GSF_Membuh Posted December 24, 2006 Author Share Posted December 24, 2006 Here is Part 2! Plz comment and stay tuned cause I'm gonna post 5 new cliffhanging chapters (hopefully) tomorrow! Chapter 10: Battle at Ocean View; Part Two Unknown, 4:59 p.m. Tenpenny and his army of Ballas are heading towards Vice City for a new drug deal and to build their new drug empire over there. Tenpenny: 4 more hours. 4 more f*ckin' hours til I build my new empire and finally accomplish my goal. *Looks around and calls a Balla over to him* Eh where is shorty and fatso?! Balla: They shoulda came on the plane, but none of us saw them enteror even check into the station before we left ,officer. Tenpenny: They couldn't of?! Aw damn it! I would say turn the plane back, but I'm too close to victory to turn back now! I think I know what they're planning, but if they die, they die. Its that simple. Balla: So, what do you want us to do? Tenpenny: Just commence on what you're doing. We're still heading to Vice City. Nothing will stop me from heading to Vice City. Grove Street, 5:24 p.m. Sweet and his men are fighting off Cesar and his men in a last ditch effort to save Los Santos from the Aztecas' drug trade. Sweet: *Getting shoot at* F*ck! I need some reinforcements! Grove: Try callin' CJ! He and his men can help us! Sweet: Aiight, but yo' btter cover me! I'm makin' the call *Grabs cellphone and calls CJ* CJ: *At a party partying, but his phone rings* Hello. Sweet: Yo CJ where the hell are ya at?! Its me Sweet! CJ: Yo Sweet whats wrong?! Sweet: Grove Street is bein' attacked by those f*ckin' Aztecas! We need yo' help man! CJ: Don't worry I'll be there ASAP! Sweet: Well make it quick cause we're gettin' blasted here! We might lose Grove Street homie! CJ: Don't worry homie I'm headin' there right now! *hangs up* I'm not gonna lose Grove Street again! *Drives off in his Glendale* Sweet: You better hurry the hell up CJ! *Shoots at the attacking Aztecas* Somewhere in the Pacific Ocean, 6:47 p.m. Jin and Heihachi are in their jetflying over the Pacific Ocean heading to the US. Jin: When do we get there?! I wanna know! Heihachi: Calm down nephew. Why are you so tense all of a sudden? Jin: I just want to get this over with already so I can redeem mysekf in the Yakuza! I want to make my father proud! Heihachi: Nephew, your father doesn't control your destiny you do. You have control on everything you do. Jin: Uncle, you see this? *Points at a tatoo on his upper left part of his left arm* This tatoo means I am a banished prince remember?! Father branded me with it after he defeated me in a duel! Heihachi: But Jin your father is hot headed but he doesn't control you like a puppet. You control yourself and your actions. Jin: Just tell me when we're arriving. Heihachi: In about a day and a half. Jin: Thank you uncle. Heihachi: Don't mention it. Jefferson, 6:57 p.m. CJ is is almost to Ganton but something will keep him from getting there. CJ: Aiight Sweet here comes CJ! All of a sudden two glendales and a Green Sabre pulls up in front of his car. CJ: What the f*ck?! A gang of Ballas comes out from the three cars and aims their pistols at CJ. Balla 1: Get the f*ck outta the car you b*tch! CJ: Ballas?! No way that can't be. Me and Sweet took them down in 92'?! That ain't possible?! Balla 2: Well it is possible you Grove Street Scum! Now get outta the f*ckin' car! CJ is being haunted by visions from the past including Ryder, Smoke, Pulaski and Tenpenny. Along with his other Balla related endeavours including his mother's and his brother Brian's funeral. CJ: No, no, no!!!!! *Speeds towards the Ballas and speeds straight through them and their cars* That ain't possible it can't be! Suddenly his tires blasts off due to his intense speed and then his car tipped over and flipped over three times. It lands in a grassy area and it explodes, but CJ manages to crawl out of the car before it explodes. The Ballas sees him trying to escape and catches