalize everything and figure out how he plays in to sh*t but it will happen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted June 22, 2008 Share Posted June 22, 2008 Can't wait to see how this turns out, radicell. I'll always be your number-one fan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GentlemanSquid Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 No I am I can't wait to see who it is, I have to start reading SAS. So im reading 3 stories at once. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 23, 2008 Author Share Posted June 23, 2008 Danni: As always, you have my thanks for the support. Great sig by the way. gta_talk: That's great, they're all great pieces of work in my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 Thanks. It's just something I slapped together real quick-like. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cj2000 Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 When and where can the mod be downloaded ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 When and where can the mod be downloaded ? It's not a mod. Why do people think these scripts are a mod all the time? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 23, 2008 Author Share Posted June 23, 2008 When and where can the mod be downloaded ? Tony's right, this is just a fan-made script that is my idea for a GTA game. In reality, it isn't. If someone wishes to turn this into a mod, they are free to do so. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 23, 2008 Share Posted June 23, 2008 When and where can the mod be downloaded ? Tony's right, this is just a fan-made script that is my idea for a GTA game. In reality, it isn't. If someone wishes to turn this into a mod, they are free to do so. Would be pretty cool.. Just wonderin rad, how far from the ending are you? How long do you think the story will go on for? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 23, 2008 Author Share Posted June 23, 2008 When and where can the mod be downloaded ? Tony's right, this is just a fan-made script that is my idea for a GTA game. In reality, it isn't. If someone wishes to turn this into a mod, they are free to do so. Would be pretty cool.. Just wonderin rad, how far from the ending are you? How long do you think the story will go on for? I'd say currently I'm about halfway, maybe a little less, maybe a little more. There's still some plenty missions left, but I'm imagining this will end in sometime in August. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GROVEISLS Posted June 24, 2008 Share Posted June 24, 2008 Man this is awsome! you have my support and also cool image Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GROVEISLS Posted June 24, 2008 Share Posted June 24, 2008 How do you get those other images in the background like the Gant Bridge and Alvin & Ahito Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GentlemanSquid Posted June 24, 2008 Share Posted June 24, 2008 @GROVEISLS - Please don't double post, use the edit button @radicell - When is the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 24, 2008 Author Share Posted June 24, 2008 GROVEISLS: Yeah don't double post, as gta_talk said. Although secretly I like double posts in this topic, as it increases the post count. Are you talking about the banner on the cover page? gta_talk made that excellent banner for him -- you can only ask him how. gta_talk: Well I'm on vacation right now in Japan, so it's definitely not going to be up until I get back on the 30th and probably not going to be up until July. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted June 24, 2008 Share Posted June 24, 2008 Well, that kinda sucks, but I hope you enjoy your vacation, radicell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GentlemanSquid Posted June 24, 2008 Share Posted June 24, 2008 Oh japans seems cool. where are you originally from? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 24, 2008 Author Share Posted June 24, 2008 Thanks Danni, sorry about that. By the way, gta_talk, that looks like an awesome support sig you've got there. I might just add it to the first page as some "Support Userbars" along with Danni's one. gta_talk: Of all places, some would say, I'm Chinese-Canadian. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GentlemanSquid Posted June 24, 2008 Share Posted June 24, 2008 Yer sure course you can Chinese-Canadian, thats a weird combination, sounds cool though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GROVEISLS Posted June 25, 2008 Share Posted June 25, 2008 @GROVEISLS - Please don't double post, use the edit button @radicell - When is the next chapter. Oh Okay my bad Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 30, 2008 Author Share Posted June 30, 2008 Sorry for the slow progress. This mission here is mostly gameplay. I've also decided to abandon the colors for dialogue. Kill the Cabron San Fierro Rifa Strand CUTSCENE It is nighttime, and inside Misty’s Bar, spotlights are blaring onto the ground. The bartender is mixing drinks as your Hispanic accomplice is wooing some strippers at the barstools. Alvin walks up to him and confronts him. The women leave, surprised at the unusual sight of an Asian man in this bar. JORGE: Man, what the hell! ALVIN: Got anything good this time, or is it another episode of “Throw the weed to the Mexicans”? JORGE: F*ck you man, you want some action, go to WrestleMania. ALVIN: C’mon man, I’ve seen a bunch of Cuban cars around here already! JORGE: (alert) You have? Where? ALVIN: One or two, around Easter Bay. Some boats as well. Seems like they’ve just arrived. JORGE: Well, how convenient, get out there, and kill ‘em! They’re tough, and they will probably put up a huge fight, but hey, that’s what you’re here