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"Ever wanted to do anything to make it big?"

Warning: This story contains graphic language, loose morals, unethical situations, strong sexual content, extreme violence, and much much more. Do not read if anything above makes you uneasy. You have been warned.

 

Chapter 1: Amateur Night

 

“No Susan, don’t just stare at it, eat it. Does her pussy look like some f*cking painting Monet did?” Alex stood there on stage looking at the three on the bed. Two women, one man, waiting for his instructions. “Look, just eat her out while he nails you from behind, alright?” He turns to the man who is lying on his side and looking at Susan’s ass. “This is the climax scene, so don’t f*ck up.” Alex walks behind the camera and sets it up. “Alright, positions.” He looks over at the girls. “Also, Allison, do you mind if you fake an orgasm mid way? I think it would go fantastic with Jon coming.”

 

The red light on the camera glowed a steady red and the three began to work. Alex panned around the room as Jon had his way with Susan who had her way with Allison. Jon’s sweat slowly fell down his skin as his rhythm got faster and faster. Susan matching his. Alex went in for a close-up and got a shot of Allison squirting Susan in the face. Susan contorted her face as the clear liquid kept on pouring on her face, on her lips. Jon kept plowing, building up his climax.

 

“I’m gonna come!” Jon yelled as he pulled out of Susan’s ass. Susan stopped eating out Allison and quickly crawled over to Jon. She started to suck on his dick and massage it. He moaned and groaned the faster she stroked it. Allison recovered from her actual orgasm and managed to crawl over right when Jon came, nailing both of them in the face.

 

Alex stood there and zoomed up onto Allison and Susan’s faces. They both smiled at the camera and he shut it off.

 

“That was great. All three of you.” He looks at Allison. “And thanks to you, now I got to go get new sheets. I said a fake orgasm! Not a f*cking real one. You know what? You’re buying me the new sheets.”

 

“I’m so sorry Alex, I just couldn’t help it.” She whimpered, looking back at the puddle on the bed.

 

“Yeah? Sorry ain’t gonna get those stains out. The money is coming out of your paycheck.”

 

Susan speaks up on behalf of Allison. “Hey, you can’t treat us like we’re f*cking animals. You have to learn to treat us like humans!”

 

Alex leans down and smiles. He grabs her by the hair and pulls her close to his face. “Look, I’ll treat you how I want. I’m in charge, and as far as everyone else is concerned, all you are is a piece of meat. People download these movies just to f*cking jerk off. They don’t care how I treat you, as long as they are satisfied with this week’s new video.” He throws her on the bed. “Now all of you take a f*cking shower.”

 

Jon stares at him and finally speaks up. “Look, you can’t do that. Just because the audience doesn’t care, doesn’t mean you treat us like sh*t.”

 

Alex turns around and looks him in the eye. He sets the camera down on the nearby counter and walks over. “What did you f*cking say? I didn’t hear you?”

 

“You can’t keep treating us like this Alex. One day, you’re going to go to far and we’re going to leave you. And then what?”

 

Alex glares at him and punches him across the face. A crack and blood flies across the bed, landing on Allison and Susan. “Watch your mouth. Or next time you won’t have a face.” Alex walks back over to the counter and grabs the camera. He leaves the room with Susan crying, Allison in shock from the blood, and Jon with a broken nose. Just a regular day for Alex Ramirez.

 

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As Alex walked home, the camera swinging in hand, he tries to wonder why it’s taking so long. Taking so long to make it big. His only dream was to be known by every porn director. Now, he’s stuck doing amateur porn and selling to local shops. Now, even that isn’t making as much money as it used to. Now, it’s just to practice the skill. He walks down the cold, dark street. The lone lamp on the street glows bright. Alex sees a poster flapping on it and walks over. The lamp almost blinds him when he reaches and rips it off the post.

 

“Amateur Porn Night. Want to make it big? Make a one scene porno and submit. This is your one chance! Location: Downtown Convention Center. Time: Midnight. Be there on time.” Alex crumbles the poster and tosses it into the street. A chilly breeze blows by, causing him to shiver. He looks up at the moon, glowing in the sky as bright as the lamp. Maybe this was his first chance.

 

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Alex awoke to his phone ringing. He slowly sat up and rubbed his eyes, “Screwing You on the Beach at Night” blaring out of his phone. He reaches over groggily and flips it open. The voice is booming on the other end, kind of like you’d think of God’s.

 

“Do you know what time it is?!” The voice was overflowing with enthusiasm.

