Shutttlecock? Posted May 23, 2007 Share Posted May 23, 2007 a collage of promotional pieces. i like it though... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny_Tightlips Posted May 24, 2007 Share Posted May 24, 2007 The thing about collages is that they bombard you with many things that are all related to the main subject (usually). Now, you've got half of that so far, but I just don't feel like I'm being bombarded yet, you know? All the open space is screaming "Fill me!" Pretty good though for a WIP. ...besides that I ain't sayin nuthin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 25, 2007 Author Share Posted May 25, 2007 The thing about collages is that they bombard you with many things that are all related to the main subject (usually). Now, you've got half of that so far, but I just don't feel like I'm being bombarded yet, you know? All the open space is screaming "Fill me!" Pretty good though for a WIP. yeah i didnt know what else to add to the top. any suggestions? thanks though dude. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gkl Posted May 25, 2007 Share Posted May 25, 2007 Personally I don't think a collage should always bombard with stuff. But talking about this one - I don't really like that the images are cut out rather poorly (especially the main dude's head around the middle of the image). And maybe, yeah, add some more stuff but not too much. Careful with the straight edges, they can make an image look sucky. Ditch the cdizz text (why are you always using that?) because the font is unfitting, drop shadow sucks and, well, yeah But damn I loved that movie, major ass-kicker Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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