BUYG: Build Up Your Gang

November 30, 2007

scuse me sir but i think you just gave up.

Same agreement here, man.

I'll get my next story up for sure this weekend some time. I've been pretty distracted lately.

November 30, 2007

Fine then I give up but Grim is still in the fight.

November 30, 2007

Lol grim has nothing to do with you.

I'm the one fighting him.

So by the looks of it....

GANG WAR RESULTS

The Leones & The Diablos are the winners.

The Leones claim The Red Dragon Casino.

The Diablos win $1000

The Triads get nothing.

November 30, 2007

Woot!

November 30, 2007

Can I be a member of the Leone Family Mafia.And the printworks please

November 30, 2007

Sorry Johnson, I know you're probably busy but can you rate my story soon please?

November 30, 2007

The sound of three helicopters above me surprised me, and awoke me out of daydreaming state. I looked up, and stared down the helicopters, getting ready for an assault.

I was on a ship, helping smuggle drugs into Liberty. I wasn't doing it because I wanted to, I was doing it because I had to. It was an opportunity to get closer to the man who had ransacked my mansion, and it was just something I had to do.

I reached onto my back, and pulled out a shotgun, cocking it as I aimed upwards. Aiming precisely, I pulled the trigger and cocked again, then I fired again at one of the helicopters. The pilot fell out of the door-less cockpit, and the helicopter fell to a plummeting doom, straight into the ocean. The waves from the impact flew over the side of the boat, making me slide and fell onto my back, and drop my weapon.

Suddenly, the helicopters opened fire from their turrets. Bullets were hitting everywhere, even the stash of cocaine in the hold below me. White power was drifting freely everywhere, and everyone was inhaling it, greatly reducing their performance in this fight. I plugged my nose, and grabbed a colt off my right side, aiming it at another helicopter, letting off 6 rounds at it. A man operating one of the turrets fell out, and landed on the boat. A sharp crack followed his impact. The helicopter started moving forward at an amazing rate of speed, and the last lone helicopter began to slowly descent. The gunfire completely stopped, and it was all silence. It was now a dead ocean.

The helicopter slowly landed, and all of the men had their guns aimed at the helicopter, as two men slowly stepped out of it.

"Drop your weapons, before I blow this boat to pieces", an old man, to which I believed to be in his late 60s loudly said.

The sound of weapons hitting the ground echoed all around. I holstered my weapon again.

"Anton Runyen. I said drop your f*cking weapons.", he repeated.

How the f*ck did he know my name, I questioned myself as I placed my colt on the ground, hiding the other weapons under my shirt.

"Get in the helicopter, before I blow your head off, and this boat up with it.", he projected loudly. I stepped forward and sat in one of the seats located in the back of the helicopter.

One of the guards handcuffed me to the seat, and sat in the front, placing a headset on my head as he moved.

"Anton, do you have any f*cking clue why I wanted you?", the leader said to me, his voice blasting my ears.

"Not a clue", I spoke into the microphone part.

"Ah. Well, you should. You killed my nephew.. The name Joseph Cielnago ring a bell to you?", he spoke, calmly.

I know that would come back to haunt me. Killing Joseph was an act of pure rage. After all, he killed my best friend.

"He killed the Cartel leader, Mr. Cielnago.", I said, "It was an act of rage, nothing else. I'm sorry."

The man smacked me with the butt of his gun, and whispered into the guards ear. The guard reached back, and untighted the handcuffs from the seat, and placed them onto my other hand.

I didn't like where this was going, I thought to myself, as he threw me out of the helicopter. The water under me looked so uninviting, my last thoughts were, as I hit the dark-green water of Liberty City.

December 1, 2007

Nice war, funny results. Finally, I have something close to my home. Yes!

December 1, 2007

First Story: Purple Invasion

A red laser beam pointed to David.

"Sniper!" I shouted, as I dived at David. I fell on the floor on him.

