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The Godfather of Liberty City


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The following story is non-canon, meaning it didn't really happen. This is just my own Grand Theft Auto story. Please read!

 

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Chapter 1: The Wedding.

 

Salvatore Leone had his own estate in Liberty City. It started out just being a Gentlemen's Club, but he later made it into a mall of houses. There was a gate going around the whole estate, with armed guards. In the Leone estate, there was a huge celebration going on. It was the day of Carmina Leone's wedding! Don Salvatore favoured Carmina, his youngest daughter. He couldn't believe she was finally getting married. The groom was a fellow Sicilian, Vincenzo Cilli. Vinnie was an old Family friend. The couple looked happy at their table.

 

Don Salvatore was highly respected by everyone. He was known as the Godfather of Liberty City. But, being a mob boss, he knew he had to grant the wishes of his friends on this, the day of his daughter's wedding. Him and Luigi Goterelli went inside the big house. Luigi Goterelli was Don Salvatore's godson. A long time ago, Sal found Luigi outside, playing with the Don's oldest son, Stefano. They looked like they were getting along. Luigi explained to the Don how his parents deserted him. He Don felt remorse for the child. He took him in. Now, Luigi wasn't adopted by Sal, but he was treated just like a son. To this day, Luigi has been loyal to the Don.

 

That made Sal think of his other children. Stefano was the oldest son. He was a good son. But, he had too much rage, that was the problem. Don Salvatore knew that he couldn't be his successor. He knew it wouldn't work for Stefano. The next was Ferdinando. Fernie, as they called him, was always getting drunk. The Don thought this was very foolish. The youngest son was Joey. The Don always thought he was a good kid. Joey never wanted to be involved with the Family. But, still, the Don held him in high regards. Carmina was always his favourite, as mentioned before. Maybe it was because she was the youngest.

 

The Don sat down in his chair, in his office. He could see all of the festivities going on outside. Lugi poured him some wine. The Don took it, while muttering his thanks. Outside, he could see Joey.

 

Joey was sitting at a back table, with his girlfriend, Misty. They were talking fine, but Joey made sure he didn't tell anything about the Family's affairs to Misty. Fernie was just getting drunk, and having fun. Everybody else was dancing to Italian music.

 

After Sal finished up with a few of his "clients," Luigi told him, "Mickey Hamfists is here to see you."

 

"Was he on the list?" Asked the Don.

 

"No. But, he just wanted to say thank you, in person," answered Luigi.

 

"Alright, bring him in," replied Sal. Luigi went outside for a moment and came back with a big, mafiaso-looking man.

 

"Godfather. I just wanted to thank you for inviting me to, this, the day of your daughter's wedding. I just wanted to wish you all good luck," said Mickey. "That is all."

 

"My old friend," said the Don. They both embraced each other. After a while, he left. There was no one else who wanted to see the Don, on this, the day of his daughter's wedding.

 

"When is the meeting to see Miguel?" Asked the Don.

 

"It's in two weeks," replied Luigi.

 

"Very well," answered Sal.

 

The Don and Luigi walked outside, where everybody else was. Sal saw his two caporegimes, Toni Cipriani and JD O'toole dancing wildly and getting drunk. That was when he called everybody for a picture. Everyone formed a semi-cirle in front of the picture and SNAP! The picture was taken.

 

A week later, the picture was hung in the office of the Don's wall. Good memories, thought the Don. Good memories. He smiled.

 

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Well, that's just the beginning. So, if you liked it, there's way more coming your way smile.gif .

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I don't know. Although most of your writing was decent, isn't this pretty much exactly the same as The Godfather, just written in your own words?

 

Sorry, but points off for unoriginality.

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Chapter 2: The Deal

 

The day had come when Don Salvatore was to meet with this Miguel, who was a huge drug dealer in Liberty City. The meeting started. They all sat at a table. Don Salvatore was at the head, while Luigi and Stefano were on either side of him. At the other end sat Miguel and all his men were on that side of the table, with him.

 

"Miguel," started the Don. "Who did you say you worked for?"

