Poem.

[Hell No..]

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You made her cry,

you made her weep,

now she cannot hardly sleep.

 

You make her life a living hell,

even though you cannot tell,

 

What once was good,

has now gone bad,

just because you think your hard,

 

You wreck the house out of spite,

just because you think your right,

 

I hate you now for what you've done,

simply because you think you've won,

 

So leave us now and dont come back,

whats done is done,

so how about that?

 

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Ry.

[Canofceleri]

Well, it's not good. But, I don't know who you are or how old you are. Poetry does not have to be good though, it just has to be good to sell or for other people to like it. But there is a message that just needs to be conveyed sometimes, regardless of the language used. It can be cathartic.

 

If writing is really a passion of yours, you should try and hone your craft and get better. The only thing that'll make it better is reading and writing more.

[Hell No..]

Thanks. Its something I wrote at like 4am this morning just sitting in my bed with my GF. Its all based on the past few weeks with my Mum and now ex boyfriend. So true things.