Oxidizer Posted January 16, 2008 Share Posted January 16, 2008 (edited) /Removed. Edited December 15, 2011 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 Hmmmm Cubanwhip leans back and takes a bite out of a chicken wing. I must say, this has me intrigued...so intrigued...that I should maybe write another chapter for Wanted, but alas, the way I write that is by getting riled up and wanting to watch porn, but write instead which is why the chapters are so graphic. Cubanwhip rubs one out. But seriously, this sounds interesting. And Cristian is ruggedly handsome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 17, 2008 Author Share Posted January 17, 2008 (edited) /Removed. Edited December 15, 2011 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coral_City Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 Damnit Oxi, this was certainly good writing. You took the words which I would've liked to use for my fan-fic and you've turned it into a work of beauty. Though, a short story, it was certainly powerful to read. Albeit, you should really start focusing on singular projects. Though, your writing is good, we see more previews than chapters - no offense! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 17, 2008 Author Share Posted January 17, 2008 Hee. None taken. It's completely true. That's the main reason why I wanted to write something - because of the major delay concerning my main projects. They will be written/completed soon - I promise - I'm just slowly starting to get back into the writing thing now. This always happens to me - when I wrote Products I had writersblock for a good two months and then I wrote the first two chapters of Syndicate and it's happened again! It seems I can only write two large chapters' worth of story after a long hiatus - and luckily for us - Album of Macabre is only two chapters long. So hopefully we'll finally see that one finished! And with that, I'm off to bed. I just remembered I gotta be up by 7am and it's already 1-ish in the morning. Argh! Sweet dreams, my sick pups. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 This is only a one-off? Aww. The read really sucked me in. Your work inspires me to write, but alas, I'm too tired to write tonight. Still awaiting your main projects , hurry up damnit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 17, 2008 Author Share Posted January 17, 2008 Hee! Thanks! Glad you liked it. Never say never, but yeah, it's a one-off. I gotta get my other stuff done - together it's only 3 chapters - which makes it even more annoying that I can't seem to function properly. Urgh! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
longkissgoodnight Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 Hey Oxidizer I have a question for you. You said a writers block happened? What exactly is a writers block and how did it happen? PS: I loved your first chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickstick Posted January 17, 2008 Share Posted January 17, 2008 What exactly is a writers block and how did it happen? It's when someone finds it hard to write, for numerous reasons. With me it's normally that I'm pre-occupied with something else, or are struggling to flesh out a character or plot. Oh, and Oxi- that was some more good stuff from you, even if it was only a one-off. I'm looking forward to when you get back into writing and updating again! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 18, 2008 Author Share Posted January 18, 2008 Thank you guys! I'm working on the first chapter of AOM over the weekend - so hopefully something'll be up soon. And exactly what Chickstick said, longkissgoodnight. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted August 21, 2008 Share Posted August 21, 2008 You told me this would be crap and not to expect much - honestly, I don't see why. I enjoyed it, and couldn't find any faults - the writing flowed smoothly and the description was vivid and detailed. It's a good piece, and it's good writing - you should stop being so hard on yourself with whatever you're trying to write, and you should just write it, because you've got all the skills you need right there! One tiny observation was the incorporation of the abbreviation 'ammo' in the narrative - I'd say 'ammunition' instead. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted August 21, 2008 Author Share Posted August 21, 2008 (edited) /Removed. Edited December 15, 2011 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 I really hope you mean it when you say you will write it this time, bro. It needs to be done, and as stated, you have all the tools in the box but don't seem to have a firm pair of gloves to hold 'em with. I'm lame, I know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted August 22, 2008 Author Share Posted August 22, 2008 Not lame at all, I get what you're saying. All I can say is that YtB is my main priority right now - it's by far the most original stuff I've thought of yet, and for that reason alone I want it written. It's just laziness and being a perfectionist on my part that's stopping me. Once I break out of this phase... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wanted Assailant Posted August 22, 2008 Share Posted August 22, 2008 I normally hate cold-blooded killers. You make a good one to hate. I love the way you presented it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted August 22, 2008 Author Share Posted August 22, 2008 Heh! Thank you, I'm glad you like it. Though he's nothing compared to some of my other villains that I've posted on WD last year. I think there's some in the Forum Library if you're interested. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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