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marlord911

The Bikers - Moist Palms Hotel

Chapter 9: Power Outage

 

Inside the Greasy Chopper, lights shone and the TV blared. On the TV, colored images sprang up. I flicked the channel to the sports channel, and a basketball game was going on. It was the 4th quarter and time was running out for the Vice City team. There was 0:54 left on the clock, and Vice City coach had just called a time-out. I went over to the bar and asked the bartender for a drink.

 

"Bartender, give me some beer please."

 

The man behind the bar fiddled with some bottles before producing a sizeable cup and pouring yellow beer into it, which foamed and frothed furiously. I waited for the froth to dissipate before picking up the beer glass and walking back to the TV. There was an empty sofa seat amist a bunch of Bikers who were also watching the game. I sat down on the empty seat, and put my beer down on the table before me, but not before taking a little sip.

 

I leaned back and reclined in the soothing comfort of the sofa chair. On the screen, the Vice City players were playing well, having reduced the gap to 3 points. But there was only 3.2 seconds left on the clock, would they be able to tie the game? The climax of the match had come, I immediately sat up straight in the chair. My buddies to my left and right did the same. We were all rooting for Vice City.

 

Play started. The Vice City players hurriedly passed the ball to the front of the court. The number 10 received the ball, dribbled for a second towards the 3-point line, and jumped. The buzzer sounded just as the ball left his hands; we all watched in expectation as the ball soared through the air; its trajectory in the shape of an arc, with the players behind watching it with wide eyes. The ball began its downward motion. It hit the backboard, rebounded off the rim, and -

 

Everything was pitch black. The TV had shut down by itself, and so had the lights - it was utter darkness inside the Greasy Chopper. Angry sighs of "Dammit!" began being uttered from all over the bar, and before long, Mitch Baker, our ever-so-reliable leader, took control. He strode to the main door in pitch darkness, with the resilience and familiarity that could only have come from years of experience. He kicked open the door, letting in a slight amount of light.

 

Night had fallen outside, and indeed, rain was pouring. After the first strikes of lightning, we knew why the power outage had happened. Lightning had probably struck one of the bar's cables, resulting in a short circuit. Therefore, everything had gone pitch black, and the result of the basketball game, which so many of us were watching, would remain unknown until the morning paper came the next day.

 

"Dammit Big Mitch, what are we going to do now? We can't stay inside, there's nothing to do!" exclaimed a biker.

 

"You're right, Jeff," Big Mitch said to the biker named Jeff, "We'll need to find some place to stay for the night. Power probably won't come back on until tomorrow. Any ideas?"

 

"How about those rent-out apartments in Little Havana?" came a suggestion.

 

"Nahh, those are probably infested with rats and bugs. Plus, that's in Cuban territory. We ain't too close these days." Big Mitch raised his hand to shield himself from the pouring rain.

 

"How about the Moist Palms Hotel itself? We do protection for it, so it shouldn't be a problem with them."

 

Big Mitch was still doubtful. "Moist Palms? I don't know, man. Even us, we'll have to pay to stay, and it won't be cheap. Plus, the Haitians always milling around there, looking to start a war or something."

 

After much discussion, it was decided that the entire Biker posse would make a trip across to the other end of Vice City, down at Ocean Beach. There was a little resort there called the Ocean View, Big Mitch explained, that had just enough rooms to fit us all. Plus, the next morning, we could spend a nice morning at the sunny beach before returning.

 

Everyone liked the idea, and so our bikes were pulled out and hopped onto. We sped into the rainy distance, across Prawn Bridge and into Vice Point, at which point we turned south and headed towards our destination - Ocean Beach.

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Angelo Leone

A quick question:Is Scifen here?He should've posted his story by now.How long should we give him?

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Gabriel Constantin
A quick question:Is Scifen here?He should've posted his story by now.How long should we give him?

As long as he needs. This is his thread remember, you're fighting for the right to stay here.

