The War On Vice.

[BlOoDStReAm101]

War On Vice.

 

 

 

Storyline: 1993, Vicecity. Tommy Vercetti is getting too old to run the city being just one person. Ken Rosenberg just arrived to Vice from the state, San Andreas and hoping to find Vercetti and try to work things out. Meanwhile, a new era has occurred in Vice and it’s the hip-hop, gangster theme. Drug dealers, Burglars, Gangs, and more crime has increased since 86’. But, there is one man, who can help Tommy

and Ken shape Vicecity up, and that’s Niko Bellic.

 

Gangs:

 

The Cholos: A Hispanic gang, are known to be in control of Little Havana and Little Haiti since 84’ till 93’.

 

The Biker Gang: Is a gang that’s controlling many businesses in Downtown and Vice Point.

 

The Vercetti Gang: Is the most powerful organization in Vice City, with virtually all districts under complete control of Tommy Vercetti.

 

Grove Street Families: The Grove Street Families control areas of Ganton and East Los Santos.

 

Varios Los Aztecas: A latin street gang in Little Mexico, distinctly recognised by their turquoise outfits. Heavily involved in gun running and street violence, but slowly diminishing. The Varios Los Aztecas are traditionally anti-narcotics. Gang veteran include Cesar Vialpando.

 

The Leone Family Mafia: Owned by Salvatore Leone, he is out for revenge since 1992 due to Carl Johnson.

 

The Map

WARNING: May contain spoilers on where Niko will head next. view at your own risk!

 

Click here to view the Vice City 93' map.

 

 

 

Characters:

 

Niko Bellic( on map)

Tommy Vercetti([V] on map)

Roman Bellic (not on map)

Carl Johnson ([CJ] on map)

Sweet ([CJ] on map)

Kendal Vialpando ([CV] on map)

Salvatore Leone ([L] on map)

Ken Rosenberg ([V] on map)

Cesar Vialpando ([CV] on map)

Madd Dogg ([CJ] on map)

Dwaine and Jethro ([DJ] on map)

Love Fist (Jazz, Willy, Dick, and Percy)([LF] on map)

The Truth ([TT] on map)

Toni Cipriani ([L] on map)

Joey Leone ([L] on map)

 

NOTE: More characters will be added as the story goes on.

 

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Chapters:

Chapter 1: Come On Feel The Noise...

Chapter 2: Welcome to Vice

Chapter 3: Ken Rosenberg

Chapter 4: What Happened To Grove?

Chapter 5: Surprise, surprise...

Chapter 6: The Reunion

Chapter 7: Where Do You Think You're Going?

 

 

 

Chapter 1: Come on feel the noise…

Monday, June 2nd 1993. 7:48P.M

 

The sunset is shown behind the Malibu Club in Vice Point. Shadows of the club can be seen and two security guards are guarding the front door of the club. A car is then seen pulling up near a curb. The car door opens up and it’s Niko Bellic.

 

Security Guard: Ticket and I.D. please?

 

Niko: What?

 

Security Guard: I.D., sir…

 

Niko gives him his ticket, and flashes his I.D. too quick, and goes inside the club without realizing.

 

Security Guard: Hey! Come back here!

 

The security guard picks up his phone and dials a number…

 

Security Guard: 3-7-8, we need back up.

 

Monday, June 2nd, 1993, 7:55PM

 

Colorful lights are beaming all over the club. A bunch of people are dancing to Love Fist. You can see Love Fist performing a song “Come on, feel the noise” front and center. Niko, shoving people while speed walking, he notices a colored man wearing a dark blue sweater with writings “Madd Dogg” in the middle of the shirt. Next to the man, you can see two men besides him with a 9mm pistol and a Micro SMG in there hands. Niko, knew what was going to happen. He could tell because the men were loading the gun slowly. Then, gunshots were heard. It shot one of the Love Fist members on the leg. You can hear people screaming and running all over the place. Security Guards then came inside the club. Three to Four of them ran passed and bumped into Niko but the same Security Guard from outside the club stepped towards Niko.

 

Security Guard: I’ll deal with you later.

 

Niko: f*ck you man. There’s a crime you need to fix. Now, get the f*ck out of my way, you hear me?

 

More gunshots were heard and you can see the lights from above go off. Some of them fell down and hit dozens of people. The security guard then moved away and pulled out a shotgun from under a table that Love Fist were using for photo signatures.

 

Security Guard: Everyone down!

 

The security guard then shoots one of the men who caused the trouble, but the man who got shot was able to throw the Micro SMG to Madd Dogg. Madd Dogg without hesitating shoots the security guard on the chest. He then, lies on the ground. Dead.

 

Madd Dogg: Do you f*cking hear the noise now, bitches?!

 

Madd Dogg’s Associate: Ay-yo Dogg-we need to be outta here in two.

 

Madd Dogg: Ay-nigga f*ck you man, I call the shots in this joint. I call the f*cking shots! Now, call f*ckin’ Carl, he needs to drive us off outta here. Right now, you keep these mo’f*ckas down. Comprende?

 

Madd Dogg’s Associate: Got it boss.

 

Niko, then realizes that the club is nearly pitch black. He immediately reaches his pants for his Desert Eagle.

 

Niko: No one is going to kill me. Especially that piece of sh*t.

 

Niko then aims the gun toward Madd Dogg. He loaded the gun and was about to shoot him until the Associate attempted to shoot Niko because the man saw Niko aim for Madd Dogg. He missed. In the background you can hear one of the Love Fist members call someone by the name of Tommy.

 

Love Fist member: Tommy, quick come over here! We need your help now! We’re at Malibu Club in Vice Point, hurry Tommy! Ahhh, you f*cking tw*t, you stepped on my leg! One minute later passes and you can see the door opening. It’s a man with gray hair but has the shaped hair as Elvis Presley. He is seen with a black tuxedo and carrying a sawn-off shotgun.

 

Unknown Man: You mother f*ckers. You just ruined my Night Club! And you broke my lights, oh, now you’re going to f*cking pay. You crossed the line buddy.

