GTA. A cops tale

[silvermanblue]

Circa 2004 Carcer city

 

A young rookie cop by the name of Robert O’Keefe starts his first day with the Carcer city police department.

A Third generation cop he is very proud to be apart of the force.

His father who was also a cop until about five years ago is paralyzed due to a gunshot wound to his back.

To this day he has no idea who the shooter is.

Robert always promised his father he would get to the bottom of it.

 

Robert leavs the 16th and heads south on main.

As he is cruising the notorius south side he notices a old brown perennial, I swear I saw that car at the police impound tonight robert says to himself.

He follows the car to the old industrial estate on the edge of the city.

As he's following the vehicle it takes a sharp turn in to a old coal shed.

Robert decides to play it safe and park the squad.

He exits the car and slowly approaches the massive open door.

He is about to creep around the corner when 3 gunshots ring into the night. Roberts adrenaline starts pumping as he screams "CARCER CITY POLICE DEPARTMENT HANDS UP"!

All of a sudden he hears a familiar voice "Bobby is that you".

The voice had come from the captain of the 16th precinct, A Charles Logan.

"Captain what the I don’t understand" Robert says?

Robert also takes note of a gentleman siting patiently in the car.

"Well Bobby" as the captain explains, we have been having a lot of trouble with a certain news reporter.

So to protect the integrity of the force, we eliminated her.

The captain can tell by the rookies face that Roberts going to be trouble.

The captain goes on "Well bobby I got to tell you", no rookie is prepared for this type of thing.

Officers have to protect other officers from all threats, even if it means murder.

Robert begins to feel very nervous.

Robert thinks to himself, I just saw my captain commit a murder, but who's going to believe me?

The captain studies the rookies face, and see's blind obeidiance and a little spite.

Well son the captain says, I dont have to tell you whats going to happen if this gets out.

Robert looks up at the captain with a hidden rage, "what" he says in a rather arrogant tone.

Well alot of rookies have turned up dead recently, I wouldnt want anything to happen to you.

Robert is stunned, some fat italian cop is threatning him.

Don't worry sur, he says in a deep voice. I will be careful.

Good, good the captain says.

The captain is about say something else when the horn beeps from the Perrenial.

Look kid, I gotta go.

The captain keeps talking as he is getting in the car, be careful kid Ill be watching you.

 

 

The perenial starts up and drives away. As robert begins walking to his car, he tries to replay the events that just happned. But he already begins forgetting details. What the f*ck robert says to himself, I gotta do something. He reaches the squad and opens the door, But what the hell am I gonna do? Robert starts the car and drives into the night.

 

 

He heads back towards the city's south side "carcer killer’s territory", he says to himself.

In the last month four cops have been killed in this very neighborhood.

It sends a chill down the rookie’s spine.

He should have a partner but due to the bureaucrats downtown the department’s strength was at about 75%.

Sh*t, he was lucky to have a car, Even if it was a late 80s premier with well over two hundred thousand miles on the odometer.

The young cop flashes back to reality when he notices a stinger.

He thinks to himself either somebody lost the highway or the guy is a high roller in the drug or prostitution trade.

As he is about to investigate when a black man walks over to the car and hands the person something.

Well that’s good enough for me he hits his lights and the stinger takes off.

 

 

Roberts tears after him through the slums.

The stinger just barely stays ahead of him.

Robert radios in, “this unit D420" I am in pursuit of a late 90s stinger unknown plate I am requesting backup”, the dispatcher responds, “this is base currently there is no backup available.

Robert responds with a string of obscenities and hangs up the mike.

F*ck man this guy is hauling ass, he's got to be up to something.

A 4 door rancher pulls along side of booby's squad and pumps a 12 gauge slug into the hood.

The car instantly dies, bobby fights to keep control of the car.

The rancher rams the car into a old shop.

Rob awakens seconds later to see a magazine on the windshield, El burros donkey paradise it reads on the cover.

Robert realises he has crashed into a closed porn shop.

Well atleast I have reading material, the rookie says to himself with a smirk. Robert tries the radio but it's dead.

Well this is a predicament robert states.

Then some headlights light up the back of the squadcar.

Hm maybe some helpful passerby robert says?

Probaly not robert replies.

Robert sees two shadows appear in the headlights, one of witch is holding a RPG.

OH sh*t the cop says, I gotta get outa here.

Robert tries the door but its jammed, well thru the window I go.

Robert wiggles out of the passenger side window of the squad and breaks into a run to the back of the store.

As he reaches the back he hears the whoosh of a rocket.

Robert jumps behind the counter as the squad explodes.

The store shakes violently after the explosian and copious amounts of porn start on fire.

Robert gets up and kicks at the door to the back room, the door bursts open and robert enters.

The room is pitch black except for the fire light from the main shop.

Robert looks and sees a exit sign and runs for it.

Robert reaches the door and kicks it open, he is now in a alley behind the shop.

 

Robert runs down the alley to a side street down the block from the burning shop.

As he reaches the street, he walks under a dim streetlight.

He gazes accross the street at a bunch of teenagers sitting on some burnt out buildings stairs.

He takes a quick look at the 5 boys.

They are each sporting red skulleys and a jean jacket.

Robert quickley tries to remember the booklet on gang colors and outfits.

The color drains from Roberts face when he remembers who the gang is.

"The Carcer killers" he says as one of the boys looks up.

WHY THE f*ck IS SOME PIGLET STARING AT US The oldest boy exclaims! Robert breaks into a run as the gang pursues.

KILL THE f*ckING PIG another member yells.

GUT THE f*ckER a third gangbanger yells.

I am so totaly f*cked robert thinks to himself.

Just then Robert notices an building with an extended fire escape.

Well up I go. He flies up the stairs 3 at a time and finds a broken window and enters.

 

Cynthia Sawyer, a young woman who had just moved into her place on the southside of Carcer from a small town in San Andreas.

