LCS adventure story

[discovery97]

It was a cold day probably in the 80s but nobody cared......... Not even Toni Cipriani. He was standing in the middle of the street sweat rolling down his face. It was Salvatore Leone telling Toni to do something for him something that was bigger than anything Toni has ever done. It was huge, thought almost impossible for the leones, except Salvatore............. he knew Toni could do it and he knew the time was right............ It was to wipe the sindacco hideout at the lighthouse. Toni had once killed Charlie Sindacco but this was harder for ever since then the Sindaccos had been carrying AK's and M4's. But Toni had to do it and he wasn't going to let Sal down.

The call had ended Toni had to start now but he did not know where to go so he drove in a Leone Sentinel straight to Claude's house which was in Red Light District. He told Claude all about it as Claude was shaking his head. Toni asked "will you help me?". Claude said he will but he knows they can't do it all their own. So they called Mickey to help them, he did and the first thing they thought of as their plan was to drive down to the sindacco hideout at the lighthouse and burn it down. Mickey said it was impossible to get near the lighthouse without being killed and they had to get their through the sewers. Now the sewers was a dangerous and toxic place in Liberty City and that without gas masks they couldn't get through and unfortunatly Liberty City does not have a single store selling gas masks but they had to get through and so their was only one option. Swim through the choppy waves their and risk getting sniped at once the reach the sharp, jagged rocks. But they had to do it so they grabbed flamethrowers and drove ove to the docks (they would of been shot dead if they got on the beach). and put on lightweight scuba gear and hustled through the waves. The water was ice cold and they could barely catch up through the waves and as the plan was they reached up to the lighthouse they peered through and saw just as they expected, a Sindacco sniper. they quickly grabbed a silenced 9mm (so as not to be heard) and shot the sniper dead being unheard and unseen.

They got up on the rocks and searched quickly for a way up and speedily took their scuba gear off. they found a door way and tried it. Claude said "damn, it's locked". They had to find another way up. they had one choice and climbed the sharp rocks trying not to wince from the pain they got up and crawled over to some boxes and spotted some Sindaccos. they quickly shot them dead with MP5s. They tip-toed over to a door they tried it and it was unlocked. "Now we're moving". whispered Toni. They got in and grabbed some AK's laying on some more boxes and wielded them. Toni, Claude and Mickey snook up some stairs. Suddenly a stray bullet whizzed out of nowhere and hit Mickey in the chest . Claude and Toni freaked out so bad they fired some where around 50 bullets and heard a thud. They checked Mickey "dead" Toni said "damn". They crawled up into the top of the light house and found the light. They quickly burned it and ran the building with Mickey in their arms. They stole a parked boat and sped out of their as soon as the lighthouse blew up in smoke and ash. They returned and surprisingly nursed Micky back to life. Toni, Claude and Mickey all received the "Leone Medal fo Honor" directly from Salvatore himself.

 

 

 

 

Hope liked my story, all comments accepted.

Edited December 21, 2007 by discovery97

[--supea--]

Write it in pieces (I don't know the right word...)

 

Oh and don't put it like

lvatore.............

(more dots I can count).

 

And I didn't like the way you wrote

Claude and Toni freaked out so bad they fired some where around 50

 

Missing dots on some places and grammar need fixing in some places.

 

Oh well, I'm very bad at speaking English, so maybe I'm not the right person to judge lol