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Angelo Leone

Well,my ban has been lifted as of today.And I posted earlier this morning.

 

Hey Gabriel,did you like my gang war story?(It's at the bottom of the previous page)

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Gabriel Constantin

I thought it was terrible, personally. Too much time concetrating on pointless small talk and not enough time focusing on what really matters: Killing Hoodz. Though it's your story, we'll just see how it fares against Scifen.'s, wont we? tounge.gif

 

EDIT: Also the fact that you had to include "But before I write,I'd like to make it very clear that I'm ignoring anything Gabriel Constantin wrote." Shows that you're a terrible writer and could not fight your way out of a textual paper bag if you had to.

Edited by Gabriel Constantin

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Angelo Leone

Why do you hate everything I do?I'm trying to develop a character you tried to kill off.Hey,a whole bunch of Hoods are killed in this story,they are sent to a firey grave.Since everyone except mark-2007 hates me,I know I'm going to lose even if I write the greatest story ever made.So let Scifen win,I posted my gang war story on the day my ban was lifted,so I think I'm back in.

 

And Gabriel,I was going to post Koji's death and how I worked my way around your story,but I decided to save that for later.I'm a much better writer than you think I am.I just hate gang war stories.

Edited by Angelo Leone

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Gabriel Constantin
Why do you hate everything I do?

I don't. I hate stupidity. You just happen to carry a lot of it around with you whenever you come online.

 

 

I'm trying to develop a character you tried to kill off.

 

Exactly. That's like John F. Kennedy trying to run for President.

 

 

Hey,a whole bunch of Hoods are killed in this story,they are sent to a firey grave.

 

Yes, but you're boring everyone with the insane amount of useless backstory before hand. Writing a good story isn't just about how many people you kill.

 

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Angelo Leone

Listen,the BUYG staff said I could use my character and you killing off Sora and Koji was rendered null and void.mark-2007 said as long as I made her survival realistic,I could keep her.Now this story is set before yours,so therefore Koji is still alive and Sora is not seeking revenge on the Oyabun.Backstory is very important,in fact,it will play a huge role in the stories to come.Backstory plays a more important part than how many gangbangers one kills.

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Skimask101
Why do you hate everything I do?I'm trying to develop a character you tried to kill off.Hey,a whole bunch of Hoods are killed in this story,they are sent to a firey grave.Since everyone except mark-2007 hates me,I know I'm going to lose even if I write the greatest story ever made.So let Scifen win,I posted my gang war story on the day my ban was lifted,so I think I'm back in.

Well you might actually win if you write a better story but thats very unlikely. So you made a bad move by going against one of the best writers in BUYG.

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Angelo Leone

Listen,I didn't want to get in a war against Scifen,he wants to go to war with me!I just want to write stories,even if they do suck.And I can edit my story to include more combat and make it better.I have enough backstory,so I just need to have more action,or at least that's what Gabriel's saying.

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Gabriel Constantin
Listen,I didn't want to get in a war against Scifen,he wants to go to war with me!I just want to write stories,even if they do suck.And I can edit my story to include more combat and make it better.I have enough backstory,so I just need to have more action,or at least that's what Gabriel's saying.

No. YOU started this war. Don't try and pretend like you're the victim here. It's your stories that started this gang war. It's your stories that got you banned. Stop acting like a whiney little bitch before I get some guy called Bubba to give you a human booster shot.

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Angelo Leone

I didn't mean to start the war,and listen here,I edited the post to everyone's liking.

 

Oh,and as for the human booster shot comment:Quit posting your gay fantasies on here.

 

And to think you were on my respect list.

 

I know my stories got me banned,and I take full responsiblity for that.But I do not intend to start a war.

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Gabriel Constantin
I didn't mean to start the war,and listen here,I edited the post to everyone's liking.

 

Oh,and as for the human booster shot comment:Quit posting your gay fantasies on here.

 

And to think you were on my respect list.

 

I know my stories got me banned,and I take full responsiblity for that.But I do not intend to start a war.

