Pending Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 (edited) - Edited July 28, 2017 by Pending Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny_Tightlips Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 Best. Story. Ever. ...besides that I ain't sayin nuthin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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silvermanblue Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 It's not a bad story, you did some homework. But traditionaly you smoke crack and you snort cocaine. But if you replace crack with cocaine, the story would still work. Coke and Crack are both highly addictive. Leone Family Mafia ПРОПАГАНДА.ИНЦ, СИЛВЕРМАНБЛУЕ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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VCHolmes Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 A good read. Your writing has improved since your last story, there's more room for improvement though. Go on, give us more! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 I read it, it was quite good. Keep going. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moth Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 Pretty good and keep going. Formerly known as The General Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grim reaper22 Posted November 25, 2007 Share Posted November 25, 2007 yo man,tight ecept for this "Dat's right fool, theres no such thing as a "GROVE STREET OG." " The changler balla taunted. you see it should be "Dat's right fool, theres no such thing as a 'GROVE STREET OG.' " The changler balla taunted. other then that....good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pending Posted November 27, 2007 Author Share Posted November 27, 2007 (edited) - Edited July 28, 2017 by Pending Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 It's pretty good, can't wait to see where you're going with this. I'll be following along. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Abel. Posted December 15, 2007 Share Posted December 15, 2007 That was awesome, well done man, cookie from me! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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