 

A gun shot hit the Associate. Madd Dogg then fired at the unknown man but was unsuccessful killing him. He then shoots his last bullet at the window and jumps out. Madd Dogg without hesitation jumps into a Greenwood, and the car is seen jetting off the road. After Madd Dogg left, a bunch of people who survived exited the club except Love Fist, Niko and the Unknown Man.

 

Unknown Man: You better come back and pay for this sh*t! Hey. You. Yeah you. Why the f*ck are you still here?

 

Niko: I tried to kill the piece of sh*t. They wasted my six-hundred dollars. You own this place?

 

Unknown Man: I own everything. I own Vicecity.

 

Love Fist: Tommy!

 

Tommy Vercetti: You guys alright?

 

Love Fist Member #1: Yeah, we’re all right. Thanks for saving us. Oh and, thanks for trying man. What’s your name?

 

Niko: Names Niko Bellic. I wanted to see your concert but that sh*t ruined it.

 

Tommy Vercetti: Hey, were all going to be heading to my mansion at Starfish Island. Do you want to join us. They will owe that to you and hopefully, you won’t charge them. You can if you’d like.

 

Niko: You got food?

 

Tommy Vercetti: Plenty my friend.

Edited March 16, 2008 by BlOoDStReAm101

[TubbyJ]

You have real good writing, I mean the dialogue was awesome. I just don't see how Niko Bellic turns up in Vice City in 1993..but it's fan fiction, so who cares? I'm gonna be following this one.

[BlOoDStReAm101]

I'm going to talk about him coming into Vice in this chapter. Enjoy and hopefully, people can post on their thoughts of the story.

 

Chapter 2: Welcome to Vice

Monday, June 2nd 2007. 9:27PM

 

Love Fist, Tommy and Niko are seen driving in a tricked out brand new 1994 Infernus. It’s the most fastest car driven in Vicecity ever. While going to Tommy’s Estate, Niko is looking out the neon lights on certain stores and bars. He sees a Hispanic gang doing graffiti in a nearby alleyway. A block away from them, you can see a man with one arm walking out of Ammunation.

 

Jazz Torrent: So eh Niko, are you new in town?

 

Niko: Yes, I’m new in thown.

 

Willy: So why did you bother to come here?

 

Niko: I’m looking for a place to stay and to relax. But I got no money, no home, no nothing.

 

Dick: Well, you can always relax in The Tommy Estate! Isn’t that right Tommy boy?

 

Tommy: Shut it.

 

Dick: Very well…So uh I call all of the top floor okay?

 

Percy: f*ck you man, One of them is my room.

 

Dick: Sleep with Dwaine and Jethro, they are cool people. Or you can bunk with Rosenberg, I hear he’s coming back from San Andreas. Right Tommy?

 

Tommy: First of all, Dick-head, you aren’t calling no floors in my estate, second, Rosenberg is not going to stay at my mansion. You got it? I don’t need the whole f*cking world in my mansion. It’s only me, Dwaine, Jethro, Niko, and you guys. Nobody else. So shut the f*ck up, and enjoy the ride you pube.

 

It’s silent for about one minute. Niko then speaks up.

 

Niko: What kind of food do you have for me to eat?

 

Tommy: Your really hungry are you?

 

Niko: Plane food sucks.

 

Tommy: Heh, that’s an acceptable answer. We have as much as you can eat. Chicken, salad, pizza, burgers, you name em’. If you want the fancy kind, we got shrimp, pasta, spagehtti, Steak, and a lot more. I just can’t name em’ right now because I’m planning to open up the Cherry Popper again.

 

Percy: Isn’t it already open? I had a Cherry Popper yesterday morning.

 

Tommy: Check the expiration date.

 

Percy is seen with disgust, and is about to vomit.

 

Percy: Oh sh*t man. Jazz, you bought that ice cream right? So, it’s not expired correct?

 

Jazz Torrent: Percy, you idiot, that was a Cherry Popper back in 86. We had to give it an autograph so we can give it to Auntie Poulet, but we forgot for about seven years man. We kept it in the fridge there for a long time in the basement.

 

Percy: Are you f*cking kidding me? You mean to tell me I ate a seven year old Ice-cream?

 

Dick: Crap man, I ate a scoop. I thought it wasn’t half bad.

 

Tommy: Alright guys shut up, we’re here.

 

Monday, June 2nd 1993. 9:34PM

 

The new Infernus is parked outside the garage because Dwaine and Jethro are working on the garage for Tommy. The chain to lift up the garage door broke, so they had to fix it. The Vercetti gang is seen outside the Mansion talking and gesturing.

 

Tommy: How’s it going Dwaine?

 

Dwaine: Good, good. I’ll finish up by tomorrow.

 

Jethro: Man! Hold the f*cking chain!

 

Dwaine: Okay, I will in a minute. Hey, who is this guy?

 

Tommy: That’s Niko. Niko Bellic. He is here because he wants his refund of $600. It’s no problem to pay him, but I didn’t do anything wrong. So I invited him for dinner.

 

Dwaine nods his head and greets him. He then rushes to help Jethro hold the chain before the garage crushes his body.

 

Vercetti Gang Member: Tommy. Well, I’ve been waiting, and…Today’s the day to get my money.

 

Tommy: By Friday. Okay?

 

Vercetti Gang Member: Okay, I can wait. Thanks Tommy.

 

Tommy: Don’t mention it buddy.

 

Niko, Tommy and Love Fist are seen walking on the steps slowly. Then, they finally reach the top of the mansion and inside.

 

Tommy: Welcome to the Tommy Mansion. You can go into the Kitchen, fetch something up for yourself.

 

Niko: Okay. But-uh, where is this kitchen?

 

Tommy: Make a left, and another left, go straight to the end of the hall, and make a right. After that head straight again until there is a dead end, that’s the kitchen.

 

Niko: Okay, I’ll see if I can find that by myself.

 

Tommy: Okay.

 

Niko, turns around and heads to the kitchen by making the first left.

 

Niko: f*cking rich people…

 

Meanwhile back in the main hall entrance, a phone rings near the stairs. Tommy checks the caller I.D. and it said ‘Rosenberg.’ Tommy, then sighed and picked up the phone slowly.

 

Tommy: What the f*ck do you want.

Rosenberg: Tommy, no hi? Come on, man! It’s been over a year just forget about it. I changed, I really change-

Tommy: Bullsh*t.

