Warrior_Boi Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 Wassup! I'm new around here and this is my first shot at writing a fanfic of my own. Well here it is. My GTA fanfic: Grand Theft Auto: The Life & Times; Introduction Daniel Jarvis, a man of few words. When confronted he uses his fists or weapons to do the talking. One night in 1989 is a night he will never forget. When he was five years old his parents were brutally murdered by Forelli Mafia hitmen. When all this happened he was locked in a closet by one of the men. Daniel would never forget what he saw them do to his parents. Only him and his older brother David survived the attack. He and his brother wre then being cared for by their uncle who was an abusive alcoholic. He trained the boys Martial Arts, Military Fighting and Street Fighting. As well as using firearms. In 1998 when he was 15 his brother vanished without a trace with Daniel thinking the Forellis were to blame. Now in the year 2004 at age 21 Daniel now works for the Leone Mafia as a hitman himself hoping to get to the Forellis by doing so. After a few twists all hell breaks loose and Daniel now must travel across the country to fight for his life. This journey will take him around the country to clear his name and to avenge his family. Well what do you guys think? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted December 31, 2006 Author Share Posted December 31, 2006 Here is the first Chapter! Chapter 1: The Mission Saint Mark's Bistro, 4:13 p.m. Daniel enters the restaurant with an M4 in hand along with a briefcase. He approaches someone eating Spaghetti. Daniel: Excuse me Mr. Leone, but I'm here with a special delivery. Man: *Turns around revealing he's Joey Leone* Ah Daniel! Did you got the money? Daniel: Right here sir. *Opens briefcase revealing dozens of 100 dollar bills and passes it to Joey* Joey: Excellent Daniel, excellent. Now grab a seat and eat something. You must be hungry after that hit. Daniel: That mission was easy as pie Mr. Leone. All I had to do was to hit a drive-by on that Mercci bastard, crack his neck and take his money outta the trunk. Joey: I have to do something to repay ya. Here *Takes some money out of the case and passes it to Daniel* theres a bonus for all your help lately kid. *To bartender* Eh get my boy here the finest beer ya got. Bartender: Coming right up Mr. Leone. Joey: Anyways down to business Dani. An associate of mines Toni Cipriani is arriving into town from Vice. Daniel: What do you want me to do sir? Joey: Now I heard word on the street says that some Sindaccos are going to ambush him once he arrives, so I want you to pick Toni up and if those Sindaccos do show up just dance a little dance for us if ya know what I mean. Daniel: Understood Mr. Leone. Joey: You've been workin' for me for 4 years. Call me Joey. Daniel: Understood, Joey. *Takes a sip of his beer and leaves the restaurant* Joey: Thats ma' boy right there. *To bartender* Eh wheres my tequila huh?! Thats it for Chapter 1. I know its a bit short, but I promise next chapter will be longer and action packed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 Not bad, the intro was nice too. Happy new year. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 I liked the Synopsis, but that first chapter was way too short. Lengthen it up a bit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted December 31, 2006 Author Share Posted December 31, 2006 Here is Chapter 2! I'll make it longer this time. Also Happy New Years!!! Chapter 2: Sindacco Attack Francis International, 7:28 p.m. Daniel is waiting in his Sentinal for Toni to come out of the airport. Daniel: *Looks at his watch* Damn it. Where is this guy?! A man comes out with uggage and Daniel sees that he's Toni. Daniel drives up to him. Daniel: Eh Toni! Toni: Who the hell are you kid? Daniel: I'm Joey's hired guns. He told me to pick you up. Toni: Well if Joey sent ya I guess I should oblige. Help me put my luggage in the trunk. Daniel: *Grumbles* Fine. *Puts Toni's case an bag in the trunk* There we go. Lets go, I don't want to keep Joey waiting. *Enters the Sentinal* Toni: *Enters the passenger seat* So you're Joey's hired guns huh? Daniel: Ya got that right. Toni: So what happened to the last guy that was his hired guns before you? Daniel: I iced that fool long ago. Joey thought that guy was too soft, so he found me, took me in and sent me to kill em'. Easy as that. Toni: From what Joey told me you're quite the ace in the hole. Daniel: Ya goit that right again. Toni: Hmph. I'll believe it when I see it kid. Just remember I am the main capo around here, not you. Daniel: Yeah whatever "Capo". About an hour and a half later they reach the Callahan Bridge, but some Sindaccos are waiting in in Sentinals of their own with AKs and Uzis. They see Daniel's Sentinal and follows behind him. Daniel: *Looks in rear-view mirror* I think we're being followed. Toni: What makes you say that kid? Daniel: Look at those guys behind us. They're following us freakin' close don't ya think. Toni: Let me take care of those bastards. *Pulls out 9mm pistol and sticks his head out the window* Sindacco Gangster: Looks like we got em'. Kill em' now. Daniel: *Remembers what Joey said* Wait Toni no! *Pulls Toni back inside the car* Those are Sindacco hitmen! Toni: What?! Yeah right. Like you would know. Daniel: Trust me stupid old fart. Joey told me that the Sindaccos have put a price on your head. Toni: What?! Sindacco Gangster: I said shoot em' down now you stupid idiot! *Another Sindacco gangster