Canofceleri Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 his dick shines in 24 square feet of brilliant flourescence. thirteen people in one room forever. i see its walls are reflective painted white and sterile. no one eats and no one shits, fuckin's all on their minds. they pick and chew on bugs from one another's scalp, age and cure the queen's menstrual fluids and feed their young, but then the brute squashes one of the male pickaninnies before his mother's very eyes. thirteen people in one room forever. no one eats and no one shits, fuckin's all on their minds. before long the brute has killed all of the women and children, his cock has dulled in appearance and has lost its shine, frustrated he smashes into the door, dragging along his club into the abyss of the hall only to one day die. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/309053-his-dick-shines-in-24-square-feet/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rastaja Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 frustrated he smashes into the door, dragging along his club into the abyss of the hall only to one day die. I guess Wilma didn't put out for Fred. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/309053-his-dick-shines-in-24-square-feet/#findComment-1057449022 Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthTemplar Posted January 29, 2008 Share Posted January 29, 2008 This was a very odd poem. You must have been drunk as hell when you wrote it Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/309053-his-dick-shines-in-24-square-feet/#findComment-1057449218 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted January 29, 2008 Author Share Posted January 29, 2008 This was a very odd poem. You must have been drunk as hell when you wrote it Nah, sober. I just think f*cked up thoughts... ever read The Dysfunktionals? Search for it. I'm thinking about doing a family reuinion episode of it. For reals though, this poem is just... it's really an idea for a movie, the idea of what would happen if a group of people were in one room with only two of them males of different personality. What would happen? It's like pure sociology, it'd make a great like 10 hour movie, 13 people in a room that never acknowledge that they're just in a room for life, it's like not even an issue. Deeeep man. For serious though, I actually liked the cancer poem I posted before this... usually I'm real down on my stuff, but I liked that one and wished that I had gotten more criticism on it (but on here criticism is like, "that sucked" or "you can write dude 1337"). I smell like raw chicken tonight. I hate restaurants. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/309053-his-dick-shines-in-24-square-feet/#findComment-1057449697 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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