If you want to get banned for homophobia, then keep on trudging down the same road you're heading my friend. Because a six star wanted level and a new member title are the only things that will be waiting for you on the other side.

 

As for amending your stories to everyone's liking, so what? Just because you changed what you said still doesn't mean you didn't say it. Your stories were still prejudice and stereotypical and the fact that somebody else had to tell you to change them enhances the fact that you too are prejudice and stereotypical.

 

You obviously wanted to start a war, otherwise your stories wouldn't of gone on and on at the Southside Hoodz and wouldn't of mentioned Scifen's character personally. It's obvious who and what you are, stop trying to hide it through countless post edits.

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Skimask101
Listen,I didn't want to get in a war against Scifen,he wants to go to war with me!I just want to write stories,even if they do suck.And I can edit my story to include more combat and make it better.I have enough backstory,so I just need to have more action,or at least that's what Gabriel's saying.

Well make your stories a little more realistic because when I was writing for The $outh$ide hoods the only guns we had were Desert Eagle, Uzi 9mm, Combat shotgun, now the $outh$ide Hoods have Ak's. Also I thought it was funny you attacked the $outh$ide Hoods club Because:

1.I used to write there

2.At the end of my last story for the Hoods The Yardies destroyed the place

3.You made it seem too easy to blow up the place because if you read my last story for the hoods the Yardies tried hard to take over and won.

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Angelo Leone

1.I didn't know that the Yardies attacked the place

2.The reason why there's nobody guarding it is because of a party(Hence the loud hip-hop music)

3.Tony and Adamo do take action when they hear of the bomb attack,hence the roadblock.

[email protected] Constantin,I'm not homophobic,I just don't like people putting lewd stuff like that in their posts.I am not a racist,and I thought it'd be okay if I could attack his characters.You attacked mine.

Edited by Angelo Leone

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Gabriel Constantin
[email protected] Constantin,I'm not homophobic,I just don't like people putting lewd stuff like that in their posts.I am not a racist,and I thought it'd be okay if I could attack his characters.You attacked mine.

The only reason I ever attacked and killed your character was because you'd been banned from the topic. Scifen., however, had not been.

 

And about you not being a racist, it's obvious you are. Your stories are always filled from front to back with your own personal views and opinions (e.g. your hatred for rap/hip-hop, your love for classic rock, your personal taste in fashion) and the remarks your character made about the $outh$ide Hoodz both in the narrative and dialogue clearly point towards some sort of hatred towards them. Whether that's all blacks in general, or just the Hoodz is yet to be determined though.

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Skimask101
1.I didn't know that the Yardies attacked the place

2.The reason why there's nobody guarding it is because of a party(Hence the loud hip-hop music)

3.Tony and Adamo do take action when they hear of the bomb attack,hence the roadblock.

[email protected] Constantin,I'm not homophobic,I just don't like people putting lewd stuff like that in their posts.I am not a racist,and I thought it'd be okay if I could attack his characters.You attacked mine.

THEN SAY THERE WAS A PARTY AND NO ONE NOTICED! You could make your story A LOT better if you add more emotion, Description and especially GIVE MORE DRAMA TO AN ATTACK.

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Angelo Leone

I only hate the Hoods,not black people.In fact,the GSF are my second favorite gang(next to the Leone Family,of course)

 

Just because someone hates rap and gangstas doesn't mean they are racist.And I'm editing my post to add more drama.

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Gabriel Constantin
Just because someone hates rap and gangstas doesn't mean they are racist.And I'm editing my post to add more drama.

No. But doesn't mean your character has to announce it every time they arrive in scene. How many Sicillian Mobsters do you see raving on about their musical preferences during a gun fight? Zero. That's half the reason your stories fare to badly, because they're unrealistic and full of your own personal views and opinions rather than more realistic views that would be held by someone who your character is hoping to portray.