Cynthia had just finished a hard day of trying to find work.

She was sitting down for her favorite show ”liberty city survivor".

 

Cindy hears a loud noise on the fire escape.

She screams “Who the f*ck is on my fire escape”!

Just then a young police officer bursts through the broken window.

“What did I do” Cindy asks the officer?

Nothing, I'm just passing through the officer explains.

She was about to ask what was wrong, but he had already run out the door.

Well that was weird she says to herself.

She hears even more racket on the ladder.

“sh*t now what”.

The leader of the gang sees the young woman through the window.

Hey!

Did you see a cop go running through here the leader asks?

Nope, I think he went to the roof she replies.

“sh*t” “he’s on the roof” He yells to the goons.

As the small gang rushes up the stairs.

Jeez I hope that cop makes it cindy says.

On the TV some guy gets taken down by a shotgun blast.

“God I love this show” she says to herself.

 

Robert was running through the building trying to find a way out.

He finally sees the other side of the building he's in.

He notices a window across the alley.

He attempts to open the window but the frame and window fall down into the alley.

“Well that was unexpected” Robert says to himself.

He finds a couple of old boards in the corner and makes a bridge to the other building.

He slowly begins to crawl across the boards to the other side.

Robert hears, “Hey I found him he's crossing to the other building” from the gang on the roof.

“f*ck” Robert says as he starts to move faster.

He reaches the other side just as a shot rings out.

He tries to open the window but to no avail, the window is locked.

Another shot rings out as he removes his baton and smashes the window.

He can hear the guys on the roof arguing on who's going to jump to the building that bobby's in.

He starts running through a huge empty floor with nothing but support columns and an elevator in the middle.

Going down he jokes to himself. He reaches the elevator and hits the button. He hears the old antique lift begin to work.

But it sounds like it hasn’t been used for years.

The derelict elevator screeches to a halt on his floor.

Robert enters the elevator and doesn't see any buttons, just a handle marked up or down He moves the lever to the down position.

The killers on the other hand were running down the stairs of Cindys building. They figured that they would just camp out, and wait for the cop to exit the other building.

Robert was descending at a pretty good rate when the lift went straight through a ceiling in to a store.

 

The truth as everybody calls him, Was just lounging in the back of the store smoking a bowl of hash.

Truth had just moved in recently.

The store which would have been illegal just two months before was a huge success.

Due to the fact that cannabis had just been declared legal in carser.

This was lucky for Truth because he had no real way of starting a business. He had taken a loan out from a friend awhile back.

The loan did not have to be paid by any particular time, but truth was anxious to complete the karmic circle.

The gentlemen who had loaned him the money, Carl Johnson had only asked for a small percentage of the profits to the store.

The truth had explained that he needed to complete this journey alone. CJ didn’t push the issue, he knew that truth was good for it.

 

Roberts finds himself in a room full of healthy marijuana plants .

What the f*ck am I in Bob Marley’s lair or what?

Robert exclaims.

“Who the f*ck is in my hydroponics section” The Truth says.

The officer yells, “I'm an officer with the carcer city police department”.

Oh sh*t man the city said everything would be cool The Truth says anxiously.

“Relax I'm not here for you I just got a little trouble with some of your neighbors” the officer says.

The truth asks, “Who”?

“The carser city killers”, the officer replies.

“Well you are in a lot of trouble my new friend”, the truth says.

“Now we need to get you outta here before the ck's burn down my store”.

Edited June 24, 2007 by silvermanblue

[silvermanblue]

revising will be reposted thanks!

Edited December 8, 2006 by silvermanblue

[Themanwiththeplan]

Its not a bad story mate but here are a few pointers.

 

There are a lot of punctuation and grammar errors, also spelling mistakes. After you have written a paragraph, read over it twice to check for these mistakes. As they can ruin your story and make people stop reading.

 

Also its not clear where people are speaking you could lay it out better e.g.

 

Tim: Merry Christmas Jack.

 

Jack: Thanks Tim, same to you.

 

Just a few suggestions to help you out.

[silvermanblue]

Nevermend this post

Edited June 24, 2007 by silvermanblue

[silvermanblue]

Well I bumped my old story, and double posted in the process . I did alot of refinements and grammer corrections. I hope you like it, more chapters to follow. Also I know its far from perfect, mostly because of my spelling and grammer . But I put alot of work into this and I hope it entertains you as much as it did me.

[silvermanblue]

Wow triple post, how about some comments please. I know I suck but atleast you can tell me that I do. Go ahead and me, I dont care. But at any rate here is chapter 2.

 

 

Chapter 2 "A wing and a prayer"

 

The Truth leads the rookie cop to a discrete door in the side of the shop.

"Look" says the Truth, "behind this door is a stairway down to the basement".

Robert says "ok".

"Well once you get down stairs take a right and a quick left", the Truth continues.

"You will now be in a narrow hallway", "I don’t go down there since I saw a ghost of my mom".

Robert nods.

The Truth continues, "this will lead to an old grease pit in the garage next door", "I own that garage".

Robert asks, "then what"?

"Well there is an old Tampa in there", "I didn’t see anything wrong with it", says the Truth.

"Sweet" says Robert, "I might make it outta here alive".

"Yeah but you gotta hurry", "and on your way out draw the CK's away from my shop" the truth says.

"I don't have insurance yet", the Truth continues.

Robert replies, don’t worry Truth they wont know what hit them.

"Now go"! The truth exclaims and "Godspeed officer".

"I owe you", says Robert as he heads down the stairs.

 

Robert Follows the old hippie’s instructions and finds himself in a dark garage.

Robert proceeds to flip on his flashlight and looks around.

He sees three cars in the garage, a old camper van with a psychedelic paint scheme, a busted ass looking manana and the Tampa.

Robert hops in the Tampa and tries the ignition.

