Phil112 Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 But the supercompter chase will be good, its got helicopters crashing in it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Vercetti21 Posted August 24, 2007 Author Share Posted August 24, 2007 Someone could recap the story... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil112 Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 (edited) Recap of the story from the start to the time of this post : Page one Niko arrives in liberty city on the 16 october 2007. After recieving the e-mail from Roman. He goes to the company garage and meets Benny (Blue) Blue gives him a 9mm. Then he goes after some thieves for him to get the address where Roman is living. He kills them all and gets the parts back to Blue, gets the address. He then goes to where Roman is living and is shocked at the state of the place. He finds out that Roman needed help thats why he lied. Niko goes after some goon for Roman they are too tough for him and start beating him up until Little Jacob arrived and fired a AK-47 scareing the goons away. He gets into Jacobs car after killing the people that ran off before. The police start chasing them. Niko shot at them with his 9mm. Then with Jacobs Uzi. Then when stucjk they blow up the cop cars that are blocking them in an alley way with a molotov coctail. They go to Romans place. Jacob gives him an AK-47, and his number. He goes to Blue and gets a list of cars to steal for parts. Niko then goes after a pimp for Roman who is using one of the cabs and being a bad mouth, they have a fight in the street. And niko steals some money from his person after the fight. Niko finds a car on the list for Blue. Page 2 Roman calls Niko because some men are coming round to his house for their money. Niko has to go unarmmed because Jacob doesn't turn up for there meeting. They kidnap Roman and put him in the back of a van. Niko jumps on to the back of it {Trailer}. Jacob comes out of nowhere and passes Niko a snubnose pistol. Niko opens the back door and shoots the kidnappers, then kills the driver. This causes the van to go into the water and Niko and Roman come to the surface. They meet McReary. McReary asks them to meet him at an address the next day. McReary asks Niko to kill Goldberg, {through the internet with the cv for an interview{ Kikizo preveiw }} Niko pretends his name is Boris Dvorski. Niko kills Goldberg. Then holds Karen - the recptionist - hostage he makes it so the cops kill her when he goes inside. Niko went to the roof, then climbed along a cable to another building and went to ground level. He killed some cops downstairs and escaped. He finishes Blue's list. They start to try and get the business back on its feet. Page 3 They go to the garage to find out from blue that Kaufman Cabs have gone bankrupt, so they pay Eric Kaufman a visit. They persuade him to give him the old garage for his - the kaufman - garage, and Niko and Roman now combine to make Bellic Taxi Comapny. Niko asks Jacob for help in advertising, he gives her the name of Gwen a presenter on K-107. Niko gets friendly with her so she can help him for no money. He gets a call off McReary {Kikizo} to kill someone who has info on him. he does then meets up with Gwen. Her dad is after "Boris Dvorski" for goldbergs murder. Niko meets with McReary he wants Niko to go to a ferry. Niko seceretly goes in to the funeral of Karen the seceratary. Then goes to get a list off Blue. He sees two FBI agents meeting with the Russian mafia, the FBI know where Niko lives and the Russians want to know. They go on to a ferry, and niko wants to follow them. Page 4 Niko gets onto the ferry and kills a patrolling Mafioso with a rope then dumps him overboard. A mafioso is guarding the room in which they are meeting. Niko gets a text off McReary to kill the two FBI agents. The Mafioso guarding the door is killed by Niko and then thrown overboard. The mafia kill the agents after finding out where Niko lives. Niko tries to beat them there using a water ski and a stolen car. The mafia come in the room. Niko kills most of them. Niko and roman get into a blue car and drive off, with the Russians in hot pursuit. Niko and Roman drive into an underground garage, steal another car and drive out. The Russians are waiting outside and then Roman shoots at their tyres so they can't chase them. They go to the new garage to stay the night. Niko realises that if they think he's dead they wont go after him. So Niko Fakes his own death causing the Russians to leave, and the news think he is dead. (I condensed that bit down a bit) { Fast forward a couple of months } Niko wakes up with Gwen. Then goes to meet Blue for another list, and asks if he knows anymore people that he could do stuff for, Blue gives him the e-mil and normal address of "Fitzgerald McMichaels the third" (fitch for short). Niko picks up fitch and goes back to blue. Niko asks fitch to get into McRearys computer, Fitch asks for a favour, a super computer is coming in for the police at the airport. Niko steals a courier van to get into the