Bluenothing65 Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 benny speckle woke up in his apartment . he looked down and notcied the lingering of an erection hmmmmmm he thought this appears to be a problem now as most normal ppl wen we hav an erection we let it be or engage in masturbation however benny speckle is not normal he walked to his smallish bathroom and looked at the shower cubicle the curtains were closed "its play time" he said smirking there was a whimper from inside and benny threw open the curtains to reveal a small beaten boy with yesterdays rape scabs an torture marks still ripe around his bottom and genitals "hello jimmy did you sleep well i sure did" the boy whimpered "its playtime" crowed benny The boy let a low moan as benny cupped his hands harmfully around the boys testicles "what shall we play hmmmm i wonder" benny chuckled as he hurt the boy even more " i know... well play your favourite game" he let out a laugh before throwing jimmy on the floor and raping him ........................................................ The next day ........................................................ benny drove his car to macs car crushing yard an stopped outside the battered booth "Yo Ben wot u got for me today" "some porr little 8 year old" croaked benny as he lit himself a battered joint now before i continue the story you need to know something Mac who owns the carcrushing yard is a necrophiliac which is someone who sleeps with the dead now what happens is our main character benny, lures little kids into his lair has his fun kills them then gives the bodys ot mac for him to do what he wishes ok good now back to the story "k where is he " said Mac "in the trunk" said benny as he took a long draw on the joint That was when it happened there was a screech of tires an mac turned round to see a battered volkswagen come spinning to a top in the yard out got a man who we can only describe as a living fungus half his face had spots an serious internal growths lurching out the other well that had a congeling mole "Mac you no good f*ck" he spat the wors out and with that drew a machete to be continued please give me feedback......... blue xxx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 No. Just, no. You're wrong. You wrong, wrong man. Reported. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
xNamexTakenx Posted September 12, 2007 Share Posted September 12, 2007 Wow. That was discusting. I must say, I am a big fan of yours. But, this one was gross! What's up with a pedophile? I agree with TonyZimmzy, that is wrong. However, I'd like to know the ending to this story just to see what happened. Anyway, don't let me down again, okay? I'm a fan of your fan-fic and I'd prefer to read brutal violence rather than child porn lol . Just to let you know. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TubbyJ Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 No. Just, no. You're wrong. You wrong, wrong man. Reported. Agreed. What the hell, man? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HawaiianHardHitter Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 No. Just, no. You're wrong. You wrong, wrong man. Reported. Agreed. What the hell, man? Braddah, you have one sick mind.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silviodante Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 This story is sick and disgusting. I despise pedophiles. I mean how could someone get off on a little kid? If you tried to be funny, you failed. You need to be reported. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 Plot wise, unique. It could have worked well if proper grammar was used and more detail. Of course, it's hard to be serious in this thread so. Yeah it did suck balls. tl;dr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silvermanblue Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 WTF!!!??? GROSS!!!! But seriously you need to work on picking you subject matter. I mean I can see that your are trying to be edgy, but in this case you took it a little to far. Try one like the robber or something. Leone Family Mafia ПРОПАГАНДА.ИНЦ, СИЛВЕРМАНБЛУЕ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryunday Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 This is plain wrong. Reported. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gta phil gta Posted September 13, 2007 Share Posted September 13, 2007 Controversial and graphic plots can be fine, if executed in the correct way. This is just distasteful. No. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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