The old motor turns over once, than starts with large backfire.

The rookie slams the car in reverse and smashes thru the back wall of the garage.

At this second one of the CK's yell’s "what the f*ck was that"?

Another goes "Billy go check it out".

Robert maneuvers the old car into the alley way, He looks up to see a solitary ck looking at his headlights.

Billy goes "Guys get over here now"!

Robert sees his chance and floors the accelerator.

The old Tampa rears up and squeals towards the lone gang member.

Billy dives out of the way as the car slides to a stop, Robert yells to the kid "this little piggy says go home to the stunned kid" .

Bill yells, "the cop is in the car", "get him"!

Robert hits the gas and the old car launches forward like a scared antelope.

The other gang members rush into the alley to see the taillights of the Tampa sliding into the street.

The leader screams "find a car now"!

 

Robert barrels out of the alley and turns right, the neighborhood is relatively quiet, considering the fire in the porn shop.

The fire had grown and was now burning the building next to it, fire trucks were responding but were 10 minutes away.

Robert was contemplating on what to do.

"Well whoever tried to kill me", "probably assumes I’m dead", Robert says to himself.

Robert takes a quick left and keeps cruising.

"Who would want me dead", the rookie asks himself?

"Probably my asshole captain" the rookie exclaims.

"That f*cking fatass", "no wait", Robert stops himself.

"I wonder who the asshole in the passenger seat was in the perennial".

"Probably a f*cking fed", "he must of been threatened by me", "wanted me dead".

Robert begins to ponder what to do.

"Well I gotta find a clean pair of clothes and a place to stay".

"It's probably best that I lay low".

Just then Robert notices a old Hotel with e and the l burned out.

"Well I can rest here".

 

End of chapter 2

Edited June 28, 2007 by silvermanblue

[HawaiianHardHitter]

IMHO, the structure needs some work brah. We need to put some better dialogue in there. The dialogue in your previous chapter was good, but that last chapter...not so good brah. For example use:

 

 

Truth: Look.

 

"Look.", said The Truth.

 

 

Something like that, and I hope you get the poitn of what I said. If ya get that down, then you have a good story here. I like the plot as well, but just work on the dialogue aiight brah. Great story!

Edited June 28, 2007 by HawaiianHardHitter

[silvermanblue]

Thanks for the comment, I am quite proud of the first chapter. I still have the original of the second in a not pad, so I will update with the quotation marks. The third chapter is done, but I am adding and deleting some things.

[HawaiianHardHitter]

Good to hear brah. I can't wait for that new chapter!

[silvermanblue]

I am overwhoring the GTA fanfic here, but here is chapter 3

 

 

Chapter 3 Good things come to those who wait….or do they?

 

Lance Matthews was sleeping 10 minutes ago, now he was in a beat up old fire truck, on his way to some god forsaken part of town to fight a fire in a closed porn shop.

"Damn" says Lance, "I was having a nice dream about a hot blonde".

Don, another fire fighter responds, "yeah I hear you".

"HEY"! "You guys gotta quit bullsh*tting", "this is a big one", says the lieutenant.

"No problem", both men reply.

The truck rounds a corner and the firefighters see what their up against.

The Porn shop was completely engulfed and the building next door was also on fire.

"Get some water on the second building", "the first one is a lost cause".

The fire fighters get to work and start hosing down the old apartment tenement.

 

Robert walks up to the clerk in the beat up hotel, "can I get a room please" Robert asks?

"Ah yes see" says the fat Cuban, behind the desk, "that will 26 dollars", "cash".

"And if you want your own bathroom 35 bucks".

"Gimme one with a bathroom please", Robert says.

"Say senior you aren’t a cop are you", asks the Cuban.

"What me no", "I just came from a costume party", replies Robert.

"Oh yes see", "I understand". "Your room is on the third floor", "watch for the hole in the floor", the Cuban says.

Robert hands over the cash, and heads for the stairs.

"You have a pleasant evening", "checkout is at 11am" the Cuban says.

 

It’s about 4 am, when the fire fighters get the fire out.

"What the hell is that in the shop", lance asks.

"It looks like a car", "or what was a car", says Don.

"Hey lieutenant" , "look at the car in there".

"What the hell", "maybe a traffic accicdent" says the lieutenant.

"Better call PD" The lieutenant.

Don yells, "hey guys look at this".

Lance says, "looks like this car had a light bar on the roof", "and a computer".

Lance puts 2 and 2 together, "sh*t this was a cops car".

"Yeah lieutanet we better call the cops", says Lance.

 

The CK’s had just stolen a 2004 excalade and were looking for the Tampa.

"Where could he be boss", asks Billy.

The leader goes, "I don’t know", "that’s why were looking for him", "you idiot".

"Oh yeah ok boss", says billy.

"Man where is that pig" says another gang member.

"He probably went back to the pig den", says another member

"Maybe" says the leader, "but we will still keep looking", "we owe that son of a bitch".

 

Robert reaches the room, after having to jump over a huge hole in the hallway.

He opens the door and turns on the light, about 40 cockroaches scatter under the bed.

"Hmm classy" he says to himself, as he looks around the room.

The room is painted with a horrible yellow paint from the seventies, with horrid green shag carpeting, and brown stains all over the carpet.

He also sees a 1960’s style television with a wired remote.

"Wow", "is this place from the future", says Robert in a sarcastic tone.

He looks at the bed with miraculously clean sheets, "they only look clean" says Robert to himself.

Robert jumps on the bed, trying not to think about what has happened on it.

He takes off his shirt and pants and lies in his underwear, he then switches on the antique TV.

An infomercial is on about some new cutlery, Robert watches until he falls asleep.

 

End of chapter 3, this chapter was rather short, a couple of GTA tie ins coming soon in chapter 4.

Edited June 29, 2007 by silvermanblue

[HawaiianHardHitter]

Much better brah. Really improved, and a great chapter at the same time.