 

"The Columbian Cartel," answered Miguel. "Just, hear me out, Don Leone."

 

"Alright," said Sal. "Lay out your deal."

 

"The Leone Family isn't as powerful as you think," started Miguel. "But, they can be. All you need to do is go into the narcotics business. Trust me, I will not let you down on this one. You have my word." The Don scratched his chin.

 

"How much will we get?" Asked the Don.

 

"50 percent, I gaurantee it," answered Miguel.

 

"And how much will the Sindaccos get?" Asked Sal, fearlessly. That caught Miguel off guard. He hesitated, before speaking.

 

"Just leave that to me," said Miguel. "I will split my share!"

 

"Well, Miguel," said the Don. "I must protest. But, I must give my reasons. I think narcotics are unnecessary and will ruin our status. I am sorry." Miguel was shocked! How could Don Leone do this to me? Thought Miguel.

 

"I understand," replied Miguel. "Thank you for your time. I will not waste anymore of it."

 

In Italian, Sal spoke to Stefano: "Lead them out, son." Stefano didn't object. This was a bad thing to do. Usually, when it comes to a drug deal, or any deal for that matter, it isn't wise to say no. Salvatore knew this. He just wasn't that kind of man. He was too respected to ruin his reputation.

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He is a godfather fan after all.

And unoriginality?

This is nothing compared to Leprachaun.

Just writ out the GTA games and changed the characters names.

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Thanks poikly for being a good fan biggrin.gif . Now, we continue...

 

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Chapter 3: The Death of Mickey

 

Salvatore Leone knew that there was going to be trouble in the next few months. He wouldn't be surprised if Miguel started some sh*t. Let's just hope that nothing bad happens, he thought.

 

A few hours ago, he called a secret meeting with Mickey Hamfists. He should be here any minute. He poured himself some wine and gulped it down. Then, Mickey comes into his office and takes a seat.

 

"Yes, boss?" Asked Mickey. "You wanted to see me?"

 

"Yes," answered Sal. "Now, we all know that Miguel is going to do something incredibly stupid." Mickey nodded. "So, I want you to do something for me."

 

"Anything, boss," said Mickey.

 

"Spy on Miguel for me. Make him think that you want to join the Sindacco Family, for that is who he's working for."

 

"Will do," replied Mickey. He got up to leave, but when he reached the door, the Don added one more thing.

 

"Oh, yeah," started the Don. "Don't tell anyone else. This is just between us." Mickey nodded and then left.

 

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A few days later, Mickey Hamfists visited Paulie's Revue, late at night. It was closed, so nobody was there, except for the owners. He went inside and a Sindacco stopped him.

 

"You must be...Mickey Hamfists?" Asked the Sindacco. Mickey nodded. The Sindacco goon frisked Mickey. "Right this way, then." He led Mickey where Paulie Sindacco, Miguel and other Sindaccos were.

 

"Well, Mickey Hamfists," said Miguel. "I've been expecting you."

 

"So, I heard you're not happy with the Leone Family, eh?" Laughed Paulie.

 

"Yes," started Mickey. "I would like to work for you, Paulie. But, just remember...I would never go against the Godfather."

 

"Sure, sure, Mickey," said Paulie. "Here, have a drink." He nodded to a Sindacco who poured him a drink. He gave it to Mickey. Mickey started sipping on it when he heard someone come up, behind him. Too late. The hitman started choking Mickey with a skinny thread. Mickey was trying to scream, but nothing came out, except for gurgles and gasps. The thread disappeared into Mickey's bull-like throat. Suddenly, there was an awful smell coming from his dead corpse. All his wastes were let out, when he died.

 

"Go and bury this son of a bitch," demanded Miguel to a Sindacco. "I don't want anybody to know about his death or find his body." And with that, 3 Sindaccos carried Mickey's dead body into a car, and drove away in the night.

 

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A few days later, the Don and Luigi Goterelli were in the office, talking.

 

"Luigi," started the Don. "I want you to be the new Consigliere for the Leone Family."