sticks his head out armed with a Sniper Rifle and shoots at the window of Daniel's Sentinal. Daniel: *Sees the now damaged window* $hit! Quick Toni take this and shoot like hell! *Passes Toni a M4* Toni: Fine. *Loads it and shoots from his side window* Toni manages to kill the man with the Sniper Rifle, but three more Sindacco Sentinals joins in the battle. Toni: Ah $hit! Kid, we're getting outnumbered here! *Pulls his head back inside, but drops his M4 while doing it* Damn it all to hell! Daniel: What now?! Toni: I dropped the blasted gun. Daniel: Toni, take the wheel. I'll take the Sindaccos. Toni: Alright kid. *Daniel jumps to the back seat while Toni moves into the driver's seat* Daniel: *Takes out an AK-47 from underneath his seat* Good thing I keep a spare. *Loads it and sticks it ot his window and shoots* Daniel shoots with fury at the Sindaccos right behind him and Toni. The Sindaccos fights back nailing Daniel in the shoulder, but Daniel keeps going on eventually causing the first Sindacco Sentinal to catch fire. Sindacco Gangster: *Notices car on fire* Mother fu..... *Car explodes* Daniel: One down. Two more to go. *Shoots at the next Sentinal* Daniel manages to kill the driver and the car screeches off the road and into a light pole, thus killing the other Sindaccos in the car. Toni: *Making a left turn* Hows it goin' kid?! Daniel: Just one more Sentinal to go! *Tries to shoot but he runs out of bullets* Crap! *Drops the AK after a big bump Toni drove in* Toni what the hell are you doing?! You made me lose my gun! *Pulls back in the car* Toni: Sorry, but this is te only way to get to Saint Mark's. Daniel: *Watches the Sindacco Sentinal speed up* I got an idea. It maybe crazy, but its worth a shot. Toni, keep the car at this speed. Toni: They're gonna catch up to us! What are you tryin' to do get us killed?! Daniel: Just trust me ya old fart. Toni: Alright, alright. Daniel: Good. *Climbs through the sunroof* Toni: What the hell is that kid doin'? Daniel: Alright here goes. Sindacco Gangster: What does that retard think he's doin'? Daniel jumps off of Leone's Sentinal and lands on the Sindacco's one. Daniel: Oh yeah I made it! Sindacco Gangster: What are you doin' you stupid idiot?! Get out there and kill em'! Another Sindacco in the car grabs a 9mm and shoots at the roof. Sindacco Gangster: I think you did it. *Daniel's hand goes through the roof and grabs the gangster's head pulling it outside. Sindacco Gangster: *Choking* What are you doin'?! Daniel: Killin' you of course! *Grabs out a knife from his pocket and slits the gangster's neck and drops him back in the car.* The car is about to hit another lightpole. Daniel: F*ck. What now? *Sees a hanging flagpole* Thats it! Daniel jumps towards it and hangs on right before the car crashed. Daniel: $hit that was close. *Sees Toni driving up* Toni: Hey kid jump in quick. Its gettin' late and I need to meet Joey. Daniel jumps off the pole and enters the Sentinal. Tey finally reach Saint Mark's Bistro and enters. Saint Mark's Bistro, 10:35 p.m. They enter the Bistro and sees Joey is stll inside hitting on a waitress. Joey: So heres my number *Passes paper to waitress. Notices Toni and Daniel come in* Oh uh... Daniel I see you brung Toni just like I asked. Daniel: Who was that broad you were flirtin' with? Joey: Wat do you mean flirtin'?! Come on! I just asked her for a cople of drinks for my two main men right here. Toni: You needed to see me Joey? Joey: Yes as a matter of fact. We need to discuss some things about the gang. Dani, you look beat. Get some rest. You're gonna need it for tomorrows big mission kid. Daniel: What big mission? Joey: You'll find out tomorrow. Now go back to the house and get some rest. Daniel: Whatever you say Joey. *ywans and leaves the Bistro* When Daiel reaches outside to get in his Sentinal a black car is in the alleyway. A man inside is recording Daniel on video. Man: *Turns off camera* The boss would love this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatsoccerguy Posted December 31, 2006 Share Posted December 31, 2006 This one of the best Fan-Fics I think i've ever read. . -thatsoccerguy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 1, 2007 Author Share Posted January 1, 2007 Thanks for the comment thatsoccerguy! Here is Chapter 3! Chapter 3: The Big Mission Leone Mansion, 10:56 a.m. Daniel has just woken up from a long nights sleep. Daniel: Ah... what time is it? *Looks at his watch* I better get up. *Takes a quick shower, puts on some new clothes and heads downstairs* Daniel enters the main lobby of the mansion. Alot of Leone gangsters are down their chatting. Daniel sees Micky Hamfist. Daniel: Yo Micky. You seen Joey around anywhere? Micky: Yeah, he went to Saint Mark's for breakfast. I don't understand. He has his own personal chefs, but he always eats at that place. Well they do have some great spaghetti and meatballs. Anyways you'll find Joey there. He's with Toni Cipriani. Daniel: Uh.... thanks Micky. Micky: No prob. Just tell Joey to get me some of that spaghetti to go. Daniel: Sure. *Exits the building and enters his Sentinal* After about 15 minutes Daniel makes it to Saint Mark's Bistro. He enters and sees Joey and Toni eating some spaghetti and discussing some plans. Daniel: Yo Joey. You needed to see for something. Joey: Ah yes I'm glad you came. Listen Dani, I have a big mission for you and I mean big. This hit might be your toughest yet. You think you can handle it? Daniel: I'm ready for anything Joey. Just give me the mission. Joey: I want you to