[silvermanblue]

Chapter 4 coming at you.

 

Chapter 4

Repaying debts

 

 

Robert wakes up in a cold sweat, he desperately tries to remember his nightmare.

He panics for a split second when he looks around, but he then remembers the night before.

Robert sits up in bed and rubs the back of his neck.

“What the hell am I gonna do”, Robert says.

“They know im probably not dead by now”.

“Well what to do about my outfit” Robert says to himself.

“I can throw on my pants”, “and just wear my undershirt”.

“Besides” ,”I can always stop at a binco”.

Robert puts on his pants and tucks his service pistol, a nine millimeter berretta in waistband.

Just then someone pounds on the door, Robert pulls out his pistol and screams, “what the f*ck do you want”!

“Hey check out time is 11 a clock its 10:45”, “pack you’re f*cking bags or pay up” says the manager.

“Shut the f*ck up asshole”, “I will be out by 11” replies Robert.

He hears the manager grumble and walk away.

“Why in the f*ck would I want to stay in this sh*thole any longer than I have to” he says to himself.

He walks out the door and jumps the hole in the hallway.

“Man after I get this sh*t sorted”, “I am calling the building department”.

He walks downstairs’ and into the lobby, the fat Cuban has been replaced by a younger skinny Cuban wearing an old fedora.

“Hey man you want another night” says the cuban.

Robert replies under his breath, “maybe after I get a tetnus shot”.

“What was that gringo”, asks the Cuban.

“Oh no thank you”, says Robert as he walks outside.

 

Its already feels like 90 degrees outside, Robert surveys the street.

Directly across the street a burned out Esperanto sits with to kids pretending to drive in it.

More kids down the street play in an opened fire hydrant, and a couple of teens hangout in front of a little convenience store, with the upper floors boarded up.

Luckily the gang of kids is from the Renegades, a mostly benign element in the gang scene.

Robert walks to the Tampa and unlocks the door.

He sits down in the car and starts it.

Robert shifts the car into drive and heads to the Truths shop, to see if the CKs had damaged it.

 

The Ck’s had stopped at a little grocery store to get something to drink, and rough up the place.

As the group was walking outside, Billy sees a Tampa cruise by that looks like the one from last night.

“Uh boss”, billy says.

“Boss um” billy says again

“BOSS”! The leader spins around “What the f*ck do you want”?

“I think I just saw the cops car go by” replies billy.

“What” ,”oh sh*t where did it go”?

“It looks like its going back to our turf” answers Billy.

“Well common you f*ckheads”, “lets get him”.

 

Robert waits at a stoplight down the street from the grocer, not knowing that a titanic SUV is speeding towards his rear-end. The light turns green and Robert begins rolling forward when the large SUV smashes in to the back of the Tampa.

Robert on instinct floors the accelerator, the car accelerates away from the massive SUV.

The leader says, “f*ck this sh*t”, “get my AK”!

One of the other members reaches into a duffel bag and pulls out a Kashinov rifle.

The leader than sticks his body thru the sunroof and begins taking potshots at the Tampa.

Robert can hear the shots penetrating the old cars trunk, He yanks the wheel right and goes down an alley. The Excalade tries to mimic the maneuver, but rolls over and tumbles down the street, only stopping when it hits a parked Yankee.

The leader is killed when he flew from the sunroof and was crushed by the tumbling SUV.

The other members are battered and bruised.

A younger small member named Little John screams, “NO BOSS” when he realizes what happened.

Little John is filled with rage and a wanting for revenge.

“Common guys we roll” says john.

“But what about the boss” asks Billy.

“f*ck him” “his problems are over”, “we got to nail that son of a bitch” says John.

 

Robert is roaring down the alley when the engine dies, he checks his gauges and sees he is outta gas.

Probably punctured the gas tank with an AK bullet, “well I lost them” Robert says to himself.

The car rolls to a stop in back of an old taxi depot, a rusted cabbie sits in back of the decrepit garage.

Robert walks over and investigates, an old Jerry the Gerbil key chain hangs visible under the ignition.

Robert hops in and tries the ignition, to his luck the putrid smelling cab roars to life.

“Well off to truths”, as he shifts the car to drive.

Robert pulls the car out of the depot and towards the truths store.

 

End of chapter 4

 

[silvermanblue]

Well another double post, but the stories really coming along. And to be honest I am enjoying writing it.

 

Chapter 5 “The other side of the coin”

 

(flashback) To just after the murder of the TV reporter, and Roberts surprise appearance.

Captain Logan and the other gentleman are talking in the Perennial.

 

Logan: well what are we going to do about Bobby sir?

Passenger: Don’t call me sir, my name is Toreno or agent Toreno to you.

Logan: Oh sorry, Agent Toreno.

Toreno: Look, don’t worry I will take care of that snot rookie.

Logan: but he is just a boy, I don’t think he is a threat.

Toreno: Yeah? How do you feel about jail, or being in prison and being a cop?

Toreno: Look if our deals are to made public, the public will crucify us.

Logan: I know but that kid has potential.

Toreno “HAD”

Logan: I understand.

Toreno takes out his cell phone and dials a number.

Control: This is control, state your codename and password.

Toreno: Ace of hearts and gobstopper.

Control: You are being transferred to a secure line.

Unknown person: hey Toreno, what’s going on?

Toreno: I can never understand how you can be so relaxed.

Unknown: Look what do you need?

Toreno: I need some one eliminated.

Unknown: Why is this?

Toreno: Possible mission obstruction.

Unknown: Hmm I see, well what should we put on the toe tag?

Toreno: He is a rookie cop by the name of Robert O’Keefe.

Unknown: What does he know?

Toreno: He knows about the reporter’s murder.

Unknown: Ok then, I will dispatch the black ops, and have this situation dealt with.

Unknown: End of communiqué.

