GSF_Membuh Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 This is an updated version of my other FanFic GTA:Working Title. I added some more to the chapters kinda and more to the plotline. Hope you enjoy this version better than my old one. Plz comment. In Vice City, Tommy Vercetti was attacked by Forelli Gang Members. In Liberty City, Claude Speed was narrowly escaped a shootout by Leone Gang Members. In San Andreas, CJ fought in a gangwar against Sindacco Gang Members. The three protagonist later discovers that the three Mafia Families have joined to make one elite gang and the leader is unknown. Their journey takes them from their homestates to Liberty City, Vice City, San Andreas, Hawaii, Japan, North Pole, Carcer City, Bullworth, London and frequent visits to the other states they visited. Many enemies old and new rises and many conspiracies takes place such as the Liberty City Mafia Families teaming with the Kazama Yakuza, 8-Ball manipulated by Tenpenny to kill our protagonists, The Carcer City Gang Conspiracy & Bullworth's "light" problem. Along the way our heroes makes new allies such as James Earl Cash from Manhunt, Jimmy Hopkins from Bully, Mike from GTA Advance and a new cast of allies including Sosejo Padayao from my popular FanFic GTA: Hawaii. Join our protagonists as they venture through the world to bring some peace to their lives once and for all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 (edited) Chapter 1: The Beginning In Vice City. Vercetti Gangster: Mr. Vercetti, phone call from a guy named Ken Rosenburg or whatever the hell his name is. Tommy: When will he ever stop calling me?! Ah let em' talk to me. Vercetti Gangster: Yes sir. (passes phone) Tommy: Talk to me. Ken: Tommy you finally answered my calls how long has it been two, three years? Tommy: More like 15. Ken: Wow, time sure did flew by huh? Tommy: Yep sure did. Ken: So hows it been man? Tommy: Ah y'know same old, same old. Hows it been Rosie? Ken: Good, its been good I now run a casino called the Caligulas Palace down here in Las Venturas. Tommy: Wow, Las Venturas funny I heard that casino is run by the Mafia. Ken: Well not anymore you see I took care of that problem a long time ago. Tommy: Who helped you this time? Ken: Ah, how did you knew?! Tommy: I know you Rosie and I know you'll never fight a battle yourself. Ken: This guy named Carl Johnson helped me. Tommy: Carl Johnson why does that name sound familiar? Wait, he's the guy that killed my cousin! Ken: Cousin?! I never knew you had a cousin. Tommy: Thats cause I don't wanna talk about that point in my life. Chad took care of me when I was little after my parents died. We were put in an orphanage until we were adopted by this mafia tycoon named Joseph Vercetti. He only adopted us cause he never had children of his own to be heirs to his gang. Joseph died of a stroke when I was 18 years old and Chad was 23, so he Chad took control of the Vercetti Mafia Family and he ran it better than Joseph ever did. Then my cousin caught the Leukemia disease when he was 33 in 1985 and he promised me that I'll take control the Vercetti Mafia Family. In 1988 he was killed in a drive-by from a few Leone Family Gangstas and one of the witnesses took a picture of the man shooting and gave it to me and I found out that an African American man killed Chad. Sources told me that the man was Carl Johnson, but we were unable to locate him, but now I know where he's at thanks to you Rosie I owe you one. Ken: Tommy no he's changed now he wouldn't kill a fly well unless its a very annoying one but you know what I mean! He helped me get rid of the Mafia in San Andreas,. He even killed Johnny Sindacco and you know how hard it was to kill that guy! Tommy: I don't care Rosie he killed the person I loved with all my heart and took him away from me, but now I can return the favor! I'm going to San Andreas and you better meet me there Rosie! Ken: But, Tommy.. Tommy: No buts Rosie I should be their in about a day. Later Rosie. (Hangs up) Ken: But.. ah he hanged up! Ugh what am I gonna do now?! In San Andreas. CJ: Eh Sweet where you at?! Sweet: Right here in the garage! CJ: Homie what you doin' now?! Sweet:(By a vehicle covered in a tarp) Y'know that Green Sabre Big Smoke and Ryder had before? CJ: Yeah I'll never forget that $hit! What bout' it? Sweet: I took it to a Mod Shop and got it pimped out to the max! It took half of my money, but it was worth it. Now I introduce to you the new and improved, lean, mean, green, Grove Street Machine! The