Warrior_Boi Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 This is another fanfic I've been working on since I've beaten Bully a couple months ago. Its a sequal to the original. Here is the sypnosis to my new story. Hope you guys like it! Bully 2: (Working Title) It has been a year since the events in Bully happened. A now 16 year old Jimmy Hopkins has begun the new school year with a nice start and is still "The King of the School". Gary and his fiendish actions has been long since forgotten by Jimmy and the entire school including the School Staff. After being taken out by Jimmy by the orders of Dr. Crabblesnitch, Gary has been locked up in the Bullworth Mental Asylum for special treatment on his mental condition. Gary has long since wanted revenge on Jimmy for ruining his life even more than before, and to get revenge on the school for going against him. Gary has been being tortured in the asylum for a whole year, until he meets another mysterious patient who has the same intentions as Gary, to destroy Bullworth Academy! The mysterious man promises Gary that they will rule the whole city one day with some very special help from a mysterious item. The two breaks out of the Asylum and heads for Old Bullworth Vale to carry out their fiendish plan. After a few disasters around the school, the staff and students including Jimmy thinks that the prankster is their old enemy Gary. After a few twistes and turns Gary's and the man's plans are succeedind. Now, its up to Jimmy Hopkins to save the day and all of Bullworth from the huge threat. Along the mischievous journey, Jimmy will meet up with old and new companions and a few foes as well. Can Jimmy save Bullworth from Gary and the mysterious man's threat? Stay tuned! What you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 I'm guessing English isn't your strong point, as there are a few errors there. Also I don't remember Dr.Crabblesnitch telling Jimmy to take out Gary, Jimmy did it because he wanted revenge. Oh well, when can we expect Chapter 1? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 13, 2007 Author Share Posted January 13, 2007 I meant by the part Crabblesnitch told him to "Take out the trash". I just wanted to add that cause it sounded cool. (IMO) Expect it by tomorrow cause right now its currently past midnight and I'm hella tired. Until then stay tuned. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 I don't think this is gonna work, and I really don't feel like reading another one of your stories. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 I don't think I'll read it, but: You should NOT have put it all just as an intro. You should have write everything you just posted as a chapter, if you know I mean. The main reason I ain't gonna read it is 'cause I've just unlocked chap II of Bully Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 13, 2007 Author Share Posted January 13, 2007 I don't think I'll read it, but:You should NOT have put it all just as an intro. You should have write everything you just posted as a chapter, if you know I mean. The main reason I ain't gonna read it is 'cause I've just unlocked chap II of Bully Its alright you gys ain't gonna read it, but I still want to continue my career as writer! (Couldn't think of a perfect smiley) @ Sinful: Chapter 2 huh? Which mission you on? I liked Chapter 2 alot, cause it was fun. I would help you in missions, but I don't feel like spoiling it for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 I don't think I'll read it, but:You should NOT have put it all just as an intro. You should have write everything you just posted as a chapter, if you know I mean. The main reason I ain't gonna read it is 'cause I've just unlocked chap II of Bully Its alright you gys ain't gonna read it, but I still want to continue my career as writer! (Couldn't think of a perfect smiley) @ Sinful: Chapter 2 huh? Which mission you on? I liked Chapter 2 alot, cause it was fun. I would help you in missions, but I don't feel like spoiling it for you. That's one of the reasons I won't be reading either. Never even played Bully yet and don't wan't to be spoiled by stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 13, 2007 Author Share Posted January 13, 2007 (edited) I don't think I'll read it, but:You should NOT have put it all just as an intro. You should have write everything you just posted as a chapter, if you know I mean. The main reason I ain't gonna read it is 'cause I've just unlocked chap II of Bully Its alright you gys ain't gonna read it, but I still want to continue my career as writer! (Couldn't think of a perfect smiley) @ Sinful: Chapter 2 huh? Which mission you on? I liked Chapter 2 alot, cause it was fun. I would help you in missions, but I don't feel like spoiling it for you. That's one of the reasons I won't be reading either. Never even played Bully yet and don't wan't to be spoiled by stuff. Oh poo. I guess this story will go uncontinued. I never knew alot of people never played Bully yet. Well I don't want to spoil everyone on the game itself, because my story talks alot about what happened in the game. Once again I'm sorry. Whoever is in charge can shut the story down. I'm working on a new story anyways. I might post it by Monday. Edited January 13, 2007 by Warrior_Boi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 I'm working on a new story anyways. I might post it by Monday. Too many stories, you drop other ones like GSF_Membuh (He's made like 10 or something) I say just stick to two max, are you still continuing your other one? I was reading it casually Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 14, 2007 Author Share Posted January 14, 2007 I'm working on a new story anyways. I might post it by Monday. Too many stories, you drop other ones like GSF_Membuh (He's made like 10 or something) I say just stick to two max, are you still continuing your other one? I was reading it casually Never heard of that GSF guy. I'll post anew chapter for Life and Times tomorrow. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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