Toreno hangs up the phone and looks at the captain.

Toreno: That kid only has hours to live.

Logan nods his head.

They drive into the night.

(End of flashback)

 

Robert is almost to the shop, when he sees a familiar face.

He slows down and honks the horn.

The young lady, that had been just picking up the results from a failed grocery bag, looks up and smiles.

“Oh officer”, Cynthia Sawyer says.

“I am glad you got away”, “wait are you ok”?

Robert replies “oh well I am not with the force any more”, “do you need a ride”?

Cynthia goes “that will be great”

Robert goes “wait let me help you with those”, as he helps with the spilled groceries.

Cynthia and Robert both get into the smelly cab.

“Wow” says Cindy, “that’s a unique odor”.

“Yeah it’s a loner” Robert replies.

“What’s your name”, “officer”?

“Robert O’Keefe at your service” as he chuckles.

“Well it’s a pleasure to meet you Robert”, “my name is Cynthia sawyer”.

“Well I prefer bobby”, says Robert.

“Ok bobby then”, “oh were here”.

“Wow” bobby says, “I couldn’t tell at night”, “but this place is a dump”, “I don’t mean to offend”.

“Oh yeah but it’s cheap”, says Cindy “and I didn’t take offence”.

They both laugh.

“Excuse me Cindy”, “But is there a place I can park”?

“Oh, yeah there is a fenced lot behind the building”, Cindy replies.

“Ok I will help you with the groceries”, “than I will park this beater”.

“Ok” says Cindy

 

Bobby and Cindy are sitting in her living room talking.

“Well tell me Mr. O’Keefe”, “where are you from”?

“Oh me”, “I was born and raised in Carcer”, “and you”?

“Me I am from some hick town in San Andreas”.

“Really” says Robert in an excited tone, “did you see any celebrities”?

“No sorry”, “I only went to Los Santos once, and that was to fly here”.

“Oh well no matter”, “well I gotta go to see another person who helped me last night”,” and to find a place to stay”.

“Oh wait bobby”, “you can stay here”.

“What no I couldn’t intrude”.

“No seriously my pleasure”, “besides I will have someone to cook for”.

“Well if you insist”.

“I do I do”, “dinner will be at 7”.

Robert yells “thank you” as he is walking out the door.

 

Robert walks down the stairs and in to the hot, sultry street.

He turns to his left and walks under The Truths neon sign, well no damage out here Bobby says.

As he walks inside, he looks across the street, he sees a Washington and two Huntley’s parked. “Hmm must be a landlord or something”, he says as he walks inside.

As Robert walks inside a Chinese gong sounds.

He hears some talking stop and the Truths voice, “Hello and welcome to my shop”.

“Oh you might remember me from last night” Robert says.

Robert hears The truth and the other person converse for one second.

As he begins walking back, a black gentleman in a Didier sacks suit walks from behind a bead curtain.

“Well well well”, “you caused a little trouble for my friend”, “witch means you caused trouble for me”, says the black man.

“And that doesn’t even bring up the fact”, “that you’re a pig”.

“By the way, I’m Carl Johnson from the grove street syndicate”, “and I think you should get your pig ass outta my buddy’s store”.

“Wait says Robert”, “I am here to thank him for his help”, “and for the record the department tried to kill me”, “so I don’t think I will be donning the uniform anytime soon”.

“Well” says CJ, “you have my attention”, “why would the PD want you dead’.

Bobby replies, “Because I saw something I shouldn’t have”.

“Oh yeah” says CJ with a little bit of curiosity.

“What did you see”?

“I saw my captain murder an innocent woman” replies Robert.

“Ok so what are you going to do about it says CJ”?

“Well I plan to gather more evidence and take down the whole corruption ring”.

“Unfortunately I think the government is behind the whole thing” Robert says.

“Well I don’t know what a little Irish piglet is going to do”, “but I might lend a hand”.

“I always go for the underdog”, says CJ.

“So officer or” says CJ?

Robert or bobby if you like, CJ says Robert.

Ok bobby, I got a little job for you if your interested, says CJ.

Bobby responds, I’m listening.

“Ok”, says CJ. “As you know C.R.A.S.H is a nationwide program, which supposedly helps communities eliminate drugs”.

Bobby nods in agreement.

“Well the program was started by a LSPD officer by the name of Frank Tenpenny”, CJ continues.

“All the program really is”, “is a drug runners protection ring”, CJ says.

Bobby is a little overwhelmed, he knows some members of crash in his department.

Just then the Truth appears with a tea tray, CJ and bobby both take a cup and thank him.

Bobby is about to take a sip when he smells the liquid, “What is this stuff”?

“Green tea and goat urine”, “it preserves your CHI” says Truth.

Bobby dumps the liquid in a potted plant as does CJ.

At this moment the gong sounds again.

 

Ohh cliffhanger

[silvermanblue]

Triple post, well thanks for the comments guys .

 

Chapter 6 for anyones thats interested.

 

 

Chapter 6 “old friends”

 

The Carcer Killers had stolen a brand new sentinel from an old man on main.

“Well”, “where is he John”, says a CK.

“I don’t know, but I think we should check out that hippies shop”, “I got a hunch” says little john.

The CK’s pull up in front of the Truths shop.

“Ok boys lock and load” “this place be getting f*cked up if he here or not” says john.

The CK’s pile out of the sport sedan, and walk into the store with their weapons raised.

 

CJ and Bobby are about half way into the shop, they both turn and look as the CK’s walk in.

Bobby screams “sh*t it’s the CK’s”!

Both bobby and CJ jump behind a display for unbreakable hookahs.

“You got a peace officer” says CJ.

“All I got is a nine and 2 clips” bobby replies.

Little John screams, “hey I am looking for a f*cking cop”, “and I think he’s in here”.

“So come on out and we will kill you fast”, “if you make us look, everyone is going to die slow”, says the enraged gang member.

