radicell Posted June 9, 2008 Share Posted June 9, 2008 I'm sorry guys, I'm facing a large writer's block right now. I don't know what, but it seems I can't find the heart to write a next installment of SFS. This means it'll possibly be facing a short hiatus before I continue with it. I don't know why this is happening, but I think it happens to all writers at some point - am I wrong? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted June 9, 2008 Share Posted June 9, 2008 Not at all, we all suffer from Writer's Block at some point radicell. Just take your time and make sure you're in the mood for writing, you'll get your groove back soon. As for my updates, my latest chapter of Ghost is out, featuring new character developments... including a little twist at the end for you faithful followers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fementality Posted June 9, 2008 Share Posted June 9, 2008 (edited) I don't know if anyone remembers my story, Clean Slate (Starring Claude Speed) but I've edited a bit of parts in Ch.1. I tend to procrastinate a lot and am pretty busy for the next few weeks, so don't expect an update soon. http://www.gtaforums.com/index.php?act=ST&...entry1057563986 Edited June 10, 2008 by Fementality Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted June 10, 2008 Share Posted June 10, 2008 I'm changing Sophia's ethnicity (Bad Company), as I've only had two other black characters: Rufus from M&P and Rueben from Syndicate. Here's her new face - don't laugh - I need someone who doesn't look the hardcore bitch that she is; and I mean severely vicious. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Posted June 10, 2008 Share Posted June 10, 2008 ^ I can't help but wonder if that character is going to say, "You can stand under my umbrella." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted June 11, 2008 Share Posted June 11, 2008 Well, I am tempted to have the scene she's in occur while it's raining. Oh yeah, as a serious tiny update, instead of taking place in Amsterdam, BC's gonna be set in Melbourne. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted June 11, 2008 Share Posted June 11, 2008 Maybe you should write some instead of changing characters non stop! Tony is losing his patience with Sexidizer and will soon have to give him a spanking . Updates on my side of things? Well...I feel like writing again¿ - - / posteD chapteR 79 oF olD timeS/escapE froM helL. GMFO! zedzedzed. PERKELE. I also made a spiffy new sig layout. I'll probaly change it soon but me R like R me R. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted June 11, 2008 Share Posted June 11, 2008 I'm sorry! I know, I should. BC and AoM combined, my projects together only consist of 9 scenes. It's ridiculous why I'm not doing anything about it. I'm just never in the mood to write anymore, and basically can't be arsed. Which is a shame because this stuff is by far the most sophisticated material I've come up with yet; both of which are the darkest so far, the characters are incredibly realistic and each of their set-ups/operations are quite intelligent. I just don't get why I'm not interested enough as I need to be to execute them. I suck! Oh! A) I need to read the new chapter of EFH properly, and B) groovy sig. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ronmar The Only Posted June 11, 2008 Share Posted June 11, 2008 (edited) Well, I am working on the script to the next tale in L'Asso di Cuori. I have five pages of the script at the moment and I am right about half way through the plot with the current script. It is about the aftermath of The Harlot but also ventures into the expanding story. Several new characters are introduced, that do not immediately die. Anyways, hopefully I will have part one of November Nights finished by this Friday or so. It will be two parts and hopefully be around 30 pages total. Also, whenever I put the first part or both parts, I will update the original post again giving it more flavor. EDIT: Well, since I made the last post I will just update this. Hopefully the first part of November Nights will be out later tonight. Edited June 15, 2008 by Ronmar The Only Visit Writers' Discussion Compilation of Works: From a Storyteller Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damo. Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 I've updated the Spectres with more information about David's dark past. This time it's about what happened to his mother, as well as a small point that will be important later on in the story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 16, 2008 Share Posted June 16, 2008 Put a load of radio stations in to SA stories and two more chapters of Bravo Seven Down are up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gta phil gta Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 I'm getting a little annoyed with the manner in which this topic is being used by people. Everyone's posting chapters in their topics, then coming here to say that they've posted it. Yes, we know you've just added a new chapter - we can see it in the topic itself. Can you, from now on, use it to describe updates in terms of, perhaps, major developments or things in-between direct chapter updates? If everyone keeps just using it as a free post after posting a new chapter to say 'I've just posted a new chapter', I'm going to just lock the thread. This topic is on its warning. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 I'm getting a little annoyed with the manner in which this topic is being used by people. Everyone's posting chapters in their topics, then coming here to say that they've posted it. Yes, we know you've just added a new chapter - we can see it in the topic itself. Can you, from now on, use it to describe updates in terms of, perhaps, major developments or things in-between direct chapter updates? If everyone keeps just using it as a free post after posting a new chapter to say 'I've just posted a new chapter', I'm going to just lock the thread. This topic is on its warning. But isn't the point of the thead to let peole know when the stories are updated? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pat Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 (edited) But isn't the point of the thead to let peole know when the stories are updated? Is the topic called "Storys' Updates" or "Writers' Updates?" Honestly, this topic isn't made for advertising, or free posts. I'm tired of having to skim through "NEW CHAPTER" "'NOTHER NEW CHAPTER" "LOL GUESS WHAT ANOTHER NEW CHAPTER" just to see the real reason I come in here: updates on a writer's current situations. Hell, the only person I see who does that regularly without posting links to their chapters or anything like that is Oxidizer. And damn it, the title should be "Writers'", not "Writer's." Possessive plural! More than one writer uses this thread! Pat picks up a chair, throws it, and walks out of room. Edited June 17, 2008 by Pat Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
radicell Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 I would've thought that summer break would mean more frequent installments, but apparently not for me. Ever since break started, I found myself churning out chapters slowly instead of quickfiring them as I would've thought. But in a way, I guess, that's a good thing, as I have time to think things through in my installments as well as doing other things. A new mission is up for GTA:SFS. I am working on more information for the introductory post as well. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 A little update: Bad Company's not gonna be about terrorism anymore, and the shady government types' agenda will be an assassination thing now instead. Though I got a feeling it'll have a GTA III atmosphere to it once it's finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rhoda Posted June 17, 2008 Share Posted June 17, 2008 But isn't the point of the thead to let peole know when the stories are updated? Is the topic called "Storys' Updates" or "Writers' Updates?" Honestly, this topic isn't made for advertising, or free posts. I'm tired of having to skim through "NEW CHAPTER" "'NOTHER NEW CHAPTER" "LOL GUESS WHAT ANOTHER NEW CHAPTER" just to see the real reason I come in here: updates on a writer's current situations. Hell, the only person I see who does that regularly without posting links to their chapters or anything like that is Oxidizer. And damn it, the title should be "Writers'", not "Writer's." Possessive plural! More than one writer uses this thread! Pat picks up a chair, throws it, and walks out of room. He'll be back, he left his handbag. As for updates, Ghost is going to be a little bit longer yet, I'm having trouble trying to follow up the climax I've posted and still carry the story on. I'll be sure to let you all know when it's up though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAwarrior Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 i've discontinued $1,000,000 & GANGSTERS so who ever wants to take over the story they have my permission or if they want to use my characters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lochie_old Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 I'm about to start storyboarding my ideas for GTA: Algonquin Stories, should be interesting. My original plan was to just write about how Playboy made it to the top, but I think it would be cool to expand on some more ideas in GTA (Eg. Dwaynes jail time.) and the downfall of the Irish mafia. Does anyone know some 90s hip-hop? I don't want to steal any songs from San Andreas. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lethal Nizzle Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Okay guys, A Green State of Affairs is updated! This new chapter reveals flashbacks of Matt's time in the army, but an unexpected visitor from those times comes to Green State to find Matt. Elsewhere, Danny, Dee, Matt and Dee's gang are plotting on how to get back at the McEllis brothers. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Typhus Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Because it seems to have been ignored, let me just say that Red Sky has been updated. The last chapter I posted has now been completed with the necessary editions. It features the progression of the Claire strand of the story and has a little bit of city history to go along with it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damo. Posted June 18, 2008 Share Posted June 18, 2008 Could someone please give me some feedback on the Spectres? I feel like it's being overlooked. I'm not going to write anymore if people aren't reading it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Don Garcia aka NjNakedSnake Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 I think I'm gonna finish my first chapter today of my first Writer's Discussion story, I haven't written at all today, just browsed forums on the computer like a damn bum. Gotta get back in the mood I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 Can't wait Don Garcia, lots and lots of new talent emerging on WD, which is good to see, and not all stories are GTA related. On topic: Probaly the most important chapter so far of San Andreas Stories has gone up.. people die, a few people die... Currently I feel it's being over shadowed by the excellent San Fierro stories, which is fine by me, because it inspires me to improve my writing and make everything more exciting. But I've said it before, I'm not competing against radicell, I'm one of the biggest SFS fans here and got a lot of respect for the guy! Bravo Seven Down has been updated, expect another chapter soon that involves sniping, but I constantly find myself frustrated because I don't think it's good enough.. when I calm down and get myself together I'm sure that I can improve it to my high standard Nothing but action chapters to come in Bravo Seven Down until the end now, no more boring talking! Expect tigers, helicopter gunships, car chases on mountain tops, motorbikes and carpet bombs San