 

"Really?" Asked Luigi. "Why, thank you Godfather. I will never forget this." The Don really loved Luigi and thought he was an exellent godson. Very loyal, indeed.

 

"Any news on Mickey?" Asked the Don.

 

"No, not yet," said Luigi. "Nobody's seen him since."

 

"Very well, answered Sal.

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Chapter 4: Gunned Down in Liberty City

 

A few weeks later, Luigi Goterelli was taking a stroll in the city, when a car pulled up to him. He didn't stop walking. He knew who it was. Then, 3 men walked out, including Miguel.

 

"Luigi," cried out Miguel. "What a pleasant surprise this is!" Luigi was getting pissed off. He got straight to the point.

 

"What do you want, Miguel?" Asked Luigi, furiously.

 

"I want to talk," answered Miguel. Luigi looked a little frightened and Miguel was getting impatient. "Trust me, if I wanted to kill you, you'd be dead already. Get in!" Miguel didn't ask again. Luigi got in and they drove away.

 

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Across town, Ferdinando and his father were just coming out of Marco's Bistro. Fernie got in the driver's side of the car.

 

"Fernie," started the Don. "I'm going to get some fruit."

 

"Okay, pop," answered Fernie. Sal walked to a fruit stand and demanded some fruit from the poor man working there. The man rushed because he knew who this was. All of a sudden, two men came out of nowhere. The Don immediately knew what was going on. He rushed to the car.

 

"Fernie-," his words were cut short as the two men took out there colt .45's and pumped 6 shots into the Don's frail, old body. His blood was splattered all over the car. Fernie got out, but he dropped his gun by accident. So, the 2 men got away. They ran away into the shadows. Fernie saw his father lying on the ground, blood surrounding him in a puddle.

 

"Oh, no!" Fernie ran to him and held him in his arms. The Godfather was either unconcious or dead. "Papa," cried Fernie. "PAPA!" With that, he went into shock. Sirens were wailing in the distance...

 

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Miguel was giving Luigi a long lecture. "As of now, your Godfather is dead." Luigi just listened, horror-struck. He loved his Godfather. Now, he was gone. "All you have to do is talk to the Family and tell them that they really need this narcotics business. Trust me, Luigi!" Luigi hated Miguel with a passion. He wasn't going to do any of the things he was telling him to do. He would've killed Miguel if his guards weren't all over the place. But, Luigi knew that he had to get out alive. He had to agree with Miguel if he wanted to see the Family again. He didn't want to die right here.

 

"Alright," sobbed Luigi. "I'll do what I can." Just then, Miguel's phone rang.

 

"Yeah, what?" Answered Miguel. "What!?! Are you sure? f*ck. Alright." He hung up, frustrated. "He's alive," he told Luigi. "They pumped 6 bullets in him, and the son of the bitch is still alive!" He threw his phone against the wall and it shattered into pieces. Then, he calmed down. "Well, I guess there's no sense in keeping you here, is there? Let him go, boys." Right before Luigi left, Miguel added: "Just-just think about my offer, will ya?" he knew it wouldn't work, now. All hell will break loose. The Cartel bodyguards led Luigi out and they even drove him back home. At least my Godfather is still alive, thought Luigi. Thank God.

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He is a godfather fan after all.

And unoriginality?

This is nothing compared to Leprachaun.

Just writ out the GTA games and changed the characters names.

 

Doesn't really matter how it compares to other stories, it's still unoriginal.

 

 

So, I shouldn't continue?

I'm not saying you shouldn't continue, I'm saying you need to be more original. If you make it the exact same storyline as the Godfather, everyone will already know what's going to happen. I'm not trying to be a bad fan, but I'm trying to use the /WD/ to its full potential, meaning comments and critique are needed to become a better writer. Don't take criticism so harsh, I was just trying to help.

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Okay. But, I just wanted to use the same storyline as The Godfather, but with the characters from GTA. Now, for the next chapter...