At this second CJ opens his jacket to reveal 2 Ingram Mac tens hidden in special pockets on his bullet proof vest.

“Here officer err I mean bobby”, “have you fired an automatic” before?

“Yeah but only a mp5” Robert replies.

“The recoil will cause the gun to raise”, “so shoot it sideways, that way it sprays from right to left” says CJ.

“Got it”, says Robert.

John screams again, “one more minute or we start tearing this place to shreds”.

“Naw, f*ck that playa”, “you gonna have to leave before something bad happens to you”.

“Who the f*ck said that”, yells john.

“CJ from the grove syndicate”, “and you think your gangsta”, says CJ.

“You aint seen gangsta until you seen me”.

John screams, “f*ck this place up boys”.

The CK’s open fire and bullets start flying everywhere.

“Ok officer”, “lets show these wannabes what its like to face a real gangsta”, “lets go”!

Both CJ and Robert open fire from behind the display.

One of the ck’s get peppered with at least 45 bullets.

He drops to the ground with a sickening thud.

“Die you f*ckers”, screams little Johns.

Another Ck goes down with a precision shot from Robert to the head.

Billy drops his gun and runs out the door screaming.

Little John is behind some shelves, he screams “if this is the way I gotta go, so be it”.

John rounds the shelves and instantly gets 25 shots to the chest, he slowly falls to his knees than falls forward.

CJ and Robert walk towards the corpse, Robert instinctively kicks the gun away from his hands.

CJ pulls a 50 caliber from his back and puts a slug in to his head.

“That’s what happens when you f*ck with family business bitch” says CJ to the headless corpse.

CJ screams “Truth, you a’ight”?

“Yes CJ”, “but my shop is full of negative Karma, I am going to have to move the”, Truth says.

“Well truth”, says CJ “if your moving we minas well take care of this place”, “I got some satchel charges in my car”.

 

Robert and CJ watch the old hippies campervan disappear around the corner, CJ walks across the street and yanks the drivers door open to the first Huntley. “What the f*ck is up with you niggas”?

“I almost get killed by some f*cking street gang”, “and you niggas chillin and listening to f*cking tunes”, yells CJ.

“Well boss we um didn’t know”, says the security agent.

“Get the f*ck outta here”, “your fired”, screams CJ.

Both Huntley’s start up and drive away.

“Next time I only bring OGF’s”, says CJ as he pops his trunk.

Inside there is an arsenal of weapons and what looks like a drink cooler.

Cj opens the cooler and hands a satchel charge to Robert, he also takes one himself.

The walk back into the shop and down in the basement.

“Ok bobby, set up you charge here”, “I will put mine on the back wall”.

“When their both in place”, “meet me around back says CJ”.

“Ok” replies Robert.

 

CJ and Robert are standing behind the truths old store, “the building should fall in on itself” says CJ.

Cj pulls out what looks like a keyfob and presses the button.

The old building shudders and tumbles backward towards the 2 men.

Cj and Robert break into a run and get out of the way in the nick of time.

“I was thinking that they both should have been in the middle”, says Robert.

“Hey man”, says CJ “I aint no demolition expert”.

“So now we see my little sis and her husband”, says CJ.

“Where do they live” asks bobby?

“Over on jersey in east carcer”, replies CJ.

“Well I will see you later bobby” cj says as he gets in his Washington, and watch yourself.

The Washington starts up and drives away.

Robert heads back up to Cindy’s for a hot meal.

 

End of chapter 6

 

[silvermanblue]

Qraudruple post, please anybody make a comment.

well here is chapter 7

 

 

Chapter 7 The investigation begins

 

 

The CFD lieutenant gets off the phone with the captain of the CFD.

“Well the arson investigator is on his way”, “when the cops do arrive”, “tell them it’s too dangerous to enter”.

“I don’t want those corrupt assholes to taint the investigation”, continues the lieutenant.

“Ok” says lance and don.

A discrete looking white burrito pulls in front of the scene.

A portly man by the name of Ralph Little, gets out from the drivers seat.

Ralph walks to the back of the van, and takes out various tools, and a hardhat.

He walks over to the lieutenant and they converse momentarily.

Then he proceeds into the building and begins taking photographs.

He stops for a second and glares at the back of the burnt out premier.

The trunk of the car is misshapen and shredded, he proceeds to take a photograph of it.

Ralph than takes note of the shelves around the car, the ones in the immediate area are knocked down, but the rest of the shops shelves are upright.

He takes some more photos and momentarily removes his hardhat to wipe the sweat from his brow.

At this second two black antelopes bull up in front of the burned out store.

4 men in generic black suits exit the two cars, they walk to the lieutenant and begin to question him.

“Greetings sir”, says one of the men, “I am agent Williams from the SIU”(special investigation unit).

“Me and my men will continue the investigation”, “please have you investigator turn over what ever evidence he gathered to our men”, “your cooperation is appreciated”.

The lieutenant begins getting red in the face.

“LOOK YOU ASSHOLES”, “if you think I am just going to bend over and take this your sadly mistaken”.

“Yes sir you will or you will be contempt of court” says the lead agent, as he produces a cease and desist order.

The lieutenant skims the document and sighs, “Ralph turn your pictures and recordings over to these gentleman”, “The CPD has officially kicked us out” says the lieutenant.

Ralph hands over the items and walks away with the lieutenant.

“Hey Jim”, says Ralph to the lieutenant.

“Yeah Ralph”?

“They may have the originals”, “but I have the backups in my van”.

“What” says Jim?

“Yeah I invested in a camera that takes digital images and transmits them to my laptop”.

“This thing has peeked my curiosity”, “I am going to do some more digging” says Ralph.

“Be careful Ralph”, “these guys are serious”.

“Oh don’t worry Jim”, “I am very careful”.

