t3hgillyknows Posted January 11, 2008 Share Posted January 11, 2008 What up Writer's Discussion. Yo, peep this. I was sitting in my Trig and Analyt. class, doing jack sh*t cause I just finished my work, and I decided to write a poem. Not a poem like verses or a f*cking Haiku or some sh*t like that, but a paragraph, a poetic paragraph. It's sort of inspired by Candarelli, that sexy beast. I call it Paragraph Poetry. LIFE The sky. Soft. The sky stretches out to, I don't know how far. From up here, forever. I'm riding on clouds and my head is filled with jazz. The infinite plain of this celestial body of nothing that is, sky? Sitting here, waiting, The King of Arizona, and the plane starts to dive. Air whirs, rushing though the windows. One, two handbags fly out and I switch to Rock, Metal, Speed. That's what we're gaining baby. The ocean fast approaches and the music gets faster. My heart beats slower and wait for it. No screaming, just silence. Then, oh here it comes, the crescendo. Crash, water flood. The cabin fills and a pink handbag floats by, glitter. Less, less air and I can't breathe, submerged beneath all that is salty and wet. The water drowns the music that drowns the sorrows. Deeper, darker into the depths of everything. One fish, school of fish following the wreck. Abstract thoughts spill forth and are drowned out. Deeper into the soul, the wreckage sinks harder, faster, and all is found. It settles and I close my eyes. My brain implodes from the pressure. Sweet dreams. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/306811-t3hgillyknows/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted January 12, 2008 Share Posted January 12, 2008 Hmmm, interesting, it's like a metaphor for life. I really like it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/306811-t3hgillyknows/#findComment-1057402913 Share on other sites More sharing options...
t3hgillyknows Posted January 12, 2008 Author Share Posted January 12, 2008 Well, yeah my fine gentlemen, basically that's what it is. I can go into detail, like how it explains every stage in life. How the sky and it's infiniteness is how we looked at the world when we were young, how it was ahead and ready for our taking. Then the plane dives, representing being a teenager and all the chaos and heading down a spiral. The handbags represent the girls you meet and how they just go by. How the music getting faster, and the heart beating slower represents the chaos occurring around you while you work your nine to five and try to stay calm. The crash is your midlife and how it all starts going down the drain. How you realize it's all coming to an end. The pink handbag is the one girl you always loved and you finally marry her, but too late in life. You quickly grow old and you have kids who follow you and hope you don't die. You sink into dementia and people stop listening and your left all alone. You're at your lowest low and you close you eyes. Sweet dreams. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/306811-t3hgillyknows/#findComment-1057402944 Share on other sites More sharing options...
mostwanted468 Posted January 13, 2008 Share Posted January 13, 2008 this is some really deep sh*t this is something id expect from someone who finished work early in class Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/306811-t3hgillyknows/#findComment-1057405085 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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