 

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Chapter 5: Joey Wants In

 

Luigi Goterelli made it home, alive. He went inside the Don's house, and there, he found most of the important people in the Leone Family. He went straight to the office. Inside, he found Stefano in the Don's chair. Also, Joey and Sal's 2 Caporegimes Toni and JD were in the office. They were surprised to see him.

 

"Lui, are you alright?" Asked Stefano.

 

"Yeah, I'm okay. I made it out alive, thank God!" Stated Luigi. "How's the old man?"

 

"He's alive; just badly hurt. He got shot 6 times!" Answered Stefano.

 

"And Ferdinando?" Asked Luigi.

 

"He's okay," replied Stefano. "Just...in shock."

 

"So, what are we going to do?" Asked Luigi.

 

"I want that bastard Miguel dead!" Replied Stefano. "But, we need a good way to kill him." Just then, Joey's phone rang.

 

"Hello? Yeah. Alright, I'm on my way."

 

"Who was that?" Asked Stefano as Joey headed toward the door. "Wait! Where are you going?"

 

"Out," answered Joey. "With Misty, of course!" He smiled. He shut the door, behind him.

 

"Make sure he doesn't get hurt," Stefano told Toni.

 

"Come on! Nothing's going to happen!" Replied Toni. "Miguel knows he's a civilian."

 

"Just do it!" Demanded Stefano. Toni didn't take no for an answer. He knows Stefano's temper. He left, with JD behind him.

 

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After Joey had dinner with Misty, he got up to leave.

 

"You're leaving so soon?" Asked Misty.

 

"Yup," replied Joey. "It's getting late. I need to see my father."

 

"Alright, babe," said Misty. They kissed and then Joey was off.

 

When Joey got there, he found out that the hospital was deserted. He knew that Toni's men were supposed to stand guard, throughout the hospital. He got to the door of the Don's room. Where the hell are the police? Thought Joey. He got in. Salvatore Leone was in pretty bad shape. A nurse came up, and started bickering.

 

"You're not supposed to be here!" She said, angrily. "Leave!"

 

"This is my father," replied Joey, angrily. "Men are going to be here to try to kill him. We need to get him outta here."

 

"Come on, then," answered the nurse. "We'll move him down the hall." They did so. Then, Joey picked up the phone and dialed his house number.

 

"Hello? Stefano, Joey. Yeah, all of Toni's men are gone. Yeah, the police are gone, too! Okay, send someone quick! I have a bad feeling about this."

 

Joey went outside to smoke a cigarette. Then, a black car pulled up. It had tinted windows. Joey put his hands in his pocket, acting like he had a gun. Of course, he didn't. He's not that kind of guy. The car drove away as soon as it stopped. Joey thought he would be safe. But, then, 5 police cars pulled up. A policeman who looked to be a captain got out, as did all of the other officers. His name was Leon McAffrey. Joey knew about him. He was a corrupt cop.

 

"I thought I had all of you goons put away!" Yelled McAffrey. "Frisk him!" A nearby cop frisked him.

 

"He's clean!" Said the cop.

 

"I know who he is," said another. "He's Salvatore Leone's son, Joey!"

 

"Yeah? Well, I don't like him," said McAffrey. "Arrest him."

 

"Sir!" Yelled the cop who frisked Joey. "He's clean!"

 

"I don't give a sh*t!" Said McAffrey. "Do what I say! If anybody asks, just say he tried to assault me." With that, he punched Joey so hard, it left a huge bruise. Joey fell to the ground from the blow. McAffrey started laughing. Just then, some cars pulled up, and Luigi got out. He brought other Leones with him. Did I mention that Luigi is a lawyer?

 

"McAffrey, these men are highly trained lawyers," said Luigi. "They have a permit to carry a gun. If you object, you'll have to gave the court." McAffrey knew he had to leave.

 

"Let's go!" He ushered the other cops.

 

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A few hours later, Joey was back in the Don's office. He held ice to his injury.

 

"How's Fernie?" Asked Joey.

 

"We sent him to Las Venturas," answered Stefano. "From what we heard, he's a ladies man. He's working in one of the Leone hotels."

 

"Is that so?" Asked Joey. "I see."

