aaronlindu Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 (edited) NOW EDITED made for me and translated for sinful ----------------------------------------------------------------- Vice City docks, 1986. A fast exchange, a simple deal. A black helicopter lands, while a silver Admiral gets closer. Victor Vance leaves the helicopter with two briefcases, while Tommy Vercetti does the same. -100% natural, from Colômbia. -says Vic. -The right amount. -says Tommy. At the same time, federal agents open fire against the dealers, hurting Vic. Tommy jumps back in the Admiral. Lance’s helicopter take off. A few hours later, someone helps Vic (??). After months in a coma, he wakes up, and someone tell him that his brother, Lance, is dead. Vic decides to initiate a vendetta against Vercetti, do something, get his power back, with his gang and businesses, such as smuggling, drug dealing, prostitution, etc. However, he couldn’t do all that by himself. And he knew who he should ask for help. Liberty City, Mark’s Bistro, 1986. -Sonny’s dead. -says a Sindacco thug. -Who did it? -says Paulie Sindacco. -Some Vercetti, Tommy Vercetti. -Is he powerful? -He owns Vice City. -Maybe we can get something from Sonny’s death, expand our businesses without this guy on the way. -Yeah, but there’s always problems. -I don’t care, I want my businesses there! -Ok… Vice City, Little Havana, 1986. -I need your help, Umberto. -says Vic. -I can’t get into this, you know why. -So what can I do? -Maybe the guys in Liberty City, friends of this Sonny, have something in mind. -Hmm, well thought. But, who should I call? -I heard he have, or at least had, connections with the Sindaccos. -Think, these families aren’t always nice to each other, maybe what happened is good for them, maybe they’ll think about expanding their businesses to Vice City, since the Forellis aren’t in the game anymore. Vice City, Vic’s house, 1993. After a lot of research, Vic manages to call Paulie Sindacco. -I wanna talk to Paulie Sindacco. –Vic says. -Who wants to? -asks a woman. -A friend. -Hello... Who’s this? -Vic Vance… I’m from Vice City… -Yeah, yeah, whadaya want? -I know you had a relationship with the Forellis, and that one of them had businesses in Vice City and got killed recently, along with my brother… -Yeah… -And I know that maybe you wanna expand your businesses, and if you really want to, you’d have to eliminate Tommy Vercetti. -Yeah, and to do that I’d have to go there my self, bringing some guns, men, and have the exact location of this Tommy guy. -Good… You’d have to come here, when? -I’ll be there tomorrow, if you excuse me, I’ll get ready. -finishes Paulie. Vic gets ready, recruits some men, and they all get MP5s and AK-47s. In the next day, Vic, along with three other men in an Admiral, drive to the Airport, waiting for Paulie. -Do you trust this Vic guy? -asks one of Paulie’s men. -Of course not, but he can be useful. -answers Paulie. -Who’s it gonna be? -Well, we’ll get there, get some info about this Tommy, and then we f*ck with him. -Hm, simple and efficient. The helicopter lands, Paulie and his men meet Vic. -Look, it’s gonna happen today, everything settle, let’s get somewhere else so we can talk. -says Vic. Vic and Paulie walk to a coffee shop near the airport. -Look, you and your three men will land on the Vercetti Mansion’s helipad, while me and my boys will get by car through the front. -says Vic. -Yes, continue. -We’ll have to spare ourselves to Tommy, our thugs will always have to go before us, cleaning the path from the guards. And there’s a lot of guards. -Maybe it’s not such a big problem, what guns they’re using. -9MMs and Uzis. -Look at us, dude, MP5s and AKs. -It’s just that there’s a lot of guards, you don’t know. -When we’ll do it? -After midnight. -Ok, no problems. 2AM, Vic and Paulie are going to Vercetti Estate. Vercetti is in his office when he hears a helicopter. -That’s weird… This sound’s loud, it even looks like it’s landing on my Mansion. -MISTER VERCETTI! THERE’S A SENTINEL FULL OF ARMED MEN BREAKING THRU THE MANSION, AND IT LOOKS LIKE THERE’S A CHOPPER WITH MORE UP THERE! -sh*t, let’s f*ck these fools. Vic and Paulie are talking to each other through a radio: -How’s it going up there, Paulie? -asks Vic. -I’m into this sh*tty Mansion, what ‘bout you? -I’ve sent two men thru the backyard while I walk thru the front with another partner. The fools here are using MP5s, forget about that 9MM sh*t. -That’s why it’s easy up here, all we’re getting is 9MM! -I