xNamexTakenx Posted September 19, 2007 Share Posted September 19, 2007 (edited) Chapter 1: The Rise of the Cartel After the events of GTA 3, Liberty City was left disastrous. The Cartel had devastating numbers of dead due to the one known as Claude Speed. As Claude is in paradise, the Columbian Cartel are trying to grow their numbers, in secret. The new leader is Pablo. His assistant is Jose. They were just finishing their lunch in Pike Creek, when Pablo got a phone call. "Yes? Okay, this is the deal. We've called a meeting, so meet us at the park in Wichita Gardens. Right," Pablo hung up. "Let's go." They went outside and a Cartel Cruiser pulled up to them. It was being driven by a Cartel bodyguard. They got in. After a while, they got to the park. As they were waiting, Pablo lit a cigarette. Just then, a Yardie Lobo pulls up. Two Yardies get out. A bodyguard and King Courtney himself. "Hello, my friend. You wanted to see me?" said King Courtney to Pablo. Now, the Yardies and Columbian Cartel have been friends for a very long time. "Here's the deal. I need some men while we recover from the horrible incident down at the Cochrane Dam. Will you be able to supply me?" asked Pablo. "For you, sir, Anything. But, I am asking a fee." stated King Courtney. "How much?" asked Jose. "About $1,500." said King Courtney. "Done," said Pablo. They continued their talk when all of a sudden the Cartel Cruiser blew up in flames! The explosion rocked all of Shoreside Vale and the Cartel bodyguard was caught in the blow of the explosion, his limbs flying everywhere. Right where his head fell, were three Purple Nines. "Wuddup, bitchez!?!" Cried the Nine who seemed to be the leader He put down the rocket launcher he was holding and loaded his MAC-10. "You in for a beating! Kill them!" He sent the two Nines after them. One was carrying a simple machete, while the other, an uzi. Jose took out his 9mm and cut down the Nine with the machete, easily. The other Nine fired his uzi directly at the Yardie bodyguard and his brains were all over the Yardie Lobo. But, nobody saw King Courtney get on the other side of the Lobo, the driver's side. "Die, bitch!" cried Pablo and fired his colt .45 at the other Purple Nine. he fell to the floor clutching his chest. "This one's for the Cartel." And with that, he fired another bullet deep in the Nine's head. "f*ck you!" King Courtney dropped his keys and turned around. The last Hood was pointing his MAC-10 at him. "Stay out of our territory, ya hear!" The bullets fired across the Yardie leader's chest. "Haha, f*ck-" his words were cut short because of the bullet that went through his back and out the other side. He let out a gasp, and fell to the floor, blood everywhere. There, Pablo and Jose were standing. "Oh, sh*t!" Yelled Jose. "Get an ambulance, quick!" demanded Pablo. Jose dialed the number for the paramedics. The sirens were growing ever louder, and the Cartel leader left in the Yardie Lobo, leaving King Courtney die... Edited September 21, 2007 by xNamexTakenx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. PA Posted September 20, 2007 Share Posted September 20, 2007 A real nice beginning, middle, and end. You do know how to put your writing skills to the test. It is nice to have a little twist to it too. Finish up what you were going to write about King Courtney's incident so we can read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNamexTakenx Posted September 20, 2007 Author Share Posted September 20, 2007 (edited) Chapter 2: The Return of the King A few months later, it was time for King Courtney's dismissal from the hospital. He had been in there a long time. He was so close to death, but the top doctors in all of Liberty City managed to save him. He got outside and a Yardie Lobo picked him up. "Yo mon, take me to da crib," said King Courtney to the driver. "No problem. I'm so glad you made it," said the driver. After a while, they got to Newport, to a building near the multi-story garage parking. They got out of the car and went in. King Courtney was greatly greeted by his fellow Yardie clan. The last man to meet him was Pablo. "My friend!" Cried Pablo. They embraced each other. "I'm so glad you made it." "It was all thanks to you, mon!" King Courtney was talking about how Pablo and the Cartel paid all the money and expenses for his medical bills. It was something good, considering that they left him to die. "Now, let's get down to business." They took a seat. "We are willing to help you win this war against the f*cking Southside Hoods. We haven't been involved, yet. But, your Yardie members have been in gang fights all over Staunton Island. The death toll is in great numbers. We must do something!" Explained Pablo. "And that, we will. I want to go to war as much as you do. Who's doing the major damage?" Asked King Courtney. "Mostly, D-Ice and the Red Jacks. However, the Nines have been involved, too." Said Pablo. "I see. Where is your fellow friend?" Asked King Courtney. "He's out on an errand. He shall be back soon." Said Pablo. They were talking about Pablo's assistant, Jose. "We shall hold the drug business and try to finish these bastard Hoods once and for all!" "Yes, I agree." And with that, he left. The meeting was adjourned. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Back in Shoreside Vale, in a building in Wichita Gardens... D-Ice was having a meeting, and brought together the top leaders of the Purple Nines and the Red Jacks. "My homies! We have been at war with each other for a long time. I think we should hold it off, for a while." Exclaimed D-Ice. "Yea, yo!" Answered one of the Purple Nines. "But, even if we team up together, we are no match for the Yardies!" "Shut the f*ck up! We can kill those Jamaican bastards. We are beating them, so far." Said one of the Red Jacks. "I heard that King Courtney is back. He's in full power and he's leading the Yardies!" Said a Purple Nine. "What the f*ck! How is that possible?!? He was dead!" Said D-Ice. "f*ck! If he's back, then we'll have to deal with the Columbian Cartel, too. They're good friends." Said another Red Jack. "But, they're weak. They'll be easily defeated." Said a Purple Nine. The conversation was a heated one. They kept on arguing. But, no one heard Jose come up the stairs. He pulled out a 9mm. He opened the door a little, to get a good shot at the Southside Hoods leader. Luckily, a Hood heard, and bang! The bullet from his colt .45 hit him on his shoulder. Jose's whole arm went numb and he fell to the floor, dizzy. His gun clattered against the cold, hard floor and everyone jumped up at once, guns at the ready. "f*cking hell! Tie this mothaf*cka up. Make sure he never gets away. I want him hostage, so that the Cartels could maybe have a reason to surrender." Said D-Ice. "But, dawg-" Tried to say a Nine. "f*ck you! I'll do whatever I want. Send a message to the Cartel. Make them suffer!" Replied D-Ice. All of a sudden, they all jumped at the sound of an explosion outside. They all ran outside, to find a souped-up Hoods Rumpo XL in flames! "Oh, ma car! Ma car! Those f*ckers are in for it now!" And so it was all out war with the Southside Hoods on one side, and the Cartel and the Yardies on the other. Edited September 21, 2007 by xNamexTakenx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluenothing65 Posted September 21, 2007 Share Posted September 21, 2007 very good although i think there are enough red jack and 9s and yardie fanfics out there but yeh good stuff Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNamexTakenx Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 Yeah. Well, I just wanted to make some stories of the minor characters of Liberty City. There'll be more. It'll get better! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNamexTakenx Posted September 21, 2007 Author Share Posted September 21, 2007 Chapter 3: The Escape from Wichita Gardens "f*ck!" Pablo just found out about the news of Jose. He's furious! "I want those bastards dead!" "Yes, sir," answered a Cartel bodyguard. "What do you suggest we do?" "Well, let's go kill those bastards," replied Pablo angrily. "I want the finest soldiers. I want to infiltrate the Hoods turf. And I want D-Ice dead!" There were about 3 Cartel Cruisers cruisin' they're way through Fort Staunton. They crossed into Newport and headed toward the Yardie headquarters. One of the Cartel bodyguards got out and opened the door for Pablo. They went in together... "What is it! What do you want?" Asked the Yardie lookout man. "I wish to see King Courtney," said Pablo. "Tell him Pablo is here to see him." The Yardie left, and a few minutes later, the door opened. They were escorted to King Courtney. He was sitting at his desk, snorting some cocain. "Hey, mon! What is going on?" He said. "I want to kill those Hoods. Now!" Demanded Pablo. "Yes, of course you do. I just heard the news," explained King Courtney. "Let's go!" Everyone saw the 3 Cartel Cruisers and 3 Yardie Lobos crossing the Shoreside Vale lift bridge. That's when it started to rain. They got to the heart of Wichita Gardens and got out. Their vehicles were used as cover. "D-Ice!" Yelled King Courtney. "Stop being a bloody coward and show yourself!" 10 Purple Nines got out of the building. 