Oxidizer Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 (edited) /Removed. Edited December 15, 2011 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 2, 2007 Author Share Posted October 2, 2007 (edited) /Removed. Edited December 15, 2011 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poikly Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 On hiatus already? Wow. I will have to read it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 2, 2007 Author Share Posted October 2, 2007 I'm afraid so. It's just until I finish NFTU - that way I can focus all my energy into this. I think Syndicate could be my best stuff yet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poikly Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 I thought NOUAS was after NFTU. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 2, 2007 Author Share Posted October 2, 2007 I was thinking about this earlier and I don't think I'm going to be writing NOUAS any time soon. I definitely will one day but not until after I've finished this - which won't happen until NFTU is complete. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted October 2, 2007 Share Posted October 2, 2007 I'll start reading when it's taken off hiatus, along with your others. I see that you're using a few EastEnder's character photos for characters I did that with Robert Kazinsky aswell; he just had a perfect look for a badass character. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 2, 2007 Author Share Posted October 2, 2007 Busted! Yeah, you're right. He really does have that badass quality to him. Funnily enough, two of the 'Enders characters have scenes together. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryunday Posted October 3, 2007 Share Posted October 3, 2007 (edited) Ryunday stares blankly at his computer screen This is some of the greatest writing I have ever seen. I already love this story. I think this is your greatest work Oxi I will definitely be following this closely. Edited October 3, 2007 by Ryunday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 3, 2007 Author Share Posted October 3, 2007 Hee. Thanks dude! Glad you liked it. I'm quite proud of it considering I still have slight writersblock. The first chapter should be treated more as a teaser though - the next two parts is when story kicks in and the real action takes place. I'll try and get NFTU done as soon as I can. I'm not going to rush it but I'll be damned if I don't finish that one this month. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted October 5, 2007 Share Posted October 5, 2007 Sweet stuff as I said before. I might read it when you post more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 5, 2007 Author Share Posted October 5, 2007 Thanks for the feedback! I'm pleased you're liking it so far. I'm thinking about continuing with this and putting NFTU on hiatus instead considering it isn't going anywhere. The problem with doing that is that I've only got the second part of this plotted out - after that I'm at a dead end. Anyway, I'll let you guys know what I'll be doing once I've made a decision. Until then - in an attempt to keep you hooked - there'll be two deaths in the next chapter which are pretty vicious. Stay tuned... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 8, 2007 Author Share Posted October 8, 2007 Change of plan: NFTU is now on hiatus and this is in progress. Also, I've drastically updated the summary and given the fiction a new look. I'm writing Something Wrong on and off - hopefully it'll be finished later in the week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poikly Posted October 8, 2007 Share Posted October 8, 2007 Great! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 9, 2007 Author Share Posted October 9, 2007 Finally finished plotting out the whole story - you guys are in for a treat! In total there will be 5 deaths, all pivotal and/or major characters. 2 of which occur in the last half of the next chapter (which should be posted later in the week/end) - and they're the most nasty. So, with that in mind and bios having been added to the mini character profiles in the summary, any ideas as to what's gonna happen? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryunday Posted October 9, 2007 Share Posted October 9, 2007 (edited) Well I know a bit more of what’s going to happen (because I’m special like that ). But I am not sure about the rest of the story. It sounds like you have more of your trademark dark writing in mind Oxidizer. Edited October 9, 2007 by Ryunday Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 9, 2007 Author Share Posted October 9, 2007 Heh. That I do. This one's gonna be dark, complex and raw. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 15, 2007 Author Share Posted October 15, 2007 (edited) I figured I'd post a teaser as the next part won't be up for a while yet: Jack justifiably observed Bill with suspicion, who repositioned nearby one of the elevators to answer his cell phone. The man in question swallowed anxiously upon reading the caller ID: S. Forbes. "We need to talk," Samantha prognosticated the second Bill opted the call. Akin to Jack, she possessed an American accent. Bill glanced over in Jack's direction, where he noticed the FBI agent remain his cautious stance by a potted palm tree beside the entrance, ensuring that he wasn't within range to hear his side of the conversation. "The project?" Bill inquired with a lull tone to his voice. "Phase one is officially executed," Samantha disclosed in a canonical fashion, Bill's facial expressions a mixture of atone and content. "Temporal base, 1 hour," Samantha instructed in conclusion. "I will be waiting." Bill clicked his phone shut and ran a hand over his smooth head apprehensively, having just realized the reality of the situation that he was in. Jack noticed Bill's new inquietude and approached. "Is something wrong?" ETA: I added a new character to the mix - Agent Hauser. He'll play a short yet pivotal role. Edited October 30, 2007 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 31, 2007 Author Share Posted October 31, 2007 (edited) *deleted* Edited November 10, 2007 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poikly Posted October 31, 2007 Share Posted October 31, 2007 Happy Halloween! Red taillights of a limousine faded in sync with its ignition as the modish vehicle pulled up within the canyon-like pit of a quarry. Out stepped a single pair of black Gucci loathers as Bill exited the stretch alone, having instructed his chauffeur and bodyguard to remain inside while he convened with Samantha, who oversaw the conditions that took place in the makeshift base of operations. The quarry's usual purpose of extracting limestone had been temporarily altered as a place of captivity since the counterfeit terrorist attack on the airport, three days before. The bomb squad that arrived on scene that afternoon determined that the mechanism on the device would have triggered to detonate, however there was no trace of explosive whatsoever. It was a decoy designed by Black Ops to smuggle Jane into the country, undetected amidst the panic and confusion. Happy Halloween! I cant wait for the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryunday Posted November 2, 2007 Share Posted November 2, 2007 Great teasers Oxi . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 6, 2007 Author Share Posted November 6, 2007 (edited) I really want Something Wrong to be done by the weekend, so I'm working on it in between writing NFTU. Hopefully I'll get it done in time to meet my self-imposed deadline. Edited November 10, 2007 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryunday Posted November 6, 2007 Share Posted November 6, 2007 Looks good I will be looking forward to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 6, 2007 Author Share Posted November 6, 2007 I'm 80% confident I'll get it done by then. I just finished the cliffhanger for Something Wrong and now only have 3 scenes left to write - one of which is reasonably easy, another is very short and the remaining scene is one of my favorites, so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 8, 2007 Author Share Posted November 8, 2007 (edited) *deleted* Edited November 10, 2007 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 10, 2007 Author Share Posted November 10, 2007 (edited) /Removed. Edited December 15, 2011 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryunday Posted November 10, 2007 Share Posted November 10, 2007 Man I love this! Very good work as usual Oxi. You really have a gift for writing parts for evil women. And I was wondering if Toshiko & Suzuki were still going to be well… wrong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 10, 2007 Author Share Posted November 10, 2007 (edited) Glad you like it! And the Kobayashis' dark secret. Conspiracy With the Devil may not be up until sometime in December, but I'll try and get it done before then. It's going to be huge - the last scene alone will be as big as the first chapter. Regarding evil women, you haven't seen anything yet. Just wait until NFTU is finished - which I'm hoping will be this time next week (or at the very least this month). Edited November 10, 2007 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 14, 2007 Share Posted November 14, 2007 Reading your stuff is just... there are no words for it. You use words and styles I've never seen before and could only dream of using. I read half of it so far, and I'll be sure to get to the other half at a later date. I'm picking up a very season three of 'Prison Break' vibe from it, which, by the way is my favourite show I hope I can catch up with the other half before you post again . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 14, 2007 Author Share Posted November 14, 2007 Hee! Thanks for the wicked feedback! I won't lie - it's freakin' hard work! You're be right about the Prison Break vibe (which is one of my favorite shows too) - especially when you get to the last scene. Veronica Donovan, anyone? I'm pretty sure you'll catch up - this is going on a short intermission until I finish NFTU - which I'm devoting all my time to complete. Hopefully it won't be too long now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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