Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 (edited) Yep hold on. I was reading it, thinking of what to do, and eating breakfast at the same time. EDIT: Posted. Edited August 20, 2007 by Mokiesmoky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJonesy Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 (edited) I'm not trying to get at you personally, obviously - the two offenders in my listed posts were mainly Vive La France and TheJonesy, not you - so really most of you are abiding by the rules and not doing anything wrong at all. Spam? Who says this is spam? We can talk if we want. Before this thing began, we [me, Eminence and such] have been chatting in other topics too. It's called a conversation, not spam. And when has spam been a problem in this section of the forums. This place has got to be the most less-spammed place in GTAF! Very rarely someone will come along and write a crap story. But everybody here are not just writers. Most of the people here are almost a "gang". We share a common interest and we are all good friends. Spam or even conversations have never been an issue. So don't even complain about that. You may have some control, but this isn't just your forum, it is ours too. Edited August 20, 2007 by TheJonesy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 I'm not trying to get at you personally, obviously - the two offenders in my listed posts were mainly Vive La France and TheJonesy, not you - so really most of you are abiding by the rules and not doing anything wrong at all. Spam? Who says this is spam? We can talk if we want. Before this thing began, we [me, Eminence and such] have been chatting in other topics too. It's called a conversation, not spam. And when has spam been a problem in this section of the forums. This place has got to be the most less-spammed place in GTAF! Very rarely someone will come along and write a crap story. But everybody here are not just writers. Most of the people here are almost a "gang". We share a common interest and we are all good friends. Spam or even conversations have never been an issue. So don't even complain about that. You may have some control, but this isn't just your forum, it is ours too. He was talking about specific spam posts in this thread, as in pointless ones that don't really contribute, not the story itself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJonesy Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 I'm not trying to get at you personally, obviously - the two offenders in my listed posts were mainly Vive La France and TheJonesy, not you - so really most of you are abiding by the rules and not doing anything wrong at all. Spam? Who says this is spam? We can talk if we want. Before this thing began, we [me, Eminence and such] have been chatting in other topics too. It's called a conversation, not spam. And when has spam been a problem in this section of the forums. This place has got to be the most less-spammed place in GTAF! Very rarely someone will come along and write a crap story. But everybody here are not just writers. Most of the people here are almost a "gang". We share a common interest and we are all good friends. Spam or even conversations have never been an issue. So don't even complain about that. You may have some control, but this isn't just your forum, it is ours too. He was talking about specific spam posts in this thread, as in pointless ones that don't really contribute, not the story itself. Well, when someone calls out my name in a negative way, I don't like it. A couple of off-topic posts shouldn't cause him to go into a b*tchy rant... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 Just ssh and say yes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJonesy Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 Just ssh and say yes. Sorry, I just don't like people talkin' about me... Yes! There, you happy now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 Dude, chill. It's an internet forum. He wasn't trying to start a flame war, he just wanted people to stop spamming, which is reasonable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 How's this? There's space under the title, I can put the names of everyone if you want. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 It's not bad, but in my opinion it's still pretty big ... I don't see why it has to take up so much room. I think a smaller banner would suffice as an introduction into the topic, myself. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 Well everyone else liked the bigger one... I don't know what to do with it now, I'd prefer it over the banner we use now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 (edited) Looks fine to me. Go ahead and put all the names from the list on it and we'll see how it looks. EDIT: Why the hell are so few people on the list posting in the story? Why would you sign up if you aren't going to contribute to the story? Edited August 20, 2007 by Vercetti21 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 On the way sir Yeah I do notice that...Maybe they're not online, but it's been over 12 hours since it started. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 DonGarcia aka njnakedsnake added by PM request. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 (edited) That's a long ass name, I had to take off the 'The' in The Unvirginiser just to make it fit... Alphabetical Order: It kinda got screwed, because some people had such long names, and we haven't even heard from them except "sign me up" Edited August 20, 2007 by Mokiesmoky Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 Still, it looks good to me. If we can all agree on that, then I'll put it up there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 Okay, Eminence asked for a smaller one right.... EITHER THIS OR THIS Choose people. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 The second one is much better. Not just because it's 'smaller', but because its overall look is much more polished and appealing, and the border makes it look even better too. I'd go with that one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 @Mokie: the second one looks great. @espedito: Did you even read the sign up thread? This is for serious writers only. As much as I hate to say it, that was a horrible, horrible post in the story (bottom post, 1st page). Please read the rules a little bit more, fix your spelling and grammer issues, and make your writing more legible the next time you contribute to the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 @Mokie: the second one looks great. @espedito: Did you even read the sign up thread? This is for serious writers only. As much as I hate to say it, that was a horrible, horrible post in the story (bottom post, 1st page). Please read the rules a little bit more, fix your spelling and grammer issues, and make your writing more legible the next time you contribute to the story. Thanks. fix your spelling and grammer issues How ironic. Btw, it's grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 How ironic. Btw, it's grammar Wow I feel dumb. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 Haha! Yeah, I agree wholeheartedly though, espedito. Not only is your addition tiny, but you've taken an event - him stealing the car - and not even described it in the slightest. It could've led to something, but you've just simply said he took the car and then skipped to when he's back with Blue, without detailing anything in-between. Not only that, but the sentence has no punctuation whatsoever and makes for poor reading, as well as the fact that you haven't even included dialogue correctly - last time I checked, we weren't writing a script. Poor quality. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 I'm getting tired of the same writers. Someone who hasn't posted yet needs to go. Eminence? TheJonesy? I hear you guys are good writers... and you signed up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 I'm going to get myself involved fairly soon, haha, I'm just .. biding my time. I've noticed a bit of a continuity thus far, though only recently. At the moment Niko is off to get weapons from Jacob, but does he not already have a 9mm and an AK? So... yeah. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 Hm...espedito! That part was like....... Anyway, I think Eminence should write now.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 20, 2007 Author Share Posted August 20, 2007 I've noticed a bit of a continuity thus far, though only recently. At the moment Niko is off to get weapons from Jacob, but does he not already have a 9mm and an AK? He's out of ammunition for the 9mm, but he's supposed to have an AK... I don't know why nobody put that in there. Unless of course, he could have stashed it at Roman's place... hmmm. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJonesy Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 I'm getting tired of the same writers. Someone who hasn't posted yet needs to go. Eminence? TheJonesy? I hear you guys are good writers... and you signed up. I'm gonna write. The only problem is that I have a good idea but don't know when I can put it in. Anyways, I been busy with my other story which has been updated *wink wink* lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 I'm getting tired of the same writers. Someone who hasn't posted yet needs to go. Eminence? TheJonesy? I hear you guys are good writers... and you signed up. I'm gonna write. The only problem is that I have a good idea but don't know when I can put it in. Anyways, I been busy with my other story which has been updated *wink wink* lol Jonesy what do you think of the other banner I did?! SCROLL up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vive La France Posted August 20, 2007 Share Posted August 20, 2007 Two things. Lets all write in the PAST tense, not the present tense. It gets quite confusing at times if we keep jumping back and fourth. Also, please write with proper spelling and dialouge. Not Script-esque. BTW @Mokiesmokie, I like the first one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil112 Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 Last effort at the image/banner/title thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryunday Posted August 21, 2007 Share Posted August 21, 2007 I say lets use this one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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