assassinate a man that has been a thorn in the Leone's side for too long. He's been a nuisance ever since he killed my father back in 2001. I want you to kill a man named, Claude Speed. Daniel: "THE" Claude Speed?! Don't worry Joey I'll have his head here in no time. Toni: Hmph. Good luck kid. Even I was sent out to kill em' and I never even got the job done. What makes you think you can do what many others didn't? Daniel: You're talkin' to the Carcer City Killa here Toni. I think I can manage it. Toni: No way! You can't be the Carcer City Killa! He was captured 5 years ago. Joey: He ain't bull$hitting here Toni. He really is the CCK. I found Dani here walkin' on the outskirts of Carcer with a prison uniform that read CCK on it. Daniel: Believe now Toni. Toni: *Amazed* Well.... you still won't be able to kill Claude. Claude is like a rock. No matter how hard he goes down, he always gets up and continues. He will be away from you in no time. Especially with those Yakuza punks that he assists from time to time. Daniel: You'll be findin' out Toni once I bring him back here. Toni: I wouldn't count on it kid. Joey: Stop the arguin' guys we're all pals here remember? Anyways Dani get goin'. Toni, we need to discuss some plans. Daniel, if you need a piece just go to the Ammu-Nation closest to here alright. Daniel: Understood Joey. *Leaves the restaurant* Outside Daniel gets in his Sentinal and heads for an Ammu-Nation to get a piece. Inside the restaurant Toni and Joey are discussing somethings. Toni: I don't trust that guy Joey. He seems like a traitor to us. Joey: You're crazy Toni! Dani has been loyal to us for four years. Four freakin' years Toni. No way he would betray us after all we've done for him. Toni: Remember when Claude was workin' for your father and now look at Salvatore. Remember in 92' when that Carl Johnson guy was workin' for your father. He stole all our riches and cause Salvatore to go mad! This kid can do the same thing if he wants. Joey: thats just stupid. I know Dani. He would never do that after all we've done for eachother. He saved you from those Sindaccos yesterday! Toni: I'm still keepin' an eye on him. Theres somethin' strange about him and I know it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blackadder. Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 Very good story you have going here! The Chapters are nice and long Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
thatsoccerguy Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 ThatSoccerGuy ooohs and aaahs at the story. Keep it up, you're doing great, a very good use of dialouge. -thatsoccerguy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted January 1, 2007 Share Posted January 1, 2007 I liked Chapter 2, but you really should of continued that style of length, Chapter 3 was very short. You should also add little details aswell, it'll help describe everything for the reader -- Like, what Dani is wearing, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 2, 2007 Author Share Posted January 2, 2007 (edited) Thanks for the support and comments guys. Tony, I'll take those tips into action. Here is Chapter 4! Chapter 4: Hunting for the Mute Daniel is on his way for Claude's old apartment in Hepburn Heights. He is about a few blocks away, until he sees a teen being harassed by a couple of thugs. The teen is wearing jeans and a black hoodie. The thugs are wearing ol jeans and shirts. They're hholding a knife at the boy. Thug 1: Give us your money and we promise you won't get hurt, much. Teen: What if I don't want to huh?! Thug 2: *Sticks the knife up to the teen's throat* Then we're just gonna force the money outta you punk! *Grabs the teen and twirls him uopside. Shaking him around so that his pockets would empty out with only coins coming out* Thug 1: *Takes and counts coins* $1.13?! You poor f*ckin' brat! You're dead now! *Attempts to swing his knif at the teen, but is caught by someone from behind him* Teen: What the? Thug 1: *Turns around and sees Daniel is the one hold his arm back. He looks down and sees the other thug on the ground dead in a pool of blood* What the hell?! Who are you?! Daniel: The name is Jarvis, Daniel Jarvis. *Twists thug's arm back, thus making him let go of his knife.* Thug: Ah! You son of b*tch! *Attempts to punch Daniel with a right hook, but Daniel ducks and nails an uppercut on the thug, thus knocking him out* Teen: Holy crap! *Looks up at Daniel* Uh..... thanks mister. Daniel: *Passes the boy his stolen change and a 100 dollar bill* There ya go kid. Teen: *Looks at the 100* Whats this for? Daniel: *Walking away* Just thought ya needed it kid. *Gets in his Sentinal and drives off* Daniel approaches the apartment that Claude lives in. He takes out an 9mm pistol and loads it up. He busts down the door to see that it looks abandoned. Daniel: What the hell? *Looks in the other rooms* Damn it. This place is abandoned. I thought these directions tat Joey gave me were true. Great now I need to hunt the guy down. Which is the way I like it. *Exits the apartment and into his car.