airport. And goes around the airport looking for the plane. Page 5 Niko then walked to an office like building. He then kidnapped a guard, who took him to where the plane would be landing. He killed the guard. Then drained some fuel from a police helicopter. Got into the costume of the guard that he killed earlier. Then went to the plane, and loaded the supercomputer onto the back of a luggae handler. He had a police escort that he had to get rid of. He stopped at a petrol station, then drove off leaving the the escort behind, loaded the supercomputer into the courier van he had left in an underground parking lot earlier, then drove to the garage. Fitch asked for Niko to go and ateal a USB device from the back of a computer in [email protected] cafe at nightfall. While waiting for nightfall he bumped into an old friend, Ivanov Cherkov, a builder. He then got a ring off Jacob for him to meet him later on. Niko then went to [email protected] cafe, broke into it through the fire exit, found a box in a store cupboard, then went back to the roof. Where the police helicopter and two cop cars were waiting for him. He waited for the helicopter to crash to to his fuel draining, lucklely it crashed into the cop cars. Then Nko went to Jacobs, he told him he needed help on a gun pick-up. Niko went with him to the docks. The pick-up went off smoothely, Niko met Alex, a safe cracker, who was working for david the arms dealer. Niko got paid his cut ,$8,000, then went home. Jacob rang him at 3 in the morning, a rival gun dealer came round and nicked most of his weapons, Niko went to Jacobs to help him get them back. {Next part} - part to good (and big)big to sumarise. Niko went to meet with Don Alfredo Lombardi. The don asked him to get Lazlow for his radio station. Niko persuaded Lazlow to come to the radio station. And got his contract for the one he was woking with. Thats page five page 6 when its done. Edited August 26, 2007 by Phil112 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJonesy Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 I agree with ya Don Garcia. I only "jump in" when I'm sure what the direction of it is. That, or I leave the big and important parts to Vercetti! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 (edited) 404: Post not found Edited March 14, 2013 by Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 24, 2007 Author Share Posted August 24, 2007 Nice recap Phil Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 (edited) 404: Post not found Edited March 14, 2013 by Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 (edited) 404: Post not found Edited March 14, 2013 by Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VCHolmes Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 Sorry about my last two posts; really short. Its not to increase the post count or anything. I messed up on the post previous to my last one; I wrote it in a hurry. Hopefully my last post will make up the story in the way I actually intended it to be. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil112 Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 (edited) I set up for a bit of a, lose the cops moment. On a side note, is it cool if we take whatever the story currently is and completely scrap it and take it in a different direction? You guys are talking about feds and supercomputers, but I wanna do more realistic stuff. This supercomputer bit will probably end soon, maybe couple of posts time. Edited August 24, 2007 by Phil112 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 24, 2007 Author Share Posted August 24, 2007 (edited) On a side note, is it cool if we take whatever the story currently is and completely scrap it and take it in a different direction? You guys are talking about feds and supercomputers, but I wanna do more realistic stuff. After we finish this one, I could see the possibility of a Finish the Story III. But for now, as far as I know we have an outline of how the story is going to go so far. From this point, Niko will do the basic GTA thing... meet people, do missions for them to gain their respect, get introduced to someone else, and so on. Then something will happen that will motivate him to pull of a huge bank heist - the climax of the story. So he gathers up his "team of people", all with their unique skills (Blue knows cars, Fitch knows computers, Niko is the hands-on person, McReary is the spy, etc.) and pulls an Ocean's 11, which attracts police and media attention. The Russians will get word that Niko Bellic is still alive and return to Liberty City, where Niko and his crew will take them on in a huge firefight. All in the meantime, Niko is searching for that special someone - a "source" that is letting out information about him. The source was the reason McReary and those 2 FBI agents knew what they did about Niko, and they were also the reason that the Russian Mafia got word of Niko's whereabouts. It is thought that the source was a survivor from a major incident that involved Niko back in Russia (which is also the reason he turned away from the