 

“What time is it?” Alex yawned and stared at himself in the mirror across the room; scruffy, black hair covering his forehead, his small white tank top hugging his muscular body, his torn jeans barely wearable.

 

“It’s wake up time! Jon Carson sends his regards! This has been 109.7 Wake-Up call!” The line goes dead immediately. Alex flips the phone shut and stands up. He walks over to his window and yanks open the shades, the sun blinding him. He looked at his digital clock. 12:35. The five was flickering. Alex went over and banged it with his fist, the five disappearing.

 

After finally getting dressed and ready, Alex found himself sitting in the kitchen, eating micro waved, left over chicken wings while drinking lukewarm water. When he finished, he tossed the plate into the sink along with all his other dirty dishes that have been sitting there for weeks. He grabs his brown polyester jacket and camera, throwing the jacket on as he walks out of his apartment complex. His camera swings in hand as he strolls down the street, to his studio.

 

Upon his arrival at the rundown studio, he is greeted by his only three employees, Jon, Susan, and Allison. Jon has a grin on his face when Alex walks in.

 

“What the f*ck are you smiling at?” Alex tosses the camera onto a nearby chair and takes a seat in it.

 

“Did you get the call?” He could barely hold in the laughter.

 

“Yeah, very f*cking funny. Was that someway of getting back at me? Calling me at twelve thirty down here?”

 

“Well, no…”

 

Alex stands up and looks at Jon. “Then what the f*ck am I doing here at twelve thirty? I should be sleeping. But no, I’m here. What’s so god damn important?!”

 

“Well, me and the girls found something that should be interesting.” Jon pulls out a crumpled piece of paper. “We found this rolling around the street. We thought you would be interested.”

 

Alex grabs the piece of paper and opens it up. It was the same poster he had seen the night before. “I saw this. I thought it was interesting, but I don’t think you guys would do it.”

 

“Hey, if it’s a shot at the big times, we’re willing to do it. Right ladies?” Allison and Susan nod in unison. “See?”

 

“Alright. We can start this tomorrow?” Alex re-balled up the paper and tossed it into the nearby trash bin.

 

“No way. We have to do it now. It’s midnight, tonight! We got to film, edit, and finalize it today!”

 

Alex laughs for a bit then notices Jon is serious. “Are you f*cking serious? You expect me to film a f*cking scene today?!”

 

“Hey, don’t worry. We’ll try our best to nail it in the first takes.” Jon folds his arms and stares Alex in the eyes.

 

Alex returns his gaze. “You’re actually serious?” He smacks his lips and looks at his camera. “Fine, we’re doing it here. Right now. One take.” He grabs the camera and pulls out the tape inside. He reaches into his pocket and places a clean one inside. “The premise? Jon, you talk Allison, who is a virgin school girl, into saying you should be her first. Halfway through the blow job, Susan you walk in as Jon’s sister. Then you join in. Got it?” He looks at them in the faces. “Alright.” He takes a seat across the sofa and turns the camera on. “Rolling…”

 

Jon is sitting on the sofa with Allison sitting next to him, she’s wearing a short mini-skirt and a tube top. Her long, blonde hair goes down to her mid back. Contrasting to Jon’s black hair, slicked to one side. “Come on baby, don’t you love me?”

 

Allison scoots over a little. “I don’t know baby. I don’t want to jump to anything to quickly. I want to take things slow.”

 

“Baby, you know I would never do anything to ruin this relationship.” He leans over and plants a kiss on her lip. She pulls away then looks him in the eyes. She returns the kiss with more passion.

 

“I love you so much…” She pushes Jon onto his back and starts making out with him. Jon’s hands were groping all around her. Grabbing handfuls of her ass and massaging the muscles.

 

She slowly unbuttons Jon’s shirt, revealing his toned chest and kisses her way down, reaching his belt. She unbuckles it and pulls it off. Jon moans as she reaches down into his pants and starts stroking his massive member.

 

“Baby, I love you so much.” He goes down and plants a kiss on her lips. She pulls off his pants and underwear, his dick semi-flaccid. She takes it in both her hands and works it until it is fully stiff. She sticks the tip of the head in her mouth, Jon moaning in pleasure. She then takes more and more, until she is halfway down and can not take anymore. As she works it and he continues his bellows of pleasure, Susan walks in from off screen.

 

“What is going on brother?!” She looks at Allison in a fake surprised tone.