for, right? ALVIN: (holding up a menacing-looking MP5) Sure. JORGE: Make sure your gun there gets the better of them. FADE OUT/IN The two men have walked out of Misty’s Bar and they are standing on the sidewalk. Suddenly, a Rifa car drives down the road at speed and pulls up in front of the bar. The gang member inside gets out. RIFA GUY: Jorge! We gotta get up on our turf man! Cubans swarming all over the place already! JORGE: (nods to Alvin) See to it that they’re all dead. GAMEPLAY You’ve got three blips driving around South San Fierro, Oceanside, and Easter Bay, representing the three Cuban Hermes in these areas. You must destroy each vehicle and kill the Cuban inside it. The mission strategy is up to you; however, once each vehicle is attacked, it will start driving crazily away at full speed, and once each vehicle is on fire, the Cuban inside will get out, and run. This part of the mission is not particularly difficult. After all three Cuban cars are destroyed, a new blip appears on the map, and is white. This is a special vehicle, it is a Cuban Hermes designed with flames on a white background instead of black. It is the leader vehicle, the one that your target “Cabron” is sitting in. The game directs you to shadow this car, and a “Spook-o-meter” appears under the HUD. This part of the mission is alike to the missions “Snail Trail” and “Key to Her Heart” from SA. Get near the car, and follow it, but not too close, or the Spook-o-meter will rise rapidly. If you max the Spook-o-meter, the Cubans will be alerted of your presence and the mission will be failed. The special Cuban Hermes will take a long winding route throughout the streets of San Fierro, and you must stay close to it at all times. Eventually, it will pull up in front of a tall building around Downtown, and a cutscene will be triggered. CUTSCENE Apparently, the Cubans have found out about your shadowing them. The target Cuban runs out of the car and into the front doors of the San Fierro building. On his back is a parachute, and his intentions are clear: to parachute away. FADE OUT/IN The camera cuts to a shot on the rooftop of the building. The San Fierro streets are far below, and the Cuban runs out into the sunlight, followed by a chasing Alvin Lee. Alvin tries to shoot at the Cuban, but it is too late: the Cuban has jumped off the building. To Alvin’s right, however, is a second parachute that spawns on the rooftop. Alvin runs towards it and equips himself with it. ALVIN: (mutters) God help me.. A dramatic view of Alvin jumping off the edge of the building, in pursuit of the Cuban, and starting to freefall. At this point, the game freezes and some on-screen messages come up to instruct you in how to use a parachute. GAMEPLAY The cabron is someway ahead of you, and has already opened his parachute. Freefall for a short while, and the game will prompt you “Open your parachute!” You should try to land where the cabron lands, and when you do, you’ll see that you’ve landed on/near a dockside, where some Cuban boats are moored. Around six Cuban gang members will be there shooting at you with MicroSMG’s as the cabron makes his way to one of the boats. Cap all the Cubans if you want, or just make a beeline run for the other boat, which the game prompts you to get into. The remainder of this mission is like killing Ryder in “Pier 69” in SA: you have to do drive-by’s in a boat and kill your target. Once the cabron’s boat is on fire, make yourself scarce. Mission passed. +$5000. +Respect. There are several repercussions of this mission: 1) The Cubans now claim temporary turf at the dock where their ships were moored in the mission. Enter this territory and all the Cubans will shoot at you, as you are enemy to them. 2) The only remaining icon is the ? mystery caller icon, at the airport. It is time to go do those missions, but.. 3) When you are not on a mission and you are in San Fierro, strange Asian men in black tank tops and wearing sunglasses above their eyes will be chasing you. When you are on foot, they will pull up to you in a car and shoot at you with powerful weapons – MP5’s and AK47’s. As a result of this, you will get a phone call sometime soon.. PHONE CALL ICHIRO: Alvin! Are you there? ALVIN: Yeah. Ichiro, what the hell is going on? ICHIRO: What, what happened? ALVIN: I’ve got a bunch of assassins chasing after me! ICHIRO: No…. what do they look like? ALVIN: Jeans, black tanks, shades.. they look Asian to me. ICHIRO: You’ve got to be kidding me! I just arrived at the shack, and I saw two of my men dead. It looked to me like a huge shootout took place here.. and I check for the bodies of the attackers, they match your description! ALVIN: Someone’s out to kill us, who could it be? ICHIRO: I’ve no clue! I’m busy setting up guards here. We can’t afford anything like that again. ALVIN: (says nothing) ICHIRO: Alvin? You there? ALVIN: Yeah. And I know who those men are. ICHIRO: Who are they, who sent them? ALVIN: There’s only one answer… I think my father sent them. END OF PHONE CALL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edopla_ Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 Very good man like the story..... i want to know what QC means Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 Radical... the story is getting more and more intense. I'm dying to know about our Mysterious Mister Mystery and the unknown assassins. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted June 30, 2008 Share Posted June 30, 2008 Oh, by the way, thanks for adding my banner on the front page! ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lethal Nizzle Posted July 1, 2008 Share Posted July 1, 2008 Nice update! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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