GTAFreak808 Posted January 10, 2007 Share Posted January 10, 2007 My second FanFic. I've been working on this longer than my other one and I think you guys should read it. I've had some good reviews for this at school and some other sites. Hope you guys like this one. Here is the sypnosis. Don't worry about my other Fic. I can finish two at the same time. (Maybe) Nah, just jokin'. Grand Theft Auto: The Final Chapter of Theft The year is 2003. With most of the Mafia Familes influence over the states gone everything has been peaceful in the US. There are less robberies and murders than before. In Liberty City, all is well. All the physical and mental scars that the mafia inflicted on LC has been repaired. Joey Leone now leads the Leone Mafia Family alongside Toni Cipriani. The Leones pretty much lost their power after the death of Salvatore just two years earlier. The Sindaccos and Forellis are still around, but don't pose much of a threat to the city anymore. The Sindaccos are now just reduced to a street gang. They're mostly interested in the car theft business, while the Forellis are still pretty much the same even though their roster diminished alot. Claude is still connected with the Liberty City Yakuza as he is like a co-mobster for them. In Vice City, Tommy Vercetti is still the big shot, kingpin as he was in 86'. Vice City has changed drastically since the 80's. The Haitians have packed up and left along with some other small gangs that was too overpowered by Vercetti. Vercetti now has two sons and a daughter. The eldest son is named Jack. The youngest son is named Shawn. The daughter is named Christy. In San Andreas, CJ is still the big shot he was since 92'. CJ and Sweet still co-leads the Grove Street Families as they take on some new street gangs attempting to gun the GSF down from their spot as the most dominant street gang in Los Santos. CJ still manages an aged, still popular Madd Dogg. CJ still has his position at Four Dragons Casino as Co-Owner. After a series of unfortunate events our heroes must work together to take on foes both old and new to finally bring peace into the states once and for all. What you guys think? Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/264932-grand-theft-auto-the-final-chapter-of-theft/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blind Joe Death Posted January 11, 2007 Share Posted January 11, 2007 Seem's pretty interesting. Can't wait until the first Chapter . Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/264932-grand-theft-auto-the-final-chapter-of-theft/#findComment-4010339 Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxDarkxPsychicxX Posted January 11, 2007 Share Posted January 11, 2007 Lol this sounds interesting. If I was the one writing this, I probably would've made at least one of the main characters (Claude, Tommy, CJ/Sweet) be dead. I'm just the type that doesn't like happy endings all the time. I like where this is going though. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/264932-grand-theft-auto-the-final-chapter-of-theft/#findComment-4010525 Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAFreak808 Posted January 12, 2007 Author Share Posted January 12, 2007 I finally got around to posting. Here is Chapter 1! Chapter 1: Trouble brewing in the States; Part One Grove Street, 11:06 a.m. CJ and Sweet are in their old Johnson Residence. CJ is cleaning up their living room when suddenly a picture of Brian falls on the ground. CJ picks it up with a depressed look on his face. CJ: *Looks at the picture, then puts it on the shelf* Man Brian. Why did I acted like I did those final moments you were alive. Brian, I promise you I'll never do that again homie. Sweet: *Comes in the living room* Yo homie. What was that noise? I heard it from upstairs, so I came down to check on it. You aiight bro? CJ: Yeah, I'm gonna live. Sweet: *Notices something wrong with CJ* Aiight homie whats got ya down? You never acted this $hitty since mum died. CJ: Its just that... I'm just mad at myself. Sweet: Fo' what homie? CJ: I mean I let Brian die before my very eyes. I ran away from the problem by goin' to Liberty. Then, GSF started dwindling cause of me. After that mum died. I'll never forgive myself for what I've done to our family. Sweet: But you repayed back by helpin' GSF rise up to the top again. You single handedly took out the Ballas, Loco Syndicate, Big Smoke and C.R.A.S.H. Homie, you've done good these past few years here in San An. Its better than what you did in Liberty thats fo' sure. CJ: But Sweet Brian and mum had risked their lives for me before, and theres no way I can repay them back for what they've done. Sweet: But homie, you did repay them back in 92'. You avenged their deaths by killing those f*ckin' Ballas and that freak Tenpenny. To me thats repayin' yo' dues. CJ: Yeah I guess yo' right, but still feel like I need to repay them. Sweet: Homie, I'm sure Brian and mum are lookin' down on us right now with huge smiles on their faces. Homie, I'm tellin' ya. They'll always be proud of you no matter what you do. You're family CJ. CJ: Y'know you should be a reverand or deacon at the church or somethin'. Sweet: Yeah I know. *Sweet's cellphone rings* I gotta take this. *Answers* Hello. Oh whats up homie? Nah, nah I'm fine. So, why you call me fo'? You serious?! Ah $hit we'll be there right away! *Hangs up* Yo CJ looks like those Rifas from San Fierro has picked up their narcotics biz over here in LS. CJ, lets show these posers how gang banging is all about. *Takes out AK-47 and passes it to CJ* Take that. I'll take this. *Takes out an M4 and loads it* CJ: So, what we do first? Sweet: We're gonna need some allies. CJ recruit some homies. CJ: What you gonna do? Sweet: I'm headin' to East Los Santos and check out all the $hit those freakin' Rifas are causin'. *Gets in his Greenwood and starts it* Bring atleast 3 homies for backup aiight. CJ: Yeah got it. *Sees Sweet speeds off from his drive-way* Be careful Sweet. Vercetti Estates, 11:56 a.m. Tommy is finishing some paperwork, but suddenly his cellphone rings and he looks at the Caller ID. It says Ken Rosenburg. Tommy: Now what does the whack job want?! To think he'd give up callin' me after the last couple tries. Alright Ken lets see what you want. *Answers cellphone* Hello. Ken: Yo Tommy, my man. Its me Ken Rosenburg! Tommy: Yes I already knew that. Now tell me what are you callin' me for. Ken: I'm just callin' to say hi. We haven't talked to each other in ages man. You also never answer my calls, or called me back. I've been callin' you for how long? Tommy: 17 years to be exact, and it'll be 18 years by midnight. Good bye. *About to hang up but Ken starts to talk loud into the phone* Ken: Wait! Please don't hang up. Tommy: Gimme one good reason not to Rosie. Just one good freakin' reason. Ken: Cause you're my, oh how would the kids today say it? Homie. Thats it. Tommy, you're my homie dawg. Tommy: Now you're just freakin' me out here Rosie. Fine I won't hang up yet. So, what you've been up tp these past soon to be 18 years? Ken: Ah y'know. Sent to rehab, I was released from rehab, I was threatened by the Mafia to do work for them... Tommy: Woah, woah, woah there. You worked for the Mafia? How the hell would the Mafia hire someone like you to work for them?! Ken: First, The now deceased Leone Mafia Family don Salvatore and Sindacco Mafia don Johnny gave me an offer I couldn't refuse. They made me the manager of their casino Caligula's Casino, but there were some consequences to this new job I had. They tried to kill me and my friends. Y'know Ken Paul right? They almost killed him and me. Tommy: Well not like I really care about Kent, but how did you guys survive with your @$$es intact? Ken: Kent found this guy named Carl Johnson. This guy helped us save our @$$es alot. He helped me by fakin' my own death. He and a couple Triads single handedly destroyed all the Mafia's influence in Las Venturas. Tommy: Did you just said Carl Johnson?! Ken: Uh... yeah. Why? Tommy: Ya wanna know?! Ken: Uh..... yeah. Tommy: He murdered my wife. Link to comment https://gtaforums.com/topic/264932-grand-theft-auto-the-final-chapter-of-theft/#findComment-4012160 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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