The story of hell.

[poikly]

The Story Of Hell

''Can you solve the James Fiught case?

 

 

 

James Fiught is a man who helps the police. He is trying to solve a case about someone who shot a picture of James. The police think James assasinated him. James must find out who the killer but as he does, his life gets turned round as mutants, criminals and his own mind attack him.

 

Poikly, the creator of 'The Continue of GTA3', is back in his third story about how a man goes from pedestrian to the most wanted criminal.

 

Coming 31/8/07, 12:30 PM (British time.)

 

Edited October 13, 2007 by poikly

[poikly]

The highly anticipated *cough* story is here!

 

Prolouge

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James Fiught was looking outside his window. He now owned the city of Liverpool,UK. He heard a knock at the door.

''Come in!'' James said. A man holding a box walked up to James.

''I am here to fix the fridge.'' The man said.

''I didnt order a plumber. Well, it has been acting up. I suppose you can fix it.'' James said smiling. The man started working. James had his back turned and took out his wallet. ''How much for it then?'' James turned round to see the man aiming a gun at James' head. The man fired. James fell to the floor, blood pouring out his head. The man walked to the door. James was about to die and then.....he died. James Fiught was murdered.

*Screen fades out the window to the moon and then comes back out but on a road.*

 

Poikly presents an original idea by poikly.

 

 

The Story Of Hell.

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CHAPTER 1: The death

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1 month earlier.

 

A car sped right past houses with another car following it. The car chasing the other car, was driven by James Fiught. The man getting chased had caused so much trouble. James took out a pistol and shot the cars tires. The car skidded of the road, whacked through a gate and fell down a mountain. James went down the mountain to look. The man had died and police came

to James.

''Another criminal down, eh James? You should join the police. You would make a great police officer.'' One of the police said.

''Nah, I just like to help out.'' James answered before walking home. A man watched all what happened through his curtain and shut the curtain. He frowned and looked at a picture of James.

''I hate you! You are not an officer! Dont help out!'' The man angrily said. He took out a gun and started firing at the picture. The man went to bed.

 

The next morning, the man hadn't woken up. The man was mysteriously killed. Police investigated what had happened before many coming to James' house.

''Mr. Fiught, you are coming with us.'' One of them said. They took him to the police station and started questioning him.

''Look, I didnt do it. I was in Mcdonalds at the time.'' James said.

''Well why did the man shoot a picture of you before he died?'' An officer said.

''I dont know!''

''Officers, put this guy in jail!'' The police grabbed James and put him in the cell.

''I didnt do it!'' James said as he got took into a cell. James was alone. He was in a cell and had to break out. He had an idea. He would sneak out.

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More coming soon!

[Oxidizer]

Wow. Just when I thought you couldn't excel yourself.

 

Great!

[Vercetti21]

 

James was about to die and then.....he died.

 

I didn't read anymore after that.

[gta phil gta]

I'm insulted that you've used Liverpool in this.

[poikly]

This chapter may have similarites to 'Splinter Cell: Double Agent.' Also, at the end of each chapter, I will note how many deaths in the story so far. Dont ask why, you will find out later.

 

CHAPTER 2: The Escape

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One night had passed. James woke up. A guard knocked on the cell door and told him breakfast is ready. James had breakfast and on his way back to the cell, pretended to have a seizure. The guard panicked and let James's handcuffs off. James then punched the guard in the face, took his gun and ran. An alarm went off and James went into his cell. He started to shoot the bars of his window which eventually came off. Before climbing out, he picked up a matchbox and cigarettes. He climbed out but was being chased as it was one of the most heavily guarded prisons in the UK. He came to a stop and turned around holding the gun. 10 guards were standing there aiming pistols at James.

''Put the gun down!'' A guard said.

''Let me just have a cigarette.'' James said taking one out.

''No! Put the gun down!''

''I will have a cigarette or I will f*cking shoot you.''

''You have changed James, You have changed. I thought you were a good guy.'' A familiar guard said.

''I am. I did not kill that man!'' James answered. James quickly lighted the match, lit the gun and threw the gun to the floor. The gun was cooking off bullets and shooting the guards. James' friend was the last one alive taking cover.

''I am sorry James.'' He said before firing at James. James dodged a bullet but pretended it hit him. The guard ran towards James to check him before James lunged at the guard, got him to the floor and aimed the gun at him.