Rosenberg: Just give me a chance. I’ll promise you I won’t let ya down. What do you say?

Tommy: No.

Rosenberg: Tommy…

Tommy: Fine…But you f*ck up, and your ass is done. Understand?

Rosenberg: Okay, I got ya. Hey, Tommy, tomorrow I arrive to Vice. Care to pick me up?

Tommy: No. I’ll let some guy pick you up. He goes by the name of Niko Bellic. He’ll carry a sign with your sh*tty name on it.

Rosenberg: Okay cool, cool. Man, I can’t wait to return! I mean returning to Vice and all, meeting you again and -

 

Tommy hangs up the phone. He then shouts for Niko to hear from the Kitchen.

 

Tommy: Hey, Niko, I need you to do me a favor tomorrow…Don’t worry, I’ll pay you. But for now, eat and go to bed. Good night.

Edited May 24, 2007 by BlOoDStReAm101

[Red_Jacks&Purple_Nines]

Hey man, this is pretty gosh darn good. I'll be followin' along.

[BlOoDStReAm101]

Chapter three. I kind of rushed it at the end. Sorry for that.

 

 

Chapter 3: Ken Rosenberg

Tuesday, June 3rd, 1993 7:35AM

 

Niko is seen on a queen size bed laying down, sleeping. The sunlight is beaming through the shades which were put down. The room is clean and not a single spot in the room is a mess. Then, the alarm clock rings a tune similar to the Scarface theme. Niko, opens his eyes slowly, and press the alarm button for it to stop playing. Niko then gets up from the bed, and notices a note on a table. He picks it up and reads:

 

Niko, I need to talk to you. I’m busy as of now, so I’m writing this letter to you so I can tell you to do me a slight favor. It’s a one-two-three job and it’s just to pick up a guy name Ken Rosenberg from the Escobar International. I left a poster that says Rosenberg on it. I forgot to add the name “Ken” on it, but you can do that yourself, or, whatever. I’ll pay you, so you don’t need to worry about that. Is $250 dollars good for you? Remember, I’m giving you an easy task so that’s why the price is low. But, it’s probably good for you seeing how you got no money and all. Anyways, Escobar International is not far from Little Havana. If your still not sure since your new in “Thown,” I suggest you use my navigation system on the 1994 Infernus. Good luck, and don’t get caught up on the fun.

 

- Tommy Vercetti

 

Niko then starts to mumble to himself while putting the words “Hen” on the poster instead of “Ken.“ He then leaves the room and onto the driveway.

 

Niko: Okay Tommy; Don’t f*ck me over though. I don’t need that sh*t again…

 

Niko, dumps the poster in the backseat and drives off.

 

Meanwhile

Tuesday, June 3rd, 1993. 7:42AM

 

The scene opens up to a plane. Ken Rosenberg is seen looking out the window and viewing Vicecity below. In about 10-15 minutes, he will land to Vice. But as of now, Rosenberg is seen singing a song in his CD Player.

 

 

Ken Rosenberg: I´m gonna take a little time…A little time to look around me…I´ve got nowhere left to hide…Looks like love has finally found me…In my la-ha-hife! there’s been heartache and pain, I don´t know… if I can face it ah-ge-hen! Can’t stop now, I’ve traveled so far to change this lonely laaaaaaaa-hi-hife, I wanna know what love isss, no-ho-ho, I want you to show me woah-woah-woah-wah-woo, I wanna feel what love issss, I know you can show meeeeeeeeeeee!

 

 

While Ken was singing, Sweet, Kendal, and Cesar are shown five seats behind Ken. They did not notice each other yet. You can see Sweet on the phone with someone.

 

Madd Dogg: Sweet, mah dog, I need you to come quick man. Carl over here is bitching like a little pansy. I just gotta tell you something and that’s - I am neva, eva f*cking going to let him be mah manager in the next year or so. The man lost it Sweet. The man totally f*cking lost it --

 

Sweet: I know, he’s a bit hectic at times. It’ll blow over. I’m just thinking mah bro is nervous for trying to change Vice into a…San Andreas, that’s all. This is new to him, and new to us. So be cool with it man.

 

Madd Dogg: …I guess you right. I mean, I was nervous yesterday about the Malibu Incident dat happened. I capped a Love Fist memba on the leg, that sh*t was funny as hell, man you should’ve been there. But the cops were on me, so I had to roll deep with C.J and we got away. We all ova the news though man. You gotta help us out.

 

Sweet: I will as soon as I get there. You guys meeting us up at, where?

 

Madd Dogg: Stah-fish Island.

 

Sweet: Okay see you there. Peace.

 

Madd Dogg: Peace.

 

Kendal: Sweet.

 

Sweet: Yeah.

 

Kendal: Don’t tell me you want the GSF to be noticed in Vice now, you know that we came here only for me and Cesar’s honeymoon!

 

Sweet: Come on Kendal, we need the reputation worldwide. If we can do this, we can be the most strongest gang ever. I mean, think about it Kendal.

 

Kendal: No. I won’t. You know what, do what you want, Me and Cesar are going to relax and we will not be feed up with yo bullsh*t.

 

Sweet: Whatever.

 

Cesar: Hey Holmes, if you need the Aztecs to come to Vice, I can just call them up esse.

 

Kendal: Cesar!

 

Cesar: What, I’m just helping him out, that’s all baby.

 

Sweet: Thanks Cesar.

 

Cesar: Don’t mention it.

 

Meanwhile, Ken is seen again listening to the music on his CD Player. Sweet, Kendal, and Cesar get a bit angry because of the singing, so Sweet gets up from his chair to warn Ken to shut up. He did not know it was Rosenberg until he went up.

 

Sweet: Hey…

 

Rosenberg: TURN IT UP! THE RADIO! I GOT TO MOVE BABY GIMMIE SOME MORE!

 

Sweet: Hey!

 

Rosenberg: Wha-what?!

 

The two finally recognize each other.

 

Sweet: Ken? Is that you?

 

Rosenberg: Sweet? Hey, hey! Buddy, hows it been?!

 

Sweet: Good, good, you?

 

Rosenberg: Super, super. Going to meet up with an old friend. What are you doing here?