"What the f*ck?!" he exclaimed, taking cover behind the wall. I ran for cover behind another wall and waited. I put my fingers to my lips. The laser moved around, searching for us. A few seconds later a table smashed. The sniper must of shot it. The television smashed next. The beam vanished, the sniper had finished. I crawled on the floor, as low down and quiet as I could. I indicated to David to follow me. I got outside and jumped into a Stallion. "f*cking hell!" breathed David. "Let's find that sniper," I whispered, as I drove off. I pulled up at the multistory parking lot. Silently, I searched every floor for a trace of the sniper. "There he is!" I yelled, pointing to a man with a large rifle. He saw us and got into a car. I boxed the exit out, but he went upwards. I cautiously followed him to the top floor. I saw him in the car, at one side, revving up his engine. I waited for him to move. Suddenly, he hit the gas and jumped off a ramp. I went off the ramp too. I hit the ground with a thud. But the sniper wasn't so lucky.

I got out of my Stallion and ran to his to his upsidedown car.

"I c-couldn't k-k-kill you... b-but m-m-my brothers w-will..." he said, crushed underneath the burning wreck. I dragged his body out and put it in the trunk. "sh*t..." muttered David. "Let's get back to HQ and check this guy," I drove back to Headquaters and parked up the Stallion. David took his body back to the laboratory to check it out.

"Woah what happened here?" gasped the scientist. "Long story short; sniper," I told the scientist, putting his body on the table. He was wearing a distinctive purple jacket and jeans. "Purple Nines..." explained David. I nodded. After the scientists had checked the body out, we found alot of stuff out. He was a Purple Nines boy, probably sent to assassinate David.

"Hey Johnny what happened about the assassination business?" asked Jase. I told him, I saw that he was listening very carefully.

"What would the Purple Nines want with us anyway?" commented Jase.

"I don't know, we never had much gang activity with them," I replied.

"Yeah..."

"Maybe it was a mafia hitman job?" I suggested.

"That's most likely, but we can't take any accusations."

"We should find out some more, maybe the Sicilians will know a bit more." I drove down to the Sicilian's base and went inside with Jase. I went up to Alberto's office and knocked on the door.

"Come in?" said Alberto in his rich Italian-American accent. "Aww Jonathan and Jason, what a pleasant suprise."

"Hey Mr. Landhini, do you know anything about the Purple Nines?" I asked.

"What about them?"

I told Alberto all about the sniper.

"Ah yes!" he exclaimed, "I've heard that the Forellis are teaming up with the Purple Nines."

"Thanks Mr. Landhini. By the way did you know we're allies with the Leones too now?"

"Really? Say hi to Uncle Sal for me." I waved Alberto goodbye and phoned David.

"Hey David, Alberto told us that the Forellis are allies with the Purple Nines and the assassination was their doing."

"Okay, it's time for a little seige. Meet me by Belleville Park, I'm bringing a team with me." I shut my phone and told Jase. He took the wheel and drove to Belleville Park. I got out and greeted David. We were all armed with bats. We crept up behind a large gang of Purple Nines and smashed them to sh*t with our bats. We grabbed their guns and started shooting them all. One threw a molotov, which we dodged, and I shot him. I took his molotovs, he had alot of them, and shared them behind with the boys. We ran to Purple Nine's territory and threw tones of molotovs in their houses and gang houses. That was one up for the Diablos.

Hey hope you like my story. I'm going to get into writing longer ones. I know the ending got a bit shabby, I was tired.

December 1, 2007

Can I join with Cipriani's Ristorante for the Leone's please?

Also, if I do get this, do the events in my stories have to coincide with all other Leone members, or can I have my total own storyline?

Thanks.

December 2, 2007

nvm ill stay leone

Edited December 2, 2007 by the_teflon_don

December 2, 2007

Dude, if I was a Leone, I wouldn/'t switch for the Vagos. My new story will be up in a bit.

Edited December 2, 2007 by Boombastic

December 2, 2007

Second Story: Alberto's Job

The new base was finished. Instead of that battered old house, we had a whole new base. We had many more rooms, and it was littered with guards. Also, round the back we had a weed farm. But there was one thing we lacked. Weapons. All we had were baseball bats. Also we had a $400 loan with the Leones. When we paid that off with the money we sell from the weed, we'll buy weapons and vehicles. Anyways, onto the story.