 

“Oh! Sis! Why didn’t you say you were coming over?!”

 

A grin slowly emerges across Susan’s face. “Because I was hoping you were doing this with your girl…” She goes down to Jon’s dick and takes it from Allison and starts sucking him off. They take turns until Jon grunts and shoots a load onto their face.

 

“Oh! Sis! I’ve always dreamed of this!” He looks down into her eyes.

 

“Me too bro, me too.” She slowly climbs on top of him. “You know what else I’ve always dreamed of?” She slowly reaches down and pulls off her shorts and panties, revealing her neatly trimmed bush. “f*cking my own brother…” She hovers over his dick and slowly lowers herself onto it. She moans, along with him and she starts riding.

 

Allison crawls over to Jon’s face and starts to make out with him while Susan quickens her pace. After five minutes, Susan starts to spasm as she comes all over him. She stops and lies down on him, looking at Allison. “Has this bitch even had her cherry popped?” Allison slowly shakes her head pouting. A sadistic smile sweeps across Susan’s face and she gets off Jon. “Your turn then…”

 

Allison climbed on and pretended to struggle. When she lowered herself completely, she feigned pain and moaned in ecstasy. “I never dreamed it would feel this good.” She quickened her pace and Jon started to sweat all over. Susan ran her tongue all along his body, licking up his sweat.

 

“I’m going to come!” He yelled. He pulled out of Allison. She leaned over and put her mouth right over his dick. He shot his load right into her mouth and she swallowed every last drop.

 

Alex spun his finger in circles, signaling to wrap it up. Both the girls smiled at Jon, and Alex shut the camera off. “That was great! I’m not sure it will win, but we got a chance!” He stands up and looks at them lying on the couch. “You guys better wash up. If we’re going to submit this, then we all better be looking our best.” He winks and heads out the door.

 

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Alex is standing outside the convention center in a cheap navy blue suit. He looks at his watch then looks around. 11:54. After five more minutes he sees a Pinto beater pull up. Allison, Jon, and Susan all step out of it, sweating. “Damnit! I told you to all look nice! Now you look like a bunch of sweaty pornstars!”

 

“Dude, then buy us a better car with air conditioning.” Jon said nonchalantly. He walked past Alex with Susan and Allison arm in arm. Alex sighed and followed them into the convention center.

 

The music in the center was one decibel to loud. You could feel the earwax in your ears melting. You couldn’t hear anyone talking, yelling, or screaming. The strobe effect was as annoying as the techno/trance music playing. You could barely see half the time because the only lights were multiple streams in red, blue, yellow and green.

 

Alex caught up to them and mouthed ‘follow me’. He lead them through the middle of the convention center and closer to the submissions booth. The music got louder and the lights, brighter the closer they got. When he got to the booth, he passed them a VHS and the man took it. Alex could see him mouth ‘name’ and Alex mouthed ‘Alex Ramirez’. The man nodded and Alex went back into the crowd with his group.

 

They must have danced for two or three hours, because that’s what it seemed like. The music faded and it was the first time Alex noticed a huge stage at the other side of the center. A huge screen scrolled down, the one’s you would find in movie theaters, and a bright spotlight hit it. A man stood there with a microphone.

 

“Welcome to the tenth annual Amateur Porn Convention. Today we will be choosing one lucky group to be made into big time porn stars! We have collected over fifty submissions and only the best five have been chosen! Those five will be shown on this screen behind me, and you will all choose who becomes famous. Let the show begin!” The spotlight flashed off and the screen lit up.

 

The first movie wasn’t Alex’s, the second and third weren’t either. The four of them had their fingers crossed it was the fourth one, but it was some hospital scene with a hot, redhead nurse banging the new intern on the operating table. The fifth video was a scene in a living room. A male who was having sex with his girlfriend, then his sister walked in. But the male didn’t resemble Jon, and the females looked nothing like Allison and Susan. Their idea was unoriginal. Plus, the fifth video had better acting.

 

Alex left the convention early. The others stayed until the party ended. Alex sat outside on the curb, taking long drags from a cigarette. A shadow passed behind him and he turned around and saw no one. He turned to his right and saw a man sitting next to him, wearing a tattered tee shirt and clean jeans. He smiled at Alex.

 

“Hey, you think I can have a smoke? Been a long day. Some asshole took an idea from me and his got chosen to be put on the big screen.” That sounded familiar.

 

“Yeah, sure.” Alex took out a cigarette and handed it to the man. The man pulled out a red Bic lighter and lit his cigarette, taking a long drag. “Nice lighter, I have the same one.”