 

"So, let me get this straight," Stefano was repeating everything that Joey has just told him. "McAffrey is working for Miguel and he put all of Toni's men in jail?"

 

"Yes," answered Luigi, before Joey could answer. "That son of a bitch!" They all debated on how they were going to kill Miguel.

 

"It's too risky," said Stefano. "We should wait until the old man is fully healed."

 

"But, what about McAffrey? We can't kill a Liberty City policer captain! The LCPD would be after us!"

 

"We can't wait any longer," said Joey. "We have to kill them both. Today. Before, he tries to kill the old man, again."

 

"And I suppose you're the one to do it?" Asked Stefano, mocking him.

 

"Exactly what I had in mind," answered Joey. Stefano burst out laughing.

 

"You?" He said. "The one who said he didn't want to get involved in the Family affairs?"

 

"What's your plan, Joey?" Asked Toni.

 

"We'll say we want piece. Then, I'll go to talk to him. Somehow, one of you will have to give me a gun, and I'll f*cking kill those bastards!"

 

"That's easy," answered Toni. "I'll just get one of my men to plant a gun in the bathroom. You'll find it."

 

"Okay," said Stefano. "It's settled, then." There was a long pause, until the phone rang.

 

"Yeah?" Stefano answered it. "Joe's pizza? Got it." He hung up.

 

"The meeting will be in a restaurant in Staunton Island called Joe's Pizza."

 

"Let's get to work," said Luigi. And so, they did.

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Chapter 6: Joey, the Mafiaso

 

Joey Leone was waiting outside on a cold night. He was waiting outside Cipriani's Restaurant, for Miguel and McAffrey to pick him up. He was a little nervous, though. What if everything goes wrong? He thought. No! He couldn't let it go wrong. Besides, it was too late to back out, now. He lit a cigarette, while he was waiting. After he was done, he crunched it under his foot. A car pulled up. Joey got in.

 

"Thank you for seeing us on such a short notice, Joey," said Miguel.

 

"No problem," answered Joey. "I just want this madness to stop. I don't want any more attempts on my father's life!"

 

"And that is why I called a meeting," said Miguel. "I want to have truce."

 

"Sorry about last night, Joey," said McAffrey. "You're a good kid. I guess I'm getting too old for this bullsh*t." Joey didn't say anything. "Turn around, kid. I need to frisk ya!" And so he did. "He's clean." It took about half an hour to actually get to Joe's Pizza. They went in. There was hardly anybody in there, except a waiter and the cook. They all took a seat together.

 

"Do they have anything good here?" McAffrey asked Miguel.

 

"Of course. It's an Italian restaurant. Right, Joey?" Miguel asked Joey. Joey merely smiled. "Try the pizza, Leon." They ordered their food and they got straight down to business. "Look, Joey. I will stop any more attempts on your father's life. I want a truce." He held out his hand. Joey shook it.

 

"Alright," said Joey. "What's in it for you, though?"

 

"Well," replied Miguel. "I just don't want anymore trouble." He chuckled. "I don't want the whole Leone Family after me, you know?"

 

"And they won't," answered Joey. "I will talk to my old man about it. Get everything sorted out."

 

"Good, good," said Miguel.

 

"Listen, I have to use the bathroom," said Joey. "I will be right back." Miguel thought something fishy was going on. He quickly searched Joey, around his crotch area.

 

"He's clean," said McAffrey. "I'm good at my job. Trust me. I've frisked a lot of young punks." That was the go-ahead for Joey. This is it! Thought Joey. He went inside the bathroom. He actually did have to go; that wasn't a lie. So, he did. When he was finished he reached up and found the gun! Good old Toni, though Joey. You could always trust him. He smiled. He went outside. McAffrey and Miguel looked at him. Instead of Joey shooting them right there, and then, he sat down! They started talking again. Then, McAffrey was focusing on his food, so Joey thought this was his chance. He pulled out the gun and shot Miguel straight in the head! He fell to the floor, with his brains everywhere. McAffrey looked up and BANG! Joey shot him in his bull-like neck. One more shot to the head did it. He fell to the floor, dead. Joey stood up, let the gun go, and walked out of there, as if nothing happened. When he got outside, Toni was waiting in a car for him.

