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we all grow old with pain


Canofceleri

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when you're a kid you ain't got no heart,

and getting old is just no fun.

when you're a kid that frolicks grown old to break,

we all grow old with pain.

 

i don't want to leave without the skies i now hold in my fists enclosed,

or the golden meadows unseen the same.

but it's you that i want to keep forever, it's for you that i cry,

still i grow old with pain.

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Loving it Candarelli, this is one of your poems that I can actually understand. smile.gifsmile.gif

lol. It is a bit more straightforward than a lot of my stuff, but surely the others would withstand some close analysis. Some poems, like the one linked in my sig, have a lot of stuff in it that's more for texture and feel, but there are usually parts where a concrete theme or idea could be taken away.

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A bit short, but good, all the same.

 

Out of curiosity, why'd you leave The Connection? dontgetit.gif

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A bit short, but good, all the same.

 

Out of curiosity, why'd you leave The Connection? dontgetit.gif

Ah, The Connection, buncha assholes. No, really, they're awesome in there... just wanted a change I guess, it's been almost five years now.

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