''I am sorry too.'' James said before lowering the gun and knocking the guard out. James ran through the gate but he wasn't home free. Cars started chasing him. James ran and dived out the way before the guard ran him over. As the car drove forward, James fired the gun and shot the guard driving in the back of the head, killing him. The other guard in the car was alive. The car went out of control and fell down a mountain before blowing up. James smiled before turning around and jumping high for the car to go right under him. The car turned around and headed for James but he dived to the floor and the car went over him. James stood up and shot a wheel before the driver and the car crashed into the prison, leaving a hole and letting convicts escape. James walked out the complex and got home.

''What a day...'' James said before falling asleep.

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Deaths: 3

More coming soon.

[poikly]

Here is the next part.

 

CHAPTER 3: The Attack

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James was watching TV.

''BBC News reporting that a man named 'James Fiught' escaped a highly guarded prison today. 10 officers were attacked, 9 of which were shot in the shin with a Colt 45. 3 officers were killed. 2 were shot in the back of the head by Fiught while one was took down a mountain before being set on fire by an explosion. It was a horrible day and James Fiught is now the most wanted man in Britain, and soon to be the world.'' The reporter said. James kicked in the TV and went to make coffee. While in the kitchen, officers were outside and started smashing the windows. James turned around and ran upstairs. He stood there waiting for the police to pile in before running into the attic were it had an open window. James tried to climb out as the police were trying to get in the attic. They eventually got in as James got out. James ran across the roof's of house while police helicopters tried to shoot him down. Eventually, he crashed through a ceiling into a 10 year old's room with a 10 year old staring at James.

''I need to use that computer, kid.'' James said. The kid agreed. James hacked into police records and put down 'James Fiught-Deceased.' James ran out the room and out the back door to a garden. He went into the shed were a lone table was there. He looked under it and an undescribable beast attacked him. It had sharp teeth, seliver coming out its mouth and spikes on its back. It pinned James down and tried to bite his head off. James stuggled but pushed it off him and ran out the shed. He climbed over fences and when he got onto a motorway, a car whacked into James. He was perfectly fine and got back up to start running. He headed towards Tesco and got inside. He hid in the staff department.

''What the hell was that thing?'' He said to himself before taking a gun that was under the seat (?!). He ran out the back door holding the gun up.

 

As he walked out, police were standing away from James with there back turned. He crept to one of them and grabbed him, taking him hostage.

''I will f*cking shoot!'' James said. The police didnt fire but James killed the man. The men ran after James firing. He ran to the nearest car and stole it before driving to the airport where he would go to the US to lay low. James was under attack in Britain and needed to be somewhere more crowded where he could blend in.

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Chapter 4 coming soon.

Edited September 4, 2007 by poikly

[poikly]

The story is nearly halfway through. What a thrill ride! This has to be the most unusual chapter yet. The story starts going psychological horror now. The British Police phase of the story is over. Now it is the- I dont want to spoil. Enjoy.

 

Chapter 4: The 'Other' world. (This chapter is 'Silent Hill' esque.)

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2 weeks passed since that riot. James was in New York and having hallucanations of kids screaming then instantly, a picture of Columbine Massacre appeared in his mind. Then the sight of a plane crashing in the WTC appeared. Then this horiffic face of a blooded monster screaming appeared and started making a deafening noise. James then shut his eyes and opened them. He was not in NY, America or even Earth. He was in a horrific world with the walls rotten and blooded. Screams were heard down a corridor. James ran and was attacked by a dog. It bit his neck and was savaging his face. James shot it and whiped the blood off him. He found a shotgun in a bathroom and walked down the never ending corridor. Many creatures attacked him and ended up with a shotgun round in their head. Eventually, he found a little girl tied up to a pipe. James untied her and asked her what was going on. She said:

''Help me find my mommy! She was gone as soon as I got shot.'' The girl started crying.

''Dont cry, I will get you out of this place. I need to know what is going on.'' James said.

''You will help me? Thanks! I would tell you whats going on but...'' the girl then turned into this massive monster like thing which started throwing knives at James. ''...I AM GOING TO KILL YOU!'' The monster then done an evil laugh.

James kept firing at the monster with the handgun he found in Tesco and eventually was hit by a knife in the arm. He held his arm and ran forward through the corridor, turning back at times to fire at the monster. James got to a door. He ran in and barricaded it before looking around. He found a rocket launcher stashed away and took it. Eventually, the monster came crashing through the wall. James aimed the rocket launcher and fired, destroying the girl. James then had hallucinations before appearing back in his hotel.