him. Balla 3: You ain't goin' anywhere nigga. *Shoots CJ in the leg* What are you waitin' fo'?! Pretty please?! Bag em' and gag em' niggas! The Ballas ties him up and throws CJ into the trunk of the Green Sabre. They drive off heading for Red County with CJ in tow with them. Grove Street, 7:48 p.m. Sweet is still fending off the Aztecas from taking over Grove Street. Sweet: Damn it CJ! Where the f*ck are you?! *Shoots but gets shot back in his right arm* Aw!!! Damn it! Grove 1: Yo Sweet you aiight?! Sweet: Yeah ust a gun wound! I had many before don't worry I'll survive! Grove 2: I'm sick of thgis $hit! I'm goin' out there! Grove 1: Nigga you crazy?! You'll get iced out there! Grove 2: I don't care! At least I die fightin'! *Jumps out and charges at the Azteca Forces only to be shot by a Sniper Rifle from an Azteca thats on top OG Loc's roof. Sweet: No!!!! Damn it! Screw CJ we on our own now! Lets get in CJ's house! They enter the Johnson residence to recuperate. Grove 1: There is too many of em' out there Sweet. Theres only you and me left! Sweet: I'm gonna die fightin' just like he said. Even though the odds are against us we'll die defendin' our homeland! Grove 1: You're right! Stay here Sweet I have a plan. *Takes out Molotov and lits it on fire, but before he could reach the door he is shot down by two pistol shots in the head, thus making him drop the molotov lighting the house on fire* The two men that shot the Grove member were two Ballas. They came down the stairs and they are the ones that helps Tenpenny around. Sweet: Ballas?! I-I thought you Ballas were dead! Me and CJ destroyed you all back in 1992?! You guys can't be back its impossible! Balla 1: Sean, Sean, Sean. You are so conceited. Just because we were gone for years doesn't mean we dead nigga. Balla 2: I thought you were smarter than that Sean. Sweet: H-How do you know my name?! Balla 1: Don't you recognize us "homie" we were once homies until you stupidly rejuected my offer of joining the grug business you GSF Scum! Balla 2: Maybe this would help you. *Takes off beanie and puts on sunglasses* Balla 1: *Takes off bandanna and puts on eye glasses* Now do you recognize us?! Sweet: Smoke, Ryder?! I'll never forget yo' ugly @$$ faces! Wait a sec?! CJ said he iced you two fools?! Smoke: Ever heard of faking it? I was just faking my death. I had on two bullet proof vests and ketchup packets all over my body to make it look like blood. Ryder: I just jumped out of the speed boat befor it exploded. I thought that stupid @$$ Carl woulda saw me, but he was too stoned to see me. Sweet: I'll f*ckin' kill you two once and for all! *Shoots with his AK-47, but it has no bullets* Smoke: Aw ain't that sad? You don't have any bullets. Ryder: Ha that is sad. Lets end this already. *Takes out M4* Smoke: Lets! *Takes out M4* Sweet: Please don't! Smoke: Too late "homie". They shoot at Sweet numerous times and they finally shoots him out of the window falling to his death. Ryder: Then it all goes splat! Ha ha ha ha ha! Ocean View, 8:33 p.m. Ricky is still trying to outrun the Diaz's after hours of chasing him. Meanwhile, Tammy is still at the base fending off the base from Diaz's. Tammy: Keep goin' men! *Shoots* Back at Ocean View Brian and Clyde are trying to dodge the Diaz's attacks. Brian: Who the f*ck are these guy?! Clyde: Beats the f*ck outta me, but we do have to get to a bomb shop here! Brian: Oh yeah! Clyde: Now you realize?! We've been driving around the city for hours and bnow you remember?! Brian: Eh I was havin' too much fun! Clyde wait a sec we're here! *They pull up in front of the shop, but when they go inside the building is set ablaze* Brian: $hit! Wheres this 8-Ball dude?! Clyde: Lets look! They enter the building and searches the rooms to no avail. Brian: I think we too late! We need to get outta here before we get fried like fried rice! Man: Help! Clyde: What was that?! Brian: I think its comin' from upstairs! Clyde: Lets check it out! *They approach the stairs only to find it blocked by a wall of fire* Damn it! Now what?! Brian: *Takes out two fire extinguishers* Here take one. *Passes to Clyde* Aiight lets do this $hit! They extinguish the wall of fire thats covering the stair but there are still more fires to extinguish. They clear out the stair and check the rooms. Clyde: Not this one! Brian: Not this one ether! Clyde: *Enters the manager's office and sees 8-Ball trapped underneath a pile of charred debris* Brian and found em'! 