 

Robert is sitting in Cindy’s living room wiping the remnants of a fine chicken dinner off his face.

“That was delicious Cindy”, says bobby, “I am stuffed”.

“Well I am glad you liked it”, says the young woman.

“By the way the couch folds out if your tired”.

“Oh no Cindy I got more work to do”, as bobby throws on a old flannel shirt that Cindy had from a old boyfriend.

“I am going out”, “but I wont be out to late”.

“Be careful bobby”, she says as she hands over a spare key.

“This will get you back in here but don’t make a lot of noise”, “I don’t sleep to soundly”.

“Ok I will be quiet” says as the young man heads into the dark hallway and down stairs.

 

Robert walks onto the darkening street, he looks over at where the truths shop use to be. He was expecting some kind of team of experts to be looking over the rubble.

But there was only a solitary raven, picking at a CK’s hand that was sticking out of the rubble.

Robert walks around the back of Cindy’s building and hops in the derelict cab.

He gets the car started after three tries and drives out on to the street.

As bobby is cruising, he decides he will head up to the north side and get his car and some clothes.

Robert sits at a barely working traffic light, he notices a group of teens walking toward the intersection, each of them sporting bats.

Robert looks at the teens clothes and realizes it’s the renegades.

He looks to the opposite way and sees one of the CKs from earlier exiting a convenience store.

At this point he hears, KILL THE CARCER BITCH, from the small gang.

Billy looks up and sees the renegades, he then notices the old cab idling at the stoplight.

Robert watches the kid run to the cabs passenger door and hop in, the kid produces a nine mil and screams, “get me out of here now”!

Bobby looks over and smiles, “hey I remember you from the alley”.

Billy looks at the cop closely, at this second bobby yanks the gun out of the kids hand.

“Were going to have a nice long chat um”, “Billy” the kid respond.

The cab takes off from the renegades and into the night.

 

End of chapter 7

 

[silvermanblue]

1. I bumped my story. 2. I probaly quintupleposted. I apologize to the vets of /WD/ for these errors. And now for chapter 8. I also must apologize for my obvious grammatical errors, but I am loving writing the story and I geuss thats what counts, yeah?

 

Chapter 8, the puppeteer.

 

Robert and Billy are almost to Roberts’s apartment.

Robert slows down and parks about two blocks from his apartment.

He shifts the old cab to park and looks at the ex gang member.

Ok kid I got a deal for you, You walk up to my place and look around outside. You see anything that remotely looks like law enforcement let me know, OK?

Bill says timidly, yeah boss.

Look my apartment is in a building with green shutters, you can’t miss it.

My apartment is 3C, just wait outside if the close is clear.

No problem boss, Billy says enthusiastically.

Ok what ever kid, GO!

Billy slides out of the passenger seat and walks to Roberts house.

 

Billy is walking towards Roberts’s apartment, as he gets close he sees a black antelope.

Billy acts like he forgot something and walks back to Roberts’s car.

Billy hops in and begins talking.

"I think a cop is watching your house".

Robert replies "well what gave you that idea."

"There is a black car sitting across the street, looks like the type of car cops drive."

"Ok we will cruise pass, and I will take a look."

"Robert starts up the old cab and rolls down the street."

He looks at the car and sees regular number plates, but it’s obvious it’s a cop car.

"Good job Billy" Robert says, "now it’s time to set a trap."

 

"Ok kid here is the plan, first walk around the block to the alley behind my building."

"Ok," replies Billy.

"Then I want you to use the fire escape to get to the 3rd floor, got it"?

Yeah, replies the kid.

"Ok" Robert continues, "there is a window with a brillo light beer sign. That is my apartment."

"I want you to open that window and go in, its not locked. Then go in to my bedroom and fill up a suitcase with a drawer full of clothes."

"After that I want you to go near my front door, there is a key ring hanging on the coat hook".

"Grab the keys and come back out".

"I will keep a eye out for you".

"Then what"? Replies the kid.

"Well while you are doing this, I will be removing my little spy".

"Ok kid get going".

 

The young boy exits the cab and walks around the building.

Robert eases on the gas of the old cab, and starts approching the back of the black car.

At the last second robert bumps the steering wheel and scraps along the sides of the black sedan.

Robert floors the gas and the old cab responds.

The driver of the Antelope starts the car and begins chasing what he thinks is a drunk cab driver

Robert pushes the old cab to eighty five on the narrow street.

The antelope catches up within seconds.

Robert begins bleeding off speed and leading the antelope closer and closer to the rear end of the aging metal monster.

Robert plants the brake pedal of the cabbie and the front end kisses the street.

The once sleek black sedan crumples as it meets the solid trunk of the cab.

In a instant the engine gets pushed back and pins the drivers legs.

The airbag explodes in a catastrophy of white particules.

The driver is stunned and traped when the young ex officer arrives with pistol in hand.

Robert plants the barrel against the dazed drivers head and screams "DID YOU RADIO IN"?

"No, no I didn't" screams the driver in panic.

Ok says the young officer as he fishes the guys gun out of the holster and puts a bullet in the com system.

The rookie then pistol whips the driver and knocks him cold.

"Now back to my place" says the ex officer to no one in particular.

 

End of chapter eight, enjoy.

 

 

 

 

[poikly]

To break the ice and make sure you dont quadriple-fripple-lipple post, I am posting this.

There. Now no worring of putting too many posts together.

[-/TNT\-]

It's a good story and all, with lots of action, but I'm getting tired of gangs and gangsters. Especially having San Andreas's cast making appearances in so many fanfics really make the setup get old quickly.

 

You should try to use as many new characters of your own as you can. It's your story, it should have as many personal touches as possible to stop it looking like a generic story that's been tampered with. You can also try to make longer dialogues. It's supposed to be more like a movie, not a game script.

 

I find myself unable of locating the Voting buttons. So, for the time being, I hope a verbal "Rated good" and a blowjay will suffice.

