TonyZimmzy Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 I wanted to be the one violently nailed by Alex in freshman year, not Allison I loved the chapter; Alex's back story is something to marvel at. Lucky son of a bitch if his mom was hot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moth Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 Boy what a great story. A creepie and funny and voilent story rolled into one. Good work and now bring on the next chapter. Formerly known as The General Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 4, 2007 Share Posted October 4, 2007 Speaking of which, any idea when the next chapter will be up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted October 5, 2007 Share Posted October 5, 2007 Speaking of which, any idea when the next chapter will be up? I believe he's doing a chapter per. week, but I could be wrong. I've already got chapter three, but I'll wait. I'm special and get sh*t early, yay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 5, 2007 Share Posted October 5, 2007 Lucky fella. I'm good to wait but not for too long. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted October 11, 2007 Author Share Posted October 11, 2007 Chapter 3: Contracted As Alex casually walked down the street, he looked up and down the empty street. It was pitch black out and only a few street lights glowed. Alex put his hands in his jacket’s pockets as a cool zephyr blew past him. He shivered slightly and continued looking ahead. “He said it was the only house on this street…What f*cking house?! It’s a damn industrial area.” He looked at the factory to his right across the street. “There’s no damn house. f*ck, I was lured out here for nothing.” As soon as Alex said that, a dark cloud of smoke floated along a building was revealed. The building was painted a brilliant white, and the windows were lit up. Alex walked onto the porch and looked at the shining wooden parquet floor. He knocked on the Mahogany door four times and the man answered the door. “Hey! You made it! I didn’t think you’d believe me. Come in!” The man moves out of the way and Alex steps in. “Hey, I didn’t catch your name.” The man shuts the door, and it echoes through the house. “Alex. Alex Ramirez. You?” “My name? Oh, it’s Dan Gray.” Stretches out his hand. Alex shakes his hand. He feels the tough, worn out palms of this man. The grip almost crushes Alex’s hand. “That’s quite a handshake.” “To bad the same can’t be said for you.” Dan smirks. “Well, you want something to drink?” Dan starts walking to the kitchen. Alex follows close behind. “Well, what you got?” Dan opens the refrigerator and starts naming what he has. “Let’s see, I got Absolut Vodka, Heineken, and some Budweiser.” He turns to Alex who is making a disgusted face. “Anything else?” Alex is still looking at the fridge, trying to see if there is anything else. “Oh, well…” Dan reaches into the fridge. “I got some Sam Adams…” Alex’s eye went wide. That was the only type of beer he drinks. “You got Sam Adams? I’ll take one.” Dan threw one at him and Alex caught it. “This is like the only beer I drink.” Dan grins and looks at Alex. “Really? Me too. I didn’t think anyone else did.” Dan takes a seat at his small breakfast table. “Well, Alex, let’s get down to business.” Alex takes a seat next to Dan and takes a swig of the beer. The liquid is cool and refreshing as it makes its way down his throat and settles in his stomach. “Oh, that hits the spot.” Dan, still smiling, opens his beer and sets it on the table. “So Alex, you want to be make it big? Make people recognize you?” “Of course.” Alex takes another swig of the beer. “And you said you’d do anything. Right?” “Well, there are…limits. Not that many, but just so you know.” Another swig. Dan shifts in his seat and looks Alex in his eyes. “Well, of course. There’s always limits. But what’s the farthest you’ll go? Would you, let’s say, film incest?” Dan leans back and watches for any strange facial expressions. Alex squints and takes a swig, this time waiting a minute to answer. “Sure, I’d film it. There’s nothing wrong with that.” Dan laughs. “A man without ethics and morals, I like it.” He laughs for a bit more. “My kind of man Alex. Now, how about dendrophilia?” Alex looks at Dan quizzically. “Dendrophilia?” “Oh come on, you know, sex with nature. Like trees and sh*t.” Alex takes another swig and looks at his quarter full bottle. “Well, like a chick masturbating with a vegetable?” Dan chuckles. “No, like, let’s say, a man humping a knothole or a woman using a branch as a dildo.” Alex sets down his beer and looks at the floor for a second. “Sure. Why not?” “Well, I think we can work something out.” Dan watches Alex pick up his beer and finish it off. “Hey, you want mine?” Alex sets down his empty bottle and