* Now if I was that mute Claude where would I be? Wait a sec. Toni he has ties to the Yakuza, so Staunton Island! He must be somewhere there. I gotta look *Speeds off to the Callahan Bridge* In the far diastance a black Sentinal is following Daniel on his trek to Staunton. Inside are two men. One is wearing a dark blue jacket and white pants. He also has The othe one is wearing white hoodie and jeans, also wearing a clown mask. Man 1: Should we get em' already? Man 2: Remember what "the boss" said. We need him to cross the Callahan Bridge. Man 1: Why there?! Man 2: Cause I'm gonna plant some bombs there to kill the little bug! Man 1: He said not to kill em'. Just capture him! You always do this crap! Man 2: Who cares what the boss says I'm doinj' things my way for now on. Sure he might send someone to kill us, but ya gotta admit his plan is crappy. Besides I have a better plan to bring this city to their knees! Man 1: Still yet remember all that money he promised us when we get Jarvis?! A billion dollars man! Man 2: We could make more money than that when my plan goes into action. Man 1: What are you "planning" to do? Man 2: I'm planning to blow that bridge sky high! Man 1: That'll kill alot of people in the process! Including us! Man 2: Hey no pain, no game. Sure we need to sacrifice some people, but it'll smooth sailin' at the end. Man 1: You don't care about anybody, but yourself ya know that?! Man 2: I've known that for years now. Nothin' new. Man 1: How could blowin' up the bridge cause the city to go under your control?! Remember now we're workin' for the Forellis now here. Man 2: I don't give a damn about those spaghetti eatin' pigs. Blowin' up that bridge will cause a huge riot! Then my boys will come in and kill any other gangs that stand in my way including the Leones and Forellis. After, phase 3 comes along and that is when I eliminate both Leone and Forellis, but I have a way to increase my power! Man 1: What is that? Man 2: I just hold all the leaders of every gang hostage in exchange for each gangs services in my new "corporate empire". It'll be all too easy. You can share some of the power too if you join me. Man 1: Screw this $hit! *stops the car and leaves* I ain't takin' part of this sick plan of yours! Man 2: *Gets in Drivers seat* Suit yourself. Soon everything in this city shall be mine! I won't be takin' orders anymore in this city! One last chance you comin' or not?! Man 1: Alright, alright. You better not be bull$hitting about this. Man 2: Have I ever bull$hitted you before? Man 1: Yeah. Man 2: Well... this time is different brother. I promise! We'll rule this city and the rest! Staunton, 2:03 p.m. Daniel makes it in Staunton still looking for Claude. Dani: Alright I have a whole island to explore and where to start? I'll just head wherever the road takes me. Claude, you [email protected]$$ mute I will find you and I will completely destroy you! Edited January 2, 2007 by Warrior_Boi Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 3, 2007 Author Share Posted January 3, 2007 Sorry for the long delay, but here is Chapter 5! Chapter 5: Staunton Search Torrington, Staunton Island, 2:33 p.m. Daniel is makes it to Torrington with an Uzi in hand to find Claude Speed. He sees a couple of Yakuza members across the street and comes up with something. Daniel: Lets try to seek out Claude by usin' his own men. *Drives up behind the members and exits his car* Do you guys have a minute? Yakuza 1: What for kid? Daniel: Can you two tell me the location of Mr. Speed? Yakuza 2: No can do kid. That info. is classified. Daniel: I was hopin' you'll say that. *Takes out Uzi and shoots down one the men. The other one attemted to arm his pistol, but Daniel caught and twisted the gun out of his arm and knocks the Yakuza member down* Yakuza: W-What do you want me?! Daniel: Didn't you heard my question?! Where is he?! I know you're hidin' em'. Yakuza: I ain't tellin' you. Daniel: *Sticks Uzi right on the man's forehead* I'm givin' ya one last chance to tell before I'm gonna have to put you down like the dog you are! Yakuza: He's in Belleville Park! I just saw him there before I left for here! If you check there I assure you that you'll find em'! Could you please let me go now?! Daniel: I would, but known' you Yakuza pieces of $hit, you'll just report me to your leader or somethin' and send more men to come after me. Sorry, but even though you gave me what I wanted I'm still gonna put you to sleep for good. *Shoots the man squarely in the head instantly killing him* Now back to business. So, Claude is in Belleville. He better be, or else I'll cause the Yakuza @$$holes to go extinct in a matter of hours. Marco's Bistro, 3:56 p.m. Joey and Toni are awaiting for Dani's arrival. Joey is drinking some tequila and Toni is eating some pasta. Joey: *Takes a sip* Where the f*ck is he at?! I told him to go to that old apartment and kill that f*ckin' mute! That shouldn't take that long. Toni: *Swallows some pasta* I told you that punk couldn't get the job done. Sure he maybe the CCK, but not even he can take out Claude. Joey: You really hold a grudge against Dani don't you? *Phone rings* It might be him! Toni: Gimme a break. Joey: *Answers* Hello. Dani: Yo Joey its me. Joey: Dani, where you at?! Me and Toni had been expecting you hours ago. That apartment couldn't be that far away? Dani: No, I'm in Staunton right now. Joey: What the hell you doin' there boy?! Dani: I checked Claude's apartment and he was nowhere to be found. That place was abandoned and it looks like its been empty for couple years now. Joey: Then why are you on Staunton? Dani: I figured since he has ties with the Yakuza I thought he'd be here on Yakuza turf. I'm hot on his trail now. I found out his location by one of those Yauza dickheads. Joey: Excellent thinkin' Dani. So where is that mute at? Dani: They said he's in Belleville Park. I'm headin' there right now. Joey: Alright I expect you back soon Dani. Dani: Later then. Joey: Yeah later. *Hangs up* This kid will be don