 

“Always loved Bic. Never f*cked me over, ever.”

 

“That’s for sure.” Alex looks straight ahead wishing this was a professional director. The sun is starting to rise. “So, you want to make it big too?”

 

The man took another drag. “Who doesn’t? But I’m not worried. I still come to Am conventions just to check out what’s new.”

 

Alex looks at the man quizzically. “Didn’t you just say…?”

 

“I know what I said, but I lied.” The man took another drag and spit the smoke out in a perfect ring. “I’m actually a professional director. I drop by Amateur conventions to see what’s up and what’s new.”

 

Alex looks the man over. “Do you think, you know, you could help me out?”

 

The man takes one last drag and flicks the cigarette to his right. “You know, everyone asks me that, and I always give the same answer.”

 

“What’s the answer?”

 

He takes a deep breath and looks at Alex. “What would you do to become famous?”

 

“A question to answer a question? Oh come on.” Alex sighs and takes a drag of his cigarette.

 

“It’s not really that hard. If you answer it right, then I can help you. So far, nobody has.” The man chuckles and looks up at the disappearing stars.

 

Alex thinks for a moment before finally answering. “What wouldn’t I do…”

 

The man makes his fingers into a gun and makes a clicking noise. “Bingo. Drop by my place. It’s right down the street. It’s the only house down here.” The man stands up and starts walking down the street. A car screeches to a stop in front of him. He flips the car off and disappears into the morning rise.

 

“Alex? Alex where are you?!” Jon comes running out of the convention center, looking for him.

 

Alex stands up and starts walking to him. “I’m right here, are you blind?”

 

“Oh, my bad. Look, I’m sorry we didn’t win and we wasted your time.” Jon looked down at the ground ready to be bitten and torn apart by.

 

“Don’t worry about it.” He takes one last drag of his cigarette and flicks it off. “I f*cking mean it, don’t worry about it.”

 

Note from the Author: Yeah I know, this is really long, but I'm moving away from short and sweet chapters, into long, detailed chapters that really pull you in. Leave comments and criticisms.

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It was a good intro chapter. I'll read along on GTAForums instead of the stuff you've already sent over msn; it's more fun that way, waiting a while to read each piece.

 

Some notes: If the music in the club was so loud that Alex had to mouth his own name to the guy handling the footage, the guy wouldn't of been able to hear Alex's name. The guy could of thought Alex said some other name like Robert Angelo. Also Alex's personality seemed to change from boarderline roidrage to nicest guy in the world with Jon. He punched him in the chops and the next day he was chummy with him happy.gif.

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repported

First things first, you actually misspelled 'reported', which made me take you a lot less seriously.

 

Second, I'd like you to read this: LINK

 

Most importantly, this part:

 

 

Posting replies such as "reported" is not only spam in itself, but ruins the chances of the topic getting back on track, and makes it difficult for the moderators to clean up threads and keep them on topic. Especially, do not quote the offending post as this simply makes the staff's job that much more time consuming.

 

Third, did you miss that gigantic red text that accompanied the story? Sure, the story was a bit graphic and perhaps overtly pornographic in nature (I came halfway so I stopped reading), but when there's a disclaimer that big it kinda waives your right to be a prude.

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yeh whatever i sent a detailed report to the moderators but iwas to f*cking lazy to send it out to you i mean im not going to oh yeh your story sucks donkeys cock piss of you know and anyway saying somethings bad aka This story has graphic images still doesnt mean its right.

 

If you film yourself raping an animal and send it over the internet does it make it right no even if you do warn people its still not right

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yeh whatever i sent a detailed report to the moderators but iwas to f*cking lazy to send it out to you i mean im not going to oh yeh your story sucks donkeys cock piss of you know and anyway saying somethings bad aka This story has graphic images still doesnt mean its right.

 

If you film yourself raping an animal and send it over the internet does it make it right no even if you do warn people its still not right

Dude, stop it. You obviously have something against Cubanwhip, cos you didn't report 'The Mis-adventures of Michael Hamburger', which was filled with dead animal rape, and cooking peoples' faces and eating them. This story is 10x less screwed up and vile than that story; this also has a plot, where as that story didn't.

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So because you disagree with it, it makes it wrong? You're what is wrong with the internet. Give a f*cking monkey a keyboard and all of a sudden it thinks its opinions are worth wasting our bandwidth on. Keep abusing the report system and keep posting like an idiot. You're not going to last a month here at this pace.