 

Where was he? James thought that he went to hell and back. He told people but no one believed him. They thought he was psycho and was ordered back to the UK by George Bush. James arrived in Britain and went to a special place where he would tell someone who belived him about his encounter of hell. Of course, he was a wanted man so he needed to go undercover.

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Quick chapter there. Chapter 5 coming soon.

[poikly]

Ok, 4 more chapters to go. I will have to clear up the story in these 4 chapters.

 

CHAPTER 5: The Finding

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James found a special suit in his wardrobe and a fake beard to use. He thought up a name of 'Jake Jones' to use. He went to the therapy unit and got in.

''Now Mr.Jones, what did you say happened?'' The man said.

''Well, I was having a holiday in New York and then instantly, I just dissapeared and was in hell or something. I ran then I saw a-'' James said.

''Little girl tied to pipe.''

''How did you know?''

''This has happened before. Mr. Jones, have you ever heard of the city 'Alfagat'?''

''No.''

''Well, a man came to be about the same experience you had. He was from the city of Alfagat. Then, after he destroyed the Little Girl that attacked him, he went back home. When he was back home, an even bigger monster attacked the whole city and killed him and the rest of the people of Alfagat along with the city itself. Alfagat doesnt exist anymore.''

''So, something will attack this city.''

''Correct.''

''But I still dont get it.'' James said.

''If you hate someone so much, at the top of your hated list and someone else hates that same person a tiny bit more, the person mainly hating the person is going to get sent to hell. If they get out by destroying the monster, another monster will come out eventually and attack the whole city, making it non-existent. That monster hates everything, so if you hate means it will alert-.'' The man was interrupted.

''Satan. Satan will attack the the city.''

 

James got the whole idea.

'The man who shot the picture got killed, the picture had nothing to do with it! He hated me so much then another person hated me, the person who I shot the tires off, and made the main hater go to hell. He didnt kill the little girl so he was killed in hell which made him killed in real life! I went to hell because I hated the officer who put me in jail so much and someone else hated him. The officer who was my friend! He knew I was innocent!' James thought all to himself. James thanked the therapist and went to get weapons. Satan is coming.

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That showed why it happened. The the next chapter will be arming and how he is going to tell the people to prepare. This story is pretty sick aint it?

Edited September 5, 2007 by poikly

[poikly]

Christ, no update in a while but the show must go on.

We are coming to the end. Also, later on when he gets to the school, he will NOT kill children. That is just sick.

This part of the story is were James starts going crazy. Read on.

 

CHAPTER 6: The Preparing

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James thanked the man, ran outside and all the way to the city centre. Anyone who got in is way was beat to the floor or shot. James carried a pistol with him all the time now. He eventually got there and stouted:

''Everybody, there is going to be an attack! Evacuate or fight!'' No one believed him.

''Report, we have, er, James Fught in sights. Er, yeah we will open fire.'' An officer said into his radio. The officer ran towards James firing. James fired back, killing the guard with a headshot.

''f*cker.'' James muttered under his breath before being surrounded by police. He fired a shot into the air which scared everyone off. He then ran, being chased by the police. He shot a car window, and then the gas tank to save some time. Eventually, he lost them but cracks started swarming the roads. The cracks were opening and suddenly, a mutated red hand fired through the air, destroyed 3 buildings in the process. The hand was following James trying to scoop him up and kill him.

James got to the Munic Building (the highest building in the city) and raced up the stairs. He got to the top were heavy weapons were kept. He found an M60, an M4, 3 AK-47's and a rocket launcher. He took them all and put them on his back, except two AK-47's which he kept in hand. Eventually, the building started to crumble. James jumped out at the last minute were he hung off one of the ferris wheel carts. He climbed in and waited for it to go round at a certain point were he jumped out onto another building. He ran across the roof's, jumping at certain points to get to the other side.

He jumped over a specific gate and got into a school yard. He ran in the building past the frightened children to the roof. He took a running jump and caught onto the drain pipe which was about to fall down. Police arrived and were firing at James. He got onto the higher roof and saw a car on the gound. He shot at it heavily until it blew up, also burning drugs in the process. James turned around smiling to be confronted by two criminals.

''Those were our drugs you piece of sh*t.'' One of them said. They grabbed James and hung him off a building. James could fire and did, shooting them both and killing them. He fell down and hit the floor. His back was aching. Then thousands of mutants came surrounding James.

James took out the M60 and shot them all dead, getting hurt in the process. The streets then went quiet. An even bigger crack instantly appeared. A gigantic monster appeared (satan) through the floor. James grinned.