"This new base is great," acknowledged David, sitting back in his armchair.

"Yeah, but what we gonna do about the loan and the weapons?" questioned Jase.

"I told you already!" responded David.

"Yeah, open your ears Jase!" I laughed, "I'll go check on the farm." I pushed myself off my seat and walked down to the farm. I walked into the little factory to check on progress when I saw guys in black putting a gun to our scientists.

"Give us all money!" shouted one. Triads.

"What money?" I said.

"Don't play games with me!"

I reached for my bat and threw it at his head. He fell backwards. Speedily, I ran and grabbed his pistol. I aimed at the other Triads.

"Kiss goodbye to your asses," I breathed, as I shot them in the head one by one.

"Thankyou Johnny!" thanked the Scientists, getting up and brushing themselves. I smiled and threw the gun to the side. I walked back to the lounge.

"Hey guys some Triads just attacked the farm!" I told them, sitting down.

"What happened?" asked David.

"I shot them!" I laughed, as I poured myself a drink.

"Damn, we really have to do something about the Triads..." Jase muttered, leaning forward in his chair.

"Maybe we could smash their businesses up?" I suggested, sipping my drink.

"But we destroyed most of Chinatown in the war," remarked David.

"Yeah, but I don't think we got the fish factory," I said. "

Okay, the factory it is," said Jase, as he got up.

Jase parked his Stallion by the factory. I put my hood up and got out. We walked to the door. But there was I sign there that read: 'OUT OF BUSINESS'.

"Yeah right," I whispered to Jase, smashing the door down withh my bat. It was true. There were no Triads anywhere, no fish, no nothing. Just a massive empty room. "What the f*ck?" said Jase. I got out my phone and rang Salvatore.

"What you doing Johnny?" he asked. "Laying an egg, what's it look like?" I replied. Salvatore didn't answer. I punched in Alberto's number. He picked up.

"Hello?" barked Alberto through the phone.

"Mr Landhini it's Johnny, I've got Jason with me. We're at the Triad's fish factory, but it's desserted, know anythng?"

"Oh yes, they sold up and moved out."

"What? Where did they move to?"

"The Four Dragons Casino, Las Venturas I hear. Anyways I have a job for you two. Fly over to Las Venturas and destroy the Four Dragons ASAP. I know a guy in Las Venturas who'll fix you up with all the weapons and explosives you need for the job. I'll tell you the details later, I'm a bit busy now."

I shut my phone. "Jase, Alberto tells me that they've moved to the Four Dragons Casino in Las Venturas. And that he needs us to blow it up."

"O-kay..." said Jase, walking outside.

"We'll go to the airport in the morning."

December 2, 2007

when the four dragons gets up on the leones assets i'd like to reserve it for my friend who wants to start playing this.

December 2, 2007

when the four dragons gets up on the leones assets i'd like to reserve it for my friend who wants to start playing this.

People who try to join the Leone family need Nick's approval, you can't just invite them into it.

December 3, 2007

Gleaming swords...

My Jackhammer sat on my lap as I looked at the rigged van from across the dock. Deli held the detonator in his big palm as he took a puff from his ciggarette. Next to him was Werewolf and his brother they both aimed there AK's at the van. Suddenly a limo drove up and two wealthy looking men got out, stretching there legs as they walked up to the 'money' van. The two men were fellow friends of Joey leone, a bigshot who operated in Liberty city, and recently helped take over the four dragon's casino. The first man, Falsono, got into the unlocked van and motioned for the other unknown man to come in. Deli looked at me, then slowly pushed the button on the detonator. A loud explosion scattering car parts, and human flesh around the whole docks started, folowed by three Leone men getting out and searching for there friends killer's."Ha, ese's c'mon, we gotta finish them off," Werewolf and his brother snuck over to a big empty crate and started firing on the limo, killing one Leone and leaving dark red splots on the limo. Me and Deli got up and fired rounds of our Jackhammer's onto the men, leaving only the scared driver hiding in the front seat of the bloodied, bullet punctured limo. Wind started to fling old, wet newspapers and dirt around as we all walked up to the limo, still aiming at it. I slowly motioned to the driver door, and finally opened it, revealing a crouched man in a limo suit under the stearing wheel. "Hey get up ese!Who the f*ck are you?"