2 of them were easily cut down by the AK-47s the Cartel used. The rest found cover behind a stone gate. The Nines got out their uzis and started shooting the Cruisers. They just bounced off the bullet-proof coating. A really brave Cartel ran and started letting hell loose! He killed 3 Nines in a matter of seconds. Until he was cut down by their uzis. The Yardies were startled as they turned around and found 5 Red Jacks with their guns at the ready. "What up, y'all!?" Teased one of the Jacks. "Ready for an ass-whooping?" "Pablo! Pablo!" Whispered King Courtney to Pablo. "Get Jose! We'll take care of these cockroaches!" The Cartel ran toward the building with Pablo in the middle. One Cartel was shot down by the Nines. The next second, all the Nines' blood was all over the wet, mucky floor. That's when the Cartel ran inside. They killed everyone in their path... Back outside, the Yardies were all being shot down the the five Red Jacks. They were caught off guard, and didn't even get a chance to lift their weapons. All were dead except for King Courtney. He got in the closest Lobo and drove away. "Haha!" Laughed all the Jacks. "Wussy!" King Courtney got away once again. Back inside, there were only 3 Cartel and Pablo left. They found Jose, but they were having trouble getting him out of there. He couldn't walk because he has been beaten up, pretty bad. At last, they found their way out. They opened the door, but a riddle of gunfire came out. "f*ck you, assholes!" Yelled D-Ice behind them. He was holding an M4. "Die, motherf*ckers, die!" Two Cartels were killed and even Jose was shot to death. "NO!" Yelled Pablo. He tried to get Jose out, but it was no use. "No, boss," said the last standing Cartel. "Leave him. He's dead!" They got out and in a Cartel Cruiser and drove away. I will have my vengeance, Jose, thought Pablo. I swear to you. "I will have my vengeance!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluenothing65 Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 i really like your work very original in a way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNamexTakenx Posted September 22, 2007 Author Share Posted September 22, 2007 Chapter 4: D-Ice Was "Iced" "That bastard! Yelled Pablo. "I f*cking hate him!" "What's the matter, boss? Asked one of the Cartel. "Don't you know?" Replied Pablo. "King Courtney is a coward! He ran away and didn't even help. I'm not going to help him anymore." "Yes, sir," Said the Cartel. "What do we do?" "I want a truce with D-Ice," replied Pablo. "We're not going to war, anymore. I want to our gang to be a secret, while we rise to the top. Get me a meeting with D-Ice" And all the Cartel went to work, straight away. They know they're boss' anger. They don't want to argue with him at all. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ D-Ice was smoking a joint when a Red Jack burst into his room. "Boss!" Demanded the Jack. "Boss!" "What the f*ck do you want!?!" Replied D-Ice, angrily. "It's the Cartel," explained the Jack. "They want a truce." A few hours later, the meeting was planned. The Southside Hoods and the Columbian Cartel were all there. "Let's end this war, D-Ice," said Pablo. "Yes, I agree," agreed D-Ice. "But, why, may I ask?" "Because," started Pablo. "I officially hate King Courtney. I want nothing to do with him, anymore. He's a traitor! I should've never had made an ally with him." "Okay," said D-Ice. "I want no war, with you. I won't even ask you to go to war with me, against the Yardies. Let's just stay out of each other's turf, and stop fighting!" "Very well then." And the meeting was adjourned. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------ A few days later, King Courtney knew about the truce. But, he didn't want to start any bullsh*t with the Cartel. He hired his most elite men for the team. There were 4 Yardie Lobos. It was 1.00 AM. They pulled up to a house, where there was a party going on, in Wichita Gardens. That was then, when D-Ice was leaving. Him and his 2 Purple Nine bodyguards didn't even see the Lobos. Then it happened. The Yardie passenger held his uzi at the ready and performed a drive-by. D-Ice chest was riddled with gunfire. He fell to the floor, immediately dead. A whole bunch of Purple Nines and Red Jacks ran after the cars, but three of the Lobos got away. They all shot at the last one, puncturing all four tires. They ran up to them, and pulled out the 4 Yardies in the car. They executed them, with 2 shots each, to the head. Then, they burned the car. That was it for the Southside Hoods. They were leaderless, and wouldn't bother the Yardies for a long time. King Courtney was triumphant! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bluenothing65 Posted September 22, 2007 Share Posted September 22, 2007 very good ending Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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