Canofceleri Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 (edited) cancer and the all things bad clutching on the letting go of shade and left for another's noon. swings cascades o'er prickly ropes the unstable granite boulders the hollow spots--no water fills. cancer and the all things bad the children losing and miss their eyeless toys to no one parent. and the people downtown all jump off their towering polished marbles and suffocate in the glass of their car--weeping. cancer and the all things bad the phallus of an oak can break away and in an instant kill us all. there is no one to save us and there never has been. there is no reverence in physicality. there is no care. Edited January 26, 2008 by Candarelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickstick Posted January 26, 2008 Share Posted January 26, 2008 I'm normally not too keen on poetry, but I have to say I liked that. I can't really give any criticism, because I couldn't write anything near that good, so I'll just have to leave it at "I liked that". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted January 26, 2008 Author Share Posted January 26, 2008 (edited) Edited February 1, 2008 by Candarelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GM Dude Posted February 18, 2008 Share Posted February 18, 2008 cancer and the all things badclutching on the letting go of shade and left for another's noon. swings cascades o'er prickly ropes the unstable granite boulders the hollow spots--no water fills. cancer and the all things bad the children losing and miss their eyeless toys to no one parent. and the people downtown all jump off their towering polished marbles and suffocate in the glass of their car--weeping. cancer and the all things bad the phallus of an oak can break away and in an instant kill us all. there is no one to save us and there never has been. there is no reverence in physicality. there is no care. Another great poem as usual, Candarelli. Keep up the great work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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