West Side Ballas.

[the gangsta]

Ok,so i want to do a story. And,if somebody is on thegtaplace.com member,you can see it too there.There are 8 chapters.Here is the first one:

 

 

Introduction:

 

After the ballas destroy,Grove Street Familes started to do some burglaries missions.They went in a night in Idlewood.They went in some houses that keept some secrets,like CJ said when he was passing by there 2 days before.OGF members enter the house and saw a surprise.3 members of the ballas were hidding.They grab some SMG and killed all of OGF members.Then they tooked the car and ran away.

They went to Montgomery city were they can hide from the chasers and plan there coming.

 

 

 

 

Chapter 1: Meting the Families

 

14 August 1995. Time: 22.30. City: Montgomery

 

Kenny: How much we should stay here? We can't hide to much.They will come here and look for us.

 

Dog LS: We will hide till we will have a plan for our coming back. We shall wait till our boss comes here and then see what he decides.

 

Kenny: Yeah,but did you saw CJ face yesterday when he was going to Ganton and saw me at the window of the house. I think he said like this: What the hell? Kenny is alive?

 

Dog LS: How could you know? But that doesnt matter now. We need some guns.This city hasn't got a gun shop.I have to go to Los Santos now.sh*t,i will be killed.

 

Kenny: No,you dont have to go back.I saw a shop i a day near Palomino Creeck. You can go there.

 

After that a sound was heard by the 2 guys.....

 

Kenny: Who can be? Where is my Colt 45?

 

Dog LS: Shut up! I will go and see who's the guy..... Stay calm because is the boss.

 

After that the door open...and a tall man enter in the house.

 

OTD: What are you doing Dog LS? Trying to shoot me?

 

Dog LS: Nah,i will not try this.You are my boss.Cant do.

 

OTD: Well ok. Now i went to Palomino and bought some weapons.Here are them: Ak-47,SMG,M4 and some Colt 45.

 

Kenny: So now we have weapons,so when we will go to atack those bastards from OGF?

 

OTD: Tonight.We will do a littel surprise to CJ and his crew.

 

Later that night they went back to Los Santos. The way that they were driving was on the way to Ganton.After 15 minutes they arrived.GSF members that were on streets didnt expect this atack and died. The sound of the bullets that were shoot from the guns was heard even at CJ house. He went up and got Sweet and some friends and started to atack.

 

Kenny: Look there they come! I will try to shoot CJ!

 

Dog LS: We dont have no change of winning.Look there CJ with a minigun.Holy sh*t!

 

OTD: We will stay till we we kill Sweet! Start shooting!

 

Kenny,Dog LS and OTD started to shoot.They killed some of the men and injured Sweet.

 

OTD: Stop shooting guys! I want to say something: Hey CJ,we are the new Balla gang.Our name is West Side Ballas.This is only a littel represantation of our power. Goodbye now!

 

And then they got in car and ran to Montgomery.

 

Kenny: We did them! We injured Sweet! Cant wait to see the next battel!

 

OTD: We should wait till next week.I have now to go and get some members for our gang.A very hard work,you know.

THE END.

 

Second chapeter coming soon...

 

 

[TonyZimmzy]

You need to work on making them longer and more presentable for the reader, but it's always nice to see more writers on the forums.

[the gangsta]

I will try but there are good?

 

Chapter 2: Drive-By

 

19 August 1995. Time: 23.10.

 

West Side Ballas continoued to get members.OTD was thinking of doing some drive-by in the day when Sweet will get home.OTD sayed something to Kenny:

 

OTD: What do you think Kenny if we will do tonight a drive by?

 

Kenny: Well,it is a good idea but you are the boss.You decided.

 

OTD: Yeah,we will make a drive by tonight.I will send this message to Dog LS.He will do it.

 

In this time,Dog LS was at Palomino Creck to get some guns for a littel job,when the phone ring...

 

Dog LS: Yeah OTD,what do you want?......Ok i will do the job tonight.

 

In Montgomery something happend.One of the members were killed.

 

Kenny: Who the hell did this?

 

A guy: It was a GSF member that killed him.After he killed him,he suicided. What a stupid guy!

 

Kenny: Yeah,stupid.Well time to go to get some beers.Anyone coming?

 

A guy: Yeah,come with you.

 

Later that night,Dog LS was preparing for the drive-by.

 

Dog LS: Lets see: We have 3 members that will come with me,3 SMG'S and a TEC 9 and a high morale.....Ok guys lets roll.

 

They got in car and drived to Ganton.After 15 minutes they got there.Like in the past,GSF members didnt know about this drive-by that will happen.

 

Dog LS: Ok,lets start banging some GSF bastards. ATACK!

 

The drive-by started.Some of the members of GSF died.CJ got out from his home with hes crew armed with AK'S and Desert Eagle.

 

A member from the car: Oh sh*t! We gona die!

 

Dog LS: Shut up! We wont die.Shoot them!

 

CJ remained the only guy from the crew and got shoot.The bullet hit his arm and his chest.CJ went in a coma because oof serious bleeding.

 

Dog LS: Stop the shooting and lets get back to Montgomery.

 

After that,they went to Montgomery.Dog LS entered the house very happy.

 

Dog LS: We did it! We shoot CJ and send him in a coma.He will die in few hours.

 

OTD: Very good thing you did,Dog LS.We shall wait till tomorrow and then send the spies to see if CJ is dead.

THE END.

 

Chapter 3 coming soon....

 

[TonyZimmzy]

They aren't good, sorry. I don't mean to sound like an asshole, but you need to use a spellchecker, in Wordpad or something. Also, maybe you should read other stories on the forums, so you can pick up pointers on how to write. I suggest looking at Cubanwhip's, as It's the longest running, and favourite on the forum.