 

"Did you do the job on Miguel?" He asked as they drove away.

 

"Yes," answered Joey.

 

"Good," replied Toni.

 

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Once again, they were all in the Don's office.

 

"Now, Joey," said Stefano. "We have to send you to Sicily. They LCPD are going to be after you!"

 

"I understand," said Joey. "But, for how long?" Stefano sighed.

 

"About a year, Joey," he said. Joey looked glum. "Just as long as we get this mess sorted out." He said his final goodbyes and left.

 

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A few weeks later, Misty was very upset. She was anrgy at Joey and at the Leone Family. She drove to the Leone's house. She saw Luigi outside.

 

"Luigi!" She shouted. "How are you?"

 

"Oh hey Misty!" He said. "What can I do for you?"

 

"Why didn't anybody tell me about Joey?" She asked angrily.

 

"Well, there was a lot going on, right now," replied Luigi. Misty took out a letter.

 

"Then, could you give this to him, for me?" She asked.

 

"I'm sorry," said Luigi. "But, if I do that, the authorities will know that we know the wherabouts of Joey."

 

"Fine!" Shouted Misty. She got in the car and left. She was sobbing the whole way.

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Thanks.

 

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Chapter 7: Joey's Life in Sicily

 

The story about Joey Leone in Sicily is a long one. But, I'll give you a shorter version. Joey Leone made it to the island off the coast of Italy, called Sicily, safe. There is much Mafia businesses going on in Sicily. Salvatore Leone knew that Joey wasn't going to be safe because of the war going on in Liberty City. Yes, a war had erupted since the death of Miguel and McAffrey. Anyway, Joey had 2 bodyguards with him at all times. They made it to a small village, where it was very quiet. They stopped short when they saw a crew of girls. One, was especially beautiful to Joey. He immediately fell in love with her, when he saw her.

 

After a while, they continued onward, and stopped for a cup of coffee in a cafe. The owner was talking nicely with them. One of Joey's bodyguards asked him if he knew all of the girls in the town. The owner said yes. Then, all 3 of them started describing her. The owner got mad and ran inside, to fetch his 2 sons. Joey immediately realized what happened - the girl was the owner's daughter.

 

"Tell him to come outside," Joey told his bodyguard. And so, he did. The owner came outside, and they both started talking again. "I would like to meet her. Even if it would have to be in front of her parents." The owner actually agreed.

 

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A few days later, Joey went to the girl's house. He met her parents, and they became good friends. Then, Catarina came out. For that was her name. Joey and Catarina started talking and grew good friends.

 

In the course of the months, a lot happened, but I will give you a breif description. Joey and Catarina became extremely close. They started seeing each other a lot more. But, always in front of her parents. They even became lovers!

 

And before they knew it, it was their wedding day. All the ceremonies went as planned and Joey and Catarina Leone lived a happy life.

 

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Then, it happened. After a few months of a "happy life," it was over. One unlucky day, Joey was going to leave, to another town in Sicily. He had to leave. Other Mafia Families knew about his marriage, and were soon going to call hits on him. His 2 bodygaurds got his stuff ready in his car. He came down and Catarina was in it. In the months that passed, Joey was teaching her how to drive.

 

"Stay there, stay there!" Yelled Catarina, in a very thick Italian accent. "I'm going to drive to you." Joey saw his bodyguard run away from sight. Then, he knew what was happening.

 

"No!" He tried to yell to his wife. "No!" And before he knew it, the car was in flames - Catarina was dead!

 

After a few days, Joey got over his wife's death. But, he was still very angry, and he knew, one day, he'll get his revenge. He knew who was behind this. But now, it was time for him to head back to Liberty City. He was no longer safe in Sicily.

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Chapter 8: The Downfall of the Leone Family

 

Now, for the story in Liberty City. Salvatore Leone got better, and he wanted to know everything. He went to Stefano to see if all's well. "I heard that Miguel and McAffrey are dead," he said. "Is this true?"