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tbh though i think the michael hamburgler storys were the best thing to come here even if they were weird and i liekd them but i didnt like this if its locked then i did the right thing if it isnt then i didnt

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dude i just did what was right dont get cross at me for it. Obviously someone isnt getting any

yes anuj definetly isnt getting any

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dude i just did what was right dont get cross at me for it. Obviously someone isnt getting any

yes anuj definetly isnt getting any

Here's where I make a "yer ma" joke.

 

And then ban you.

 

Goodbye!

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tbh though i think the michael hamburgler storys were the best thing to come here even if they were weird and i liekd them but i didnt like this if its locked then i did the right thing if it isnt then i didnt

Would you still like it if you knew I wrote it then just got someone else to post it? Because you obviously don't like me aswell as Cubanwhip.

 

Oh, sorry, you can't reply; you're banned.

 

Bring on the next chapter, bro! This story has like thirteen replies already now lol.

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Pure ownage.

Exactly. Where does he get the balls, seeing as he made that dreadful "Benny Speckle" story? This is at least in good taste.

 

Didn't get done with the story yet, but looks good from what I've read so far.

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anuj thank you for banning that asshole. I don’t even now wear to start with him.

 

But getting back on topic Cubanwhip this looks interesting. Good start to the story.

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Wicked! I like the mixture of the sex and violence and the premise of the story - it looks set to become quite dark - my favorite.

 

Update soon! tounge.gif

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bluenothing65 (or something) got banned. Pwned. I must admit, I feel sorry for him. I hate him for what he did in this topic but his stories were getting better and I thought in a year or so, if he was still here, he could do amazing stories up to the likes of Cubanwhip and TonyZimmzy. I guess that is not to be.........

I should make my own topic about him as I could talk for ages! (Joking, yet.)

Also, cubanwhip, I asked this in the topic it should be in, but can you give me a link to the REAL final chapter of The conclusion? I mean where you originally posted it.

The one that was two clicks away? Or someone else could give the link?

 

On topic, that is a f*cking sick story. But in my world (were everyone plays on MGS non-stop), that is a great thing. I like the sick idea of the story.

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Sorry for double post but, are you still writing this?

Seems kind of......dead  confused.gif

Just give Cubanwhip time. He will update it when he’s ready.

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Chapter 2: Alex Ramirez

 

Alex threw on a white tee shirt and a pair of baggy, dark faded jeans. He looked at himself in the mirror. His muscles were developing from when he worked out with his father. He finished looking at himself and ran downstairs to grab some breakfast.

 

When he got downstairs, he passed his father, his dick bouncing with each step he took. He walked into the kitchen, but once he stepped through the doorway, he bumped into his mother’s tits.

 

“Sorry.” He walked around her and grabbed a Pop-Tart. He quickly ripped apart the silver wrapping and broke one in half, stuffing it in his mouth.

 

“Honey, why do you always wear clothes?” His mother walked over and put her arm around him.

 

“You know why mom. I don’t want kids to make fun of me. I mean, it’s already bad enough that you drop me off at school naked, but I don’t need to be subjected to the humiliation I would be forced to deal with. Plus, I might be arrested for public indecency.” He swallowed the pop-tart and threw on his backpack.

 

“Well, alright honey. But can you keep the clothing to the minimum. Maybe shorts?” His mom pouted.

 

“Fine!” Alex rushed back upstairs and threw on a pair of shorts. He ran back downstairs, back into the kitchen. “There.”

 

“Much better.” She looks at the time on the microwave and gasps. “My! We’re going to be late!” She quickly grabs her car keys. “Come on.”

 

Alex followed his mother to the car and glanced around as the neighbors stared at them. Alex looked down at the ground and got into the car, averting his mom’s eyes.

 

“Oh honey, why do you always have to be embarrassed? God put us on this earth without clothes. Clothes were invented by self-conscious people who did not like their bodies.” She put her hand under his chin and lifted it up, forcing him to look into her eyes.

 

“Yeah, I know mom. You told me.”

 

His mom looks at his cheek and spots a smudge of a pop-tart. “Oh, you got something on your cheek.” She licks her finger and rubs it across the smudge. “Now, we don’t have time to play around, or you’ll be late. So we’ll do something extra after school.”

 

Alex sighs and looks away. “Fine.”

 

“Good!” His mom puts the car in reverse and pulls out of the driveway.

