Mullen Posted May 2, 2007 Share Posted May 2, 2007 1st person to guess what car is this all about gets a cookie. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Funk3h Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 I don't know what car, but jesus christ. You have talent. Looks like something you would find on a retro style t-shirt, verey professional looking. How did you do it? I love it. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/#findComment-4218922 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gkl Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 Looking pretty good, nice retro style you have going there. But I'm definitely not a fan of the composition, imo the top mix should be a bit more centered horizontally. I don't find the lines at the bottom that exciting, they're a start but need some more details. I think overall the image needs some more details. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/#findComment-4219400 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havana Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 The composition is too busy IMO... The vintage "cluttered" look is one thing, but there has to be a defining point at which foreground and background divide. My eyes are too assulted with forms to make heads or tails of anything upon first glance. You can maintain the variation of several layers, but with more contrast between foreground and background. More importantly, the image's offset is queer. There's too much space between the bottom part of the main cluster and the yellow line, imho. Also, consider putting a dash of purple in the bottom set of thumbnails to balance color in the image. I'm not trying to make you turn this into a symmetric deal, but balance is quite important and this work doesn't have 'it' quite yet. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/#findComment-4220065 Share on other sites More sharing options...
JostVice Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 IMO its a good composition, The right part is a bit clear maybe, but it looks good, for a gallery. the 'utopian' font dont seem to fit with the style PD. Podrías decir la marca al menos Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/#findComment-4222461 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 i love this piece. if you could pm me with some tips maybe? im trying to get into the style but i dont really know much. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/#findComment-4222619 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xo4 Posted May 5, 2007 Share Posted May 5, 2007 I love your pieces. and its about Edsels. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/#findComment-4222647 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mullen Posted May 5, 2007 Author Share Posted May 5, 2007 I love your pieces.and its about Edsels. ! @gkl & havana: yeah, now that I look at it, the whole composition feels very inconsistent. There's not enough contrast, and all that stuff in the lower part feels out of place. Also, I find the backround paper texture very ugly (too blurry). I'll try to not repeat this kind of mistakes in the future. Big thank you for the advice. @Jost: de eso se trataba, de decir la marca. @Shuttlecock: sure, just ask me anything you wanna know. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/#findComment-4222727 Share on other sites More sharing options...
dertyjerzian Posted May 6, 2007 Share Posted May 6, 2007 man that looks so awesome, I've got one itsy bitsy gripe, there's a bit of wasted real estate. In my eyes, if u enlarge the main overlay (cars/words) to cover a bit more it would be complete, unless of course the whole thing is an underlay to some text etc? Looks awesome though man, I just had to tell ya. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276947-new-piece/#findComment-4223076 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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