8-Ball: Who are you?! Clyde: My dad knows you! Do you remember this once mute guy you hanged out with?! 8-Bal: Claude?! Yeah I knew him! Clyde: Well I'll explain it all later. NowI need to get you outta here! Brian get the hell in here! Brians: *A toilt flush is heard and Brian enters the room* He wasn't in the bathroom! Wait there he is! Clyde: Yes now help me blow these fires out! They extinguished the fire on the debris and lifts it off of 8-Ball, thus freeing him. Clyde: Lets get the hell outta here! They go through the way they went in and exits the shop. Suddenly the shop explodes destroying everyything inside it, even the bombs. Clyde: No! Brian: Aiight lets get the f*ck outta here! *they enter their cab and speeds off* Meanwhile, Ricky is still being chased, until his car finally catches on fire due to the amount of damage it sustained. Ricky: F*ck I gotta get outta here! *Jumps out* Ricky is now surrounded by Diaz Soldiers in a now burnt down Ocean View. Ricky: Alright you pricks I'm here! Try to take me down! A few blocks away Brian and company are driving for their lives until they see Ricky on the road. 8-Ball: Eh theres a guy on the road. Clyde: Hey thats Ricky Vercetti! My paps told me about em'! We have to save em'! Brian: Aiight, aiight. One Vercetti comin' up! Before the Diaz's could attack Ricky Brian pulls up in front of him. Ricky: What the hell?! Brian: Eh if you wanna live het in the back seat. Ricky: Uh... thanks. Brian: No prob. Now get in! *Ricky enters the cab and Brian speeds off pass the barriers and out of Ocean View* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 24, 2006 Author Share Posted December 24, 2006 I hope that last chapter was enough of a cliffhanger to keep you guys occupied til the new chapter tomorrow on Christmas Eve! Expect alot of chapters tomorrow (hopefully) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 24, 2006 Author Share Posted December 24, 2006 New Chapters almost finish. Stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 24, 2006 Author Share Posted December 24, 2006 Here is Chapter 11! Enjoy and plz comment. I want this story to last to the end. Chapter 11: Trouble For Tommy Vercetti Estates, 9:47 p.m. Brian and Clyde carries Ricky inside the Vercetti Sestates which is now used as a hideout for the Vercetti Troops if anything severe happened. Clyde: Where you want us to put you down Mr. Vercetti? Ricky: Down on that couch over there. *Points to a couch in the parlor* Also how do you know my name? Clyde: Everybody knows about you Ricky. You defend Vice from the Mafia Forces. Vice hasn't been invaded by the Mafia. Its not hard. Brian: Yo Ricky who were those guys that were attacking us in Ocean View? Were they the Mafia? Ricky: No, they're members of the Diaz Gang. Their former leader Ricardo Diaz was killed by my father Tommy, but somehow it appeared that Ricardo found an heir to his throne andnnow the Diaz's are back to kill the ones that took them down in 86'. Brian: Who are the ones they wan't to kill? Ricky: What do you think?! Its me and my family you stupid prick! Brian: Oh. So Clyde don't you have a mission to do? Clyde: Oh yeah. *to 8-Ball* Eh 8-Ball. 8-Ball: What. Clyde: Do you have any of the new bombs that my paps ordered? 8-Ball: I did, but my bomb shop is completely down in hell now! Also how you know my name son?! Clyde: My paps knows you. His name is Claude Speed. 