John- Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJonesy Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 Hmm, interesting... Have you happened to see Vice Andreas before? This is what it kind of reminds me of. Anyhoo, it is pretty good. As for description, grammar and such, there is room for improvement. But it isn't a problem. This is, of course, just the beginning so I'll have to check up to see how it is going. So continue your story and we'll see what ya got! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted September 22, 2007 Author Share Posted September 22, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 good start. I dont see how this involves SA though? IMO its pretty much the same as the ending of scarface though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted September 22, 2007 Author Share Posted September 22, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 good start. I dont see how this involves SA though? IMO its pretty much the same as the ending of scarface though. He'll probably end up recovering, and moving to San An. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 good start. I dont see how this involves SA though? IMO its pretty much the same as the ending of scarface though. Yeah but the game is based on Scarface though right? and I haven't gotten to the SA part yet =p its not completely based on scarface. its a collection of alot of different movies... I think the story would turn to unrealistic if he recovered from falling off his house with like 10 gunshot wound with a house full of soldiers all wanting to shoot him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted September 22, 2007 Author Share Posted September 22, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
norniron Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 Ok it seems quite good so far just re-read over it a few times before you post so there are no spelling mistakes. I'll keep reading your story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted September 23, 2007 Author Share Posted September 23, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted September 23, 2007 Share Posted September 23, 2007 man i didnt think you could do it but you pulled it out. the number of times hes been shot is a little unrealistic but the rest is good. the barrel was genius. also the part of the shot gun is infringing on scarface a little to much but honestly, the story rocks so far. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted September 23, 2007 Author Share Posted September 23, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cold fusion 33 Posted September 23, 2007 Share Posted September 23, 2007 Really cool story dude, liked it a lot as Scarface is one of my favourite films. Keep up the good work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted September 30, 2007 Author Share Posted September 30, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJonesy Posted October 1, 2007 Share Posted October 1, 2007 Really cool story dude, liked it a lot as Scarface is one of my favourite films.Keep up the good work Thanks a lot, I have a broken hand and typing with one sucks so I will add to it when im out of this cast. Sorry man. It is pretty annoying typing with one hand. Of course, I didn't break my hand, I was just too lazy to type with two... Anyways, the story seems...different. As stated, the whole "getting shot a million times" thing is a bit unrealistic, but what the hell. It is a GTA fan-fic so it will obviously be a little over-board. Point- keep up the good work. Just waiting to see what happens next... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 14, 2007 Author Share Posted October 14, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 15, 2007 Author Share Posted October 15, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glycerine Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 Interesting read. Thought Big Smoke was dead, but its your story so keep going with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 15, 2007 Author Share Posted October 15, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexrdh Posted October 15, 2007 Share Posted October 15, 2007 I like it so far. At the start Tommy must've had strong body armor. Looking forward to chapter 5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 16, 2007 Author Share Posted October 16, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 25, 2007 Author Share Posted October 25, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted October 26, 2007 Share Posted October 26, 2007 dude your awesome. this story has really evolved from the last time i read it. its beginning to be one of my favorite in the writers section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexrdh Posted October 26, 2007 Share Posted October 26, 2007 It's getting WAY better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 27, 2007 Author Share Posted October 27, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexrdh Posted October 27, 2007 Share Posted October 27, 2007 Cool, this should be published Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 28, 2007 Author Share Posted October 28, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexrdh Posted October 29, 2007 Share Posted October 29, 2007 He killed Mac and I found a story mistake; instead of Sweet and CJ, you wrote Smoke and CJ lol Pretty good story so far Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 29, 2007 Author Share Posted October 29, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alexrdh Posted November 8, 2007 Share Posted November 8, 2007 Dude your story is awesome you sohuld post more, and good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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