always get the tough part, look, I’m in the hall, you coming down? -Yeah sure, I’ll go down there until I find this Tommy. -I don’t think we’ll find him on the Office. -Hey, WHAT THE f*ck? -Paulie and Vic’s conversation is interrupted by gunshots. Vic thinks that Paulie and Tommy met, so he quickly run upstairs, killing a few of Tommy’s men, then all of sudden he stops, listening to Tommy’s voice speaking to a thug. -Look, you dumbass. I want you to take this f*ck and take him to the basement ‘cause I wanna know what he’s up to. Do whatever it takes to make him talk, I’ve wasted only three of their men. Which means there’s more around the Mansion. -says Tommy. “This Paulie guy thinks he’s the man, but in the first bullet he bails…” thought Vic. Vic jumps ready to fire his AK-47, but then he realizes he ran out of bullets. -What the heck? Who are you, you son of a bitch? -asks Tommy. -Vic Vance, the man who’s gonna kill you! -What? But I don’t even know you, get outta here while you can, man. -No. You killed my brother and now you’re gonna die. They both grab their pistols in the same second. -You’re in my house, I’m the king here, you ain’t leaving here alive, you f*ck. -says Tommy. -Dead or alive, I’ll make sure you die! When Tommy was going to answer, one of Vic’s men appears, came from the backyard, hits Tommy in the head. He falls in the floor, awake. He has no chance, Vic kicks his gun, and aim his 9MM to Tommy’s face. -And now who’s gonna die? -Wait, if you kill me you won’t leave here alive, now if you let me live, I’ll let you live. -The problem Mister Vercetti, is that you don’t have any more men, despite the one who got Paulie. -What the f*ck? Their discussion is interrupted by Vic’s bullet in Tommy’s face. -Let’s get outta here Vic, or else things are gonna get nasty. -I know, but we can’t get thru the front, let’s get Paulie and leave in his chopper. Vic and his partner run downstairs until they get to the basement. Vic notices that there are two guards inside. Fearless, he get in and kill both. -Hey, you get Paulie while I take a look around. -says Vic. -Ok. Vic walks around the basement and finds a room full of weapons. He picks up a Uzi in each hand, and puts the pistol in the pocket. -Hey, Vic… I thought you left me to death here. -I wouldn’t do that, listen, there’s a room full of guns there, make sure you take a shotgun. -Ok. -answers Paulie. Vic didn’t have to say nothing to his man, because he was already holding a pair of Sawn-Off. After that, everyone run to the Mansion’s rooftop, getting in the chopper. When they’re taking off, they realize the police was there, helicopters and cop cars all over the mansion. -sh*t, what are we gonna do? -Give priority to the two helicopters, the cop cars won’t be a problem. -answers Vic to his man. The pilot flies near the cop chopper, and Vic opens fire against the police. -C’mon, help me out here. They all shoot at the helicopter, taking it down, but they forget about the other one, which take them all down in the water… Edited January 9, 2007 by aaronlindu Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 Did you use Google Translator? I can't understand sh*t. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 (edited) BEST. STORY. EVER. Edited January 8, 2007 by TonyZimmzy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cubanwhip Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 He is in agreeance. High Five! But seriously. If you're going to post on an english forum, you better learn the language and not use free online translators. Nice! *cough* Borat *cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaronlindu Posted January 8, 2007 Author Share Posted January 8, 2007 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAFreak808 Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 There maybe some errors and what not, but still a great story and plot! Rated GOOD for luck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