"I'm-I-I'm Henry Delfonso,"

"Good, Deli," Deli pulled up his gun to the man's face and fired. Blood spattered on our clothes as we walked back to Deli's van to get away. Werewolf and I got into the backseat, while Deli and Werewolf's brother got into the front. The Burrito wouldn't start for a moment, then finally it skidded off back to El Corona

The next day I recieved a phone call from some guy named 'scarcheek' as he said,"Hello you f*cking beaner sh*t. You are going to meet me in the black limo outside your house, or your friend's wife is going to feel 3,000cc's of power in her f*cking chest!"

"What?Man f*ck you!"

"Hehe,curse all you want brown noser, but if you don't come outside I will be killing every d*mn person you know, and that's coming from Joey's mouth," I hung up the phone and ran to my ammo-closet. I took out two deagle's hid them in my shoes, then took out an AK and a Jackhammer, throwing them over my shoulder, then loading as much ammo as I could hold all over me. I approached the window and looked outside, I saw a black limo across the street, but the windows were tinted. I took a spare mac10 off my dresser and loaded it, then slowly made my way downstairs. I heard a loud crack as I stoped at the end of the stairway, looking in my kitchen I saw three men dressed in black goin in through my window. I quikly shot at the first, killing him and wounding his pathetic friends as they left. I ran after them and shot at them out of my window, killing them right before they got away. I reloaded then walked over to my living room window and firing through to the limo. They returned with heavy fire as I ducked down and threw down the mac, then got out my AK. "Hey!You a f*cking chicken huh?!Well f*ck you for f*cking with my men!" The vioce was the 'scarcheek' as he fired into my window with an M4. I got up and shot the limo's windows, breaking five. As it started up and drove off 'Scarcheek' said,"You will die f*cking Aztecas, You and your filthy gang of thugs!No one messes with the Leone's!No one!!" Deli and two Aztecas walked out of Deli's house and watched as the limo drove off. They were wielding AK's as Deli said,"Yo ese what happened?"

"Those f*cking Leone's man, look what they did to my house. Bullet's and plaster all over,"

"They're gonna pay ese, with there lives!" he signaled me and the two other's to get into his van and with that he drove off to the willow field tatto parlor..

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sorry I haven't been active but dont worry im back,and ready to fight the leone's

December 3, 2007

I know that I already have his approval

December 3, 2007

Just to clarify I have three stories waiting to be reviewed. And The Diablos should have three ounces of weed.

Edited December 4, 2007 by Boombastic

December 3, 2007

Johnson hasn't been here for quite a while now ....Still waiting for my two stories and I need him to update my weapons and items soon, I need them in my stories coming up

December 4, 2007

Same...

December 5, 2007

everyone calm down he has sh*t to do too

December 5, 2007

Sorry for being inactive everyone.

Been rather... busy

I promise, everything will get updated tomorow. I have quite a few pages to go through. So to make it more easy on me to grade your stories would you please take all your stories that havent been graded and post them all into one big post along with any of your purchases and investments.

I expect for after tommorow to be more active.

Word.

December 5, 2007

I was out getting groceries when I heard a bang. I turned around and saw two men dressed in black. I went to reach for my gun and only felt my warm crimson blood leak down my finger tips. They pushed me on the ground and aimed there guns at my forehead. I wasn't scared though, It was a weird feeling. It was almost as if I accepted my fate.

Suddenly, I heard the mexican hat ring tone. I opened my eyes and saw Adrian with her arm around my waist. I rubed my face and picked up my phone. "Hello?" I answered still half asleep. "Hey sleeping beauty." I knew right away it was Frankie. I sat up in my bed and glanced over at the radio by the side of my bed. "Frankie, It's 5:00 in the morning. What's so important."