 

“Mom…don’t you find it weird that we’re the only family in town that are nudists and practice incest?” Alex looks out the window when he asks the question. The trees pass by in a single blur.

 

“Incest is such a nasty word Alex. It’s family time.”

 

“Whatever, don’t you find it weird? No one else in this town does it.”

 

His mom shifts in her seat and continues to look straight ahead. “Well, I have thought about it on occasions. I mean, yes, other people view it as odd and different, but when God put us on this earth, Adam and Eve were the only humans. When they reproduced, who do you think populated this planet? Their kids. Brothers and sisters.”

 

Alex sighed. “Yeah mom, yeah.”

 

“Cheer up. I’ll do something extra special today after school. Just hurry up walking home. I have to go get some groceries by four.” His mom slowed the car down and pulls up in front of the school.

 

“Alright.” Alex climbed out of the car and noticed half the school staring at him as he got out. He slammed the door shut and heard the window roll down.

 

“Give mom a kiss.” She leaned out the window and puckered her lips.

 

Alex leaned down and planted a peck on her lips and quickly looked away. “Love you mom…”

 

She noticed the school was staring and got the message. “Love you too. See you after school.” She pulled away from the school and now everyone had their eyes on Alex.

 

As Alex walked down the middle of the campus he heard random comments from different kids.

 

“Man, I wonder what his mom’s like?”

 

“I heard that, while he bangs his mom, his dad watches from a corner and jerks off.”

 

“Ew. For real?”

 

“Yeah, it’s f*cking sick.”

 

When Alex reached the front doors of the school, he saw the principal glaring at him. Alex averted her gaze and continued through the school, to his locker.

 

When he got to his locker, he saw a group of jocks standing ten feet away snickering when Alex approached the locker. Alex slowly twisted the lock and watched as the snickering got louder and more intense with each spin of the lock. When the lock finally clicked open, Alex pulled open the locker and a pile of porn fell out. All the porn was older women.

 

I Want to Come In Your Mom. MILFS with Big Tits. I f*cked Your Mom. My Best Friend’s Mom.

 

Alex grabbed a book from his locker and shut the door. By now, the whole hall was staring at him and the jocks had burst out into a fit of hysterical laughter. The principal saw Alex reaching down and picking up the DVDs. She walked over and saw Alex flushed red and the jocks laughing hysterically.

 

“Put those down. Come with me to my office.” Alex dropped the movies and followed her to the office. “Now, I know about your home life and what it must be like during school to be teased about it all the time.”

 

Alex was quite and looked around the office. The twenty something awards lined up on the wall behind her. “I know Principal Bateman.”

 

“Well, this is the fourth and final time I’m asking you. Please tell your parents to start wearing clothing outside the home, or at least when they are dropping you off. It is getting quite ridiculous.”

 

“I know, but they won’t listen to me. They’re too headstrong about this.” Alex was now looking down at his feet.

 

“Well, they better start or I’m going to have to take certain measurements.”

 

“I’ll try my best…”

 

“No. No more trying. Either you do it, or just stop coming to school. We can’t deal with this anymore.” She stared at Alex as he took a deep breath, and then released it after a few seconds. “Also, tone down the displays of public affection. You are dismissed.”

 

Alex got up and exited the office. A group of kids had huddled around the door and when Alex left he heard snickers from behind him. Mostly girls. Just another regular day in school for Alex Ramirez.

 

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Alex was walking down the campus. Everyone running to their cars, or parent’s cars, or buses. Alex started his walk home. As he walked, thoughts ran through his mind as to what his mom wanted to do with him. These were normal thoughts. He had them everyday before and after school.

 

The schedule went that his mom would give him a blow/hand job in the mornings, and he got to play around with her after school. Whenever he got an ‘A’ on a test, she would let him have sex with her. Whenever he got an ‘A’ on a semester he got to do whatever he wanted with her.

 

He had no idea what could be counted as ‘extra’ by his mom. He thought that, most likely, he would just be having sex with her, to make up for the fact that he hadn’t gotten a blow job that morning.

 

It was Tuesday after all.

 

When he finally got home, he found his mom resting on the sofa, watching a ‘Friends’ rerun. Alex closed the door and she jumped, startled. She spotted Alex and he saw a wave of relief wash over her. He placed his books on the coffee table and his mom walked over and pulled off his shirt.

 

“Mom, what was that something extra?”

 

His mom smiled and started to undo his shorts. “I’m gonna let you do what you’ve always wanted to do.”

