Oblivionz Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 (edited) Sweet let out a moan of pure ectasy as Carl's cock entered his tight asshole, thrusting back and forth. Toreno yelled out, "Shut the f*ck up, Sweet, or when you return home you'll find your sister dead!". He moaned shortly after from his corner. Kendl stood up from atop of Big Smoke's erection, and a look of dismay swept over his face, as he yelled at her to sit on his dick again. The massive orgy in the middle of the cell suddenly stopped as the patrolling officer came to investigate the amounts of moaning and yelling come the same cell that contained the whole Johnson family, Ryder, Big Smoke, Michael Toreno, and even Maccer. As the officer banged his nightstick on the door, a look of pure astonishment took over his face, as he quickly opened the cell door to get in on the massive orgy. What happened next was the last thing anyone would of expected. Big Smoke tackled the large officer, and stuck his erection into the man's mouth. Muffled gags come from the man, as he struggled for breath, but he remained held down by the fat man on top of him, slowly being suffocated to death. Smoke let his load into the man's mouth, a deep moan coming from his throat as the man finally stopped gagging, and bit down sharply onto his penis. The head of the penis hit the ground with a thud, blood squirted from the stump of his penis all over the police officer, and the cop puked up, slowly drowning in a pile of his own puke, and erectile blood. Everyone else stood back in fright, gasps came from them one after another, Maccer gave a shout of celebration, and yelling shortly after "AYE, MATES, I TOTALLY JUST CAME!" They all gave him looks of disgust, as Smoke suddenly fell down on top of the dead cop, still bleeding. The rest of the cell members walked out of the now open prison doors, completely nude. Countless amounts of prisoners stared as they walked down the middle of the aisle, CJ stopping occasionally to use his erection as a lockpick. They finally reached the front doors of the prison, no more cops standing in their way, they went to walk out when suddenly.... Six gunshots were heard, all of the men, and Kendl, dropping suddenly, bleeding enormously out of their backs. An officer slowly walked over to their bodies, and flipped Ryder over onto his chest, sticking his cock into Ryder's ass and thrusting his hips ferociously. He took turns doing this to each of the other members of the group, and the other cops did the same. Shortly after, the prison warden walked out of his office and into the unsuspecting scene of the dead prisoners being raped. He quickly gave an order of command to the officers, "Spread those pussies and lay down on your backs!", The shout illuminated through the whole prison, as he took turns raping each of the officers as punishment. THE END I hope you enjoyed my story. Edited March 19, 2008 by Oblivionz Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 Best. Fanfic. Ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DavidGC Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 There were a few lols in there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Land Of Confusion Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted January 26, 2008 Author Share Posted January 26, 2008 There were a few lols in there. You would of made that so much funnier if you would of put, "There were a bunch of holes in there". Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltinespike Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 Not funny, disturbing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickstick Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 I don't know whether to laugh or cry. What the hell, I'll do both. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iminicus Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 This sh*t doesn't even rate as humor, let alone a f*cking story. Keep your sick twisted fantasies about pixels to some other site. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 27, 2008 Share Posted January 27, 2008 Er, how is deep-throating a prison guard till he suffocates NOT funny? Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coral_City Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 This is the work of a billion twisted MSN convo's. Truly disturbing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 One two BUCKLE YOUR GIRL'S shoes a prison rape and some FAN FIC TO THE SOUP what's NOT TO LIKE about such IDIOTIC things?! some originality AND PORNOGraphy never HURT a soul IN THIS sh*thole you CALL home! DEAL WITH IT and listen to your SOUL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andym07home Posted January 28, 2008 Share Posted January 28, 2008 lol good story it had me laughing my head off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Just re-read this. Can you see now why I brutally massacred Mr. Obliv's family and kept him as my very own e-son? Dude's a genius! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted June 18, 2008 Author Share Posted June 18, 2008 Whoa. I never thought this would re-surface! I really should get to writing a sequel. Or maybe a serious story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Serious story! Serious story! You gotta! Pleeeeease! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny Phoenix Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Jesus Christ, I cried in laughter, and I now I'll never ever look at the San Andreas characters the same way again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carbine23 Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Hahaha this is just as funny as the Hamburger Chronicle story! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damo. Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 (edited) Write a sequel! Heh, this reminds me of that story about how Grove Street took over Los Santos. Edited June 18, 2008 by Damo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Just re-read this. It's pretty gay to say the least Oblivionz. It's pretty sick and wrong, and this needs to be corrected... Muffled gags come from the man It actually should be: Muffled gags came from the man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted June 18, 2008 Author Share Posted June 18, 2008 Just re-read this. It's pretty gay to say the least Oblivionz. It's pretty sick and wrong, and this needs to be corrected... Muffled gags come from the man It actually should be: Muffled gags came from the man f*ck you, asshole! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny Phoenix Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Just re-read this. It's pretty gay to say the least Oblivionz. It's pretty sick and wrong, and this needs to be corrected... Muffled gags come from the man It actually should be: Muffled gags came from the man f*ck you, asshole! I hope you're kidding. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted June 18, 2008 Author Share Posted June 18, 2008 Just re-read this. It's pretty gay to say the least Oblivionz. It's pretty sick and wrong, and this needs to be corrected... Muffled gags come from the man It actually should be: Muffled gags came from the man f*ck you, asshole! I hope you're kidding. A little bit. Why? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danny Phoenix Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Nothing. I just gotta say, that story was pretty hilarious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 I hope you're kidding. This story is absolute filth! The head of the penis hit the ground with a thud, blood squirted from the stump of his penis all over the police officer, and the cop puked up, slowly drowning in a pile of his own puke, and erectile blood. What a mess! The head of the penis hit the ground with a thud - blood squirted from the remaining stump all over the guard - puking and slowly drowning in a pile of his own vomit and erectile blood. Luke, I thought better of you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted June 18, 2008 Author Share Posted June 18, 2008 Shortly after gunshots erupted throughout the prison, there were GTA3 Characters. This is the tale of their stay in prison. maria: oh sh*t claude your dick is so f*cking huge claude gave a nod of approval, sharp clicks and shrill sounds coming out of his mouth rolling off of his mute tongue asuka and salvatore went at it like jackrabbits to the sound of maria and claude while salvatore pelvic thrusted like a tornado back and forth a sharp crack erupted through the cell. he broke his hip! lola kept going at it, hitting him when needed to keep him going. lola: dont stop you stpuid old f*ck! she sucked on her lollipop through the f*ck faking an orgasm the whole time all while joey and tony sat in the corner masturbating furiously to the schlapping sound of misty's tits on salvatore claude got off of misty's cock and rubbed his clit quickly claude: go wank or something you're a bad f*ck!1!! he called over the prison guard and suffocated him with his massive loose vagina, and walked out of the cell and was home free forever, living in Texas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 You know theres a lot of money in porn stories? I could cum over that story Could and have Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Themanwiththeplan Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 I see you have decided to tell the world what happens in the AMF private forum. Did you not sign the privacy form upon joining? Nice job mate! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carbine23 Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 Shortly after gunshots erupted throughout the prison, there were GTA3 Characters. This is the tale of their stay in prison. maria: oh sh*t claude your dick is so f*cking huge claude gave a nod of approval, sharp clicks and shrill sounds coming out of his mouth rolling off of his mute tongue asuka and salvatore went at it like jackrabbits to the sound of maria and claude while salvatore pelvic thrusted like a tornado back and forth a sharp crack erupted through the cell. he broke his hip! lola kept going at it, hitting him when needed to keep him going. lola: dont stop you stpuid old f*ck! she sucked on her lollipop through the f*ck faking an orgasm the whole time all while joey and tony sat in the corner masturbating furiously to the schlapping sound of misty's tits on salvatore claude got off of misty's cock and rubbed his clit quickly claude: go wank or something you're a bad f*ck!1!! he called over the prison guard and suffocated him with his massive loose vagina, and walked out of the cell and was home free forever, living in Texas. ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 To be perfectly honest this is probably some of the worst sh*t I have read in WD ever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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