 

 

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Angelo Leone

Notice that in my most recent story,Sora says nothing about Hip-Hop.Hip-Hop music is playing at the Southside Hoodz club,but only because of a party going on.

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Gabriel Constantin
Notice that in my most recent story,Sora says nothing about Hip-Hop.Hip-Hop music is playing at the Southside Hoodz club,but only because of a party going on.

 

Sadly, the classic rock of the radio was replaced with crappy punk music, and the gentle ride was now a frantic race.

 

Who said it was just hip-hop? You seem to have it out for every genre of music except classic rock. All your stories are filled with bias opinions.

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Angelo Leone

I also like Blues(which is famous for it's black musicians),Bluegrass,Classic Country,Classical,and many other genres.

 

I just hate Rap/Hip-Hop,Alternative/Punk,and Metal/Emo

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Gabriel Constantin

I cannot be bothered to argue with you any more Angelo, good luck in the gang war. You'll need it.

 

Can The Yakuza purchase a Ingram MAC-10 for $155, please?

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Skimask101

 

I just hate Rap/Hip-Hop,Alternative/Punk,and Metal/Emo

Some one Who isn't open to all types of music is simple minded, even Toni Cipriani would Listen to The Liberty Jam.

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Angelo Leone

OK,then.I don't want to argue with you either.

 

Fare thee well.

 

I'm not simple minded,I've listened to these genres and found them not to my liking,but enough about that.Let's end the arguing.

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Wanted Assailant

Two and a half pages of just plain argument. Some people just can't accept to lose. In the end, you'll feel better about yourself when you accept defeat, because not everyone wins.

 

 

You are simple-minded Angelo. You probably only listened to only about one musical piece of that genre, and decided on your dogmatic opinions only. Not eveyone likes the same music, but you could at least respect it, or keep it to yourself.

 

 

 

I'm done.

 

 

OT: By the third round( due to the slowness of the 2nd round), I'll most likely drop out myself. I'll be on a huge vacation, having no time to even access the internet. I'm just hoping the right writer wins when I'm gone.

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Angelo Leone

I know I've lost,but some people just won't let me walk away and recover,so I have to fight my way out.Hence the arguing.

 

I'm done arguing.I know Scifen's gonna win,but all I care is that I resume posting in this thread.With all the stress in my real life,this forum is one of the few things that is keeping me from killing myself(this along with my religion and my school's Latin Club)

 

A Quick Question:If Scifen doesn't post soon,does that mean I win?(probably not,seeing as everyone hates me,but I need to make sure)

Edited by Angelo Leone

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Lochie_old

Angelo, what the f*ck.

 

I got your PM, but I didn't except you to post this much bullsh*t on the thread.

 

To answer your first question;

 

Scifen owns this sh*t, without him there'd be no BUYG so he'll post his story when hes back. Secondly, I'm going to ban you from posting in here because of this flame war. Depending if you beat Scifen then you can stay, but until Scifen posts and a clear winner is decided you are not to leave anymore of your nonsense in here.

 

@Yakuza: I'll update tomorrow.

@Marlord: Mark your story tomorrow, n_n

 

BUYG gang war comp is most likely to be postponed.

 

EDIT:

 

Next person to pointlessly spam this topic with something totally non-related to BUYG will be banned from the topic for a week, until Mark gets back (Hes the more kinder of the staff) I will not tolerate any of this bullsh*t that happened on the last page. Serious posts only involving stories and purchasing items for your gang. Other then that nothing else. This applys to everyone.

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Angelo Leone

Before I leave,the Yakuza would like to buy a Katana

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Gabriel Constantin
Before I leave,the Yakuza would like to buy a Katana

You're not a member of The Yakuza, take a look at the roster.

 

Sorry for the off-topic post, I just don't want Angelo wasting my gang's money when he's done nothing to help generate money for the gang.

 

P.S. The Yakuza don't even have enough money to buy a Katana, we've only got $35 left after I purchased the MAC-10. Do your research before just mindlessly purchasing weapons for a gang you don't belong too.

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