 

Sweet: Kendal and Cesar are having their honeymoon in Vice. And as for me, C.J, me, Madd Dogg, GSF, and the Aztecs are going to…

Sweet knows he can not say anything about taking over Vice. So he lies.

 

Sweet: We’re going to celebrate! Chea, chea, we’re going to celebrate.

 

Rosenberg: Sounds cool, well have fun.

 

The plane finally lands to the runway and then finally stops. Rosenberg greets Kendal and Cesar while heading down the stairs of the plane. While going inside the Airport, Ken is seen trying to look for Niko, but doesn’t spot him for about 2 minutes. He finally sees Niko carrying a sign that says “Hen Rosenberg.” Ken sighs and walks towards him.

 

Rosenberg: You must be Niko.

 

Niko: You must be Hen Rosenberg.

 

Rosenberg: Ken. Ken Rosenberg. Tommy wrote that right, right?! Funny guy.

 

Niko: No, I wrote it.

 

Rosenberg: Oh…Okay.

 

While Ken talked to Niko, Sweet met up with Madd Dogg and Carl Johnson at the airport. Madd Dogg welcomed Sweet, Kendal, and Cesar. Madd Dogg notices that Niko has attempted to shoot him before. Madd Dogg then, pulls out a Uzi and aims for him. Sweet thinking he is going to shoot Ken, Sweet shouts out, “No, he’s a friend. Hold your fire nigga…I said hold your fire!!”

 

Madd Dogg: I wanna kill that guy, not Ken. Jeezus!

 

Sweet: Why?

 

Madd Dogg: He tried to blast me. So I wanna blast him.

 

Sweet: Well, not in the airport, and not around Ken. He’ll think I betrayed him or some sh*t. Do it later.

 

Madd Dogg: Their might not be a “later” nigga.

 

Sweet: Man, shut the f*ck up. Let’s get out of here. Hey, Ken. See you around.

 

Ken: Okay! Oh, hey Carl. How’s it been?

 

Carl: Good, you?

 

Ken: The usual.

 

Carl: Cool, cool.

 

Niko then pushes Ken out of the airport and shoves him to the Infernus.

 

Niko: Get in.

 

Ken: Wow, Tommy must’ve wanted you to rough me up a bit? I’ve changed man, I did--

 

Niko: Shut the f*ck up, and get in the vehicle, I need to get paid.

 

Ken: So, he paid you…Interesting.

 

Niko: Get in or I’ll kill you. I’ll then tell Tommy you got shot. Like he cares anyway.

 

Ken: Okay, okay. Whatever you say.

Niko shoves him inside, and gets in the car. He then speeds off to Starfish Island, to get paid.

Edited May 25, 2007 by BlOoDStReAm101

[John-]

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Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder

[TonyZimmzy]

I'd just started reading until I realized this story is 4-5 months old and is probaly dead now. I was enjoying it, too.

[John-]

Please add a post and account deletion procedure!

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Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder

[Ruthless Killa]

Lol Aww man. This story was getting pretty good.

[BlOoDStReAm101]

I completely forgot about this. I will be sure to add a chapter sometime this week. I promise! It's just that no one has gave a comment about the story that much.

 

- BlOoDStReAm101

[John-]

Please add a post and account deletion procedure!

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Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder

[rehan751]

Hey plz continue the story, its the best I have ever read!!

[BlOoDStReAm101]

Chapter 4: What happened to Grove?

Tuesday, June 3rd 1993 9:03AM

 

The scene opens up in a small low class apartment located in Little Haiti. Madd Dogg and Carl Johnson welcomes Sweet, Kendal and Cesar to their new safe house. Garbage is all over the room and Kendal feels disgusted. Cesar, just looking above the ceiling, he notices a long pipe going from the kitchen to the bathroom. He thinks the water gets shared from the bathroom into the kitchen.

 

Kendal: What the hell is this place?

 

Madd Dogg: Well this is me and CJ’s chill spot, chew know…

 

Kendal: Carl, how can you sleep in this sh*t hole?

 

Carl: Simple, you see that corner over there…?

 

Carl starts laughing, and Madd Dogg begins to chuckle as well.

 

Sweet: Man, we need to go somewhere else and leave you two alone…

 

Madd Dogg: Sweet, calm down dog, this ain’t even are apartment.

 

Sweet: Then whose is it?

 

Madd Dogg: Its Varios Los Aztecas spot. We’re gonna burn this mothef*cker into flames, you down brah?

 

Cesar then pushes Sweet out of the way, and punches Madd Dogg right in the jaw.

 

Cesar: You motherf*cker! You’re not doing sh*t to the Aztecas! You’re not gonna do sh*t!

 

Sweet and Kendal begin to hold Cesar back, but Cesar lets loose and come too close to CJ.

 

Cesar: You were gonna do the same?! Huh? Answer me you piece of sh*t --

 

Carl: Hell no man! I didn’t know this was the Aztecas spot. You know I wouldn’t do this to you!

 

Kendal: Cesar, look at me…Carl wouldn’t do that. Even if he is a dumbass at times… Cesar looks in disbelief. Okay…He is a dumbass all the time, but he does have some knowledge in his brain telling him this ain’t right.

 

Carl: Yeah, man…

 

Cesar: Okay fine…But if I see you do anything to my homies…I swear to god I will kill you, and your little homeboy over there. Points to Madd Dogg on the floor. Now, when are the Aztecas coming here?

 

Carl: Any minute now, I guess…

 

Cesar: Okay, you and Madd Dogg leave. You too Sweet, I don’t trust you.

 

Sweet: What? Come on man…All I want is the Grove and Aztecas to come to Vice and take every f*cking gang in Vice out.

 

Kendal: You wanna do what?! I thought we came here for me and Cesar’s honeymoon?! Ugh, I knew some bullsh*t like this was about to go down!

 

Sweet: Kendal, if we take out every gang here in Vice the GSF can take over.

 

Cesar: This is why I don’t trust you. All you care about is your ‘G.S.F’ gang. You don’t give a sh*t about the Aztecas. You just consider them as the ‘Latin street gang in Little Mexico, recognized by their turquoise outfits.’

 

Sweet: Hell nah, man. Trust me I wouldn’t do that to your crew.