eyeswideshut Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 Sounds like a good idea even though I couldn't understand much. Work on your English then you are good to go. I don't like this story..PAUSE..NOT! *cough*Borat*cough* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 GOLD STAR LOL Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GTAFreak808 Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 A gold star on the first day! Thats a new record! CONGRATS!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brutuz Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 A gold star on the first day! Thats a new record! CONGRATS!!! No offence, but how would you know? You joined 2 days ago, and your saying thats a record, I seem to remember that many gang topics have gotten a star faster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 A gold star on the first day! Thats a new record! CONGRATS!!! No offence, but how would you know? You joined 2 days ago, and your saying thats a record, I seem to remember that many gang topics have gotten a star faster Yeah but it is for a story One chapter, and he has a gold star, I find that hilariously awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 Poor aaron... You know, he asked me to translate it for him. But hell, I'm working on my own story Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 Who the f*ck would go and rate it bad!? It had 71%! That's more than most stories on this entire forum! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beanmachine43 Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 I found taking half the words from each line makes it incredibly easier. I'd like to see the story in the original language, so I can depict it my way and probably read it easier. Oh, and gang topics are just ways for people to balloon their post count. *Rates topic good* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sinful Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 (edited) I found taking half the words from each line makes it incredibly easier. I'd like to see the story in the original language, so I can depict it my way and probably read it easier. Oh, and gang topics are just ways for people to balloon their post count. *Rates topic good* u speak portuguese? anyways, heres the original version: -------------------------------------------------------- A vingança de Vic Vance Vice City, docas, 1986. Uma negociação rápida, uma troca. Um helicóptero preto pousa, enquanto um Admiral Prata se aproxima. Victor Vance sai do helicóptero com duas malas, enquanto Tommy Vercetti faz o mesmo. -100% natural, da Colômbia – diz Vic. -E a quantia correta – Tommy continua. No mesmo instante, agentes federais abrem fogo contra a negociação, ferindo Vic, e Tommy pula para seu carro. Lance parte com o helicóptero. Horas depois, no mesmo local, Vic é socorrido. Após meses em coma ele acorda, e recebe uma notícia, seu irmão Lance está morto. Vic, inconformado, resolve se vingar e fazer algo, e volta ao poder, com sua gang e seus negócios, como contrabando, tráfego de drogas, prostituição etc. Porém não podia fazer tudo sozinho. Ele sabia a quem pedir ajuda. Liberty City, Marcos Bistro, 1986. -Sonny está morto – diz um Sindacco -Serviço de quem? – diz Paulie Sindacco -Um tal de Vercetti, Tommy Vercetti. -Tem poder? -Está no controle de Vice City. -Talvez tenha sido vantajosa a morte de Sonny, pode ampliar nossos negócios sem esse cara no meio. -Sim, mas sempre há problemas. -Não importa, quero meus negócios lá! -Ok... Vice City, Little Havana, 1986. -Preciso de sua ajuda Umberto – diz Vic. -Não posso me meter nisso, você sabe porque. -Então o que faço? -Talvez os caras de Liberty City, que tinham algo a ver com esse tal de Sonny tenham algo em mente... -Hmm bem pensado...mas pra quem ligar? -Ouvi dizer que tem, ou pelo menos tinham, relações com outra família, os Sindaccos. -Pense, nem sempre essas famílias tem uma relação boa, talvez esse acontecimento, seja bom para eles, eles podem pensar em expandir negócios para Vice City, já que os Forellis não tem mais a fatia. Vice City, casa de Vic, 1993. Vic pesquisa, e consegue o telefone de Paulie Sindacco. -Desejo falar com Paulie Sindacco. – diz Vic -Quem deseja? – pergunta uma mulher -Um amigo. -Alô...quem é? – pergunta Paulie -Vic Vance...sou de Vice City... -Sim, sim, qual o motivo de sua ligação? -Sei que mantinha uma relação com os Forellis, e um deles que mantinha negócios em Vice City, foi assassinado recentemente, e junto morreu meu irmão. -Sim... -E sei que talvez queira expandir seus negócios, caso realmente queira, seria necessário eliminar Tommy Vercetti. -Sim, para isso eu precisaria ir até ai pessoalmente, acompanhado de armas, homens, ter a localização exata desse tal de Tommy. -Perfeitamente...você teria que vir até aqui, quando você pode? -Estou indo amanha, se me dá licença vou me preparar. - finaliza Paulie Vic se prepara, recruta homens e armam-se com MP5’s e AK-47’s. E no dia seguinte, Vic juntamente com 3 homens em um Admiral vão até o aeroporto e