Canofceleri Posted February 12, 2008 Share Posted February 12, 2008 (edited) when you're a kid you ain't got no heart, and getting old is just no fun. when you're a kid that frolicks grown old to break, we all grow old with pain. i don't want to leave without the skies i now hold in my fists enclosed, or the golden meadows unseen the same. but it's you that i want to keep forever, it's for you that i cry, still i grow old with pain. Edited February 12, 2008 by Candarelli Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/311857-we-all-grow-old-with-pain/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickstick Posted February 12, 2008 Share Posted February 12, 2008 Nice. Not too long, but still, a pretty good poem. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/311857-we-all-grow-old-with-pain/?do=findComment&comment=1057498973 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Land Of Confusion Posted February 13, 2008 Share Posted February 13, 2008 Loving it Candarelli, this is one of your poems that I can actually understand. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/311857-we-all-grow-old-with-pain/?do=findComment&comment=1057500908 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted February 13, 2008 Author Share Posted February 13, 2008 Loving it Candarelli, this is one of your poems that I can actually understand. lol. It is a bit more straightforward than a lot of my stuff, but surely the others would withstand some close analysis. Some poems, like the one linked in my sig, have a lot of stuff in it that's more for texture and feel, but there are usually parts where a concrete theme or idea could be taken away. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/311857-we-all-grow-old-with-pain/?do=findComment&comment=1057501058 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted February 13, 2008 Share Posted February 13, 2008 (edited) A bit short, but good, all the same. Out of curiosity, why'd you leave The Connection? Edited February 13, 2008 by EmoPat Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/311857-we-all-grow-old-with-pain/?do=findComment&comment=1057501200 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted February 13, 2008 Author Share Posted February 13, 2008 A bit short, but good, all the same. Out of curiosity, why'd you leave The Connection? Ah, The Connection, buncha assholes. No, really, they're awesome in there... just wanted a change I guess, it's been almost five years now. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/311857-we-all-grow-old-with-pain/?do=findComment&comment=1057502327 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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