 

Cesar: Take your brother and his friend out of here. Then take your ass outta here as well.

 

Sweet, in rage, exits the apartment leaving CJ and Madd Dogg still in the room.

 

Carl: You making a mistake for not trusting the Johnson Family. You are bout to lose your little girlfriend for good.

 

Kendal: Leave already, Carl and take Madd Hogg or whatever his name is out of here.

 

Cesar: Hey…f*ck you CJ…

 

Cesar flips the bird and Carl just spits on the floor. He drags Madd Dogg out of the apartment. They finally exit.

 

Kendal: Okay, now that they are out of the way…Are we staying in this sh*tty spot?

 

Cesar: Heh, no baby don’t worry. Just lets wait for my gang to come by and we’ll let them take care of this chill spot. When they come, we can leave and head to the richest hotel in Vice City, okay?

 

Kendal: …Okay.

 

Kendal and Cesar kiss. The camera fades out.

[QwertyAAA]

Great writing - although you did merge the canons.

[sweetharmony]

I like htis good work

[BlOoDStReAm101]

Sorry for the delay. Here is another new chapter. Chapter 5. This one is just a funny little promo for now. What will Tommy's reaction be when he finally sees Ken Rosenberg after all those years? Find out!

 

Chapter 5: Surprise, surprise…

Tuesday June 3rd 1993 10:30AM

 

 

The scene opens up in Tommy Vercetti’s Infernus. Niko Bellic is driving while Ken Rosenberg is seen in the back of the car. Niko is curious on why he did not sit in the front.

 

Niko: Hey, why are you not sitting in the front passenger seat?

 

Ken: Huh? Oh, well, I don’t know. I guess I never really thought of sitting there in the first place…God I feel stoned.

 

Niko: That’s not good for you, you know.

 

Ken: What, crack? Yeah, of course it’s not good.

 

Ken Rosenberg looks nervous. It looks like he has been using crack before going on flight.

 

Niko: Look, we are almost there. I know you use those drugs, okay? I can tell…

 

Ken: Really…how?

 

Niko: Well, my cousin Roman, he lives in Liberty City.

 

Ken: Sweet.

 

Niko: Yeah, that’s cool, but he has a drinking problem…When I mean drinking, I mean really drunk. Eh, one time…he was so drunk he slept with one of my girlfriends back in my country. I didn’t do anything to him, because…

 

Ken: Because what?

 

Niko: …because…I slept with his girlfriend!

 

Niko laughs at his own joke. He then behaves all serious like again.

 

Ken: …Wow…So that’s how you people do it over there in Europe…

 

Niko: Eh, something like that, yeah. But anyway, he was always drunk. But he never looked like how you look right now. I can tell it’s drugs…

 

Ken: *sighs* You’re right…

 

Niko: Niko knows everything, trust me okay?

 

They are entering Starfish Island. It does not take long to get to Vercetti’s Estate by now. Ken is more nervous than ever glaring at the mansion outside of the window. The Infernus makes a left and goes inside the Vercetti Estate driveway. Niko opens the car garage when he finds Dwaine and Jethro with an old man that looks like a hippie. He has a red piece of clothing around his forehead. It looks like he’s telling Dwaine and Jethro something. Niko parks his car in front of the garage. He gets out along with Ken. Niko heads to the garage only to see what’s going on.

 

Old Man: --And then BAM! It was all over dudes! I was so stoned I couldn’t tell if that was a crackwhore or my mother!

 

Dwaine and Jethro begin to burst out laughing and start stumbling. Niko chuckles a bit and Ken just smilies a little.

 

Niko: Eh…What’s going on? Who are you…?

 

Old Man: The question is…Who are you friend?

 

Niko: Niko Bellic. I work for Tommy.

 

Old Man: Sweet…Hey…Ken? Is that you…?

 

Ken is seen behind Niko. He realizes he was being called upon and steps out.

 

Ken: Yeah…That’s me. I’m Ken…Ken Rosenberg…Yeah…The cool guy, the rich guy…The moneh mayka…Woo!

 

Old Man: Yeah, okay…That’s cool and all, but I’m The Truth. Remember? From San Fierro? Remember the week you were supposed to head here, I, gave you a whole bunch of…. “powder”…

 

The Truth meant Cocaine. Ken got embarrassed and just acted like he didn’t know him.

 

Ken: I don’t even know you!

 

He changes focus to Dwaine and Jethro.

 

Ken: Dwaine? Jethro? Woo! You guys back in Vice? What went wrong in San Andreas?

 

Dwaine: Yeah…It sucked…bad…dude - woah, that’s really some good stuff you got there Truth…

 

The Truth: Don’t mention it…Just be sure to drop a couple bucks into the van. I need a new van for storage you know.

Dwaine: Yeah man totally…

 

Dwaine just wanders off and heads to those zig-zag shaped bushes. He waves his hands in the air and goes in. They can only see his arms for a couple of seconds because by now, he stumbled to the floor as they did hear a loud thud. Ken is trying to change the subject with the whole use of drugs.

 

Ken: Hey Jethro!

 

Jethro: Hey Ken!

 

Ken: What’s u--

 

Jethro interrupts him. He plays a recognizable song.

 

Jethro: Wanna go for a ride? Sure Ken! Okay! I’m a Barbie girl, my face makes you hurl, said I had it, I should go and fab it. Acne everywhere, unwanted facial hair! --

 

Ken: Enough! God! You know what Niko, let’s…let’s just go inside and see Tommy okay?

 

Niko: Heh, Okay Ken…But don’t you have a ride to catch…?

 

Ken: Bad start to get to know Ken, bad start!

 

Niko laughs and lightly pushes Ken in front of his path.

 

Niko: After you buddy. I am very sure Tommy would like to see you.

 

The Truth: Bye Niko. By Ken. Remember Ken, don’t go too high…

 

Ken: Shut up!

 

The scene slowly fades as Niko and Ken go up the stairs to the mansion…

 

 

Chapter 6 will come pretty early. Probably on Friday. Hope you liked this chapter.

[BlOoDStReAm101]

Here is Chapter 6: The Reunion. In this chapter we will finally see why Tommy hated Ken so much for so long. Will they become friends or not? Also in this chapter Niko gets a call from that special someone...

