Ricardo. Posted December 26, 2007 Share Posted December 26, 2007 Chapter II is up for Liberty City Stories: Don Edition. For Topic Link click my signature or click HERE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 (edited) Alright. This is the last update I'll do for Mobile until it's up - which probably won't be until March or so (I'm using January and February to finish AOM and SYN). I've got all the main characters named and plotted and here are their mugshots (with the exception of the General as s/he will remain an enigma throughout): General T. Erricson CEO Alexander Raiden Operative Samuel Kelley Operative/Ex Soldier Calvin Morgan Agent Amy Levering Government Spook Quinn Captive Chester Prince Most if not all of 'em are plain-clothed despite being government hitmen to avoid causing suspicion to their respective agencies. Some will be hired and are just plain cold-blooded, others are blackmailed into doing what they do, and one or two have dubious motives. Things have kinda changed since what I initially had in mind, the only countries featured are gonna be America and Australia (maybe Iraq flashbacks), but it'll still be about a deadly government conspracy with cell phones at the heart of it. And to make sure I complete AOM and SYN, the only thing I've plotted regarding Mobile is the characters' motives/storylines. I only have a rough idea as to how this'll play out as I've only planned the ending. It'll be 13 parts long but each chapter will be reasonably short. Watch this space Edited January 9, 2008 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickstick Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 Looking forward to that, Oxi. I'll comment on your current work as soon as I've finished reading through "Products". Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 (edited) Alright. This is the last update I'll do for Mobile until it's up - which probably won't be until March or so (I'm using January and February to finish AOM and SYN). Probably a good idea, as you don't need to swarm yourself with work any longer. I'll be looking forward to it, though. EDIT: I've decided to continue with "The Russian"! Chapter 6 up now. Edited December 28, 2007 by Vercetti21 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted December 28, 2007 Share Posted December 28, 2007 CS - Hee! I'm glad Products is still read-worthy, and I hope you like it. Be sure to tell what you think once you've done. V21 - Word. I'm gonna use the last days of Dec to get my muses back in gear, ready to properly start work on AOM in Jan. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickstick Posted December 29, 2007 Share Posted December 29, 2007 I've written up to chapter 70 (!) in AOD, having had a great Christmas Eve, when I finally found the words I'd been looking for to write down, and I haven't stopped writing since. I'll have the next chapter up sometime tomorrow, so look out for it. Not much of an update I know, but this means I won't have to post in this thread when I next update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted December 29, 2007 Share Posted December 29, 2007 I updated the character list for VLV and overall cleaned up the first post. I'm almost halfway through chapter 6, but writing has been slowed lately due to work. Should be up soon, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted December 29, 2007 Share Posted December 29, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love.Life Posted January 1, 2008 Share Posted January 1, 2008 I added the storyline to my first post which describes the basics of BLue City. Check out the main storyline of the story as its quite weak and i need advice but the 1st of the trilogy (GTA BLue City, GTA Blue City stories (recently started writing on this) and a third unamed script) Also i completed most of the writing and just need to tweak it then post it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted January 7, 2008 Share Posted January 7, 2008 New chapter of "A dish best served cold" coming very soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love.Life Posted January 7, 2008 Share Posted January 7, 2008 new mission up fawls lol Everyones got really good projects on at the mo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 8, 2008 Share Posted January 8, 2008 I'll check that out soon as I hit send on this, L.L. Right. Soon as I can be bothered, I'll get the first part of AOM done. It'll probably be written in the same ways as I did Products, but will be even darker than M&P (the 2nd part anyway). No joke. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chickstick Posted January 8, 2008 Share Posted January 8, 2008 Just added a new chapter to the AOD. Hope everyone enjoys it. Might as well also add that I posted a short story, Afterlife a couple of days ago that some of you may find interesting. I'd provide a link but it's easy enough to find and is in the Forum Library anyway. @Oxi: Almost finished Products, and if your next work will be anywhere near as good as that, I'll be happy. Looking forward to when you update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love.Life Posted January 8, 2008 Share Posted January 8, 2008 new mission up hope u enjoy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 8, 2008 Share Posted January 8, 2008 I rarely post in here, but figured I should anyway. I will of completed writing RtHC [Return to Heart City] tomorrow. It's bigger [size-wise] than the original Heart City, which had a grand 83 missions, and there's only 55 missions in this script - therefore, the missions when it gets further in become much more complex, detailed, longer, etc. Everything turned out really well. The script follows this order: • Gaining small-time information. • Gaining the trust and respect of each gang in the state. • Finding Sean Wood's killers and doing oddjobs for money. • Leaving the state for a two-part mission and assembling your own gang together. • Gang wars, and working for the four remaining gangs in the state. • Property development. • Final missions. That's the basic route the script took. I'm not gonna give much away on the leaving the state bit, but basically someone tells him to help out a friend in another state and in return, recieve help himself. The final mission will partially be based off of the movie Carlito's Way - the scene in the train station. It will be big. I'll leave why and how purely to speculation, but it will be big. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltinespike Posted January 8, 2008 Author Share Posted January 8, 2008 Well, for all the old-time fans of mine who remember The Almighty Throne (which will not be published here, due to the risk of copyright infringement), I will tell you that I still plan on pursuing publishing it, as a movie (not a book). I have promised myself to settle for no less than a blockbuster, for I will not accept a half-assed attempt. The series is still untitled, but has four stories set so far. The Almighty Throne will be the second, the planned prequal becoming the first. Thoughts? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltinespike Posted January 9, 2008 Author Share Posted January 9, 2008 Also, I am making an official website for Hatchet man. The first post will be summed up into that. Look out for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthTemplar Posted January 9, 2008 Share Posted January 9, 2008 (edited) I am currently the next chapter to Legend of Speed. But it wont be posted for a few days so that people can take the time to read it. ACT 1 is going to end soon and ACT 2 will begin. There will be 5 ACTs in total Also when Legend of Speed is done if I have any more ideas I would probably do a follow up story Edited January 9, 2008 by DarthTemplar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 9, 2008 Share Posted January 9, 2008 @Oxi: Almost finished Products, and if your next work will be anywhere near as good as that, I'll be happy. Looking forward to when you update. Wicked! I'm glad you're liking it. I've been re-reading that one a lot lately and I think it's better than what I originally though (which was basically meh). I just gotta get back into the swing of things regarding writing and then the first part of AOM will be up. I'm not gonna delve too deep into the villan's backgrounds - just enough so you get the gist - as I don't want these guys humanized apart from Aiden. Hopefully it won't be too long now (I think there should be some kind of counter as to how many times I've said that by now ). And I'm looking forward to all of you guys' projects too! They're kinda inspiring. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coral_City Posted January 9, 2008 Share Posted January 9, 2008 Well, for all the old-time fans of mine who remember The Almighty Throne (which will not be published here, due to the risk of copyright infringement), I will tell you that I still plan on pursuing publishing it, as a movie (not a book). I have promised myself to settle for no less than a blockbuster, for I will not accept a half-assed attempt. The series is still untitled, but has four stories set so far. The Almighty Throne will be the second, the planned prequal becoming the first. Thoughts? Nice to see you're finally pushing on it! Definitely hope you get the story where you want it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted January 9, 2008 Share Posted January 9, 2008 Chapter 6 of VLV is up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coral_City Posted January 9, 2008 Share Posted January 9, 2008 Updated "The Don" -- chapter 7 is finally up! If my many adoring fans, (and I mean IF), have forgotten the story, just re-read it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltinespike Posted January 10, 2008 Author Share Posted January 10, 2008 Well, after a bit of writer's block, I should continue writing Hatchet Man tomorrow. I'm branching even further out, reaching for all possible conflicts, which includes police officers who hate each other, Shawn's ex-wife and daughter, drug dealers, pimps, etc. Shawn knows everyone. Anyways, I hope you are excited. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
saltinespike Posted January 10, 2008 Author Share Posted January 10, 2008 Posted "Ashes of the Apocalypse", the prequal to "The Almighty Throne". Just an introduction, somewhat of a small prologue/summary of important information. Hope you enjoy it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Love.Life Posted January 11, 2008 Share Posted January 11, 2008 New chapter in my game script is up. Im going to try and post more regularly up on here So far in my Game script youv'e done work for the 3 main members off Jimmies Drugs gang Mike Jones (Underboss). Mike was only a inteductory character and the plot suggest that Adam Pierce (Protagatonist) had been working for Mike a few times now. Mike introduces you to Jimmy but then Mike is killed in an ambush on a drug deal Jimmy is head off Jimmies Gang (well obviously) and is a notorious heroin dealer. Jimmy sends you on a few jobs one of hich includes Andres the Mexican Smuggler who imports the Heroin in. Jimmy who is also at war with the Jamaicans tells you to go whack the Jamacian warlord King Gabriel. You are sucessful and the Gang war stops and the Jamaican Gang is severely weakened. after Gabriel is killed you get a call from POlice CHief Zack MIlls asking to see you Andres is a smuggler and most off his missions involve bringing heroin in or protecting it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthTemplar Posted January 11, 2008 Share Posted January 11, 2008 (edited) I just added a new chapter to Legend of Speed. Act 1 is finished and the next chapter will start in ACT 2. Also unlike ACT 1 this ACT will entirely take place in Vice city. Also if you read the last line in it you would notice a cliffhanger I put in there. It would be pretty cool to see it Edited January 12, 2008 by DarthTemplar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted January 13, 2008 Share Posted January 13, 2008 Problem solved: I'm changing the opening sequences to AOM a little bit so that I'll be able to get things done. It was gonna be of the models walking down the street towards the club but for some reason it was just impossible to write. So they're gonna be in a limo instead. All I'm waiting for now is for this writersblock to pass (it's not really w'block but more of me not being in the mood to write). I hope I shake this mood off quick as I seriously think you guys will love this stuff - it's a lot darker than anything else I've done - M&P included (barely ). It's so frustrating! I really wanna at least post a teaser, and I don't wanna give anything else away as it'll hinder[?] the story when it's finally done. But it is coming ( )! There's just a slight delay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 13, 2008 Share Posted January 13, 2008 Looking foward to it, Oxi, as always with your work . When I'm not in the mood to write I go downstairs grab a pepsi come back upstairs and say to myself: "Alright. I'm gonna write until this pepsi is finished! Yeah!" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coral_City Posted January 13, 2008 Share Posted January 13, 2008 Looking foward to it, Oxi, as always with your work . When I'm not in the mood to write I go downstairs grab a pepsi come back upstairs and say to myself: "Alright. I'm gonna write until this pepsi is finished! Yeah!" That has got to be the most intriguing method of "attempting to get rid of" writer's block or something like it anyway! I should try that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vercetti21 Posted January 13, 2008 Share Posted January 13, 2008 (edited) I posted chapter 7 for VLV yesterday. I'll admit I don't like it as much as some of my other chapters, but seeing as how it is necessary to show Michael's background in order to continue with the story correctly, I can't really complain. It's more of a 'bridge' to the next chapter, but it is shorter than all of the others. With any luck, I'll probably be finished with this story in about 5 or 6 more chapters, which I am estimating to be around the end of February. Edited January 13, 2008 by Vercetti21 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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