GSF branded Green Sabre! (Takes tarp off) CJ: Oh $hit homie thats one pimp car! Sweet: This baby has a new paintjob, engine, lights, hidrolix, nitrous and all kinds of new $hit! CJ: Lets take this baby out for a test drive homie. Sweet: Oh yeah! But to where? CJ: How bout to Las Venturas! I mean we could go clubbing, gamble and drink all we want! Sweet: Lets take a road trip! CJ: Aiight homie! We go through Red County, San Fierro, Bone County and finally Las Ventura! Sweet: Sounds like a plan! We leave tomorrow. CJ: Aiight! Starts to rain. In Liberty City. 8-Ball: Yo Claude you got the money bro? Claude: (Shakes head) 8-Ball: Claude you're my dawg! With this money we'll be able to make our own Mafia Family! Claude: (Shakes head continuously) 8-Ball: Soon I'll follow in my brother's footsteps as leader of a gang and not only that but finally I'll be somebody like my brother was. Claude: (Stares) 8-Ball: So you wanna know what happened to my brother huh? Claude: (Shakes head up and down) 8-Ball: My brother Will was once the leader of the Billiard Boiz and his street name was 9-Ball. He and his gang only lasted for a year and a half until gangs like The Southside Hoods and Triads came along and defeated them badly enough to put an end to their gang reign. Will died in a boat accident in 1996 in Vice City, but never found his body. Now I want to follow in his footsteps and make a gang better than his. Til this day I still miss him, but thats in the past and now its time to move on. Claude: (looks sad) At Vice City International Tommy: Make sure you don't lose my stuff. Vercetti Gangster: Yes sir. Flight Attendant: Flight 746 enroute to Las Venturas is delayed I repeat Flight 746 enroute to Las Venturas is delayed. Tommy: What the f*ck. Vercetti Gangster: What do we do now. Tommy: Lets ask the flight attendant. Flight Attendant: May I help you sir. Tommy: Yes, why is flight 746 delayed? Flight Attendant: San Andreas is experiancing some bad weather right now and it'll be too dangerous to get there sir. Tommy: Whens the next flight over there? Flight Attendant: About four days. Tommy: Four days?! Well I can wait for a little bit. Thanks for your help ma'am. Flight Attendant: Your welcome sir. Tommy: What to do now?! Tommy gets to his limo and drives off. A Forelli Family car follows close behind. Thats it for Chapter 1. I hope you guys enjoyed it and please feel free to comment. . Edited December 5, 2006 by GSF_Membuh Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 Chapter 2: Riot in Red County CJ and Sweet are getting ready for their road trip. CJ: Yo homie its pouring buckets out there I don't think its safe to go out in weather like this. Sweet: Yo I promised you that we'll be taking a road trip to Las Venturas in my new Green Sabre and I'm not gonna break it aiight! CJ: Fine then we go already! Sweet: Now thats the kind of attitude I wanna see outta you. Hurry get inside already I wanna beat the traffic. CJ: Aiight lets go. Sweet: Next stop Red County! (Turns on the ignition) OG Loc comes in front of the Sabre. OG: Yo where you guys goin?! CJ: Ah Geoffery get the hell outta the way! OG: Where yo goin homies?! Sweet: We goin' to Las Venturas now get the f*ck outta the way! OG: Aiight then b*tches!(Gets outta the way) CJ: Finally that @$$hole moved! They drive off onto the extremely wet and damped road. OG: Mother f*ckers! A man approaches OG Loc. Man: Excuse me sir but do you mind telling me where those two are going? OG: The two [email protected]$$es?! They're heading for Red County going to Las Venturas! Man: Thank you(grabs a 9mm and shoots Loc in the head) very much! (Grabs a cellphone) Mario to Sindacco Base the prey is heading for Red County, what should we do?! Man on other line: Make sure the prey doesn't make it out of Red County alive! You know what to do. Mario: Yes I do!(Hangs up and re-dials again) Eh Paulie put plan "Hunt" into action and once the prey gets there you know what to?! Paulie: Yes I have a feeling that this party will start off with a big bang! In San Fierro. Woozie: What do you mean they kidnapped Ran Fa Li?! Triad Gangster: Ran Fa Li has been taken by some guys in green. They took out a $hit load of our guys with their Rocket Launchers. Woozie: Damn it! I've gotta do something Ran Fa Li's life is at stake! But what?! Triad Gangster: We sent out more men to receive Ran Fa Li sir! Woozie: Whats the point obviously the one we're dealing with has some cleverness and I can't that risk! Wait Carl he can help us I'll call him now.