 

“You’re gonna let me come inside you?” He started to get hard just at the thought.

 

His mom dragged him to the sofa and he plopped onto it. She took his dick in her mouth and made a muffled ‘yes’.

 

“But mom, aren’t you worried about…” He moaned as his mom licked the tip of his head. “About getting pregnant?”

 

His mom took his dick out of her mouth and started to stroke it. “Don’t worry about it. I can’t get pregnant anymore. I’m forty eight.” She put it back in her mouth and started to speed up.

 

“What about dad? When’s he going to get home?”

 

He takes her mouth off once and again and continues stroking it at a quicker rate. “Don’t worry. He’s working late today. Now, just relax, and let mommy take care of you.”

 

Alex leaned back into the leather sofa and let his mom take him to heaven. He closed his eyes and fell into a deep state of relaxation. Before he knew it, he felt his mom’s warm pussy stretching over his dick. He opened his eyes and saw his mom starting to ride him.

 

“Oh God mom…”

 

His mom moaned and groaned as she rode him. Alex grabbed her ass and helped in lifting her up and down. She leaned towards him and wrapped her arms around his neck and started to rub his mid-back. Alex could feel his mom’s breath brushing the side of his face.

 

“Deeper Alex…” She whispered in his ear. He then started to match her rises and drops. When she rose he dropped and when she dropped he rose, getting as deep a penetration as he could. His mom quickened the pace, and Alex mimicked.

 

After fifteen minutes of straight riding his mom started to yell as she climaxed. Alex felt her vaginal muscles contract and tighten their grip on him. He couldn’t take it anymore.

 

“Mom! I’m coming!”

 

“Shoot it Alex! Shoot it into me!” Alex could feel his mom’s muscles start milking out every drop of cum he was shooting. What seemed to last forever, ended in ten minutes. His mom slowed down her pace and eventually stopped. His mom leaned back and looked Alex in the eyes. Alex returned the gaze and gave a sly smile.

 

“That was the best one yet. Well, aside from that one time in Paris. Nothing will ever beat that.” His mom flipped the hair out of her face with one swing of her head.

 

“Of course mom, nothing will.” And this went on.

 

Alex never complained about his mom screwing him behind his dad’s back. He never complained about his mom being a nudist. He never really did care.

 

One week after the fourth and final warning from the principal, Alex ran away. He left his town, his parents. He went off to college. To start a semi-normal life. He never hated his parents. He never hated his mom. He just needed to get away and try to live a normal life. But that wasn’t going to happen, not for Alex Ramirez it wasn’t.

 

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A loud alarm rang. Alex sat straight up from his bed. He looked at his room mate who was putting on his clothes.

 

“Dude, turn it the f*ck off!” Alex screamed over the buzzing.

 

“Chill bro! It’s just the hangover.”

 

Alex fell back to a lying position when his roommate shut it off. “How much did I drink?”

 

“Dude, you drank like half the keg. You were f*cking crazy as hell. You were standing on the table, raging.” He finished buckling his belt and grabbed his backpack.

 

“Where are you heading off to so early Tony?” Alex was staring at the clock. “Its ten thirty in the morning!”

 

“I got an exam today. Can’t afford to fail it.” He looks at Alex lying awkwardly on the bed. One arm thrown across his chest and a leg hanging off the side. “What are doing today?”

 

“The usual.” Alex finally sits up and reaches for his crumbled pack of Marlboro cigarettes. “Going to find some chick, bang her, video tape it, and jerk off to it later.” He lights the cigarette and takes a long drag.

 

“Well, make sure she’s blonde this time. You got this thing with red heads. You have to realize other people watch it.”

 

Alex smiles and chuckles. “Alright. Your choice. Find a girl and bring me the name.”

 

“Really? You think you’re that good?” Laughs. “Alright. I’ll be back later.” Tony leaves the room, Alex sitting up on the bed, smoking.

 

“Well, time to start my day.” Alex gets up and throws on a pair of tattered jeans and a messy white shirt. He walks out of his dorm and locks the door behind himself. He walks down the hall, smoking and making faces at the people making disgusted faces at him.

 

While walking down the dorm’s main staircase, a professor stops him.

 

“What are doing? You can’t smoke in here?!”

 

Alex takes a long drag and blows a cloud of smoke in her face. “Blow me, bitch.” He takes one last drag of it and flicks it into the air.

 

“What did you just say young man?!” She was astonished. She had never been talked to like that.