of this gang one day. Toni: Not before me! Remember Joey I'm heir to the throne. Joey: I know that Toni geez. *Takes another sip of his drink* Belleville Park, 4:25 p.m. Dani makes it to Belleville Park. He exits his car armed with his Uzi. Dani: *Walking by a pond* I've been walking here for god knows how long and still no sign of that mute! *Hears a gunshot from the distance* Thats a sign. *Runs down to where the shot is heard from* Dani reaches the point to where the shot was at. Dani sees two Yakuza men throwing a body into a pond. Dani: Eh what you guys doin'? Yakuza 1: Great a witness! Dani: Gee wouldn't anybody come here after hearing a gunshot? Who's body is that you two are throwin' in the river? Yakuza 2: None of your business punk! *Takes out Uzi* You are a witness and you shall die. Yakuza 1: Just surrender and we promise your death will be quick and less hurtful. *Takes out Uzi* Dani: How bout me kill the both of you in slow, agonizing deaths! *Takes out his own Uzi and shoots the two men but to no avail as they dodge his shots* Dani: *Hides behind rock* $hit! This is gonna be a challenge. *sighs* The things I do for money *Rolls out and guns down one of the men, killing him* Yakuza 2: No! You little... *Shoots furiously at Dani* Dani: *Ducks behind rock again* This guy ain't lightin' up. I guess I gotta make him lighten up. *Takes out a grenade and pulls out the pin. He throws it to the side of the man without him knowing and waits for the huge blast. The grenade explodes and nearly kills the man. Dani approaches his almost dead corpse* So I'm guessin' Mr. Speed ain't here. Where is he?! Yakuza 2: I'll never tell you punk. Dani: You should cause I'm the one hodin' the gun and I am the one that can you from having a slow agonizing death just like I promised. Now tell me where is he! *Aims the Uzi at the man's head* Yakuza 2: He is definitely at Fort Staunton with some other men. They are planning to take out the Colombian Cartel for good. Dani: I appreciate your cooperation. Now I must leave you to die slowly and painfully just as I promised. *Leaves for his car* Yakuza 2: You b-bitch. *Screams in pain* Dani finally reaches his parked Sentinal and picks up his cellphone to call Joey. Dani: *Calls Joey* Yo Joey its me. Joey: So did ya got em' yet? Dani: Unfortunately no sir. He wasn't in Belleville. Joey: My patience is wearin' thin with you Dani. I expect the mute by tonight around midnight. Capiche! Dani: Ya got it sir. Joey: Don't let me down kid. *Hangs up* Dani: Great now my job is at stake cause of that mute motherf*cker! *Loads his Uzi* I'll get you at Fort Staunton Claude. Count on it! *Drives off* Marco's Bistro, 7:44 p.m. Toni and Joey are still in arco's Bistro drinking some beers. Toni: I can't believe we've been waitin' here all day for that [email protected]$$ kid to arrive with the dead body of Claude Speed! Joey: He still has a little over four hours to kill that mute and bring him to us. If he doesn't come back with Speed's six feet under body I'll be sure to demote his high rank and lower his pay. Toni: Thats what I'm lookin' for. Joey: Come on Dani. Don't f*ck it up now kid. Sex Club 7, 8:12 p.m. The two men that were in the last chapter are partying in Sex Club 7. Man 1: Yo Lance, you sure this plan of yours will work out? Lance: Trust me Justin, we'll be partyin' all the time like this once we rule over this whole country! Justin: It better Lance. Lance: Leave the planning to me brother. I have it all cover man. *Makes out with a stripper* Justin: To think you are my brother. Lance: Woo hooo!!!! *Kisses her some more* Yo Justin, meet me by the bar after. We need to put my plan into action bro. Justin: Yeah, yeah. *Goes to the bar as Lance makes out some more and does his signature "Lance Vance Dance"* Yo bartender get me your finest beer. Lance you are such an idiot. *Takes a sip of his beer* That dance of yours is so ghetto. Fort Staunton, 8:35 p.m. Dani pulls up at Fort Carson and sees many Yakuza gaurds gaurding the place. Dani loads his Uzi and puts on some body armour. He pulls up his hood on his hoodie and exits his Sentinal. Dani: The time has come Mr. Speed. The time has come for someone to put you down once and for all. *Stealthfully makes his way in* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 3, 2007 Author Share Posted January 3, 2007 Sorry for the triple post. But I'm just here to say you guys can expect about three or four chapters tomorrow cause tomorrow I'm goin' to Florida! Vice City here I come! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted January 3, 2007 Share Posted January 3, 2007 Have a nice time in Florida mate. Don't worry about the triple post since you're the writer of the fan-fic. By the way nice chapters. And a Happy new year. Rating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 4, 2007 Author Share Posted January 4, 2007 Thanks for the comment Gaja! I spent most of the day at the beach and cruising around the streets of Miami. Anyways here is the first chapter of my three part chapters today! Chapter 6: Battle at Fort Staunton; Part One Fort Staunton, 8:47 p.m. Dani stealthfully makes his way in Fort Staunton by ducking in the shadows. He sees three Yakuza gunmen patrolling down a flight of stairs that leads to a run downed buiulding. Dani: It appears that maybe Claude is hiding in there, but just to be sure I'll check in with those guys gaurding it. *Tiptoes his way to the men without them knowing and heads behind a huge crate* Hmm lets see whats in here. *Takes out his trusty