''You are the pain in the ass bug who deserves to be squashed.'' James said (cheesy line!). The monster roared loud.

''I aint afraid of you.'' James said before cocking all three of the AK-47's.

''Lets finish this.''

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Action packed chapter there. Two to go.

[poikly]

Just a little note, as soon as this is done, Big Brother is coming back.

Christ, triple-triple post.

Someone post something!

[poikly]

Hello? Say something! I have had enough with this double-triple-fripple-lipple posting!

Either way, here is the second to last chapter.

 

CHAPTER 7: The Fight

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James ran quickly behind the pub. He took a deep breath, and cocked the AK's. He jumped out and was firing three AK's at one time. The monster roared and smashed the nearest building. James ran to the docks. He got on a boat and sped off as the monster chased him. James fired his M4 and the monster took no damage. James noticed cargo on the boat. He threw it off before firing at it all to hurt the monster.

''Three hits to go.'' James muttered. The monster stayed lying in the water. Police boats and helicopters than arrived and started firing. There were thousands of bullets falling and never ending shooting. James helped out with his M60. The monster than suffered more damage before stamping its hand right into the water, causing an earthquake to happen across the water. The boats blew up and the helicopters crashed to the ground. James swam away before getting stopped by the monster. James hid under the water, firing his M60. The monster picked James up. James struggled to get out but stabbed the monster in the eye. James got back to shore, stole a car and drove to the airport. He hid inside waiting. Most of the city was destroyed but James couldnt give up. Not after all this. He must fight on. Suddenly, the monster jumped towards the airport. James ran outside and found a tank. He took cover behind it before climbing in. He blew up all the planes in sight to block the monster. Eventually, the monster got hit by a rocket and fell to the floor.

''You are finally down.'' James said walking to the corpse. He got there and examined the surroundings.

SUDDENLY, it kicked James away until he hit the airport wall. James drove to a railway station. He jumped onto an abandoned train and drove it off. The monster was running after the train. James climbed onto the roof. He fired his AK's before running out of ammo. Then he took his M4 out before the M60. He had no more ammo. Except, that rocket launcher. He took it out and fired, hitting the monster but it wasn't killed. The monster jumped on top of the train amazingly not destroying it. James looked behind him and smiled. He jumped off at the last minute. The train instantly crashed with the monster hitting its face. At the same time, the plane was flown right into the monster. The monster was dead. James sprinted upto it.

''Finally, you f*cking piece of sh*t died. Rot in your own hole, Satan.'' James walked away. He saw a man coming down from the sky with a parachute. It was the pilot of the plane. James walked upto him. It was James' friend, from the police!

''You survived then. I am glad you knew it wasnt me the whole time.'' James said smiling. He wiped the blood off his shirt.

''I knew? Of course I knew! Who gives a sh*t! You killed Satan! You are the world's biggest hero!'' The friend (who's name was John BTW) said before smiling.

''Yeah, about that.''

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Another chapter down.

The final chapter hopefully tomorrow.

[poikly]

The End! Yay! Now I can continue with my other stories.

 

CHAPTER 8: The End

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James walked in wearing his smart suit. He walked upto the mayor who was holding a medal.

''James Fiught, you saved the city. You are a hero for everyone. The chief of police is now being kept in a prison cell for arresting an innocent man. On request of course.'' The mayor said before putting a medal around James. ''You are now being awarded this city. You are the ruler and own this city for your braveness and confidence.'' James smiled.

 

''Thank you.'' He said. James walked out and made off home. He looked out the window, sitting on his computer chair. He heard a knock at the door.

''Come in!'' James said. A man holding a box walked up to James.

''I am here to fix the fridge.'' The man said.

''I didnt order a plumber. Well, it has been acting up. I suppose you can fix it.'' James said smiling. The man started working. James had his back turned and took out his wallet. ''How much for it then?'' James turned round to see the man aiming a gun at James' head. The man fired. James fell to the floor, blood pouring out his head. The man walked to the door. James was about to die and then.....he died. James Fiught was murdered. After all the glory and winning. The murderer walked out the door.

''Die James.'' The murderer said. James was lying on the floor dead.

*Camera fades*

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CREDITS

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Script - poikly

Idea - poikly

Everthing by poikly.

The End.

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EPILOUGE

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*Camera shows James' right eye, shut, for 10 seconds*

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

The eye opens.

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Sequel?

Edited February 15, 2008 by poikly