" You remember Albert Land? He was at your wedding back in Liberty."

"Ya, what about him?" To be honest I had no clue who this guy was but I just wanted to get the call over with so I could go back to bed." Well, he's in kind of a bad spot right now. A bunch of sh*ts goin down there. The triads are hasslin' him and sh*t. I dunno. Tommy said he wants us to kill two birds with one stone. Meet me down at Sally's." He hung up before I could bargain with him to get some one else for the job. I went to put a shirt on and Adrian woke up. "Where you goin? It's only five."

"Frankie wants me down at Sally's. Say, do you remember some guy at our wedding? Albert Land or sumthin?" I pulled the shirt over my head and sat down to put some socks on."Yea, He was the one that was dancing with your sister all night remember?"

"Oh ya. What did he get us?"

"Umm...A toaster or sumthing." I strolled towards the bedroom door "Cheap f*ckin prick." I muttered under my breath. "Wait a minute Vin. I'll get up and make you some coffee."

"Just go back to bed baby." I walked to the door and out on my shoes. I figured it must have been direct orders from tommy to do this or else we would have waited until the sun was up. I opened the door and walked down the apratment hall until I reached the elevator. After Adrian came home from the clinic I saw her last week she told me the doctor had confirmed the pregnancy but it wasn't far enough along to tell if it was a girl or a boy. I hopped in hell it was a boy. I don't know what I'd do if it was a girl and took after me. She would be such a slut I thought as the elevator doors slid open. I told Luke not to tell anyone that she was pregnant because they might start giving me the family man jobs. I wouldn't be in harms way as much but I would make sh*t money.

I got off and pushed my way through the revolving doors. I got into my car and lit a smoke up. I had quit since I came to Las Venturas but as you know I started up again last week. I pulled out of my spot and drove down the partially dark street. I tuned the radio to K-DST. I got to the diner and walked right in. Frankie was sitting at the booth at the back with the usual suspects. Chris Morello and Luke were sitting across from Frankie and Jimmy McBride. "Hey Vinnie! Glad you could make it." Frankie said. "Take a seat. Alot a sh*ts happenin down in Liberty. Al Land started somethin big." Jimmy cut in "Isn't he a diablo now?"

"All I know is Tommy thinks it's a good buisness opertunity. John Chen owns the four dragons casino which is as you all know Caligula's only competitor. Me an Tommy figure if Chen was to go missing for awhile that it would be good for us and Landhini." I thought about the plan. It sounded like a good idea. Now I knew what he meant by killing two birds with one stone. "How much am I gonna make?" I asked. "I was thinkin somewhere along the lines of fifty to seventy-five thousand." My mouth dropped to the floor. Me and Adrian could finally get a nice place where we could raise our kid. The way I saw it, I didn't have a choice. "So what's the plan." Jimmy asked."He should just be getting out of his house in about.." Frankie looked at his watch."An hour." It was a very possitive atmosphere at the table. Tommy had alot of money to spend. He offered to get me set up when I first came here but I told him I didn't want his charity. Frankie finished up his coffee and we all left together. "Vin your the desegnated driver." I didn't really care. The way I saw it it was easy money. We all hoped in my Sentinal and headed for Chen's place. Frankie was in the front and everyone else was in the back. Frankie turned to me with a smile on his face. "What?" I asked and smiled back He just answered "Nothing." and just kept starring at me."No what?" I asked again. He turned his head towards the side."Let your first child be a masculain one." I stomped my foot on the brake."Luke you f*ckin dick!" He went to say something but I cut him off."Just wait till this sh*ts over Luke. I'm gonna kick yer f*ckin head in." I was so pissed Luke had told Frankie. "f*ckin snitch." Chris said directing it to Luke. He just stayed quiet and didn't say another word the whole ride. "Hey did you hear about Louis downtown?" Jimmy added trying to break the tension. "He got caught with like, four kilos o'coke."