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Chapter 6: The Reunion

Tuesday June 3rd 1993 10:42AM

 

Niko and Ken Rosenberg are nearly inches away from the front door. Niko grabs the keys to the mansion and starts to open the door. Ken Rosenberg quickly stops him before opening.

 

Ken: Wait, stop.

 

Niko: Why? We are right here.

 

Ken: I know...Just give me a minute or so.

 

Niko: For what?

 

Ken: Look, I haven't seen Tommy in years. He needs to know that I was and will always be a wise man. Not high and nervous.

 

Niko: Don't be ridiculous.

 

Niko opens the door a little bit more. Ken slams the door shut again.

 

Niko: You've got to be kidding me...

 

Ken: Look, just give me a minute. That’s all I need.

 

Niko: Okay. Hurry up though.

 

Niko’s Whiz Mobile cell phone rings. Niko excuses himself and goes down the stairs.

 

Niko: Ey Roman! Hows it been cousin!

 

Roman: Ey! Niko! How is Vice City for you?!

 

Niko: Eh its good. It would be a little better if you sent me to Liberty City with you.

 

Roman: I know, but the damn Louie guy you know? He didn't want immigrants to Liberty City. Plus the price tag was too high for me cousin.

 

Niko: Well, don't you have the mansion and money?

 

Roman: ...Of course... It's just I must save my cousin. Once you can be so rich... Then poor all of a sudden.

 

Niko: Oh well, Vice City here is good. Better than nothing.

 

Roman: Thats good to hear. Hey I was just calling to see how are you. Also, I'm thinking of sending you to Liberty City. Have a car Niko?

 

Niko: Yes, of course. But if I travel to Liberty City with car, wouldn't they catch me?

 

Roman: I'm not sure. But I'm planning cousin. Just be careful and I'll call you back soon okay?

 

Niko: Okay. Bye.

 

Roman: Bye.

 

Niko hangs up. But then suddenly it rings again. He picks it up

 

Niko: Hello?

 

Tommy: Tell that douche bag to stop opening and closing the door. I can see him...I still don't like him.

 

Niko: Okay, I'll be sure to tell him this.

 

Tommy hangs up. Niko closes his cell phone and puts it on his right pocket.

 

Niko: Rosenberg…

 

Ken: Yes?

 

Niko: Tommy said to quit opening and closing the door. He can see you and he doesn’t like you.

 

Ken: Tell me something I don’t know will you Niko?

 

Niko: Um, okay. I’m telling you to get inside the mansion or I will come over there and kick your ass.

 

Ken without hesitating, opens the door slowly and waits for Niko to come with him inside. Niko then skips two stairs at a time and finally makes it on the top. It probably took him two seconds to get in front of the door and inside the mansion. Ken and Niko are seen inside the mansion wandering their eyes around, looking at the main lobby entrance. It looks empty. But Ken just examines the room before telling Niko something.

 

Ken: Alright, he’s not here yet, which is how I do not understand how he saw me do that…But I just want to tell you that ---

 

Tommy interrupts him. Ken looks straight at him right away.

 

Tommy: That you are a crackhead? Low life? Backstage dancer with the Village people? Is that what you wanted to say? Or maybe you wanted to tell him that you came here to get more drugs here at Vice. After all, this is the place for it.

 

Ken: Listen…Tommy I’m ---

 

Tommy: Broke? In love with Dwaine? Need a job cause you can’t afford things anymore? Is that it? f*ck off Ken. I do not want to see you in this mansion again. You f*cked me over. Now It’s time I did the same.

 

Ken: Enough! I’m sick of you always controlling me. I’m not broke, I’m NOT in love with Dwaine you freak. But I do need a job okay? And I never f*cked with you. You were Tommy Vercetti. The King of Vice City. Why would I do that to you pal?

 

Tommy: Don’t call me pal.

 

Ken: Hear me out Tommy. That’s all I need from you right now. Seven years ago wasn’t supposed to happen like that. I specifically told Lance Vance to work as an undercover spy on the Forelli Family for you. I’m guessing he betrayed you because he got too close with them. Also for the money the Forelli’s were offering to have him kill you. I’m the one who figured this out because I told him to spy in the first place. Taking Lance Vance out was a right thing to do anyway. He wasn’t a true friend like how I was to you. If the Forelli’s offered me the money, I would have denied them and shot them right on the spot. Wanna know why? Because I am your friend. I will always be your friend. And I also know you were mad at me that I stole 120 pounds of cocaine at the Crackhouse Den were The Cholos has sold to me. I am sorry for that and I know you told me not to be a drug addict again. But I promise you starting today, I will not do drugs! I hope you now understand after all these years. I’ve been trying to tell you this since San Andreas over at the payphone. You just never picked up…I just want to become buddies again…

 

Tommy slowly puts his head down for a minute or so to soak it all in. It’s dead silence. Niko is just listening to all of this unfold and Ken looks relieved. Tommy picks up his head and stares at Ken in the eye for a couple of seconds. PSSH! Tommy slapped Ken in the face. Ken looks back at Tommy in confusion. Niko is confused now as well. The silence continues until finally Tommy speaks up.

 

Tommy: I can’t believe you didn’t tell this to me! I’ve been hating you for no apparent reason! Come here!

 

Ken smiles and they hug. They stop hugging and the chattering begins. Ken and Tommy walk away and begin to talk about the whole situation. You can hear Ken say “That slap hurts. I’ll tell ya, you’re still strong!” Niko grins of what turned out to be a good day for both Ken and Tommy. Niko checking his pocket to pick up his cell phone. It’s ringing. Niko picks it up and adjusts it to his ear.

 

Niko: Hello?

 

Roman: Hey Niko! I think you have an opportunity to see me at Liberty City!

 

Niko: Are you serious Roman? How!

 

Niko becomes excited and he heads out to the door and goes down the front stairs to the driveway.

 

Roman: Okay, it’s simple but it can risk your life Niko. Are you sure you want to do this?

 

Niko: Roman, I can take anything.

 

Roman: Okay…There is this Italian man I know that practically runs Liberty City. His name is Salvatore Leone. He is the leader of the Leone Family. He wants you to work for him because I told him about you. It’s a one time job so make sure you stop by where I live!