esperam Paulie. Já no helicóptero particular de Paulie: -Você confia nesse tal de Vic? – pergunta um homem de Paulie -Claro que não, mas pode nos ser útil. – responde Paulie -Como vai ser o negócio? -Bom, vamos chegar lá, nos informar sobre esse tal de Tommy, e resumindo vamos foder com ele. -Hm, simples mas eficaz. O helicóptero pousa, e Paulie e seus homens são recebidos por Vic. -Vejam, vai ser feito hoje, porque já preparei tudo, vamos para um outro local para conversarmos melhor. – diz Vic. Vic e Paulie seguem até um café publico próximo ao aeroporto. -Veja, você juntamente com seus 3 homens, irão pousar no terraço da mansão Vercetti, enquanto eu e meus homens entramos pela frente de carro. – começa Vic -Sim, continue. -Nós dois temos de nos poupar, não podemos nos arriscar muito, temos de deixar a disposição para Tommy, seus homens sempre terão que ir na frente, do mesmo modo será comigo, para nos livrarmos dos guardas, que são muitos. -Talvez não seja grande problema, com que tipo de armas vamos lidar? -Pistolas 9mm e Uzi’s. -Olha pra nossas armas cara, MP5 e AK-47. -O problema é que são muitos homens, você não viu ainda. -Quando pretende o ataque? -Madrugada. -OK, sem problemas. Já de madrugada, Vic e Paulie estão a caminho da mansão Vercetti. Vercetti está tranquilamente em seu escritório quando escuta um helicóptero. -Estranho...esse som está alto, parece que está pousando em minha mansão. -SENHOR VERCETTI! TEM UM SENTINEL COM HOMENS ARMADOS INVADINDO A MANSÃO, E PARECE QUE TEM UM HELICÓPTERO COM MAIS LÁ EM CIMA! -Porra, vamos foder com esses otários. Já Vic e Paulie conversando com Walkie-Talkie: -Como está ai em cima Paulie? – pergunta Vic. -Já entrei nessa merda de mansão, e você? -Mandei dois homens entrar pelos fundos enquanto entro pela frente junto com um parceiro. -Aqui os otário só vem de MP5, esqueça o papo de 9mm. -Por isso que está fácil aqui em cima, só 9mm! -Sempre saio com o mais complicado, veja, to no Hall de entrada, você está descendo? -É claro, vou descer até achar esse tal de Tommy. -Acho difícil encontra-lo no escritório. -Mas...O QUE É ISSO?- a conversa de Paulie e Vic é interrompida por tiros. Vic imagina que Paulie e Tommy devem ter se encontrado, sobe as escadas rapidamente enquanto mata os homens de Tommy, e de repente para, escuta voz de Tommy conversando com um capanga. -Olha seu imbecil, quero que pegue esse fodido e leve para o subsolo que quero saber o que ele tava querendo fazer, faça o que for preciso para ele falar, matei só 3 homens deles, o que significa que há mais pela mansão. – diz Tommy -E esse Paulie se dizendo o fodão, na primeira bala cai inconsciente... – Vic pensa. Vic pula pronto para atirar com sua AK-47, mas quando vê não possui balas para atirar. -Mas o que? Quem é você filho da puta? – pergunta Tommy -Vic Vance, o homem que irá lhe matar. -Que?Nem lhe conheço, sai daqui enquanto pode rapaz. -Não. Você matou meu irmão e agora quem vai morrer é você. Ambos no mesmo segundo sacam suas pistolas. -Você está na minha casa, quem manda aqui sou eu, você não sairá daqui vivo seu bosta. – diz Tommy. -Saindo vivo ou não, asseguro que você está morto. No mesmo segundo em que Tommy ia responder, surge um homem de Vic que havia entrado pelos fundos, acertando uma coronhada. Tommy cai no chão, acordado. Sem chance para ele, Vic pisa na arma de Tommy, e aponta uma 9mm para o rosto de Tommy. -E agora quem vai morrer? -Calma, se você me matar não conseguirá sair vivo daqui, agora se não me matar eu deixo você sair. -O problema senhor Vercetti, é que você não possui mais homens, somente aquele que prendeu Paulie. -Mas o que? A discussão é interrompida por um tiro de Vic no rosto de Tommy. -Vamos sair daqui Vic, senão a parada fode pra gente. -Eu sei cara, pela frente nem dá, vamos soltar o Paulie e fugir no helicóptero dele. Vic e seu parceiro vão decendo até chegar no subsolo. Vic vê que há dois homens vigiando lá dentro. Sem medo, ele entra e mata os dois. -Ei, solte o Paulie enquanto dou uma olhada nesse local. – diz Vic -OK. Vic anda pelo subsolo e encontra uma sala com armas. Ele se arma com uma Uzi em cada mão, e guarda sua pistola em sua roupa. -Hey Vic... pensei que você ia me deixar pra morrer aqui. -Mas não ia, seguinte, há uma sala com armas ali, trate de pegar uma shotgun. -OK. – responde Paulie. Não foi necessário dizer nada ao homem de Vic, já que ele já estava com duas Sawn-Off. Em seguida todos seguem ao telhado da mansão, e por fim entram no helicóptero. Quando estão decolando, percebem