"Haha." Frankie laughed "I remember when that kid would wash my car for extra money to take his girlfriend to the movies. Stupid kid." The whole car ride was just small talk. I guess Frankie knew the baby was a touchy subject so he didn't ask me about it. We pulled up to Chen's house and just sat in the car. The house was massive. You could tell he made good money.

"I wish my house was that f*ckin giant." Chris remarked. Finally after about ten minutes Chen walked out with four bodyguards. "They ain't got no weapons." Jimmy explained. "It'll be like shootin fish in a barrel."

"You guys ready." I pulled out my nine and cocked it back. The sound of guns being loaded echoed through the car for a second or two. Frankie opened the door and the rest followed him out."Stay in the car." He dictated. For about a minute that quiet little sub urban street sounded like a war zone. Frankie ran up to the car."Pop the trunk!" He cried so I hit the little button on the side of my seat. A small Asian guy flew in and I heard the trunk door slam shut. The guys flew into the car and I hit the gas. Everyone on the street were looking out there windows. "Head for the dinner." Frankie ordered. Strutter by Kiss came on the radio and Jimmy started bouncing his leg up and down. We pulled up to the dinner and again I popped the trunk.

Chris Put the Asian over one shoulder and carried him in. Sal jsut starred at us and continued washing dishes. Frankie swung the door to the basement open and him Jimmy and Chris walked down. Luke stayed with me. I slapped him on the back of the head. "You f*ckin idiot."

"I didn't tell him! I swear! He already knew Vin." I had trouble believing him but at the same time I could tell he wasn't lying. I walked up to the counter and asked Sal for a sandwich. I sat on the stool and Luke sat beside me. Frankie, Chris and Jimmy all walked up the stairs and took a seat in the booth they were at before. "So what now?" I yelled to Frankie across the restaurant."We'll keep him here for a bit until later tonight. Then we go throw him in the ocean." Sal put the sandwich in front of me. Little did we know, we had just got involved in one of the biggest gang wars to hit the streets of Liberty.

its the only story that hasnt been graded yert

December 5, 2007

These:

Introduction: The Characters

Name: Johnny Walker

Age: 27

Gang: The Diablos

Nickname: Boost

Former gangster, Johnny Walker was born in Los Santos, San Andreas, but has recently moved to Liberty City for a little peace and quiet. But when he walked down an alleyway on his first day, he was confronted by The Diablos. Forced by a revolver to join, he became a rich high rank. Though his time to join was a bad one. The Diablos were at war with the Triads, attacks and set-ups everywhere. Will Johnny be able to defeat the Triads and become leader of The Diablos?

Name: Jason Hunsky

Age: 24

Gang: The Diablos

Nickname: Jase

Half American, half German, Jason Hunsky is Johnny's best friend. He is also a high member of the Diablos. His parents were Nazis, and treated him terribly. When he understood what Nazis were at the age of 10, he ran away. Jason joined the Diablos, wishing to crush every Nazi, even his parents. Especially his parents.

Name: David Johnson

Age: 36

Gang: The Diablos

Nickname: Blood

Born Spanish, David Johnson is the new leader of the Diablos. Through the mid 80s and early 90s, he was a Cholo in Vice City. Though the 90s proved tough, and nearly got assassinated, so he moved to Liberty, when it was peaceful. Through the 90s, more and more crime turned to Liberty City, so he joined the first Hispanic gang he thought of. The Diablos.

Name: Alberto Landhini

Age: 31

Gang: Sicilian Mafia

Nickname: N/A

Alberto is the leader of the Sicilian Mafia, who are allies with The Diablos. Alberto sometimes has Johnny do his dirty work for him. Or visa versa. Alberto also suppliles the Diablos with vehicles, drugs and weapons. Or again, visa versa.

Name: Lee Sing

Age: 28

Gang: The Triads

Nickname: N/A

Once a successful crack dealer, Lee Sing is a dodgy Triad. He still buys and sells illegal items such as guns, drugs, anything he can get his hands on. Not much is known about Lee's childhood, but he's very skillful with a knife. He joined the Triads at the age of 22. He is also a good friend of Lang Ho.