 

Niko: Of course cousin I will. I would love to see your mansion and success. What is your address so I know where you live?

 

Roman, stuttering a bit and sounds nervous

 

Roman: Oh…It’s-um…well…I am sure Salvatore Leone will tell you. It will be easier for you to remember from there. Okay?

 

Niko: No problem brate

 

Roman: Alright, since you are in Vice city. You must head to the Leone Family Villa at Little Havana. There will be a group of Italian men in front of the building. They drive black Sentinels just so you know, okay?

 

Niko: Okay. I will see you soon.

 

Roman: Same here cousin, same here…

 

Niko: Talk to you later.

 

Roman: Ciao.

 

Niko: Haha…Ciao Roman.

 

Niko hangs up and put the Whiz Mobile back on his right pocket. He smiles and goes inside the Vercetti Mansion to pick up his check from Tommy. Camera fades out

Edited March 8, 2008 by BlOoDStReAm101

[.AshRemains]

Sweet story man.

[BlOoDStReAm101]

Sorry for the 72 Hour delay for Chapter 7. I've been thinking about what should happened in chapter 7 and I think this will keep you wondering where Niko will head next.

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Chapter 7: Where Do You Think You’re Going?

June 4th 1993, 9:14AM

 

The scene opens up at Niko’s bed room. It’s like Deja-vu again because he wakes up by the sound of a scarface theme song coming from an alarm clock. He gets up, and turns off the alarm tirelessly. It takes Niko time before he stands up to his own two feet. When he does, he heads to the kitchen to fetch something to eat.

 

Niko: Ey, do you know where Tommy is right now?

 

Niko is speaking to Tommy’s butler, Stan.

 

Stan: Yeah, he’s outside with Ken, Truth, Dwaine and Jethro.

 

Niko picks up his bagel and heads out.

 

Niko: Alright, thank you very much.

 

Niko heads outside and goes down the stairs and goes to the garage which is open.

 

Ken: Hey, hey! Niko! Hows it been? Thanks for everything man! Without you, none of this would have ever happened!

 

Niko: What? Are you high again?

 

Tommy: I’d kick his ass if he was.

 

Ken laughs as well as everyone else.

 

The Truth: Haha…oh man… You’re f*cked Ken. Give it up! *Truth joked at Ken*

 

Ken: I’m not high. I’m serious Tommy.

 

Tommy believes him, so he just nods his head.

 

Niko: While this is all fun, picking on Ken, I need to talk to you Tommy.

 

Tommy: Yeah?

 

Niko: Alone, please.

 

Tommy: Alright fine.

 

Niko and Tommy leave the garage to a place were no one can see them.

 

Tommy: I feel awkward. Make this quick.

 

Niko: Alright, I’ll try to…

 

Tommy: Okay, go talk.

 

Niko: Yesterday, I received a call from my cousin Roman -

 

Tommy: You have a cousin?

 

Niko: Yes. I do. Okay, so my cousin calls from Liberty City and -

 

Tommy: Liberty City eh?

 

Niko: Yeah. Liberty City…Look, can I speak already?

 

Tommy: Alright, fine.

 

Niko: My cousin Roman calls from Liberty City and he tells me that I have a chance to go there. But I need to do a job for his friend. I don’t know who he is and I don’t know what he is offering me, but I’m willing to do it. I must see my cousin before I head back to my country.

 

Tommy: You’re only visiting Vice?

 

Niko: Yeah, for three months only and I want to see my cousin in Liberty City before I leave to the country.

 

Tommy: Ah…I see.

 

Niko: So, starting today, I’m heading out…

 

Tommy rubs his chin and thinks for a second.

 

Tommy: So what you’re saying is that you don’t want to hang out with us?

 

Niko: I might come back to see you guys.

 

Tommy: I still have jobs for you though, that need to be done.

 

Niko: I never agreed to work for you. I only wanted my refund for the Love Fist concert and I want my money that you promised you were going to give me when I picked up Ken.

 

Tommy: And I will give it to you. But I need you to stay and work for me.

 

Niko: How bout when I come back?

 

Tommy: You probably won’t come back.

 

Niko: How do you know this?

 

Tommy: Because if I was an immigrant and had an opportunity to live in Liberty City, I would stay.

 

Niko: I don’t know where my cousin lives though. He said he lived in a mansion.

 

Tommy: No immigrant can afford a mansion. He’s probably bullsh*tting.

 

Niko: Well, he is not lying okay? He does have a mansion, I know so.

 

Tommy: Fine. Go to Liberty. Here, *Tommy gives Niko his money that he was supposed to get for picking up Ken* take your money and pay for your ticket.

 

Niko jerks the money and counts it while listening to Tommy speak. He then puts it in his pocket.

 

Niko: Roman’s friend is giving me a free ticket. That way, I don’t need to pay.

 

Tommy: Well…Good luck to Liberty. You know what they say?

 

Niko: What.

 

Tommy: “Welcome to Liberty City! Worst Place In America!”.

 

Niko: Funny.

 

Tommy: It’s true. You’ll see for yourself.

 

Niko, turns away from Tommy to head inside the mansion to get his things.

 

Tommy: Oh and Niko…

 

Niko: Yes?

 

Tommy: I was going to give you a safe house I found at Little Havanna. I will give it to you, if you come back and stay in Vice.

 

Niko: Alright. I’ll think about it.

 

Tommy: Also, if you do decide to come back, I will pay you so much money, you will have a mansion of your own Niko.

 

Niko just grins and goes inside the mansion. Tommy smiles and heads back to the garage where Ken, Truth, Dwaine and Jethro are. The scene fades to black.

 

[GoGoGadgetFlow]

pretty cool man

[John-]

Please add a post and account deletion procedure!

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Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder

[BlOoDStReAm101]

I'm very glad that you liked my story, but I cannot just update it if one person liked it. I barely get any feedback, so that is why I stopped working on it. If however I do get more feedback, then I might update it. Otherwise, it will just remain dead until I revive the story.

[Gabriel Constantin]

I'm very glad that you liked my story, but I cannot just update it if one person liked it. I barely get any feedback, so that is why I stopped working on it. If however I do get more feedback, then I might update it. Otherwise, it will just remain dead until I revive the story.