8-Ball: Claude?! You're Claude's sone?! Clyde: Yep you better know it. 8-Ball: How the hell is Claude? Clyde: I don't know. Before I came here we were attacked buy the Mafia in Liberty City. He told me to leave him there so I can get those bombs that he wanted and come back, but now that your bomb shop is gone I'm afraid the Mafia's influende in Liberty City will grow. I hadn't heard from paps since that night. I hope he's okay. Ricky: So you're Clyde Speed. I heard alot about you. I always wanted to meet the son of the Great Claude Speed, the one who killed Salvatore Leone and ended the Leones reign in the states. Its great to finally meet you. Clyde: Likewise Mr. Vercetti. *Shakes Ricky's hand* Brian: I bet all y'all heard of me Brian Johnson, leader of Grove Street and dominant gangsta in San Andreas! 8-Ball: Isn't that the Aztecas? Brian: Aztecas?! You f*ckin' kiddin' me homie! GSF can sweep the floor with those punks! Ricky: I just heard of you on the news about a string of robberies San An. Brian: I'm tellin' y'all that ain't me! Clyde: Yeah.. right. So Ricky hows your paps? Ricky: He's back here in Vice only for two weeks. He's back at the base. *Stands up* I can walk now. Lets get to the base and see how they doing. The four men exits the mansion and into their cab. They head towards the Vercetti Base to meet Tommy Vercetti. Meanwhile.... Tommy is in his Voodoo heading towards an unknown destination. He has about 15 weaponswith him so you can expect it to be a uge gun battle. Escobar International, 10:32 p.m. Tenpenny and his crew finally arrives at Vice City. Tenpenny: An hour late! A f*ckin' hour late! Where are Tommy's men?! Vercetti Soldier: Ah Mr. Tenpenny how was your flight sir? Tenpenny: Awful now take me to my hotel! Vercetti Soldier: Yes sir. They all get intheir cars and heads toward The Grand Vice Hotel acrosse town. Diaz Base, 10:45 p.m. Diaz Gaurd: Sir, we now have control of Ocean View! RJ: Excellent! My plan to raise my empire from the grave is all according to plan! Outside the base a couple more gaurds are out patrolling the outer perimeter of the base, but unbeknownst to them Tommy is entering the stronghold. Tommy kills a couple gaurds using stealth-like moves, but unfortunately Tommy gets caught on a security monitor. Diaz: *On walkie talkie* Send out the troops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 24, 2006 Share Posted December 24, 2006 Nice chap. I think people aren't commenting much because you constantly start up new stories then leave them after a few chapters, so it seems like some kind of a test to see if you will continue with this one or not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 Thanks for the comment Tony. Trust me I'm gonna continue this til the end this time. Here is Chapter 12! Expect another chapter in about 2 hours or so. Chapter 12: Tommy Captured Vecetti Base: Outer Perimeters, 11:09 p.m. 8-Ball: *Notices smoke up in the air* Yo dawgs. Whats that smoke?! Ricky: Smoke?! Where?! 8-Ball: Up there. *Points to the sky* Now you see it? Clyde: I can see it. Brian: Me too. It looks bad. Ricky: Floor it Brian! Brian: Now this is gonna be real fun! *Speeds off* Diaz Base: Outer Perimeters, 11:46 p.m. Tommy is still killing gaurds one by one. Tommy: *Killing a gaurd by snapping his neck* How many gaurds are there?! Just then an army of Diaz Soldiers are surrounding the outer part of the base armed with pistols, bats, lead pipes and other weapons. Diaz Soldier 1: Stop right there Mr. Vercetti! If you surrender to us now we promise you won't get hurt, much. Tommy: *Puts hands up* What can I say. Ya got me. Diaz Soldier 2: I knew you'll see it our way Mr. Vercetti. What are you waitin' for?! Tie em' up ya idiots! Tommy: *Pulls out M4* Hold it right there ya pricks! The Diaz soldiers freezes in fright and arms their weapons. Tommy: Did you Diaz pricks actually think I'll give up?! You're even more dickheaded than your old leader Ricardo! *Shoots at the soldiers* Diaz Soldier 1: *Getting shot