Typhus Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 (edited) No point anymore. Edited March 20, 2009 by Typhus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted October 7, 2007 Author Share Posted October 7, 2007 (edited) No point anymore. Edited March 20, 2009 by Typhus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted October 7, 2007 Author Share Posted October 7, 2007 (edited) No point anymore. Edited March 20, 2009 by Typhus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted October 7, 2007 Author Share Posted October 7, 2007 (edited) No point anymore. Edited March 20, 2009 by Typhus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TubbyJ Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 I haven't read it all yet, but what I have read looks promising. I'll post later and give you some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted October 7, 2007 Author Share Posted October 7, 2007 Thank you very much sir. I look forward to it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 Wow, dude. You have writing skills. Usually I don't take the time to read a whole story, but I just did for this. When do you think the next update will be? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted October 7, 2007 Share Posted October 7, 2007 I've read the first bit so far and I like it. Only thing is, you should space your paragraphs out. It's so much easier on the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted October 7, 2007 Author Share Posted October 7, 2007 Wow, dude.You have writing skills. Usually I don't take the time to read a whole story, but I just did for this. When do you think the next update will be? You really read it all? And Vercetti21 I'd like to thank you for your criticism. It has been said to me many times before and I endeavour to break it up as much as I can. But it's nice to be given a helping hand every so often Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 You should try and update this soon, I've read it over twice now. It gets you hooked, from the beginning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted October 9, 2007 Author Share Posted October 9, 2007 (edited) No point anymore. Edited March 20, 2009 by Typhus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted October 10, 2007 Share Posted October 10, 2007 The reading just captures you, dude. You're an amazing writer. Keep me updated, if you have MSN, add me. [email protected] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted October 10, 2007 Author Share Posted October 10, 2007 Do you think that there's any way I could improve the last chapter? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted October 10, 2007 Share Posted October 10, 2007 I'm not too picky of a writer, so I can't see anything, but I'm sure other people will tell you things. Eminence, especially. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted October 27, 2007 Author Share Posted October 27, 2007 (edited) No point anymore. Edited March 20, 2009 by Typhus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted November 17, 2007 Author Share Posted November 17, 2007 (edited) No point anymore. Edited March 20, 2009 by Typhus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 (edited) Don't get discouraged by the lack of replies, please! You're on my list, I can tell you that. I'm going to read this and give you a nice big juicy critique I should hope, just as soon as I get the time. Sorry that I have yet to do so... Side-note: And for the record, I trust you're happy in the knowledge that all that jazz from before is dropped and now in the past? Edited November 18, 2007 by Eminence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 Amazing story, Typhus. I read it all, and your detail absolutely captured me. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
grim reaper22 Posted November 18, 2007 Share Posted November 18, 2007 My friend,you are very good,nothing I can really critizes that's how good you are man,keep it up and read mine sometime,it's the first ME in my sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted November 19, 2007 Author Share Posted November 19, 2007 My friend,you are very good,nothing I can really critizes that's how good you are man,keep it up and read mine sometime,it's the first ME in my sig You actually read it all? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted November 19, 2007 Share Posted November 19, 2007 You actually read it all? To me, it looks like he's just trying to advertise his story. Pretty low, in my opinion. I've read part of the first chapter, and this looks very promising. I'll be sure to try and finish it all. You've definitely got talent. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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