looks at Alex’s. The water condensing and slowly dripping down the side. “If you don’t mind…” Dan slides the bottle to Alex. He grabs the bottle and immediately starts drinking. Dan smiles as Alex drinks half and puts the bottle on the table. “What about…kids?” Alex smiles. The alcohol already starting to take effect. “What? What do you mean?” “Kids. Like pedophilia…” Alex finishes the bottle of beer and looks at the fridge. “You mind if I grab another?” “Go ahead.” Alex stands up and opens the refrigerator. He grabs the single pack of Sam Adam’s sitting in the fridge and sits back down, placing the pack on the table. “What were you saying?” “Pedophilia. Is that okay?” Alex pops open another beer and takes a large swig. “Like kids? Kids f*cking?” “Yeah.” Alex contorts his face and looks at the beer. “Yeah, sure. Not too young though…” He drinks another swig. “There might be hope for you Alex.” Dan leans forward and looks into Alex’s glazed eyes. “I want you to make a collection of pornos.” Alex finishes another beer and reaches for a fourth one. As he goes to pop off the top, it easily falls off. “Hey…the top…is loose…” He squints and looks at Dan. “Really? That’s strange. That means it’s already been opened…” Alex leans back into the chair. “Yeah…already opened…but I wouldn’t want to let such a wonderful beer go to waste!” He starts to chug the bottle, the air bubble inside growing bigger and bigger with each gulp. “So, Alex, I want you to make a series of pornos.” Dan snaps his fingers and Alex finishes up his fifth bottle, placing it with the other four bottles. “Series? Pornos? Of what?” Dan stands up and walks over to the counter. He grabs a napkin and a nearby pen. He sits back down and already sees Alex on his sixth bottle. “I want you to make ten videos. Each a different genre.” “Different…genres?” Alex chugs the sixth bottle and tries to place it on the table. He misses the table and the bottle shatters on the floor. The glass dispersing everywhere. “Oh sh*t…let me get this…” Alex gets on his hands and knees, cutting himself on the glass. “Don’t worry about it…” Dan starts writing a list on the paper. “First, I want you to make an incest video. I want proof of it being incest. Birth certificates, IDs, everything. I want legitimate proof that you’re filming two relatives f*cking.” Alex looks at the floor, covered in glass and blood. “Hey…I’m bleeding…” He looks at his palms and sees shards of glass piercing them. “It hurts a little.” “Next, you film some dendrophilia of your choice. It can be a guy or girl, as long as nature is involved. No masturbating with vegetables. That’s an easy way out, and I won’t accept that.” Alex slides across the floor and reaches the oven. He grabs the small towel and presses it against his palms. “I think I need to go to the hospital…” “Third, film some kids f*cking. Nothing above sixteen, but nothing below twelve. Stop by a middle school or something. That’s the perfect age group.” Alex looks at the towel starting to soak the blood. “It hurts Dan.” He looks at the beer. “Give me some of…the beer…I’m pulling out…the…” He starts to crawl to the table, slipping in the puddle of his blood. “After that, we’re taking it up one notch. I want you to film some hardcore beastiality. Not just a girl sucking off a dog. I want intercourse. And no dogs or horses. There’s enough of that on the market.” Alex is attempting to grab one of the Sam Adams on the table. “If…you…could just pass…me one…” He gets one hand on one, but the blood causes it to slip and burst on the floor, more glass scattering everywhere. “Help me…” “Then I want you to step it up to the next level. Film some necrophilia. You know, sex with the dead. No, you can’t put a girl in a bathtub of ice and ask her to lie still. I know what a dead body looks like.” Alex finally manages to take a hold of a bottle. He brings it down and pops open the lid. He pours it over the open wounds in his palms. He screams in pain. “I really…need to go to the…hospital.” “Sixth is some torture. I don’t care how, but I want someone bleeding while getting the sh*t f*cked out of them. No virgins. Breaking a cherry doesn’t count. Double for anal. That’s not considered torture to me.” Alex started to pull out the shards stuck in his palms. His palms were cut up like a raw patty of meat. Blood was pouring out. One cut went from the tip of his middle finger to the end of his palm. “Dan, shut up and help me…” “Now, I don’t know if you’re pro abortion or not, but the next one even makes me queasy.” He looks down at Alex who has curled up into the fetal position. “You don’t look so good…” He looks back at his list. “Anyways, I want you to film a pregnant lady and her baby killed. Not after birth.” He makes a disgusted face. “You know what, that can be optional. If you do it, you go