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1st person to guess what car is this all about gets a cookie.

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I don't know what car, but jesus christ. You have talent. Looks like something you would find on a retro style t-shirt, verey professional looking.

 

How did you do it? I love it.

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Looking pretty good, nice retro style you have going there. But I'm definitely not a fan of the composition, imo the top mix should be a bit more centered horizontally. I don't find the lines at the bottom that exciting, they're a start but need some more details. I think overall the image needs some more details.

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The composition is too busy IMO... The vintage "cluttered" look is one thing, but there has to be a defining point at which foreground and background divide. My eyes are too assulted with forms to make heads or tails of anything upon first glance. You can maintain the variation of several layers, but with more contrast between foreground and background.

 

More importantly, the image's offset is queer. There's too much space between the bottom part of the main cluster and the yellow line, imho. Also, consider putting a dash of purple in the bottom set of thumbnails to balance color in the image. I'm not trying to make you turn this into a symmetric deal, but balance is quite important and this work doesn't have 'it' quite yet.

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IMO its a good composition, The right part is a bit clear maybe, but it looks good, for a gallery. the 'utopian' font dont seem to fit with the style tounge.gif

 

PD. Podrías decir la marca al menos biggrin.gif

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Shutttlecock?

i love this piece.

if you could pm me with some tips maybe?

im trying to get into the style but i dont

really know much.

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I love your pieces.

and its about Edsels.

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@gkl & havana: yeah, now that I look at it, the whole composition feels very inconsistent. There's not enough contrast, and all that stuff in the lower part feels out of place. Also, I find the backround paper texture very ugly (too blurry). I'll try to not repeat this kind of mistakes in the future. Big thank you for the advice. icon14.gif

 

@Jost: de eso se trataba, de decir la marca. wink.gif

 

@Shuttlecock: sure, just ask me anything you wanna know.

 

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dertyjerzian

man that looks so awesome, I've got one itsy bitsy gripe, there's a bit of wasted real estate.

 

In my eyes, if u enlarge the main overlay (cars/words) to cover a bit more it would be complete, unless of course the whole thing is an underlay to some text etc? Looks awesome though man, I just had to tell ya.

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