knife and cuts through the crate. A white powder falls out on Dani's lap* What the hell are these guys doin'? Drug trafficking I guess. Now onto finding that mute. *Tiptoes in the shadows and behind a couple gerters* This is close enough to make the kill. *Takes out his Uzi* Wait a sec. I have a better idea. *Goes back to the crate and grabs a handful of coke and heads back behind the gerters* Hope this works *Throws coke up into the air* Gunman 1: *Notices the white powder in the air* What the hell?! Guys see this *Points to the powder in the air* Gunman 2: I think thats a..... Gunman 3: What?! Gunman 2: Ghost!!! Gunman 1: Don't be stupid! *Goes up and grabs some in his hand and sniffs it* Just as I suspected. Its coke. Scan the area boys. This coke came from somewhere and I have a feeling we're not alone here. The two other gunmen splits up around the area and looks at all the crates, until they reach the one Dani cut open. Gunman 3: Eh looks like this is the one. Its busted wide open man. Gunman 2: Somebody must had opened it. Gunman 1: The boss ain't gonna like tha.... *Somebody pulls him into the shadows* Gunmen 2 & 3: *Takes out and loads their pistols* What the hell was that?! Gunman 2: You alright there P.H.? Gunman 3: This is really freakin' me out here. *Looks at the other gunman, but he is nowhere to be seen* What the f*ck is goin' on here?! *A knife suddenly comes up infront of his neck* Who-Who are you?! Dani: Just call me your gang's excecutioner. Gunman 3: What do you want with me?! Please I'll do anything just please let me go! Ya want money here take it! *Takes out his wallet and drops it on the ground* There now please let me go! Dani: Wow thats the first time anyone bribed me into not killin' them, but you have some info. I want. Gunman 3: What do you need to know?! Dani: Where is your associate, Claude Speed? *Tightens his grip on the gunman* Gunman 3: H-He's up in this building finalizing a coke deal with some guy named Tommy Vercetti. The meeting is at the top floor now let me go! Dani: I appreciate your cooperation sir, but I'm afraid Mr. Leone wouldn't approve of me letting a scumbag like you gettin' away so... *Tightens hs grip and slits the gunman's neck making blood splattering everywhere. He tosses the body into one of the coke crates where the other two gunmen's bodies are in and closes the crate* Now onto getting Claude's neck in my grasp. Dani goes up the stairs and enters the building with both his bloodied knife and Uzi in each hand* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 4, 2007 Author Share Posted January 4, 2007 I'll post the other parts tomorrow. Here a spoiler..... Dani and Claude faces off and one of them will die. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted January 4, 2007 Share Posted January 4, 2007 Nice chapter dude, hmmmm.... Dani or Claude, I don't know, who could die? Who could die?... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 4, 2007 Author Share Posted January 4, 2007 I have a surprise in store at the end kinda cause it'll leave you guys thinking. Like a cliffhanger at the end. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 5, 2007 Author Share Posted January 5, 2007 Here is part two! Chapter 7: Battle at Fort Staunton; Part Two Meeting Building, 9:35 p.m. Dani makes it in the building without without any trouble, but when he enters he gets spotted by three Yakuza gunmen. Yakuza 1: Look someone is here! *Points to Dani* Yakuza 2: *Loads pistol* Surrender now and we promise you won't get hurt kid. Dani: Nice offer, but I ain't that kind of y'know. *Brandishes his knife from his pocket* Any last words you couple of spineless jellyfish? Yakuza 3: Two kid. Kill em'! *The other two gunmen shooys at Dani while the third one takes out his own pistol and shoots* Dani: *Ducks behind a table* This is a challenge, and I love challenges! *Slowly takes out his Uzi and takes his hoodie jacket off and throws it in the air in which its shot multiple times by the gunmen* Yakuza 3: What the?! Come outta there kid! You're just makin' it harder on yourself! Yakuza 1: What he said. Yakuza 2: Surrender @$$hole! All three gunmen walks to the desk and shoots at, but when they look at the broken desk Dani is nowhere to be seen or found. Yakuza 3: Where the f*ck could he be?! No way he could of scaped without us seein' him moved. I mean there are no doors or windows around for him to go through. *Looks bsck to see that his two partners have vanished except for their pitols on the ground* W-Whjere you k-kid?! I-'ll shoot! *Dani's voice echoes through the hall* Dani: You think you can kill me?! Ha! Ya gotta be kiddin' me. I already killed your two friends. What makes you think you'll be walkin' outta here alive or let alone kill me? Yakuza 3: You're underestimating me kid I've got senses that you will never have. I got the skills to kill you. You think you can intimidate me with your tricks?! Well thats not gonna get me! It'll take more than mind games to kill me! Dani: I'll give you one chance to save your life you pussy. Just answer this. What are Claude and Tommy meetin' about upstairs? Yakuza 3: I'll never tell you kid. Dani: I guess I'll have to do this the hard way. Embrace yourself you idiot. You lost your chance to save yourself. Now you're gonna die at my feet. Yakuza 3: What makes you think tha... *Dani jumps down from an air vent and quickly slits the gunman's throat with ease. Dani takes his and the other two pistols that are on the ground* Dani: *Puts pistols in his pockets* These will