Then it deserves to sink to the bottom of the page and die then. You're writing for all the wrong reasons, my friend. You don't write for feedback, you write to write. If you need feedback in order to progress your story, then you need to think to yourself whether you actually like writing; or whether you just like to hear people saying nice things about you.

[Wanted Assailant]

Exactly what Gabe said. Writing for the wrong reasons. It might seem cliche to say that over and over, but it's exactly correct. I write because I love writing, and it gives me a way to express my imagination and whatnot.

 

Expecting feedback is like expecting tremendous sales for a published book. But there's a difference, you're not published and the continuity of your work isn't based on sales. So it doesn't truly matter if you got thousands of goody feedback or not.

 

 

 

Wanted Assailant now awaits for bloodstream101 to say" I'm not gonna write no more" and discontinue the piece like all the other GTA fanfics garbaged here.

[John-]

Please add a post and account deletion procedure!

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More and more people are concerned about online privacy. Therefore we encourage online services to create an account deletion option, hopefully transparent and easily executed by the user. By anonimising personal data, retained data is rendered inadequate for (commercial) use. As more people use such measures, the urge for deletion options becomes stronger.

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Edited December 29, 2013 by Lance_Ryder

[BlOoDStReAm101]

I love writing. In fact, I enjoy it. I just thought no one would be interested in the story. That is why I gave up. But, now that I see people do read stories at the Writer's Discussion; So I thought twice, and now here is a new chapter. Enjoy.

 

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Chapter 8: Worst Place in America!

June 5th 1993, 7:29AM

 

The scene opens up at the front of Vercetti's mansion. The sun is beaming down on the driveway. Tommy, and Ken are seen next to a Stretch limousine waiting for Niko to wake up and be surprised by his transportation to the Escobar International Airport.

 

Ken: Hey Tommy, what are we doing outside with a Stretch?

 

Tommy: It's Niko's day of deployment.

 

Ken: For what? Where is he going?

 

Tommy: Liberty City, with his cousin, Roman...

 

Ken: And how come I never knew about this?

 

Tommy: You're not important, in case you never knew.

 

Ken: I'm shocked.

 

Tommy: Don't be.

 

Ken: I was kidding, Tom.

 

Tommy: Tom? Who the hell do you think I am? Don't call me names like that again, asswipe. Now go...

 

Ken: Go where?

 

Tommy: Wake up Niko damn it!

 

Ken goes inside the mansion to awake Niko. He heads to his room and notices Niko is already awake just sitting by the window writing something.

 

Ken: Knock, knock--heh, can I come in?

 

Niko: It's not my room...

 

Ken: Guess you have a point...Um, hey, how come you never told me you were leaving.

 

Niko: You're not important.

 

Ken looks dumbfounded.

 

Ken: ...Why?! Don't you know who I am.

 

Niko: No... I don't know who I am anymore, either. But we have something in common I guess.

 

Ken: ...Yeah.

 

Niko: Actually...No.

 

Ken: Right. So, off you go now huh?

 

Niko: Yeah.

 

Niko, getting up from his chair, puts some letter in his pocket and heads out the door without Ken. Ken looks left out.

 

Ken: Ahh I miss CJ...

 

Tommy spots Niko in front of the mansion door. Tommy grins, but looks away and turns to the window of the Stretch.

 

Niko: Hey. Tommy.

 

Tommy: Niko, my man. You gonna miss us? I mean-uh...me?

 

Niko: What would I do without you... *saying sarcastically*

 

Tommy: Just remember the history we had.

 

Niko: What history? I've only seen you in less than a week.

 

Tommy: The only week that will be memorable.

 

Niko: I've seen more memorable things than this.

 

Tommy: Heading at Honkers, isn't one of them.

 

Niko: Ah...You got me.

 

Tommy: Haha, you see Niko. You and I are somewhat identical. More of the same, actually. Have you ever been in war?

 

Niko: No. But I know, when I will...

 

Tommy: You don't want to buddy. I've seen things you never wanted to see. Including Ken's ass.

 

Niko ...?

 

Tommy: Don't ask. I was drunk.

 

Niko: ...Okay...

 

Tommy: *laughing* I'm kidding you Balkan bastard!

 

Niko: Look, can you take me to Leone's mansion or what?

 

Tommy: What did you say...?

 

Niko: Leone's Mansion. It's in Little Haiti I believe. Roman told me.

 

Tommy: I can't let you go there Niko. Trust me on this one. I'm going to have to take you to the Escobar International Airport.

 

Niko: I'm going to the Airport. But with the Leone. I need to work with them in order to see Roman.

 

Tommy: That's bullsh*t Niko. I can't let you go. I'm sorry.

 

Niko: *Niko shrugs* That's no problem. I'll just go myself. Goodbye Tommy.

 

Niko starts walking away from Tommy. But suddenly Tommy pulls him back by the shirt.

 

Tommy: No! You can't come alone. Damn...You don't know what you're getting yourself into. You and Roman you hear!

 

Niko: If it's going to Liberty City...Then that's the risk I must take. It's not such a big deal.

 

Tommy: I gotta call Phil Cassidy on this one. Stay here.

 

Niko: Who?

 

Tommy: Sh.

 

Tommy quickly dials Phil's number and waits for a response.

 

Tommy: Hey, Phil. We got an issue...My friend Niko here is heading to Little Haiti to meet up with a Leone member. I can't let him go alone so I'm asking if you can go with him.....What?....You're where?....San Andreas?! For what?!....Fly your ass back in Vice City A-S-A-P.....Goodbye!

 

Niko: Tommy, I'm sorry, but I have to go...

 

Tommy: You must wait for Phil. He will be your protection.

 

Niko: I don't need protection. You and I are not friends. Now, seriously bye.

 

Niko leaves Tommy behind and gets a Taxi. Tommy is seen chasing the Taxi for a few seconds before he stops to catch his breath.

 

Tommy: Son of a bitch!

 

Tommy quickly dials Phil's number again.

Tommy: Forget it Phil...He's off.

 

Tommy hangs up, and the only thing you hear before the camera fades out is the word "damn..."

Edited August 30, 2008 by BlOoDStReAm101