Andreas stories is definatly going to pick up and be a lot more intense, after reading the chapter I've just posted I hope you all eagerly stay tuned Peace and chicken grease Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carbine23 Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 Damo i understand how you are feeling. It happens to all of the new members like us, but have faith like Unvirginiser said! I'll be reading it. @Don - Sounds interesting. From what i hear, you're quite the writer so i'll be looking forward to it. As for me. My new story Song of Death came out and i only got 1 feedback from Oblivionz. He said that it was extremely intense. In order for it not to get to the bottom of the page, i'm trying to find a longer length of the song so people won't have to keep replaying it since the song is only 1 minute long I might take a short few day break from The Man Who Once Spoke because i want to write a few short stories and Vercetti told me its best to let people read before you start a new chapter constantly. Also i thought up some new ideas for the writing section. Here are a few of them. Ghost Ship – A mysterious ghost ship set on fire appears in a bay in Scotland one day. People are frightened and think that the ship has come to haunt the bays of Scotland. A pair of ghost hunters must use their modern technology to see if there really was a ghost ship or if it was just an illusion. (Working Title) - After colonizing An Earth-like planet in the future, the creatures from beneath and above attack the human inhabitants as they try to protect their colony. A San Fierro Murder Story – In the dark alleys of San Fierro during nighttime, the San Fierro slasher whips out his knife and stabs those who are innocent on the streets. The SFPD investigates to see who has been causing one of San Fierro's worst crime streaks every to be reported. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 19, 2008 Share Posted June 19, 2008 Damo i understand how you are feeling. It happens to all of the new members like us, but have faith like Unvirginiser said! I'll be reading it. @Don - Sounds interesting. From what i hear, you're quite the writer so i'll be looking forward to it. As for me. My new story Song of Death came out and i only got 1 feedback from Oblivionz. He said that it was extremely intense. In order for it not to get to the bottom of the page, i'm trying to find a longer length of the song so people won't have to keep replaying it since the song is only 1 minute long I might take a short few day break from The Man Who Once Spoke because i want to write a few short stories and Vercetti told me its best to let people read before you start a new chapter constantly. Also i thought up some new ideas for the writing section. Here are a few of them. Ghost Ship – A mysterious ghost ship set on fire appears in a bay in Scotland one day. People are frightened and think that the ship has come to haunt the bays of Scotland. A pair of ghost hunters must use their modern technology to see if there really was a ghost ship or if it was just an illusion. (Working Title) - After colonizing An Earth-like planet in the future, the creatures from beneath and above attack the human inhabitants as they try to protect their colony. A San Fierro Murder Story – In the dark alleys of San Fierro during nighttime, the San Fierro slasher whips out his knife and stabs those who are innocent on the streets. The SFPD investigates to see who has been causing one of San Fierro's worst crime streaks every to be reported. Brilliant mate, good ideas there... a murder story set in GTA is a fantastic idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Carbine23 Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 (edited) Brilliant mate, good ideas there... a murder story set in GTA is a fantastic idea Oh crap i forgot this was writers updates not writers ideas and yes it sounds like a good idea. I got the idea a while back when i was in San Fierro in San Andreas and i just kept killing people with the knife. So i just imagined how this would play out in real life and such. Then i saw the movie Zodiac which was very similar to my idea. I'm also going to think of writing short haunted stories like my recent one in the writing section. I don't know if its worth it though since i'm not sure if im capable of making the stories scary. Edited June 20, 2008 by Carbine23 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Damo. Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 (edited) There's been an awful lot of activity in these parts lately. A lot of new people (myself included) are starting out. Anyway, I started a Max Payne fanfic a while back, before my internet got f*cked up. Do any of you think it's any good? I might write something similar when I finish the Spectres, and I'd like to get some opinions. EDIT: Sh*t, thought this was Ideas. Edited June 20, 2008 by Damo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
daviescirca93 Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 I'm back working on Vercetti Stories. I'd like feedback on it as I keep thinking of canning it. But so far it's just conflict between Tommy and Radamel, the story will expand into more, I promise you. I remember making another story in WD a while back, but have no other recollection of it Someone remember it or know what it was called? Shameful really, I forgot my own story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Unvirginiser Posted June 20, 2008 Share Posted June 20, 2008 I'm back working on Vercetti Stories. I'd like feedback on it as I keep thinking of canning it. But so far it's just conflict between Tommy and Radamel, the story will expand into more, I promise you. I remember making another story in WD a while back, but have no other recollection of it Someone remember it or know what it was called? Shameful really, I forgot my own story This? Search is your friend bro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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