up a notch in my book.” Alex’s eyes start to hang half shut. “I don’t think I’m going to make it Dan…” “Have you ever heard of Guro Alex? It’s usually in hentei, involving heavily mutilated dead bodies. Lots of blood. Make a video of that. And no, that doesn’t count as the necrophilia one.” Alex closes his eyes and starts cough. “Dan, I can’t feel my arms…” “And for the big finale! I want you to do a snuff film. Make it hardcore sex, and finish it off with killing the participants. That should be a fantastic ending!” Alex coughs and looks up at Dan. “That’s…that’s…only nine…” Dan counts the list. “Aw f*ck, you’re right. Number ten can be director’s choice.” He scribbles it down quickly and pockets the list. “Will you get up? It’s just a flesh wound!” Dan bends down and picks up Alex. He sits him down in the chair. “Dan, I really need medical attention…” “You don’t know what you’re talking about. You’ve had six beers. What do you know?” He looks at the remaining four beers. “Here, drink another, that’ll help the pain.” Alex looks at Dan reach for a bottle. “I…I can’t…” “Oh come one. I thought you loved it. It does hit the spot…” Dan shakes the bottle in front of Alex’s eyes. Alex’s eyes follow the bottle as it shakes. “Fine.” He takes the bottle carefully, making sure it doesn’t make contact with the wounds. “It does…hit…the spot.” He takes a swig and sighs. “See. You’re alright. There’s nothing a good ‘ol beer can’t fix.” Dan throws Alex’s arm over his shoulders. “Alright, you can’t go back to your place, so you’re going to spend the night here.” Dan picks him up and starts to walk him out of the kitchen. “You’re heavier than I thought…” Alex swings his head and looks at Dan. “It’s…mostly muscle…my dad used to make me…work out. I sorta…miss him…” Dan chuckles and starts his ascent up the stairs. “What happened?” Alex starts swinging his head from side to side. “I ran away. I couldn’t take it anymore…” “Why’d you run away?” Alex burps and Dan laughs. “My parents were nudists. I couldn’t handle…the humiliation…so I ran away. That’s when I went to college…and met Jon, Susan and Allison…” Dan reaches the top of the stairs and leads Alex into the first room on the right. “Then you became a porn director.” “Yeah.” Alex spots a bed and releases himself from Dan’s support. He makes his way and lies down on the bed. “Sometimes, I regret running away…” Dan sits down on the bed next to Alex, the mattress creaking. “Why?” “Well, I guess I shouldn’t have just run away. I never told my parents or anyone. I just disappeared.” Alex yawns and closes his eyes. “Well, maybe it was justified. Your mom did force you to f*ck her. They refused to wear clothing when they dropped you off at school, or anywhere public for that matter.” Alex yawns again. “Yeah, maybe you’re right.” “Maybe, it was all you could do. I mean, what would have happened if you stayed? Would you have gotten married to some chick and converted her to nudism and incest? Would you have sex with your daughter if you had one? Would your wife have sex with your son? Would your son and daughter start their own family?” Alex rolls over and faces towards Dan. “Yeah, you’re right. It’s all I could do.” “Would you have been able to tolerate all the humiliation? Would you have killed yourself? What would happen if you impregnated your own mother?” Alex chuckles. “She was forty eight…” “Did your mom ever lie to you? Did your mom ever tell you she went through late menopause?” Alex continues laughing. “What are you talking about?” “Did your mom ever tell you she was pregnant?” Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted October 11, 2007 Share Posted October 11, 2007 Wow, you're right. This is getting pretty f*cked up. I can't wait until the next chapter, I love reading this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silviodante Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 This is one great story Cuban. A little f*cked up, but still great. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 "Would your son and daughter start their own family?" - I shouldn't laugh but that really cracked me up! As always, I loved this! Especially with what the ninth video's contents will consist of. You gotta update again soon! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poikly Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 LMAO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted October 12, 2007 Share Posted October 12, 2007 *cough* Fight Club *cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moth Posted October 14, 2007 Share Posted October 14, 2007 Boy this is getting f*cked up but I can't stop reading it. So bring on the next one really soon. Formerly known as The General Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted October 14, 2007 Share Posted October 14, 2007 Wow, great story, a little f*cked up, but that's okay. I agreed with Eminence when he said there was too much dialog, but on the other hand, you've done a great job of carrying the whole story on just that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John- Posted October 14, 2007 Share Posted October 14, 2007 (edited) Please add a post and account deletion procedure! http://www.accountkiller.com/removal-requested You, as a webmaster or administrator, may have arrived here through an account information page on the site you're coming from. It seems the user tried to delete his/her account, however found this to be impossible. Therefore the user scrambled his/her personal data and referred to this page, requesting the site to create an account deletion option, preferably by completely deleting all personal data from the database. More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger. Besides, your site may be labelled white instead of black in the listings of AccountKiller. This provides more trust to users even considering the creation of an account at your site. For further reference, also read the FAQ on AccountKiller. Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Moth Posted October 29, 2007 Share Posted October 29, 2007 Dude I thought you will give us a chapter a week man and it has been nearly two weeks without one. Formerly known as The General Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted October 30, 2007 Share Posted October 30, 2007 Haven't seen Cubanwhip on MSN in quite a while. Maybe his internet's down or maybe he's off getting more blowjobs from ugly girls again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted October 30, 2007 Share Posted October 30, 2007 *sulks* I thought there was a new chapter! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted October 31, 2007 Share Posted October 31, 2007 Haven't seen Cubanwhip on MSN in quite a while. Maybe his internet's down or maybe he's off getting more blowjobs from ugly girls again. I've seen him on MSN, but he says he's been busy writing for a scholarship. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
poikly Posted November 6, 2007 Share Posted November 6, 2007 This is taking awhiiiiiiiiiiile. Hurry cubanwhip! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 11, 2007 Share Posted November 11, 2007 I need my sick fix. I'm suffering with serious withdrawls here! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stefan. Posted November 21, 2007 Share Posted November 21, 2007 Nice story. A bit sick, but anyway. At least it's natural, in a way. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 22, 2007 Share Posted November 22, 2007 Any idea when the next part will be up? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stefan. Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 We can only guess. He hasn't been up in a while. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 It's starting to worry me that I haven't talked to him in like a month now I miss you, Laberto. I miss you so... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 Maybe his parents saw what he was writing and thought we were bad influences or something? Or he's been filmed in a snuff movie. *shifty eyes* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblivionz Posted November 23, 2007 Share Posted November 23, 2007 Or maybe he's writing for exams, like he told me last week. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stefan. Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 Perhaps. In my opinion, school work should be a priority over GTA Forums. Good luck, mate! Hope the stories are as good as the ones you post! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted November 24, 2007 Share Posted November 24, 2007 No way! Sick, perverted incest and porn should be top priority over school. Geeze, kids these days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted November 28, 2007 Author Share Posted November 28, 2007 Hmmm, this is almost as bad as PK, but at least I reappeared. Anyways, legit reason: I tried to get a life. I realized that sitting in my room, writing stories about my inner sexual desires and having hot man sex with Tony was getting a bit out of hand. So I went out, got a GF, got dumped subsequently and now I'm back into my room. Mental Note: Introduce this into story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted November 28, 2007 Share Posted November 28, 2007 Congratulations on getting a life! Even if it did kinda fall to pieces after a short while. And up-fricken-date soon! I've suffered serious withdrawls because of you. But also inspiration to write more snuff - so well done on that account. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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