(Grabs phone) CJ: Wassup?! Woozie: Carl its me Woozie! Listen Ran Fa Li has been kidnapped by a gang of guys wearing green! I need some help Carl please come down ASAP! CJ: Don't sweat Woozie I'm on my way I'm heading into Red County now and I should be there in a bit. Woozie: Alright, but please hurry!(Hangs up) CJ: Green?! The only gang that wears greens is GSF theres no way they would do this! They reach Red County in ruins. Sweet: What the hell happened here?! CJ: This doesn't look good at all! Sweet: $hit my car needs some juice we gotta find a gas station somewhere or else we'll get stranded. They finally reach a gas station but its in ruins and the gas tanks has been blown up. Sweet: F*ck now what are we suppose to do now?! CJ: Hey look the light is on in that Mini-Mart! Sweet: Lets check it out. When they get inside a man with a shotgun pops out from behind a register aiming a shotgun at both CJ and Sweet. Man: Put your hands where I can see em'! CJ: What the f*ck is with you man?! Man: Don't question me!(Shoots) Meanwhile in Vice City. Tommy: Ah finally back home in my mansion what more can be good? A Forelli Mafia Member sneaks a bomb in Tommy's basment and the bomb starts to tick with the set off time set to 10 minutes. Tjats it for tonight. More tomorrow! Plz cooment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 Remake sounds good Rating And for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 Thamks for the comment Gaja! Trust me this version will be over the top! And great cookies! yummy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 6, 2006 Author Share Posted December 6, 2006 Chapter 3: 8-Ball kidnapped and Tommy Vercetti... Dead? In Liberty City 8-Ball is having a nightmare about his brother. 9-Ball: Ryan help me! 8-Ball: Don't worry bro I'm comin'! 8-Ball extends his hand to reach out to 9-Ball, but his hand sets up in fire. 8-Ball: What the f*ck! 9-Ball: Ryan help! 9-Ball catches on fire. 9-Ball: Why Ryan, why?! 8-Ball: NOOOOOOOO! (wakes up) F*ck what a nightmare! I gotta stop drinkin' booze before sleepin'. 8-Ball dresses up and heads towards his car. 8-Ball: Eh Claude hurry up I goin' bar you need to drive me there! Claude gets downstairs and gets in the car with 8-Ball. They head yowards the local bar, but a Leone Mafia Car follows behind them. 8-Ball: Man that car is comin' up freakin' fast. Claude speeds up but the car just speeds up more behind them. Suddenly, one of the men in the Leone car pulls out an Uzi and shoots continuously at Claude and 8-Ball. 8-Ball: I knew somethin' was goin' on! Claude grabs an Uzi of his own and shoots out the window. 8-Ball: $hit a tires blown out! Claude's car tilts and rolls over 3 times. Leone Gangster: Yes we got em'! Claude and 8-Ball manages to make their way out of the car. 8-Ball: Claude look its Leone gangsters! Claude:*whispers* $hit. 8-Ball: Eh I thought you guys were outta here! Also Salvatore's dead you guys should be dead also! Leone Gangster: Hmph you wish 8-Ball. We are now run by someone else. Someone smarter and more wiser than that bologna Salavatore. The gangsters are about to shoot until a banshee pulls up and a man grabs 8-Ball and pulls him in the vehicle. Claude shootes at it to no avail. Claude:*whispers* $hit 8-Ball! The Leone Gangsters focuses their attention back to Claude. Leone Gangster: Ah who cares you're the one we want!(Shoots) Claude dodges and shoots back killing all the gangsters. More Gangsters arrives, but Claude runs out of ammo. Claude:*whispers* F*ck! Leone Gangster: You're comin' with us Speed! Claude tries to run, but he's shot down. Leone Gangster: Hurry get em' in the trunk! (Gets on the phone) Mister Leone we have Speed what should we do with em'? Mr. Leone: Just bring em' here to me and I'll take care of it from there. Leone Gangster: OK we'll be there in a bit.(Hangs up) They get inside their sentinal and drives off. In San Andreas. Man: Don't question me!(Shoots) Sweet: CJ look out!