at* F*ck! We're gonna need some more back up! *On walkie talkie* Eh RJ this Vercetti @$$hole destroying us! We need more back up! RJ: Don't worry I'm sendin' in some more men! They should be headin down now. Diaz Soldier 1: Thanks sir! *Puts away walkie talkie* Tommy: I hope you guys remember to say hello to my little friend! *Shoots more like a maniac* HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!! The back up that RJ sends arrives and the numbers gain finally takes a toll on Tommy. Tommy: *Being shot in the leg* F*ck this! *Takes out grenade pulls out the pin and throws it at the oncoming Diaz Troops and kills them* Yes! You pricks will learn the lesson of staying in your f*ckin' graves once and for all! *Shoots some more but is knocked out from behind by a Diaz Troop with a Baseball Bat* Diaz Troop: *On walkie talkie to RJ* Tommy is incapacitated! RJ: Excellent! this is our ace in the hole! Soon the Vercettis shall fall and the Diaz's shall rise to the top again! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!! Vercetti Base, 12:27 a.m. Ricky, Brian, Clyde an 8-Ball makes it to the Vercetti Base and sees a huge battle between the Diaz's and the Vercetti's for the Base. Brian: Homie this f*cked up! These guys are everywhere! Clyde: We gotta do something! Ricky: Oh no Tammy! *Exits the cab and runs towards the battlefield* 8-Ball: We gotta stop him! Brian: Now thats somethin' we all agree on! Thay all exit the cab and grabs weapons from the trunk. Clyde grabs an AK-47. Brian grabs an M-16. 8-Ball grabs a Tec-9. 8-Ball: Its a good thing I had that hand transplant thing! Brian: Good for you now lets save Ricky! They charge onto the battlefield. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 25, 2006 Author Share Posted December 25, 2006 Great, now someone rated this bad. Who would of done that? Anyways here is Chapter 13! Chapter 13: Saving Private Ricky Vercetti Base, 12:45 a.m. Brian. Clyde and 8-Ball are shooting their through the waves of Diaz Troops to get to Ricky. Brian: *Shoots down two Diaz's* How much of these guys are there homie?! Clyde: Beats me, but we're getting boxed in here!*Shoots down thre Diaz Troops* 8-Ball: We need to find an opening through the building somehow. *A Diaz grabs him, but he slams em' down and shoots em' in the head* $hit! Brian: I don't see any way to go homies! Looks like its the end of us! Clyde: If we can't find a way though, we make a way through! *Takes out a grappling hook gun* This is our ticket outta here! Hang on! Brian: Aiight! *Grabs hold of Clyde* 8-Ball: If it gets us outta here! *Grabs hold of Clyde too* Clyde: Hold on tight y'all. We're heading inside the Vercetti Base! *Shoots grappler out and it grabs hold of a pipe. It pulls them up on the roof of the base* Yes it works! Brian: That was killers homie! 8-Ball: *Vomitting* Lets not do that again aiight. Clyde: Look theres the door to get us inside! *Points to it and opens it* They enter inside the base and its full of dead bodies of Vercetti and Diaz soldiers. Clyde: $hit man its like a morgue in here. Brian: Tommy went inside somewhere in this building so I suggest we split up and look for the psycho. 8-Ball: Sounds like a plan, but do you know how huge this place is?! It'll take forever to find him in here. Clyde: That maybe, but still yet. He's apart of the war and a soldier on our side and our motto is to never let a soldier down. Brian: Clyde is right, besides Ricky would probably do the same for us. 8-Ball: Aiight, aiight. We'll split up. Clyde: Good. 8-Ball, you take this floor. Brian take the floor below this and I'll take the floor below Brian's. Brian: Aiight. 