mafia), and the source is determined to get revenge on Niko. Well, that's the basic idea I think. There'll be lots of fun stuff in between. Edited August 24, 2007 by Vercetti21 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eminence Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 To agree with Don Garcia, I'm a little annoyed at the direction of the story. I mean, it has gone pretty unrealistic, and I know it's 'GTA' and everything, but within stories I prefer them to be of a much more real nature. I hate it when Niko seems to be superhuman to be able to take out so many people, for example, or when he is able to commit stupid crimes and get away with them completely. In addition, there's then the stupid plot elements, as well as the concept of him so quickly becoming a huge gangster or having so much power - is it not the whole point of GTA IV, and therefore the character of Niko, that he isn't powerful and is more of an unknown criminal? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil112 Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 Seeing as its really made some people angry, the super computer thing has ended, after the next post anyway. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil112 Posted August 24, 2007 Share Posted August 24, 2007 (edited) Seriously if noone else posts in the story in an hour i'll write the next bit myself. EDIT: Thats it it's done. Edited August 25, 2007 by Phil112 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 25, 2007 Author Share Posted August 25, 2007 I'm tired right now, but I'll write a little bit tomorrow seeing as how we've moved on from the supercomputer. As for me, I still think the story has potential, and I'd prefer to finish it before we start something else up. But for now, I think we should move on past Fitch's missions... no one seems to like them, and they are confusing. Plus, they involve almost no action! Boring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 I still haven't caught up yet. BTW how's my new sig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VCHolmes Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 (edited) But for now, I think we should move on past Fitch's missions... no one seems to like them, and they are confusing. Plus, they involve almost no action! Boring. What did you expect me to do? I was supposed to cook up a nerdy mission for Flitch and all could think of was a supercomputer. Maybe we should have RC missions? @Phil : Great Recap. Be a bit patient about the story, we're all coming from different time zones. @Mokie : Nice sig, but you seem to have fallen in love with that particular font. I hate it when Niko seems to be superhuman to be able to take out so many people, for example, or when he is able to commit stupid crimes and get away with them completely. I agree, but it would be boring to mention all the minor details, wouldn't it? As for the story, yes I'm surprised when Niko became big-time all of a sudden. Maybe we could shift the order of the missions when archiving it. EDIT : Alright, I sent Niko on a small-time mission. It might sound a bit strange, but I guess its better than Niko pulling off bigger jobs right now. EDIT: @phil : Keep that summary updated mate! @mokie : I'm not saying that it sucks, I like it. But I wonder why you always use that font? Edited August 25, 2007 by VCHolmes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mokiesmoky Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 @Mokie : Nice sig, but you seem to have fallen in love with that particular font. bUT IT'S AWESOME! sh't caps. Anyway, can't Niko start to gain more money now? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VCHolmes Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 (edited) Hopefully this will avoid repetition and confusion. • Story Map • Introductory Post Writing Guidelines Summary Characters Nikolai 'Niko' Bellic - Main Protagonist Roman Bellic - Niko's cousin 'Blue' Benny - Guy who runs a car smuggling racket and works at Roman's taxi service. Vinnie - One of Roman's taxi drivers. Niko helped him out of trouble once. 'Little' Jacob - Jamaican Gun Dealer Francis McReary - Corrupt police officer who knows about Niko's past. Tom Goldberg - A shady lawyer, now dead. Karen - Goldberg's receptionist, dead. Boris Dvorski - Niko's alias for the Goldberg murder. Eric Kaufman - Former owner of Kaufman Cabs, persuaded by Niko to sell his business. Gwen - K-107 RJ, Niko's girlfriend. Vladimir Lornov - Leader of the Russian Mafia that wants Niko dead. Fitzgerald 'Fitch' McMichaels III - Nerdy guy who runs a computer shop. Ivanov 'Ivan' Cherkov aka James Gruber - Demolition Man, laying low in Liberty City. Helped Niko to escape from the Russian mafia. David - Gun Smuggler. A friend of Jacob. Alex - Safe Cracker. Niko first met him on David's boat. Wilson - Gun dealer. Rival of Jacob. Now dead. Lazlow Jones - Host on WKTT. Lombardi wants to buy him out. George Kinkle - Host on Fremata 89.6 FM. Mickey Balller - Owner of Baller media. Mario Lombardi - Member of the Lombardi