(Tackles CJ down) CJ: Thanks homie I owe you one. Sweet: Don't mention it. Man: Hold the f*ck still! Sweet and CJ tackles him down making him drop his gun. CJ: What the f*ck is your problem?! Man: I'm just protecting myself from those rioters! Sweet: What rioters?! Man: A riot broke out cause these guys in brown leather jackets gunned down a couple of people and then the towns folk defended themselves by using weaponsof their own. After that a huge riot broke out destroying this town and countless others! CJ: How come you were in here?! Man: This gas station has bullet-proof glass windows which gives me a chance of livin'! Sweet: I guess your story checks out. Whats your name?! Man: My names Mike! CJ: Well Mike do you know wheres the next gas station from here?! Mike: About ten miles from here! CJ: $hit my car will only last for 25 minutes and we really need to get to San Fierro! Sweet: We could go on our feet after the gas runs out. CJ: You kiddin' right?! No way we're gonna survive out there! Also we have a situation in San Fierro! Sweet: Its better than just standing here all night! CJ: I guess you're right. Its a good thing we brung weapons. Eh Mike you in?! Mike: I have nothin' else to do. CJ: Aiight lets go! They get in the Green Sabre and drives off into the foggy night. In Vice City. Tommy: I need to get some weapons from the basement for my trip to San Andreas. Tommy goes in his baement where his weapon vault is at. Tommy: (hears ticking) What the hell is that sound?!(Goes through boxes and finds the bomb.) Ah $hit! The bomb explodes and destroys the mansion and everything in it. A Vercetti Gang member pulls up and searches the carnage. Vercetti Gangster: Mr. Vercetti where are you?! Mr. Vercetti! In Liberty City. At the docks at about 10:23 p.m. 8-Ball wakes up in a daze and sees an African American man sitting in a chair. 8-Ball: Who the f*ck are you?! Man: The name's Tenpenny, Frank Tenpenny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 6, 2006 Author Share Posted December 6, 2006 Chapter 4: Survival In San Andreas. CJ: Sweet you sure this'll work? Sweet: Am I ever wrong?! CJ: There was that time we were betrayed by Smoke and Ryder and you just went ahead into their trap and got arrested. Sweet: Ah shut the f*ck up Carl! CJ: Whatever you say Sean. Mike: I would love to listen to your conversation, but look ahead! CJ and Sweet looks at where Mike is pointing at and they see three hillbillies with chainsaws. CJ: $hit! Run them over! The men manges to damage the car with their until they got hit head on by Sweet. Sweet: F*ck that was close! CJ: The remaining gas will only last us for 10 more minutes! Sweet: We gotta make it last! In Las Venturas. Rosie: Where the f*ck is Tommy at he should be here already! His flight probably got delayed, yeah thats it delayed! *A man comes through the door* Gaurd: Mr. Rosenburg the Vercetti Estates just called Mr. Vercetti is...... Rosie: What?! Spit it out! Gaurd: Dead. Rosie: Whoa you're pullin' my leg right no way he's..... Tommy NOOOOOOOO!!!! *cries* I hardly knew him! Wait I knew him for 15 years so, no my best friend!!! In San Fierro. Woozie: Damn it! CJ where are you! Triad: Sir we found some evidence on who the perpetrator might be. Woozie: What is it?! Triad: We found this tape in Ran Fa Li's office in The Four Dragon's and its very disturbing Woozie: Put it on! Triad: Yes sir. *puts tape in VCR* The tape goes on a man covered in shadows comes on. His voice sounds just like CJ's. Man: As you may know your leader has been kidnapped by your's truly and you are wondering where he's at. Well he's in a closed location on the outskirts of town in Bone County in El Castillo Del Diablo and if you want to see him alive again you'll have to come down here and pick em' up yourself and watch your step.*Tape goes off.* Woozie: That voice sounded so familiar, wait Carl! He'll pay for this! That explains why he isn't here yet. Send out search parties in El Castillo Del Diablo! Hurry! Triad: Yes sir! In Liberty City. Man: The names Tenpenny, Frank Tenpenny. 8-Ball: Tenpenny huh? Fancy name. Why have you brung me here?! Tenpenny: Simple I know who killed your brother and I'm here to help, Ryan. 8-Ball: How the hell did you know my name and how do yu know my brother?! Tenpenny: I'm a former cop and one time caught you during a heist in 2000. 8-Ball: Huh?! It was you?! I'll kill you! Tenpenny: Whoa there big guy I know who killed your brother on that boat trip in Vice City. His death was intended. 8-Ball: What the f*ck do you mean?! Tenpenny: He was assassinated Ryan and I know who killed him, but to ring him into justice I need your help and besides the victim was your brother. 8-Ball: Grrrrrrr! What do you want me to do? Tenpenny: Before that do you want me to tell you your brother's murderer? 8-Ball: I'm listening. Tenpenny: His name is, Carl Johnson and he just so happens to know your friend Claude. 