que a polícia já estava por ali, helicópteros e viaturas estavam nos arredores da mansão. -Merda, o que fazemos? -Dê prioridade aos dois helicópteros, essas viaturas não são grande problema. – responde Vic ao seu homem. O piloto deixa o helicóptero lado a lado com o helicóptero da polícia, e Vic abre fogo contra a policia. -Vamos, me ajude aqui. Todos atiram no helicóptero, por fim derrubando-o, mas acabam esquecendo que havia outro, que também os derruba na água.... --------------------------------------- aaron sent to me on msn a couple days ago. --------------------------------------- edit: i've translated the story: --------------------------------------- Vic Vance’s Revenge Vice City docks, 1986. A fast exchange, a simple deal. A black helicopter lands, while a silver Admiral gets closer. Victor Vance leaves the helicopter with two briefcases, while Tommy Vercetti does the same. -100% natural, from Colômbia. -says Vic. -The right amount. -says Tommy. At the same time, federal agents open fire against the dealers, hurting Vic. Tommy jumps back in the Admiral. Lance’s helicopter take off. A few hours later, someone helps Vic (??). After months in a coma, he wakes up, and someone tell him that his brother, Lance, is dead. Vic decides to initiate a vendetta against Vercetti, do something, get his power back, with his gang and businesses, such as smuggling, drug dealing, prostitution, etc. However, he couldn’t do all that by himself. And he knew who he should ask for help. Liberty City, Mark’s Bistro, 1986. -Sonny’s dead. -says a Sindacco thug. -Who did it? -says Paulie Sindacco. -Some Vercetti, Tommy Vercetti. -Is he powerful? -He owns Vice City. -Maybe we can get something from Sonny’s death, expand our businesses without this guy on the way. -Yeah, but there’s always problems. -I don’t care, I want my businesses there! -Ok… Vice City, Little Havana, 1986. -I need your help, Umberto. -says Vic. -I can’t get into this, you know why. -So what can I do? -Maybe the guys in Liberty City, friends of this Sonny, have something in mind. -Hmm, well thought. But, who should I call? -I heard he have, or at least had, connections with the Sindaccos. -Think, these families aren’t always nice to each other, maybe what happened is good for them, maybe they’ll think about expanding their businesses to Vice City, since the Forellis aren’t in the game anymore. Vice City, Vic’s house, 1993. After a lot of research, Vic manages to call Paulie Sindacco. -I wanna talk to Paulie Sindacco. –Vic says. -Who wants to? -asks a woman. -A friend. -Hello... Who’s this? -Vic Vance… I’m from Vice City… -Yeah, yeah, whadaya want? -I know you had a relationship with the Forellis, and that one of them had businesses in Vice City and got killed recently, along with my brother… -Yeah… -And I know that maybe you wanna expand your businesses, and if you really want to, you’d have to eliminate Tommy Vercetti. -Yeah, and to do that I’d have to go there my self, bringing some guns, men, and have the exact location of this Tommy guy. -Good… You’d have to come here, when? -I’ll be there tomorrow, if you excuse me, I’ll get ready. -finishes Paulie. Vic gets ready, recruits some men, and they all get MP5s and AK-47s. In the next day, Vic, along with three other men in an Admiral, drive to the Airport, waiting for Paulie. -Do you trust this Vic guy? -asks one of Paulie’s men. -Of course not, but he can be useful. -answers Paulie. -Who’s it gonna be? -Well, we’ll get there, get some info about this Tommy, and then we f*ck with him. -Hm, simple and efficient. The helicopter lands, Paulie and his men meet Vic. -Look, it’s gonna happen today, everything settle, let’s get somewhere else so we can talk. -says Vic. Vic and Paulie walk to a coffee shop near the airport. -Look, you and your three men will land on the Vercetti Mansion’s helipad, while me and my boys will get by car through the front. -says Vic. -Yes, continue. -We’ll have to spare ourselves to Tommy, our thugs will always have to go before us, cleaning the path from the guards. And there’s a lot of guards. -Maybe it’s not such a big problem, what guns they’re using. -9MMs and Uzis. -Look at us, dude, MP5s and AKs. -It’s just that there’s a lot of guards, you don’t know. -When we’ll do it? -After midnight. -Ok, no problems. 