Grand Theft Auto: Carcer City

[GTA Beta]

 

 

John Austin

Age:33

The main character in the story. John's sent to Carcer City to come to his mom's funeral. However when he drives a friend during a drive-by on an enemy gang, things go haywire.

 

Don Lospez

Age: 32

Description: He's a friend of John's brother-in-law and is the boss of the Carcer City Avenging Angels gang. When he asks John to drive him and a couple of hommies during a drive-by he starts a whole lot of trouble for his gang.

 

Ralph McLagen

Age: 23

Description: He's John's brother-in-law. He often wants to get John out of trouble in Carcer City but ends up in hotwater himself. He is a part-time member of the Avenging Angels gang, which Don created,.

 

Chapter 1: The Introduction

 

 

The streets of Carcer City were almost a WW3 warzone with the Avenging Angels and the Triads were fighting once again. Bullets were flying all over the place and bodies lay everywhere. Don Lospez and 3 of his gang members took cover behind a wall. One of the members looked out from behind the wall and was instanly shot through the head.

"[Damn!]" Don thought to himself as he pulled the dead member back behind the wall.

"[We're all gonna die if we stay here!]" he tought as he grabbed his micro-uzi. Suddenly a civillan car backed out of an apartment building. Rushing to it Don pounded on the window. He knew the man who was driving the car. It was his friend Ralph McLagen,who was a part time member of the gang. Seeing that Don was in trouble(again) he unlocked the back doors and Don and another member of the gang jumped in. The car sped away with member of the Triads shooting at it. The Angels may have won again but the Triads had killed at least 30 members of the rival gang.

 

Later 3:00 P.M. Carcer City International Airport[/blue]

The AT400 landed quickly at Carcer City. A few minutes later the passengers began to exit the plane. Reaching the bottom of the ramp was John Austin, a simple man that had come to Carcer to vist with some friends of the family. That is until he got the call from his brother-in-law that his mom had just died of lung cancer. However it only gave another reason to come to Carcer.

 

He got threw baggage-check and then waited for his brother-in-law to pick him up. He waited for at least 10 hours. Finally Ralph drove up to the airport

"Ralph, where were you for 10 hours? I've been sitting here almost all day." John asked, almost yelling at him

"Look i'm sorry! I.....had to take care of some business. Now you coming or not?" Ralph answered.

"Yeah i coming. But you better pay for back for this. I had to sit through 50000 reruns of episodes of Happy Days.God!!!" John said and jumped into the back of the car.

 

Ralph's Apartment 5:00 South Eastern Distrect of Carcer City

Ralph parked the car inside the parking garage and then killed the engine to the car. Both he and John got their stuff from the car and started towards the apartment building. However when they passed a heavily-modified Sabre Turbo John stopped to look at it. It was bright red with a while strip going down the hood,roof and trunk of the car.

"Wounder who owns this car?" John asked to himself out loud.

"It's mine" Ralph answered "but i locked the keys in it"

"You have got to be kidding me!" John said, almost screaming

"I think i know a way to get the keys out" he said as he picked up a crowbar. Suddenly he smashed the window of the car.

"There now you can get the keys.Simple" John said after smashing the window.

"I could have done that!!" Ralph said,still in shock

 

Chapter 2

 

"If you could have done it then why didn't you??!!" John replied almost laughing like a manic.

"What ever man you f*cking crazy" Ralph replied and started towards that apartment. John soon ran to catch up with him.

Soon afterwords Ralph and John were sitting inside the apartment watching some porn show on T.V. A couple hours later there was a knock on the door.

"You expecting somebody Ralph?" John asked as Ralph got up and went to answer the door.

"Yeah i got some er....friends coming over tonight. We got to talk buiness." he replied after opening the door and letting 2 men inside. They had on blue pants and plue shirts and inside their belts were a 9mm pistol and in their arms at least 1 MAC-10 sub-machine guns.

"What'shaking Ralph" Don said as he passed Ralph and sat down in a chair on the oppisite side of the T.V. With this he grabbed the remote from the taple and switched it to the 5:00 Carcer City News. A new story had just started and Don turned up the volume

"In other news today a full blown shoot out happened today between the well known factions of the gangs known as the Avenging Angels and the Carcer City Triads. This has not be uncommon for the past 2 weeks and has grown so out of control that during the last shoot out SWAT teams had to be called in. Numerous members have been arrested although the boss of the gang has yet to be captured. More info will be announced as it arrives. And now onto the weather". With this Don turned the TV off.

