Shutttlecock? Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 i edited out the boobies just to be safe even though you really couldnt make much out anyway. if any moderator has a problem ill take it down. i thank the model you can find her at deviantart vivenrican Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276772-here-it-is/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havana Posted May 1, 2007 Share Posted May 1, 2007 text - nobody wants to have to read that near-invisible sh*t ... reduce to a couple words or nix it dem cracks - rather unrealistic and pixellated as all hell ... why do the cracks behave differently around the flooze (bad continuity) woman - also very pixellated... don't try to make small images big, it doesn't work I promise overall, the style is old and tired. Nobody likes grunge anymore, it sort of died sometime back in 2003. Try a steampunk-oriented deal if that's your sort of colourset and style, it's basically grunge that people actually like looking at sometimes. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276772-here-it-is/#findComment-4214667 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 1, 2007 Author Share Posted May 1, 2007 text - nobody wants to have to read that near-invisible sh*t ... reduce to a couple words or nix itdem cracks - rather unrealistic and pixellated as all hell ... why do the cracks behave differently around the flooze (bad continuity) woman - also very pixellated... don't try to make small images big, it doesn't work I promise overall, the style is old and tired. Nobody likes grunge anymore, it sort of died sometime back in 2003. Try a steampunk-oriented deal if that's your sort of colourset and style, it's basically grunge that people actually like looking at sometimes. yeah i kinda didnt like the text but it looked empty without it. the background image is pretty pixilated i give you that. the woman has a grain filter on her so shes mean to look semi pixiliated. well i enjoy doing that style so i think ill stick with it. do you have any examples of steampunk-oriented? well thanks for the criticism dude. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276772-here-it-is/#findComment-4214823 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havana Posted May 1, 2007 Share Posted May 1, 2007 it seems to be applied to lots of terrible looking animu bullsh*t, so perhaps I shouldn't use that term. I noticed that the whole neoclassic deal seems to be showing up in places where grungey sort of stuff used to prevail. Use the objects featured here if you want inspiration for the style I'm talking about I wouldn't have applied the grain filter, it just looks sort of gnarly... Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276772-here-it-is/#findComment-4214862 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 1, 2007 Author Share Posted May 1, 2007 it seems to be applied to lots of terrible looking animu bullsh*t, so perhaps I shouldn't use that term. I noticed that the whole neoclassic deal seems to be showing up in places where grungey sort of stuff used to prevail. Use the objects featured here if you want inspiration for the style I'm talking about I wouldn't have applied the grain filter, it just looks sort of gnarly... you mean like those chinese cartoons? i cant stand that crap. nice stuff on the link. thanks havana. i know i shouldnt use it so much but i like the effect of the grain filter ill try to lay off it though. thanks man. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276772-here-it-is/#findComment-4214870 Share on other sites More sharing options...
gkl Posted May 3, 2007 Share Posted May 3, 2007 I agree with pretty much everything Havana said, but imo you should also fix that censorship thing you have going on there, as it looks like crap. If you are going to take nipples (omg the horror! stupid rules) out, do it with style and don't use so obvious boxes. Or make them good looking heh Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276772-here-it-is/#findComment-4218539 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shutttlecock? Posted May 4, 2007 Author Share Posted May 4, 2007 I agree with pretty much everything Havana said, but imo you should also fix that censorship thing you have going on there, as it looks like crap. If you are going to take nipples (omg the horror! stupid rules) out, do it with style and don't use so obvious boxes. Or make them good looking heh yeah i see the obvious flaws. i didnt have any other idea on how to get rid of the nips. i hate the fact you cant post that kinda stuff here. its retarded. but yeah. thanks dude. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276772-here-it-is/#findComment-4219950 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Havana Posted May 4, 2007 Share Posted May 4, 2007 Well, most kosherification (read: whitewashing) with nipples involves simply photoshopping out the actual nipple and keeping the breast. Essentially, ( o ) >>> ( ) so you're literally just taking out the nip and that somehow makes it better... If you want to have a proper round II at this, get a hi-res stock photo of a similar crackly deal and try again using the suggestions. We GFX commentators tend to give more tips when shown improvement Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/276772-here-it-is/#findComment-4220043 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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