8-Ball: What do you mean?! Tenpenny: They had a friendly encounter back in 92' during a street race after they became best of friends, until Claude's departure shortly after. Claude went to Vice City around the same time Carl did in 97'. They went on a crime spree and were hired by the local mafia to kill your brother and you know the rest. 8-Ball: No, Claude wouldn't do this! He wouldn't! Tenpenny: Who are you gonna believe Ryan. Your brother's murderer or your brother's savior. 8-Ball: I swear I'll kill those two with all the rage at the bottom of my heart! Tenpenny: Yes, thats the kind of anger and rage I wanna see in an apprentice. In Bone County. Triad:(On a cellphone) This is the place Mr. Woozie. What do we do? Woozie: Find Ran Fa Li and kill Carl Johnson! Triad: Yes sir. The Triads enters the town, but secretly many bombs and underground mine bombs. are scattered throughout the town. Triad: Sir, Ran Fa Li isn't here.....(bombs explodes) Woozie: What happened?! Answer me! What happened?! Carl I will kill you! Triad: Sir, all members of the search party are dead! It was a trap! Woozie: Leave me alone I have planning to do! Triad: Yes sir. In Red County. Sweet: Oh no not now! CJ: What?! Sweet: The gas is running out!*car stops* Mike: $hit what do we do now?! CJ: We go on foot. Hurry lets go! Sweet: Aiight I got my weapons ready. Mike: Me too. CJ: Aiight lets do this $hit! The run off into the dark foggy road. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 Remake is comeing along nicely As for you hommie as you sad you need energy to write chapters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 6, 2006 Author Share Posted December 6, 2006 Thanks for the comment and energy Cookies and Beerhat Gaja! More chapters tomorrow stay tuned! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GSF_Membuh Posted December 7, 2006 Author Share Posted December 7, 2006 Chapter 5: Tenpenny's Origin Liberty City Docks, 9:45 p.m. 8-Ball: Come on old man tell me what I have to do! I'm tired of waiting here doin' nothin'! Tenpenny: *Comes out of shadows revealing he's in a wheelchair.* In due time Ryan. In due time. I need you to have some rest before I assign you anything. 8-Ball: Fine. In the meantime would you mind telling me how you became a paraplegic? Tenpenny: Don't mind if I do Ryan. It all started in Los Santos, San Andreas 1992. I used to be the head officer of an organization called C.R.A.S.H. along with my two asscosiates Eddie Pulaski and Henry Pendlebury. Our mission was to end gang violence in the streets of Los Santos, but it would come at a cost. Pendlebury was shot down by Grove Street Gangsters which Carl Johnson was co-leader of. After Pendlebury's death we were driven to a state of depression and soon the streets went into total hell, until our newest recruit Jimmy Hernandez came and inspired us to get back to work and the streets were settled again. Until Carl Johnson returned after five years of staying in Liberty City. He left because of his younger brothers death which his other brother Sean Johnson blamed Carl for their brother's death. Grove Street Families were rising back from the dead and becoming a major threat to us, so me and my gang of "Freedom Fighters" took action and killed most of the GSF members instead for Carl and Sean. Their best friends Lance and Melvin saw the light and helped us put Sean in the hospital and forced Carl to join us and made him do our dirty work for us. But CJ found some new friends and he rised up against us and brought his gang back to life and took down most of my forces. I tried to retreat in a brokened down fire truck but Carl made my truck derailed off a bridge thus making me a paraplegic. 8-Ball: Wow tough luck there old man. Tenpenny: Ever since then I quit the force and made it my life mission that I'll end street violence and kill Carl Johnson for ruining my life! 8-Ball: Looks like we have something in common after all old man. Tenpenny: Looks like we do Ryan. I think its time for you to make yourself useful. I need you to pick up two former asscociates of mines. Their names are T-Bone Mendez and Catalina Vialpando. They are both residing in Red County, San Andreas on Fern Ridge. 8-Ball: Don't worry old man I'll bring them here. Even if I have to use force. Tenpenny: Also tell them Tenpenny sent you. 8-Ball: Aiight. *Gets in a limo and heads towards the airport.* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gaja 90 Posted December 7, 2006 Share Posted December 7, 2006 Chapter 5 is preety short, I know that Chapter 6 and 7 are quite long so no problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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