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silvermanblue

It's not a bad story, you did some homework. But traditionaly you smoke crack and you snort cocaine. But if you replace crack with cocaine, the story would still work. Coke and Crack are both highly addictive.

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A good read. Your writing has improved since your last story, there's more room for improvement though. Go on, give us more!

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grim reaper22

yo man,tight ecept for this

"Dat's right fool, theres no such thing as a "GROVE STREET OG." " The changler balla taunted.

 

 

 

you see it should be

"Dat's right fool, theres no such thing as a 'GROVE STREET OG.' " The changler balla taunted.

 

other then that....good

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