come in handy later on. Time to crashon Claude's parade. *Heads to a flight of stairs and goes up* After going up three flights Dani sees that the rest of the stair going up are on fire. Leaving him only one option to go. Going down a hall fill with Yakuza and Vercetti men armed with 9mm's, AK-47's, M-16's and Uzis. Dani reluctntly chooses to go down the hall. Dani: Great, first the stairs are on fire and now I have to go pass a whole army just to get the elevator on the other side. Wouldn't this be fun. *Takes out Uzi* Lets do this $hit. *Crouches and tiptoes down the hall* Marco's Bistro, 10:28 p.m. Joey and Toni are still in Marco's Bistro drinking some beer. Toni has an irritated look on his face while Joey is pacing around wondering if Dani is alright. Toni: Looks like time is almost up. He only has a little over 90 minutes left to come back here with Claude's corpse. I can't wait to see if he does come back or not. Joey: Ah just shut up Toni! Toni: Eh! Why do you always defend that kid?! What has he ever done for this family that was important to the gang?! Tell me one thing he has done. Joey: Well... he killed a couple of opposing mobsters. Does that count?! Toni: Hmph. I did way better than just killing a few mobsters. Hell, I made this family the way it is today! I busted my @$$ off in 98' to bring the Leone Mafia Family to rise in power and to become the most dominant gang it is today, Joey! That kid doesn't know how its like to bust his @$$ off like I did! Joey: That maybe Toni, but this kid has what it takes to be a capo one day if he goes down the right path in this family. Hell, he might be don of this gang one day too. Toni: If he knows his role around here, but for now he's nothin' but our lackey. Joey: Whatever Toni. Toni: Why do you always defend that little [email protected]$$ kid?! I am this family's main capo and you're takin' his side. I've been in this family for as long as I could remember, while that punk has only been here for four freakin' years! Joey, please hear me out man. This kid might be a threat to us one day. Don't you remember about Claude and that Carl Johnson. Even the Forellis were beaten by one of their main men Tommy Vercetti. I don't trust that kid. He might pull off what Claude and Johnson pulled off. Joey: Toni, you don't know Dani as well as I have known him. He will never backstab us like those two @$$holes! Toni, hear me out. Dani is on our side. Nothin' and I mean nothin' will cause him to backstab us. Get that through your head Toni. Toni: No, I want you to get what I just said though your head! I care about this gang, but apparently you don't. I mean this kid is the CCK. He will do to you like he did to countless others before in Carcer. You can't just pick up anybody you see on the streets and make them a member of this family. You even said you found the kid on the streets. Joey: Toni, this discussion is over. Just shut the f*ck up and calm the f*ck down! Once it hits midnight and if he doesn't come back within 15 minuts after we're leavin' capiche. Toni: Fine. I'll show you then Joey that this kid has nothing it takes to be in the Leone Mafia Family. Meeting Building, 10:48 p.m. Dani has just engaged into a gun battle against the gaurds gaurding the hall. Dani: *Shooting with his Uzi while getting shot at by the Yakuza and Vercetti gaurds* $hit! These guys just won't give up! I hammered them with all I got, but they still keep comin'. *Shoots some more* Dani sees a window in a room across him, but he will have to move across without getting shot. Dani: Its a real life risker, but it's my best bet at gettin' outta here and killin' Claude. Thats it here goes everything! *Dives out and rolls while shooting some gaurds at the same time managing to kill five gaurds and rolls straight into the room* Thank God I made it! *Goes up and closes and locks the door. He grabs a chair and jams i under the knob making sure it won't open up* There we go. Now, onto the upper floor and killin' that pice of $hit Claude! Now, how am I suppose to get up there? *The door stars to shake with someone on the other side ramming into it.* Oh crap! What do I do?! What do I do?! Think Dani, think damn it?! *Sees an oppen window* Thats my ticket outta here. *The door is about to bust open* Vercetti Gunman: You can't hide forever kid! We're gonna bust in! Dani: I don't think so. *Looks out the window and sees a pipe that he can climb on* Thats it! *The door is partially opening* Crap I need to get the hell outta here. *Grabs hold of the pipe with both hands and slowly climbs out the window and up the building* Yes, I'm almost at the top. Vercetti Gunman: *Bustes though the door* Now we got ya! *Sees that nobody is in the room* What the hell?! Search the place! *The other gaurds search the room and finds nothing* Damn it! Where could he be?! *Looks at the open window* Oh no. *Looks outside the window and looks up to see Dani climbing on the pipe* Oh crap! He's headin' for the top floor! Everybody head to the top floor! *They all run out only to be blasted by a Satchel Charge that Dani had planted earlier in the room as a last ditch effort to escape the gaurds* Dani is reaching the top floor window and peeks inside seeing Claude and couple of Yakuza dealers talking to Tommy and a few Vercetti gaurds. Claude has five crates of coke behind him. Tommy has five cases of 100 dollar bills in front of him. Dani: So, Claude now its time for me to put you down once and for all. *Brandishes his knife and strikes the window