starbathe

[Forty]

 

 

[saltinespike]

Did you write this? Or take it from someone else?

 

Poetry isn't really my deal, but if it was, these would seem pretty good.

[Eminence]

Very nice, enjoyable to read. Similarly to what's menionted above, poetry isn't my forte, but despite that I still know enough to enjoy a good piece.

 

I really like a lot of the imagery - it makes you think about being such a small thing in an infinitely large universe. Some of it kinda reminds me of Muse, to be honest - like, reading this gives you the same sort of feeling as listening to some of their music.

 

It's interesting how you've laid it out with the graphic, too - how you've changed the type of font and whatnot. It all adds to the feeling you get whilst reading it, and again gives you a feeling of everything being so spaced out.

 

I enjoyed it, good job.

[Coral_City]

It was a nice poem that I think everyone could enjoy, to be quite honest. I like how you put an emphasis on certain fragments/phrases in order to portray the imagery -- "tiny lights" would be a good example, also I liked how you isolated "empty space" in order to, again, drive home the point which you wanted to make. Of course, it's up to our interpretation as well

 

Overall, it was a good poem with fantastic structure

 

 

[Forty]

Yes I wrote it, and thank you for the kind words.

[rmmstnr]

That certainly contained some fascinating imagery, I'll have to look up more of your stuff