8-Ball: Okay. Clyde: Alright men move out! 8-Ball goes down the hall, Brian goes down the stair and Clyde goes down the elevator. Main Office, 1: 35 a.m. Ricky is in the Main Office searching for his sister. He searches throughtout the room, until he reaches the Monitoring room where he sees his sister on floor hanging for dear life. Ricky: Tammy! *Runs to her aid* Tammy you alright?! Tammy: Ricky, is that you? Ricky: Yeah its me. What happened here?! Tammy: Right after paps left to get you Diaz Soldiers arrived and attacked the base. Our men did all they could do, but somehow the Diaz Soldiers just kept coming and coming. Then, a couple of black men bombed us from behind, so I went in the base. They were searching for items I remember. Mostly, our top secret documents and money. One of them came in here and I followed. He took some of our gadgets. I tried to stop him but he got the best of me. He knocked me down and shot me. Ricky I-I don't-don't know h-how long I have left b-but I w-want you to know you were the b-best big brother a y-younger sibling could ever h-had. Ricky: Tammy please no! Tammy: You'll find a way Ricky. I know you c-can. Y-You always d-do. *She loses breath and dies* Ricky: NOOOOOO!!!!!!!! East Wing, 2:47 a.m. 8-Ball is now currently in the East Wing looking for Ricky. 8-Ball: Ricky! Yo Ricky where ya at?! If you hear me please answer! *Nothing happens* Where the hell he at? He goes farther down into Ricky's main office. 8-Ball enters the room and flicks the lights on. 8-Ball notices a living body on the ground and checks on it. 8-Ball: Yo man you okay?! Vercetti Soldier: They stole a top secret file... 8-Ball: What file man?! Vercetti Soldier: About the-the...... (Drops dead) 8-Ball: $hit! Whatever that document is I need to get it! A walks into the room from behind and closes the door. 8-Ball: *Notices the man's shadow and turns back* Who the hell are you?! Vercetti Vaults, 3:16 a.m. Brian enters the Vercetti Family Vaults. Brian: Holy $hit! I just hit the jackpot! *Takes a handful 100 dollar bills and stuffs it in his pockets* I am so totally rich! I am the mack daddy pimp of San Andreas now! *Hears a noise from behind* Eh whoever you are. You better get out or else you'll really get hurt. An African-American man enters from the shadows. Man: Just try and hurt me. East Wing, 3:38 p.m. 8-Ball: Listen @$$hole I ain't gonna ask you again! Who the hell are you?! Man: None of your business old man. 8-Ball: You're so gonna regret that punk! *Notices some files in the man's hands* Wait a sec. You're the onewho stole the files! Man: Bingo. Now if you don't mind I should be leaving for my ride. 8-Ball: You ain't heading for your ride you [email protected]$$ b*tch! *Charges towards the man, but the man pulls out a 9mm and shoots 8-Ball squarely in the head* Man: Bullseye. *On ear piece* I have the files you want. What do you want me to do now? Man on the other line: Just report back to base. Man: Copy that "sir". Over and out. The man opens the window and takes out an oval shaped device. The device transforms into a hoverboard and the man jumps on it and rides off into the night. West Wing, 4:10 a.m. Clyde searches in the rooms of the West Wing, but all the rooms he checked so far are eithe empty or full of dead bodies. He sees a door already and enters only to find it empty, but he sees another door thats open. He enters and sees Ricky with the body of his dead sister Tammy. Clyde: Yo Ricky! We've been lookin' for you like forever! Come on! We need to leave! Ricky: Not without my sister! Clyde: Ricky please we need to go! Its too dangerous in here now. We have to get outta here! Ricky: No! Clyde: Listen Ricky I too have lost a loved one. That was my brother Craig. He died during a battle against the Forellis. I will never forget that day. I too wanted revenge, but my paps told me its just a way of life. He said once a person finishes their business down on Earth they finally get taken up to the realm of light. Well thats what I remember my dad telling me. After that I learned to except the fact that my brother was dead and go on with my life. Ricky you have to realize that. Ricky: You're right Clyde. Thanks... I guess. Clyde: Now lets get outta here. They exit the room. Vercetti Vaults, 4:47a.m.l Brian