Shutttlecock? Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 even though its a pretty crappy WIP. ill post to get some conversation going. the gfx discussion has been pretty slow. feel free to post anything as well. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funk3h Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 Thats probably because general chat is the place for talking, this is the place for gfx? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4265247 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 30, 2007 Author Share Posted May 30, 2007 Thats probably because general chat is the place for talking, this is the place for gfx? i meant convo about gfx Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4265399 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funk3h Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 Thats probably because general chat is the place for talking, this is the place for gfx? i meant convo about gfx General GFX Discussion. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4265548 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remember This. Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 The image itself is cool, but you really need to loose the words. They totally drag your eyes away from the actual picture. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4265734 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gkl Posted May 30, 2007 Share Posted May 30, 2007 ^ what he said about the text. I don't like how the edge of the pupil is so "strong", uneven, it makes it look unrealistic. Lips are too blurry imo. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4266168 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 30, 2007 Author Share Posted May 30, 2007 Thats probably because general chat is the place for talking, this is the place for gfx? i meant convo about gfx General GFX Discussion. i knew you were gonna post that link. even that has been pretty slow lately. ive often had trouble with eyes and their edges. any tips to get them smoother? i was at a loss while i was doing em. here ill take out the text... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4266639 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 30, 2007 Author Share Posted May 30, 2007 (edited) ^ what he said about the text. I don't like how the edge of the pupil is so "strong", uneven, it makes it look unrealistic. Lips are too blurry imo. sorry for the double post. two windows at once. my fault guys. Edited May 30, 2007 by Shutttlecock? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4266641 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gkl Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 Try learning how to use pen tool, just painting over can get nasty, especially if there's a lot of contrast (like your image). Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4267471 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ottae Posted May 31, 2007 Share Posted May 31, 2007 It's not bad, but the eyes are pretty shocking. You can see where they've been cut out of whatever because it's slightly jaggered and placed on. The right eye even has a kind of meniscus thing going on at the top. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4267650 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 31, 2007 Author Share Posted May 31, 2007 (edited) heres another i did. today. and i also took advice about eyes. ive used the pen tool and i think my eyes are getting alot better... Edited June 1, 2007 by Shutttlecock? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4268619 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dem57 Posted June 1, 2007 Share Posted June 1, 2007 I realy like the first one Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4269197 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 I realy like the first one thanks. i like it too. i never could get those stars aligned though... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4273335 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toni.Cipriani Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 Nice. Is that free-hand or what? I can pull that off, but only through paper and pencil. I love drawing. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4273360 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 Nice. Is that free-hand or what? I can pull that off, but only through paper and pencil. I love drawing. nah PS. i wish i could draw. i try but im pretty bad at it Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4273486 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Remember This. Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 The first of the two new ones is pretty awesome. One thing though, I reckon both stars should be the same color, they look weird when one is white and one is black. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4274155 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 The first of the two new ones is pretty awesome. One thing though, I reckon both stars should be the same color, they look weird when one is white and one is black. thanks dude. i didnt want the white text to stand out all alone though. you know what i mean? thanks for the c&c though dude. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4274614 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otter Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 No, I think he just meant the star. That's actually a f*cking awesome composition. Can we see your source images? I think the C-DIZZ is poorly placed, but over all, brilliant. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4274758 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SHXC Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 Who's "C-Dizz"? I want to know what font that is in Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4274763 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 (edited) Who's "C-Dizz"? I want to know what font that is in its another alias i use to put on my art. the font is called "feedback" yeah ill edit in a sec with some. the sunburst is a brush set though.. i fell in love with the texture when i saw it. yeah i kinda last minute added it in at the end for the sake of tagging it as my own i guess. sources: source 1 original hooded figure. Source 2 the texture i used. sorry i cant find a link to that brush set... the fonts used were "feedback" and"boycott" Edited June 3, 2007 by Shutttlecock? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4274810 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Otter Posted June 3, 2007 Share Posted June 3, 2007 Definitely nice work, bro. Not that my opinion really matters around the cutthroat GFX!!!! area. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4274872 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted June 3, 2007 Author Share Posted June 3, 2007 Definitely nice work, bro. Not that my opinion really matters around the cutthroat GFX!!!! area. yeah thanks man!. oh dont degrade yourself you opinion matters just as much as anyone elses. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/279854-i-noticed/#findComment-4275317 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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