Canofceleri Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 why shy forlorn with sister glue in my toe jam aches and pains? and why does celerycan fight finely kinds tuna bran? shicitahbobpidtabooo do like superman? tine tiny like lampoo confrickener--shampoo conditioner. brain lice apple pie shicitahbobpidtabooo. donut surveilance key the night sky is watching you and your puppetspuppets PUPPETS! shicitahbobpidtabooo horns for sale eat pale ale cremey ice poo sh*t shivers eat glue-- in my toe jam aches and pains play chess for food. three eyed madass piehole tongue stickin out rabies sadness. sunglasses on oh my god the devil o ooo ha. gun to my head blinkin blue turnin skull cryin winkin ninja. vomit on ben franklin's invention siskel or ebert weird owl ghost smokin. cigarettes live in the ashtray go in the garbage. shicitahbobpidtabooo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Land Of Confusion Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 Err.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted December 18, 2007 Author Share Posted December 18, 2007 Err.... pirate? what of a pirate's worth? the waste of earth's wood for planks and pegs! what of a pirate's worth? the waste of nature for captured parrots, the death of ninja jews! what of a pirate's girth? a fat cock in your sagging lips! a sword and sheath adds dimension to the hips! and the ships, oh the ships! a thousand times to every man, a thousand miles away from land! oh why did god make pirates? can you tell me, or can wikipedia not be accessed on your land of confusion, Land of Confusion? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Land Of Confusion Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 Err.... pirate? what of a pirate's worth? the waste of earth's wood for planks and pegs! what of a pirate's worth? the waste of nature for captured parrots, the death of ninja jews! what of a pirate's girth? a fat cock in your sagging lips! a sword and sheath adds dimension to the hips! and the ships, oh the ships! a thousand times to every man, a thousand miles away from land! oh why did god make pirates? can you tell me, or can wikipedia not be accessed on your land of confusion, Land of Confusion? Uh, right now I'm so confused I doubt I could type wikipedia in to my 'land of confusion'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 This is a waste of good thread space. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love.Life Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 are you purposefully trying to piss people off Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted December 18, 2007 Author Share Posted December 18, 2007 What? What was that? Huh? To answer your question. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasyTiger Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 This is a waste of good thread space. It's Candarelli, he's aloud to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bumster Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 What are you smoking? I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted December 18, 2007 Author Share Posted December 18, 2007 This is a waste of good thread space. It's Candarelli, he's aloud to. Finally, an unsarcastic member who says it like it is. Can't spell, but knows what he's talking about. You people just don't know art when you see it (and I'm definitely not being sarcastic). But seriously... have you ever heard what Yoko Ono considers art? If so, you know this thread is completely viable. Just accept it for its instrinsic value and then go watch some more Tila Tequila on MTV. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasyTiger Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 (edited) This is a waste of good thread space. It's Candarelli, he's aloud to. Finally, an unsarcastic member who says it like it is. Can't spell, but knows what he's talking about. You people just don't know art when you see it (and I'm definitely not being sarcastic). But seriously... have you ever heard what Yoko Ono considers art? If so, you know this thread is completely viable. Just accept it for its instrinsic value and then go watch some more Tila Tequila on MTV. Oh yeah, just realised that mistake. But honestly, you seem to be one of the only member on this forum who doesn't hide behind a computer screen trying to act cool, you speek the truth and don't care about the comments thrown at you like "are you purposefully trying to piss people off"... to me, your cooler than the guys that act cool. EasyTiger takes his hat off to Candarelli Oh and "a fat cock in your sagging lips! a sword and sheath adds dimension to the hips!"... that sh*t's beutiful man. Edited December 18, 2007 by EasyTiger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 Nice, as always. A little abstract for my tastes, but nice nevertheless. Can't really give you any criticism, considering I write stories rather than poetry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 (edited) I just don't like the fact that because he has been here since 2001, he is praised for posting gibberish when the rest of us actually put effort into our work. Edited December 18, 2007 by Vercetti21 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasyTiger Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 I just don't like the fact that because he has been here since 2001, he is praised for posting gibberish when the rest of us actually put effort into our work. He's been here since 2001, so he's probably contributed alot to the forums (or is an expert ban stick dodger) , and for that he's aloud to bend the rules slightly. Gibberish? this is art you fool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 I just don't like the fact that because he has been here since 2001, he is praised for posting gibberish when the rest of us actually put effort into our work. He's been here since 2001, so he's probably contributed alot to the forums (or is an expert ban stick dodger) , and for that he's aloud to bend the rules slightly. Gibberish? this is art you fool. Then praise him for the good things he's contributed, don't just pretend to like it so you can get his respect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EasyTiger Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 I just don't like the fact that because he has been here since 2001, he is praised for posting gibberish when the rest of us actually put effort into our work. He's been here since 2001, so he's probably contributed alot to the forums (or is an expert ban stick dodger) , and for that he's aloud to bend the rules slightly. Gibberish? this is art you fool. Then praise him for the good things he's contributed, don't just pretend to like it so you can get his respect. Pretend? your just small minded. Having his respect would gain me nothing, i just honestly think he's a cool and truthfull guy. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 I just don't like the fact that because he has been here since 2001, he is praised for posting gibberish when the rest of us actually put effort into our work. You don't think outside the box my friend. Visualise, man! Anyway, nice written work Cand, it's very Frank Zappa esque. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 Nice job Cand, great writing as always. a fat cock in your sagging lips! a sword and sheath adds dimension to the hips! f*cking win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tommy vs. claude Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 Then praise him for the good things he's contributed, don't just pretend to like it so you can get his respect. Wait, you don't like this? Then why exactly are you in this thread in the first place? No one ever said you had to be here. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 Then praise him for the good things he's contributed, don't just pretend to like it so you can get his respect. Wait, you don't like this? Then why exactly are you in this thread in the first place? No one ever said you had to be here. It's called criticism, and any writer who shares their work with other people should expect it. It's not necessarily a bad thing, in fact I prefer it more that people saying "that was good" without any reason as to why or any way to help me improve. Anyways, part of being a member of WD is being able to take criticism, and if you can't do that, then why are you in here, my friend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted December 18, 2007 Author Share Posted December 18, 2007 (edited) Actually, I do tend to agree with Vercetti. The people on these writing forums are not the best at constructive criticism. Look at his Viva Las Vegas... people are actually like, "Yeah, dude... post more." I couldn't read more than Prologue and Chapter One, personally. See, I'm guilty too... I should've given some criticism. It's hard to believe by reading it, but he actually put some effort into it so he deserves it. -EDIT- And by the way... I have no problem with him bashing it. It's not like I'm trying to get it published and if anyone seriously wants to call my writing skills into question I'll just let them read The Dysfunktionals (okay, well maybe that isn't the best example either). Maybe just click the link in my sig, I have a few pieces in there that aren't about chocolate eggs or allegorical poems about milk men and bill collectors. Edited December 18, 2007 by Candarelli Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 Actually, I do tend to agree with Vercetti. The people on these writing forums are not the best at constructive criticism. Look at his Viva Las Vegas... people are actually like, "Yeah, dude... post more." I couldn't read more than Prologue and Chapter One, personally. See, I'm guilty too... I should've given some criticism. It's hard to believe by reading it, but he actually put some effort into it so he deserves it. -EDIT- And by the way... I have no problem with him bashing it. It's not like I'm trying to get it published and if anyone seriously wants to call my writing skills into question I'll just let them read The Dysfunktionals (okay, well maybe that isn't the best example either). Maybe just click the link in my sig, I have a few pieces in there that aren't about chocolate eggs or allegorical poems about milk men and bill collectors. Well said. And I don't have anything against you or anything. Maybe it's just that this particular "story" or whatever you want to call it, isn't particularly my style. I was giving an honest opinion, no offense intended. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canofceleri Posted December 18, 2007 Author Share Posted December 18, 2007 Ah, man... you're supposed to reply with something even more negative so I don't sound like an asshole. Don't you know that's how things are done around here? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted December 18, 2007 Share Posted December 18, 2007 But if I did reply with something more negative, then I would be the asshole. Alright, alright, truce. No one's an asshole and no one's a "non-asshole". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TubbyJ Posted December 19, 2007 Share Posted December 19, 2007 oh why did god make pirates? To pwn those bitch-ass ninjas, that's why. About the actual poem: It's out of left field, original, rhymes well, and is pretty damn funny("a fat cock to your sagging lips!"). Do some more. I enjoyed it, we've needed some funny stuff since Sweet raped CJ in Tarantulasaurus Rex's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rmmstnr Posted December 24, 2007 Share Posted December 24, 2007 (edited) I just don't like the fact that because he has been here since 2001, he is praised for posting gibberish when the rest of us actually put effort into our work. I didn't think it was bad at all, the combinations and ordering worked OK for me. Perhaps a thread should be started for gibberish, there could be some winners in there. Do you listen to Pink Floyd? It's certainly not gibberish, no no, but there are many parallels exhibited. Watch the Wall, good stuff. Think Dali; if it is not art, the mind may make it so by enpowering it with it's own hidden meanings. Dali had his own meanings, and others found their own. If you look up his work, be sure to include "The Great Masturbator." No, it isn't as it sounds, but be warned, there is a small bit of nudity; it isn't the focus of the painting though. In all honesty though, the title is quite unimaginative Edited January 1, 2008 by rmmstnr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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