 

“I said blow me, bitch.” Alex laughs and continues walking out of the dorm. He casually walks down the steps leading up to the dorm and starts walking around the campus. He walks by the bulletin board and notices a pink flyer catches his eye.

 

“Searching for: a pornstar. If interested, meet in boy’s dorm. Room 512.” Alex laughs and rips off the flyer. He crumbles it in his hand and tosses it into the trashcan.

 

“Well, I could always tryout. What’s the worst they can say? Hell yes?” Laughs and turns around, heading back to the boy’s dorm.

 

Alex approaches room 512 and knocks on the door. A girl opens the door and giggles. “You see the flyer?”

 

“Yeah. I was guessing a chick picked hot pink for a flyer. Can I come in?”

 

She giggled and let Alex in. It was her and another guy sitting in the room. The guy turns around from the computer and looks Alex over. “Nope.”

 

“What? What do you mean no?”

 

The guy stands up and walks over. “No is no. We don’t want you. We need an average looking guy. We’re trying to make a realistic porno. Now get the f*ck out.” The guy points at the door.

 

“Oh! But Jon! We don’t have to be that realistic! He’s okay. He’s the only person to actually respond.” The girl walks over to Alex. “My name’s Susan.”

 

“Alex, and I’m not interested.” He looks at Jon. “Not anymore…” Alex opens the door and leaves. Halfway down the hall, he hears the girl.

 

“Alex! How about you be director?” Alex turned around and looked at Susan. “Fine, but if you want a successful porno, you’re going to need another chick.” He continued walking down the hall. “I’ll be right back.”

 

Alex made his way back to his dorm and found a name scribbled across the white board on his door.

 

Allison Byran.

 

Alex smiled and wrote the name down on his hand. He made his way to the library and looked in last year’s yearbook for the name.

 

“Allison…Byran…Allison…” He runs his finger up and down the page. “There we go! A nice blonde chick. Not red head, but that’s okay.” He tears out the picture of her and pockets it. “Now, how the hell am I going to find this chick?”

 

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Alex is walking down the boy’s dorm, dragging Allison along. She’s wearing a blue cheerleading uniform and holding one pom-pom. She screams and tries to get Alex to let go. Doors fly open as Alex walks down to room 512. He finally gets there and knocks hard three times. The door opens and Jon is staring at him.

 

“What the f*ck is this?”

 

“Say hello to your new star. Jon, Allison. Allison, Jon.” Alex throws her in and shuts the door behind him. “Now, Allison, are you a virgin?”

 

“What?!” Allison screams staring at Alex and Jon. “I’m not telling you! You’re a creep!”

 

Alex walks over and grabs her hair, and pulls it back, also pulling her head back making her look straight up. “Well, we’re making a porno, and we don’t want to make a mess. Yes or no?”

 

“Porno?!” Allison screamed. “Help! Help me!”

 

“Shut up!” Susan stands up and walks over. “Alex what is this? Did you just grab some cheerleader and expect her to participate?”

 

Alex laughs and takes out a video tape. “Well, I was thinking we could just blackmail her.” He walks over to the TV and sticks in the tape. “You see, I don’t really know the names of the people I videotape. I just tape and screw.” The TV flickers on and it shows Alex violently screwing Allison. “Now…” Alex walks over to Allison and holds her by the chin. “You can either participate, or I am going to send your parents this video of you screwing me freshman year. What is it?”

 

Allison swallowed hard and looked at the TV. “Fine, I’ll play your little game.”

 

A perverse smile sweeps across Alex’s face. “Well, let’s get this show on the road.” He picks up Jon’s camera. “The premise? Jon is a college student who needs help in French. Susan and Allison, you’re both his tutors. I think you get where I’m going…” Alex takes a seat in a chair and sits across the room, facing the bed. “Rolling…”

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O...M...G...

 

lol.gif I couldn't stop laughing!

 

That was gross in a hysterical yet disturbing kind of way. I never realized just how f*cked up Alex was till now.

 

Most wicked stuff, my friend!

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Wow, dude. Instant message me on MSN when you're about to update, this is an amazing story. You have talent, and I love reading it.

I just read the chapter twice, and it's just.. Amazing.

 

Alex is pretty f*cked up.

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Too much dialogue, and most of the description is simplistic. Pretty much all of the narrative is built from dictating point after point to the reader, without any true flow - most paragraphs seem to be listlike.

 

Usually I'd back this up with multiple quotes and whatnot, but I just don't have the time.

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