is fighting the man hand to hand and losing. Brian: *Badly beaten* C-Come on! *Charges but gets knocked down* Man: That wasn't even a challenge. Anyways I enjoyed our time together but I need to leave with the loot! *Takes boxes full of money and leaves* About 20 minutes later Clyde and Ricky enters the Vaults and sees Brian's bashed up body. Ricky: He's still alive, but he needs medical attention. Clyde: We need to get him tp a hospital fast. Ricky: We'll take my copter on the roof. Clyde: Alright lets go then. *They carry Brian and leaves* East Wing, 5:57 a.m. They enter the East Wing and sees 8-Ball's dead body on the ground. Clyde: Oh no 8-Ball! Ricky: Its too late somebody already got to em'. We need to leave now. Clyde: You're right. Bye 8-Ball. They make it up onto the roof and the battle outside is close to its end with the Diaz's winning. Clyde: Wheres your copter?! Ricky: There! *Points to a Hunter* Lets get in! They put Brian in first, then they go inside. They take off dodging a few bullets and RPGs from the Diaz's. Clyde: Where is ythe closest Mdical Facility? Ricky: Not far from here. If we keep going without stopping we might make it before 7:00. Clyde: Hang in there Brian. Diaz Base, 6:10 a.m. RJ is in his office when his servant enters. Servant: Excellent news! RJ: What is it?! Servant: One, we tooken control of the Vercetti Base! RJ: YES!!!!!! And 2?! Servant: We got em'. RJ: Who?! Servant: Tommy Vercetti! RJ: YES!!!! Excellent! The Vercettis has fallen and now a new age shall begin and that age is Diaz! HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!!!!!! End of Chapter. Thats it for today y'all. Plz comment. Expect a special cliffhanging Christmas Day Chapter tomorrow on Christmas Day! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 It was that stupid douche retard Palaric8, he f*cked everyones stories up, except like three. I'll get round to reading this later, didn't realize you'd posted a new chapter and I'm not in the mood to read now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 Why wont that Palric guy just make a story of his owns and I'd be happy to rate it BAD. Anyways I'm almost finished with my next chapter. Stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 26, 2006 Share Posted December 26, 2006 Why wont that Palric guy just make a story of his owns and I'd be happy to rate it BAD. Anyways I'm almost finished with my next chapter. Stay tuned! Because he types like an idiot and his story would look pathetic compared to 99% on here I bet it'd get a red star. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 26, 2006 Author Share Posted December 26, 2006 Sorry bout yesterday. I was caught up in playing GTA: Vice City Stories too much. I just got it yesterday. I'm not gonna post the new chapter today. I'm gonna post it tomorrow. Sorry and well have a Happy New Year! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 27, 2006 Author Share Posted December 27, 2006 Here is a little preview for the next chapter! Brian is sent to the hospital Clyde and Ricky checks out the sites of Vice City Clyde saves a teenager from a gang of Street Wannabes Ricky finds out Tommy's fate CJ's fate is seen Enemies return An ally returns Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TonyZimmzy Posted December 27, 2006 Share Posted December 27, 2006 Good chapter, it was a long one I read it whilst I brushed my teeth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 28, 2006 Author Share Posted December 28, 2006 Sorry for the long delay, but here is Chapter 14! Enjoy and plz comment y'all. Chapter 14: Keep yo' Friends Close and yo' Enemies Closer; Part One Vice City Hospital, 6:46 a.m. Clyde and Ricky finally arrives at the hospital and checks Brian in. Brian is then take on a stretcher and to the X-Ray room to see if any more damage was done to him. After about an hour of waiting the X-Rays come in. Clyde: So how is the punk, doc? Doctor: He has a few