"I wounder who the boss of that gang is?" John said which soon after Don replied

"You havn't been around here for long to not know who the boss of the Angels is. You looking at him foo. So open your eyes."

With this Ralph began to speak up

"Oh John this is one of closet friends Don Lospez. We've been friends for a long time.That also remiends me Don i got that rare Nirvana CD you wanted. Here you go" he said as he tosed the CD to Don.

"Nice man. Now me and my boys gonna be travlin' in style".

"Your still listening to that 91 grunge sh*t?" John said to Don

"Don't ever dis cobain in front of me!" Don replied cocking his pistol and aiming for John's head.

"O.K. got it!" John said out of fear. With this Don put the gun down.

"Alright Ralph we got a drive-by to do." Don said after a short peice of silence.

"Your sure that we should do a drive by so soon after that full-blown shoot-out.?Police are gonna be looking for you."

 

Chapter 3

 

"Hell yeah i'm sure. We got to kill all them stinkin triads after what they did at that massacre today." Don answered.

"O.K. whatever you say." Ralph said "We'll take my sabre turbo. I finally got the keys to it back."

"Nice man" Don answered back to Ralph "We gonna put good use to that thing. Does it still having the "special fuel" i put in it?

"You mean that Nirtro? Yeah it's still in there." Ralph replied

 

5 Minutes Later; Northern Carcer Point, Triad Gang Territory

 

The Sabre Turbo stopped just behind a drain wall right on the edge of the Triad's territory.

"Alright guys you ready?!" Don yelled as he loaded his Tec-9

"We ready Don!" answered the only other gang member in the Turbo along with Don, Ralph and John.

"Alright John listen to me; drive along the road and we'll take out the Triads. No Matter what you do DON'T Stop Driving! or we're all dead!" Don said to John

 

With this the Sabre began to drive into the gang territory.

 

Chapter 4

 

As the Sabre rolled into the Triad's gang area they quickly spotted 4 Triads sitting on the crub leaning against the fence that surrounded Burger Shot. They were too f*cked up on drugs to see what was about to happen.

"There they Are!" Don said as he quickly pushed himself almost fully out of the window. He quickly aimed his Tec-9 at the Triads and automaticly opened fire. Bullets tore open the Triads and a few seconds ago where there had been men there were only bodies with their guts pouring out of them.

The civillans around them start to run in fear that they would be the next to meet their end at the end of the Tec-9's barrels. After Don had taken out the Triad members he floored the car's gas pedal and the Sabre took off like a bullet.

 

3 Minutes Later

 

Throughout the street lay dead Triad gang members.

"sh*t man the cops are on us and we're out of gas!" Don said as he finshed reloading his Tec-9. They had to think of something or else we're gonna be sitting in jail!

Suddenly John saw a truck parked a few blocks away!

"Guys!Head for that truck!" John yelled as he, Don, Ralph and the other gang member bailed out of the car and headed for the truck.Throwing the driver of of the truck he jumped in along with the other members. Suddenly a police chopper swopped in with it's searchlight blazing on the truck.

Edited May 8, 2008 by GTA Beta

[mostwanted468]

pretty cool story but you made a small mistake at the airport in chapter one john says "but you better pay for back for this" which makes no sense good if you could fix this

[poikly]

Damn John for calling Nirvana sh*t!

Nice story, but try not to trail off into an overuse of a band, like you did with GTA5.

[GTA Beta]

don't worry i won't repeat what happened with GTA5.Added new chapter on the same post.

[poikly]

Everytime you post a new chapter, try not to just edit the first post.

That way it isn't bumped and people don't know there is a new chapter.

[GTA Beta]

got it Poikly.

[GTA Beta]

Chapter 5: The Escape

 

As John and the rest of the gang jumped into the truck the helicopter came to a stop, hovering above the tanker. As Don yelled at john to get them out of here the engine just sputtered and died. John tried again. Nothing. As Police Officers began to run towards the truck Ralph jumped out with his Tec-9 and started to run towards the front of the truck. Finally the tanker's engine began to run.

"Ralph get in man!" John yelled at Ralph over the roar of the engine.

"Get out of here. Go on without me!" Ralph answered as he fired his weapon at the officers trying to get at the truck. Time after time again the officers made a run at the truck but were cut down by the Tec-9's barrels. Suddenly Ralph fell back against the street. His body was not moving. Jumping out of the truck John ran towards Ralph. Seeing what John was trying to do Don picked up something from the bottom of the seat. What he emerged with was an AK-47. Aiming it out the window he began to fire it wildly. Bullets hitting the ground around John and Ralph poped up.

