longkissgoodnight Posted January 30, 2008 Author Share Posted January 30, 2008 I am gonna stop this story but if anyone wants to continue it than be my guest just let me no about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 Coral City, I did have constructive criticism. Longkiss, don't apologize. In fact, you should officially rescind your apology and list the names again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltinespike Posted January 31, 2008 Share Posted January 31, 2008 Just so you know, I wasn't talking to you, longkissgoodnight. I was talking to the people making fun of the writing. Just made me mad. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
longkissgoodnight Posted January 31, 2008 Author Share Posted January 31, 2008 Hey Canarelli what do you mean by "rescind'? And what names should I list again? Please explain. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
longkissgoodnight Posted February 2, 2008 Author Share Posted February 2, 2008 I am actuality continuing this story but I ain't posting it here because everybody is gonna keep on saying bad stuff about it. But if you would like to read the story than just give me a pm. And to be honest - I'm not really a person who gives a lot of details - I on the other hand build up on suspense. So whatever - you guys can make fun of me and my story. But it has a good plot. Its my plot and I ain't copying anybody. And thats all I have to say! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted February 2, 2008 Share Posted February 2, 2008 Well you can't have suspense if no one gives a sh*t. It's like anything else... the movie Deer Hunter, the first almost whole hour of that movie is backstory, just real banal every day stuff... but then they throw those characters into a crazy Vietnam conflict. A lesser movie would be shorter by an hour, but all that stuff in the beginning wasn't for nothing, it made you know the characters. If it just started with people in a f*cked up situation it wouldn't have been as effective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GROVEISLS Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 And why do people keep on quoting what I say? Stop doing that its annoying. Ah, but we already knew of your aversion to quotation marks, you didn't have to tell us again. And yeah, what whip! said. Since NZ are friends with the US i agree with you Candarelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poikly Posted July 25, 2008 Share Posted July 25, 2008 Did you really have to bump it to say that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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