The Unvirginiser Posted February 9, 2008 Author Share Posted February 9, 2008 ^ Thanks, Captain Dipsh*t, for bumping the thread with that useless post. Considering it's a fictional story I'm pretty sure he knows that. Lmao! Well if you used the skill you learnt when you were 6 and READ the entire thing you would find an explanation Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rusty007 Posted April 9, 2008 Share Posted April 9, 2008 (edited) Anyway the major pet peeve I have in it is that you didn't mention Canada. It's a major country to you know LOL Don’t you mean Americas Hat? OT: WOW Bigfoot and aliens in one, I hope this does happen now . Seriously thou very nice and its good to know we, USA, still win . While reading it I got worried we were going to get mass attacked by everyone because everyone right now hates us . You are right that (heaven forbid) WWIII will probably come from China. One thing thou I found a technical error that no1 (that I saw) has pointed out is that in 2016 you say the ship to the moon explodes but again in 2022 that “third ship” goes to moon. Just a typo It should have been 4th (unless someone changed history ) Edited April 10, 2008 by Rusty007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
devilrock28 Posted April 10, 2008 Share Posted April 10, 2008 I have to say, I enjoyed this. Wouldn't it be scary if this stuff happens? You predicted it! lol Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taste Of Chaos Posted April 13, 2008 Share Posted April 13, 2008 There is no Army of Europe or an Army of Africa. Europe and Africa are continents not countries. African countries unite under the promised. Europe becomes one country. There we go. Opportunity knocks once in a lifetime, temptation will lean on the doorbell. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carbine23 Posted April 13, 2008 Share Posted April 13, 2008 Very Interesting, and i see you put a lot of thought into it. I like your thinking a lot and i like how all the bad outcomes turn into peace in the end. Please right more, it's very interesting! Very good job. Keep the work up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
steveo91 Posted April 13, 2008 Share Posted April 13, 2008 I like it, but the constant use of "Europe" as one big army seems a little arrogant. Europe is made up of many, many different countries, with different social and economical backgrounds. Other than that little thing, it's original and my kind of light reading. Edit: Doesn't matter about the Europe thing, just read through it again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted April 13, 2008 Author Share Posted April 13, 2008 I like it, but the constant use of "Europe" as one big army seems a little arrogant. Europe is made up of many, many different countries, with different social and economical backgrounds. Other than that little thing, it's original and my kind of light reading. Edit: Doesn't matter about the Europe thing, just read through it again Yup... pretty amazing that you missed that the first time around Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
D- Ice Posted April 13, 2008 Share Posted April 13, 2008 I can't believe I haven't come here before, this an awsome story. The subject matter and events are very original and fresh, and I actually really liked the timeline format - otherwise I would've been too lazy to read it, and just not bother. Great story man, I really enjoyed reading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sennema Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 EVERYONE SHOULD WATCH THE MOVIE ZEITGEIST....just type in zeitgeist in youtube n ull find it....INSANE it'll open your eyes. Aron Russo is so smart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leonrdstiltskin Posted April 24, 2008 Share Posted April 24, 2008 excellent. how 'bout a ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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