"f*ck!" Ralph said in pain as blood spurted from his mouth. His hand covered the hole inside his chest. Dark Red water ran all over his shirt making it damp and wet. John tried to move Ralph's body towards the tanker but the pain it cause Ralph was too great. John took a look at the tanker and Don firing the Ak. When he looked back at Ralph his eyes starred into nothing. Seeing this John ran back towards the tanker. He jumped in and poured his foot down onto the gas pedal. The Tanker fly off down the road.

[GTA Beta]

Chapter 6: The Aftermath

 

The tanker countiued to speed off down the road. Closely following behind it Police units in cars and bikes. The bikes often tried to jump onto the tanker but they were cut down by Don firing the Ak-47. The tanker was carrying a heavy fuel tank behind it and the extra weight it brought onto the tanker caused the truck to slow down. Seeing this Don exited the tanker and carefully moved onto the back of the tanker. Police units saw this and began firing shotgun and 9mms at Don. He however dodged them and moved his way to the connecter that held the tanker and the fuel tank together. Pulling out a blade he began cutting up the wires. John countiued to drive that tanker around thick turns and long speedways. Finally after minutes of cutting, the fuel tank disconnected and flew off down the hill. It carried with it two cop cars, which exploaded. The tanker regained speed and Don climied back into the truck. As John looked back he didn't see the bridge ahead was destroyed and when he looked back it was to late. The tanker drove cabin first into the river. The cops stopped and looked down looking for any survivors. Nothing in the water moved. They backed off and returned to base.

 

5 Minutes Later

 

John's vision was blurred. When he tried to stand up his legs hurt more that his head and thus a simple "f*ck" was echoed from his mouth and he leaned back against the wall. He looked around and saw he was in a deserted cabin. Apart from seeing the Avenging Angel gang member that had been with them when the tanker hit the water, he saw nobody else around. Once again John tried to stand up and this time he suceded. As he stood up he heard a voice from outside the cabin echo into it.

"Nice to see your finally awake!" Don said as he walked into the cabin. John was surprised to see him alive thinking that he was the only one who survived.

"Don!Wha...wh....where are we?!" John asked him as he started to walk towards Don.

"Slow down man!When we hit the water your legs hit the water pretty hard. i was luck enough to pull you and the other guy from the tanker after the cops left without them seeing us. But now to answer your question. Were in a deserted cabin inside Unbixi woods. The woods often are deserted of people and vehicles so thus this makes a perfect hid-out."

 

MORE COMING SOON!

[poikly]

Good cliff-hanger!

I can't wait to see what happens next.

[Big $moke]

good story,however most of the plot has been done before if you look on youtube + some of it is too much like SA: the funerel the drive-by,good anyway.I'm doing one as well but mine's still in the planning stages.

[GTA Beta]

Chapter 7:The Escape Part 2

 

Deserted Cabin,Unbixi Woods, 12:00 A.M.

 

John and Don exited the cabin. Looking around they saw no vehicles. Seeing this Don went into the garage of the cabin and came out inside of a very badly betean up glendale. John walked towards the car and Don moved over into the passenger side of the vehicle. Starting the motor John floored the gas of the vehicle and the glendale toke off.

"Slow down man!You don't even know where were going!" Don said as John narrowly missed a tree. Hearing this John slowed down. Most of the way John seemed quiet. Seeing this Don spoke up

"John. I'm sorry about Ralph. He was a good guy."

"Thanks"

Soon after the vehicle reached the main highway.

"Turn left" Don said, giving the directions to John. With this the Glendale took off once again.

[poikly]

Is that the whole chapter?

A bit short.....

[GTA Beta]

Chapter 8: The Escape Part lll

 

As the Glendale drove along the road, John and Don began to talk again

"John, look i'am sorry about Ralph but you know sometimes that's what happens in life. And you just gotta keep moving along no matter what." And John looked at Don

"Don, i don't blame you. It's just that there's been a lot of sh*t being thrown at me lately. First my mom, then Ralph. It's just a little too much for me to handle right now. " The rest of the ride the two men were silent. Soon however they saw the local San Fierro gold club.

"Man, welcome to San Fierro"

[Gabriel Constantin]

That is not a chapter, that's a paragraph. I'm not even going to waste my time reading your story after seeing that. Very bad presentation and effort.