glass* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Warrior_Boi Posted January 6, 2007 Author Share Posted January 6, 2007 Here it is. The showdown between Dani and Claude has finally been posted. Hopefully you guys like it and plz feel free to comment. I want to hear what you guys think of my story so far so I can continue it. Without further adue, here is Chapter 8! Chapter 8: Dani vs. Claude; The Bad vs. The Mute Meeting Room, 10:50 p.m. Dani bustes though the window and enters the room with mighty and rageful force. He drops to the floor as Claude, Tommy and their men witness this all. Dani holds his knife in his left hand, and his Uzi in his left. He points the both at Claude. Dani: Claude, I've finally got ya, ya [email protected]$$ mute! Come quietly *Starts laughing* What am I talkin' bout?! You are quiet! *Bursts out laughing* But back to business. Claude, your time has come. Your end is now ya f*ckin' backstabber! Now here comes the pain b*tch. *Shoots at Claude and his men. Dani mangaes to kill Claude's men, but Claude escaped the room. Dani focuses his attention to Tommy* Tommy, ya gott get outta here capiche. Tommy: *Points his M4 at Dani* Did you know what you just done?! You just ruined my drug deal ya freakin' prick! Now I'm gonna kill you. *About to pull the trigger, but Dani interrupts him* Dani: Tommy, ya gotta believe me. I know you and me haven't been on the same page since 1998, but please trust me. Claude is goin' to just backstab you like he did to my gang. Tommy: You're apart of a gang?! Who would be stupid enough to hire you into their gang?! Dani: The Leone Mafia Family. Tommy: The Leones?! If they knew about your traitorous past with my gang they woulda just left you for dead long ago. Dani, I've known you since you were fifteen. I brung you in and kept you safe. After your brother vanished I was the only one that could understand how you felt. Losing my brother took a toll outta my life. I never thought you would do what you did. You lost my respect that day Dani. Now, that you're here its all but easy pickin's. Dani: Tommy I'm sorry, but..... *Puts up his Uzi and shoots at Tommy's right leg* Just let by gones be by gones already. I will never regret what I did that day Tommy. It was for the best of your gang. Tommy: When we meet again I'll be sure to kill you! Count on it kid! Dani: Sorry.... *Takes Tommy's M4* Now back to business. Killing Claude is my number one priority now. Where did that mute son of a b*tch went?! On the roof Claude is getting ready to leave on Tommy's helicopter. Downstaris Dani hears a helicopter about to take off and hears it from the roof. Dani: Oh no he ain't gettin' away that easily. *Goes up the stairs and though the roof door. He sees Claude piloting the Hunter and shoots at it with his Uzi with all the bullets he has left in it* Claude: *Sees Dani shooting at the copter and he shoots back with guns built in the plane* Dani: *Getting shot at* F*ck! I need to get him outta the sky, but how?! Well this is gonna be a risk taker, but its worth it. * Dives out and shoots at the propellers of the Hunter, thus damaging them and making it come down* Yes! I totally rock! *Runs to the partially damaged Hunter and sees Claude is not in it. He looks to the left and sees Claude running back to the door into the building* No ya don't! * Shoots at the door causing Claude to back away until he runs out of bullets* I rather kii ya freakin' mute with my bare hands! * Charges towards Claude and nails a few blows to Claude's face, until Claude counters a left hook and nails an uppercut* Claude: *Cracks knuckles and neck and wipes the blood from his lip and nose. He nails a right hook at Dani* Marco's Bistro, 11:27 p.m. Joey and Toni are still waiting counting down the final thirty minutes til Dani gets back. Toni: I'm tired of freakin' waitin'! I spent all day waitin' here for nothin'! I'm callin' it quits! I'm headin' for the home! See ya there Joey and also make the right decision soon Joey. Joey: W-Whatever. Toni: *Exits the Bistro. Luigi and Micky Hamfists approaches him* So you guys did what was told? Luigi: Don't worry Toni we did. Soon the leone Mafia Family shall be ours! Micky: Yeah. Joey has been holdin' us down for too long guys. Toni: Finally people that agrees with me. Joey has brung disgrace to this gang ever since that punk kid Jarvis joined. Ever since Joey has been givin' em' the "sweet" treatment. He even sides with that punk than me. Soon, those two annoyance will be outta this gang's hair soon. Soon we I, wait I mean we shall rule Liberty City the way Salvatore would of ran it if he was still alive. I made this gang the way it is today and I am not gonna let a rookie replace and outstage me, I mean us! You guys with me! Micky and Luigi: YEAH!!! *puts hands together and raises it in the air* Toni: A dawn of a new era has begun my friends and that era is the Cipriani, Gotterelli and Hamfists era as dawns of the "new" Leone Mafia Family! *They all get into a Leone Sentinal and speeds off* Building Roof, 11: 35 p.m. Dani and Claude are trading blow after blow with both of them starting to bleed from their nose and lips. Dani: Y'know... ya.. can't do this... forever. Claude: *Just stares blankly at Dani and charges towards him and nails a huge uppercut sending Dani flying back a few feet* Dani: This... might be more of challenge... than I thought. Part Two of this climactic first battle will be posted tomorrow. Plz post some feedback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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