2AM, Vic and Paulie are going to Vercetti Estate. Vercetti is in his office when he hears a helicopter. -That’s weird… This sound’s loud, it even looks like it’s landing on my Mansion. -MISTER VERCETTI! THERE’S A SENTINEL FULL OF ARMED MEN BREAKING THRU THE MANSION, AND IT LOOKS LIKE THERE’S A CHOPPER WITH MORE UP THERE! -sh*t, let’s f*ck these fools. Vic and Paulie are talking to each other through a radio: -How’s it going up there, Paulie? -asks Vic. -I’m into this sh*tty Mansion, what ‘bout you? -I’ve sent two men thru the backyard while I walk thru the front with another partner. The fools here are using MP5s, forget about that 9MM sh*t. -That’s why it’s easy up here, all we’re getting is 9MM! -I always get the tough part, look, I’m in the hall, you coming down? -Yeah sure, I’ll go down there until I find this Tommy. -I don’t think we’ll find him on the Office. -Hey, WHAT THE f*ck? -Paulie and Vic’s conversation is interrupted by gunshots. Vic thinks that Paulie and Tommy met, so he quickly run upstairs, killing a few of Tommy’s men, then all of sudden he stops, listening to Tommy’s voice speaking to a thug. -Look, you dumbass. I want you to take this f*ck and take him to the basement ‘cause I wanna know what he’s up to. Do whatever it takes to make him talk, I’ve wasted only three of their men. Which means there’s more around the Mansion. -says Tommy. “This Paulie guy thinks he’s the man, but in the first bullet he bails…” thought Vic. Vic jumps ready to fire his AK-47, but then he realizes he ran out of bullets. -What the heck? Who are you, you son of a bitch? -asks Tommy. -Vic Vance, the man who’s gonna kill you! -What? But I don’t even know you, get outta here while you can, man. -No. You killed my brother and now you’re gonna die. They both grab their pistols in the same second. -You’re in my house, I’m the king here, you ain’t leaving here alive, you f*ck. -says Tommy. -Dead or alive, I’ll make sure you die! When Tommy was going to answer, one of Vic’s men appears, came from the backyard, hits Tommy in the head. He falls in the floor, awake. He has no chance, Vic kicks his gun, and aim his 9MM to Tommy’s face. -And now who’s gonna die? -Wait, if you kill me you won’t leave here alive, now if you let me live, I’ll let you live. -The problem Mister Vercetti, is that you don’t have any more men, despite the one who got Paulie. -What the f*ck? Their discussion is interrupted by Vic’s bullet in Tommy’s face. -Let’s get outta here Vic, or else things are gonna get nasty. -I know, but we can’t get thru the front, let’s get Paulie and leave in his chopper. Vic and his partner run downstairs until they get to the basement. Vic notices that there are two guards inside. Fearless, he get in and kill both. -Hey, you get Paulie while I take a look around. -says Vic. -Ok. Vic walks around the basement and finds a room full of weapons. He picks up a Uzi in each hand, and puts the pistol in the pocket. -Hey, Vic… I thought you left me to death here. -I wouldn’t do that, listen, there’s a room full of guns there, make sure you take a shotgun. -Ok. -answers Paulie. Vic didn’t have to say nothing to his man, because he was already holding a pair of Sawn-Off. After that, everyone run to the Mansion’s rooftop, getting in the chopper. When they’re taking off, they realize the police was there, helicopters and cop cars all over the mansion. -sh*t, what are we gonna do? -Give priority to the two helicopters, the cop cars won’t be a problem. -answers Vic to his man. The pilot flies near the cop chopper, and Vic opens fire against the police. -C’mon, help me out here. They all shoot at the helicopter, taking it down, but they forget about the other one, which take them all down in the water… Edited January 9, 2007 by Sinful Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaronlindu Posted January 9, 2007 Author Share Posted January 9, 2007 thanks sinful now they can read Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dem57 Posted January 12, 2007 Share Posted January 12, 2007 nice story! pleas make an other chapter!!!! topic rated good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
beanmachine43 Posted January 13, 2007 Share Posted January 13, 2007 No, I don't speak portuguese, but I do understand the basics of a variety of languages and I managed to piece together most of the words on my own. I can't believe I can actually understand the story in its original form than in my own language. Good read. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aaronlindu Posted January 15, 2007 Author Share Posted January 15, 2007 thanks coming soon chapter 2 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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