 

"Yes," replied Stefano. "Joey did it."

 

"What!?!" Yelled Salvatore. "Where is he? Where is my son!?!"

 

"He's gone," answered Stefano. "He went to Sicily for hiding. The LCPD will be after him. We needed to do something." Sal merely nodded. Then, he started to sob. Everything was going wrong!

 

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Vincenzo and Carmina Cilli's marriage was going terrible! Vinnie beat on Carmina all the time. So, one day, she phoned the Leone home. She wanted to talk to either Mama Leone or Luigi Goterelli.

 

"Hello?" Answered the voice on the other side. sh*t!" Thought Carmina. It was Stefano! Everybody knew he had a bad temper.

 

"Stefano," said Carmina. She explained her story to her brother.

 

Stefano slammed down the phone. "Son of a bitch!" He yelled. "Son of a bitch!" He raced out the door to get in his Leone Sentinel.

 

"What is it?" Asked Mama Leone.

 

"Go after him!" Luigi told some Leones. "Make sure he doesn't get hurt."

 

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Stefano didn't get very far. He was crossing the Callahan Bridge, and stopped at the booth. All of a sudden, 10 Forellis stepped out and emptied their M4 magazines into Stefano's body. Blood was smeared all over his car and the ground - it was everywhere! To make sure he was dead, one Forelli stepped up to him and kicked his face.

 

"He's dead," declared the mafiaso. They all got in their Forelli Excesses and drove away. Luigi's men got there too late, however. They saw the mess and immediately phoned Luigi. They couldn't have done anything. "Luigi," said the Leone. "Stefano's dead!"

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But, I just wanted to use the same storyline as The Godfather, but with the characters from GTA.

So basically, you're writing The Godfather, but replacing all the characters with GTA characters, and trying to take credit for it?

 

You seriously have no room to talk about Leprechaun. That's exactly what he did, except with SA's storyline, rather than The Godfather's storyline.

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I'm not really taking credit for it. I know it's unoriginal. I just though it'd be interesting. Why would I take credit from a great director as Francis Ford Coppola or an awesome author as Mario Puzo? I made this up before Leprechaun made his. And he made more than one topic for one story. I just made one topic. I just didn't get around to writing it all.

 

@poikly: Yeah lol! I thought I'd quit since nobody was reading it, but I got bored and wrote some more.

 

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Chapter 9: Reuniting the Families

 

When Salvatore Leone found out about the tragic news about Stefano's death, he was very upset. He went to an undertaker who was a good friend of the Leone Family. He told him to secretly dig a grave for his son, and don't tell anybody! Of course, the undertaker agreed. He respected the Godfather, as did everyone. "See how they massacred my boy?" Said Salvatore. Then, he burst into tears.

 

The Leone Family was finished! Or so, all the other Mafia Families thought. Sal told Luigi to assemble a meeting with all the Mafia Families in Liberty City. The other Dons thought that Don Sal would want revenge. But, he wanted truce.

 

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Every Mafia Don was at the meeting, as well as their Consiglieris. The most well known Dons who were there were Don Franco Forelli, Don Paulie Sindacco and even Salvatore's uncle! But, there were other Dons who nobody really knew about. Everybody sat down, and Salvatore broke the silence.

 

"Welcome, everyone," he started. "I appreciate your coming, today. I know what you're all thinking. But, I do not want revenge for Stefano's death, God rest his soul." Everyone started murmering. But, Don Leone put up a hand to silence them.

 

"I want a truce," he continued. "With all the Liberty City mafia Families. Especially with you, Paulie." They both got up, and embraced each other. Everyone cheered and clapped. The war was over!

 

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Joey Leone got back from Sicily. Everyone welcomed him. He was no longer wanted for the murder of Miguel and Leon McAffrey. He got home, and everyone was excited to see him! Especially Salvatore, for he loved Joey a lot. Everything was going well, for a change. Misty even got back with Joey. The Leone Family was on their way to the top, again! Or was it...?

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