bumps and bruises. He also has a sprained back and arm. Nothing fatal, but he needs his rest. While you're waiting you should check out the sites here Mr. Speed. Maybe Mr. Vercetti will show you around. Clyde: Okay. Ya heard em' Ricky. Show me around this place. Ricky: Yeah, yeah whatever. Follow me. They both leave the room. Doctor: Now Mr. Johnson. What to do with you?! *Laughs evilly with a saadistic grin* Outside, Ricky and Clyde gets in their now banged up taxi and drives off. Ricky: You guys really need to get of this $hitty @$$ vehicle. Clyde: At least it brings us to places. So, you givin' me yhe tour or not? Ricky: Fine. Here is the once beautiful Ocean View. Clyde: This place is really banged up. Those Diaz's sure knows how to work Missle Launchers. Ricky: I'll kill those f*ckin' pricks if I ever see them again! Clyde: Calm down. You'll get your chance Ricky. Just stay calm and be patient. Ricky: Your dad sure knows some crazy metphors. Clyde: Actually that one came from the LCY. Ricky: LCY?! Clyde: Liberty City Yakuza. They always teach me these kinds of metephors so that I don't make the same "mistakes" that my paps did back in the day. I wonder what they meant by that? Ricky: Anyways now we're entering Prawn Island. Home of the rich and Streetwannabes. Clyde: What the hell are Streetwannabes?! Ricky: Just like their names, they're wannabe gangsters. After all the famous people moved outta here these clowns came in and took over all the mansions. Clyde: They are wannabes. Ricky: But these guys could pack a wallop. Just ask my dad. Clyde: Hmph these guys don't look so tough to me. Lemme at em' I'll take these b*tches out! Ricky: Just shut up and stay calm like you said. Clyde: I just can't resist a challenge. Its in my blood. Ricky: Whatever. Now onto... *Suddenly a hobo pops in front of Ricky's side window* Mother f*cker! Who the hell are you prick?! Man: Don't you remember me Ricky?! Its me Ken! Ricky: Who?! Clyde: I think this guy is senile. Man: Its me Ken Rosenburg! I was your dad's friend. I was his attorny in 86'! Ricky: Oh Rosie! Don't worry Clyde he's with me. Rosie how the hell are ya?! Come inside and we'll give you a lift. Ken: Gladly. Ricky: Rosie, what happened tyo ya? You look... Clyde: Senile. Ricky: Shut up! I meant you look like a wreck. Ken: Its been awful for me Ricky. First, my casino was closed down in Las Ventura. Second, I had no job so I came back here to find one but there wasn't any. And third, I lost my apartment and now I'm a hobo! Clyde: Tough luck for you old man. Ken: I know! Anyways Ricky do you have a place where I can sty for a while? Please! Ricky: Alright you can stay at the Vercetti Estates for a WHILE got that. Ken: Oh thank you Ricky! You won't regret it! Vice Point, 11:09 a.m. A man and a woman are watching a monitor with Ken, Ricky and Clyde on the screen riding in their taxi. Another man comes in. Man 1: You sure this Rosenburg guy won't rat us out like before holms. Man 2: Trust me ese. I'll make sure he won't rat us out. Woman: Listen to the man you stupid idiot. We have this all under control. Thats the end of Part One! Stay tuned for Part Two! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 30, 2006 Author Share Posted December 30, 2006 Part Two is comin' hot off the wire, but I have to go to town for a family gathering. I promise that I'll post it as soon as I get back. Stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KillerGangster Posted August 30, 2008 Share Posted August 30, 2008 When Is Gna Be Finished I Really Wanna Play It Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danni Posted August 30, 2008 Share Posted August 30, 2008 First, this story hasn't been active in two years. Second, this isn't a mod! Why does everyone think a script is a mod? Third, never 'necromance' a topic. Ever. Bumping dead topics is a no-no, babe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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