mafia. Introduced Niko to Don Lombardi. Don Alfredo Lombardi - Head of the Lombardi mafia. Elizebeta - One dangerous lady. Yet to be introduced. Lola - Hooker. Yet to be introduced. Organizations Bellic Taxi Company - Taxi company run by Roman and Niko, formerly known as Roman's Taxi Company. Kaufman Cabs - Taxi Company that was forcibly taken over by Niko and Roman Goldberg, Ligner & Shyster (GLS) - Law firm, formerly headed by Goldberg. Russian Mafia - Headed by Vladimir Lornov. Wants Niko dead. Lombardi Mafia Family - Headed by Don Alfredo Lombardi, whom Niko does a few jobs for. Baller Media - Owns WKTT, Liberty Tree, half of Star Junction and the TV show, "America's Next Top Hooker". Headed by Mickey Baller. Liberty City Triads Plot Lines Niko pursues the American Dream. Niko helps Roman with his business. The Russian Mafia return at the end. Niko plans to blackmail Officer McReary to Carcer City. Niko plans to pull off a mint heist. Involves counterfeiting money. Involves Niko escaping by jumping off a roof onto a helicopter. Involves the Mint Police. Niko goes on dates. Radio Stations K-107 - Underground Metal We Know The Truth (WKTT) - Talk Radio. Owned by Baller Media. Fremata 89.6 FM - Classical Music. Owned by the Lombardi's. Firestation 99.9 - Heavy Metal. Run by Baller Media. Groover 103.5 - East European music. Run by the Russian Mafia. Landmarks The Statue of Happiness Liberty City International Airport Star Junction Docks Edited August 30, 2007 by VCHolmes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil112 Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 Great sum up by VCHolmes Love the sum up, although I wouldn't call a law firm an organisation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VCHolmes Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 Great sum up by VCHolmes Love the sum up, although I wouldn't call a law firm an organisation. When did I comment on my own post? Anyhow, thanks. Your summary was great too, keep it updated. I agree, Law Firm doesn't exactly figure under organizations, but I didn't want to create a separate tile for that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil112 Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 Great sum up by VCHolmes Love the sum up, although I wouldn't call a law firm an organisation. 1.When did I comment on my own post? 2.Anyhow, thanks. Your summary was great too, keep it updated. 3.I agree, Law Firm doesn't exactly figure under organizations, but I didn't want to create a separate tile for that. 1. You didn't, I jst collapsed it down. 2. I'll update it next time theres a lag in the story thanks to time difference. 3. You could put it in with the taxi companys because they aren't really organizations. P.S - You can just see who posted in the story by just clicking in the number under replies, and to the right of the topic title. I just noticed that, a bit of a noob. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VCHolmes Posted August 25, 2007 Share Posted August 25, 2007 (edited) Ah, yes I was aware of that, but it wouldn't be to useful in this case. We've got accidental posts and canceled posts. As far As I am concerned, I split a single post into two. So not really accurate. As far as organizations are concerned, I am looking for a word meaning "a group of people working together". Better to have stuff that go under this, under one title. EDIT: @Jonesy : You seemed to be busy, you reserved a post and forgot to edit it. So I assumed that you meant to cancel your post. Sorry if I am wrong. Edited August 25, 2007 by VCHolmes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted August 25, 2007 Author Share Posted August 25, 2007 An excellent summary VC Holmes. @all: Sorry for the minor absence, I've been busy the past few days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vive La France Posted August 26, 2007 Share Posted August 26, 2007 Added a new set of characters, an Italian Mafia Niko goes do some jobs for. @ VC Holmes. Great stuff you got there. I think Vercetti21 should add it into the original post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Posted August 26, 2007 Share Posted August 26, 2007 (edited) 404: Post not found Edited March 14, 2013 by Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheJonesy Posted August 26, 2007 Share Posted August 26, 2007 EDIT:@Jonesy : You seemed to be busy, you reserved a post and forgot to edit it. So I assumed that you meant to cancel your post. Sorry if I am wrong. I am truly sorry for not writing my reserved part. An important, personal matter came up and I didn't have time. I apologize... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vive La France Posted August 26, 2007 Share Posted August 26, 2007 I made a possible "Radio Station" rivalry storyline, with all the stations trying to buy each other out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Phil112 Posted August 26, 2007 Share Posted August 26, 2007 Updated the re-cap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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