Oxidizer Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 (edited) Completely pointless and ridiculously short (I might expand it later on or something); enjoy? **************** "My handyman!" Asuka exclaimed upon his approach, her voice a scream to be heard over the pounding beats of the Prodigy's No Good in the supposedly disused warehouse. "I was beginning to think that you weren't going to show." The crowd of jeering ravers humped the air violently as DJ Jelly Doughnut continued to spin his decks. Maria nodded in his direction. "Heya Fido." A predatory look filled her eyes as she looked him up and down, it wasn't until she received a painful nudge by her more-than-close friend that she tore herself away from eyeing him up. "Sorry I'm late," Claude explained, scratching the back of his head awkwardly. "I got distracted by one of the women outside. You know how it is." Asuka and Maria looked at each other mischievously and smirked. "All too well." END Edited March 14, 2007 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 Although it IS really short, I like it. I like the way you write... Loved that other short story, "Score" (was that the name?). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted March 2, 2007 Author Share Posted March 2, 2007 (edited) Oh, yeah! I forgot about that. Glad you liked it BTW. Edited March 3, 2007 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-/TNT\- Posted March 2, 2007 Share Posted March 2, 2007 I'm with Sinful's opinion. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oxidizer Posted March 2, 2007 Author Share Posted March 2, 2007 (edited) Thanks! Edited March 5, 2007 by Oxidizer Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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