Edited September 13, 2007 by -/TNT\-

[Vercetti21]

I don't know. It's all very bland.

 

"He drove away." "He was shot."

 

You're just telling what happens, and not really spicing the story up at all.

[silvermanblue]

@ Poilkly Thank you for the comment

@ -/TNT\- Thank you very much. Yeah I totaly agree with you. The returning character's are not major players in the plot. CJ is roberts connection to the criminal underground. The Truth is flat out awesome, besides he is gone for the rest of the story. And Toreno is not who he seems.

@ Vercetti21 Thats just the way I roll, I am very discriptive with my action parts. Thank you for you critisim though.

 

And now

 

Chapter 9 “Dirty deeds”

 

Robert walks back to his apartment building.

He observes the kid waiting patiently at the front door.

“Any problem” asks Robert?

“Nope, everything was where you said it was”.

Robert grabs the car keys and nods in approval.

“Good job kid, now let’s grab my clothes and get out of here”

 

Robert walks out of the elevator of the underground parking lot with the young gang member in tow.

“Well kid, that’s my ride”.

Robert hits a button on his key fob and the sound of a strong V8 is heard turning over and starting.

The lights of a classic saber turbo glow with an eerie blue glow.

“Whoa” replies the kid, “that’s your ride”?

“Yeah, a present from my dad”, Robert says as he unlocks his trunk.

Robert throws in his suitcase and shuts the trunk.

They both open the doors of the muscular machine and settle into the worn seats.

Robert shifts the old car to drive and they cruise to the exit of the garage.

 

 

Back at the Carcer city police department, the chief sits in his dark office with a large glass of bourbon.

The mysterious agent sits calmly in an over stuffed chair near the back of the office.

Chief Logan: I really don’t know where Roberts is at, he dropped off the grid.

Agent Toreno: I got to get rid of that thorn in my side before he goes public.

Chief: What are you worried about? You will just sweep it under the rug, it will be me that the public barbeques.

Toreno: Heh, yeah you’re right, but let’s just say I HATE unfinished business.

Chief: I’m glad you’re not worried, because I am sh*tting bricks.

Toreno: Look its being…

Toreno is cut off by a ringing phone.

Toreno: You going to answer that?

Chief: Yeah of course,

Chief Logan here

Dispatcher: I have an emergency patch thru from an undercover.

Chief: Put it thru.

Undercover cop: I have O’Keefe, he is at his apartment.

Chief: Is he in custody?

Cop: No, I am currently two blocks south of his apartment in my vehicle

Chief: WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING THERE??

Cop: I was lured away by O’Keefe, I rear ended his vehicle and I am trapped.

Cop: He also has my weapon.

Chief: Ok, hold tight helps on the way.

Chief: Dispatch?

Dispatch: Yes sir?

Chief: I want a swat team and uniformed officers at that location now!

Dispatch: 10/4 over and out.

Chief: Maybe my guys will finish the job.

Toreno: We will see.

 

Robert and bobby approach the garages exit door.

As the door begins opening, the two of them notice two police cars blocking the exit.

OH sh*t says Robert as he slams the classic car in revese.

What are we going to do boss?

Easy kid, we will fly out.

Robert stabs the gas of the old car.

The willing V8 gives the car an incredible burst of torque and screams towards the exit ramp.

The couple of officers that were advancing down the ramp scatter at the sight of the huge car.

The suspension of the saber barely keeps the old car from bottoming out on the steep ramp.

As the car advances up the ramp at 70mph, the front end raises as the rear wheels bite down.

At the top of the ramp the car achieves altitude, but not enough as the front wheels slam into the fenders of the parked cruisers.

For a split second Bobby panics at seeing more and more of the sky, at this second the rear wheels hit the fenders as well. The nose of the old car dives as the force of the collision pivots the car forward.

The car lands hard on the front wheels in the alley across the street.

The cruisers that were blocking the exit immediately give chase.

 

End of chapter 9

 

Short chapter but the next is going to be a long read.

Edited September 14, 2007 by silvermanblue

[silvermanblue]

Chapter 10 is out the door, and with cliffhanger to boot.

 

Chapter 10 “Free Falling”

 

The sleek muscle car screams down the alley.

Billy looks over at the ex cops face, no emotion is present.

Just a single bead of sweat is running down his fore head.

Billy: Boss?

Robert: What kid, I am a little busy?

Billy: What’s the plan?

Robert: Probably hit a pay and spray, new paintjob would help us blend in.

Robert cranks the steering wheel right on the next side street.

He looks up ahead and sees 2 Antelopes block the road.

Agents exit the cars and take aim at the ex cops car.

Robert nails the ebrake and slides the car around 180 degrees, he plants the gas pedal.

The old car launches forward away from the would be captors.

Robert: Kid!

Billy: Yeah boss?

Robert: Is that Pay and Spray still open next to the studekard factory?

Bill: I don’t know boss, that’s triad turf.

Robert: Well what the hell we are only a couple blocks away.

 

The neighborhood rapidly deteriorated as they approached the old factory.

A couple of teenage Asian prostitutes look on as the sleek muscle car screams by with 5 police cars in pursuit.

Robert lightly taps the brakes to maneuver on to the narrow street next to the Studekard factory.

He slides up to a small building next to the massive factory, the doors appear locked and bolted.

The old pay and spray is long gone.

Robert: Just my luck!

The young man slams the old car in reverse and performs a 180 degree turn.

The cop cars are startled at the sudden appearance of the cars headlights and scatter out of the way.

Robert takes notice of a road block at the end of the street and makes a split second decision.

He veers the old car in to the main doors to the massive abandoned factory and races up the ramps between floors.

 

The Ancient Studekard car factory was the jewel of the city when completed in 1927.

The factory produced between 15 and 20 million cars until the factory closure in 1976.

The factory at one time employed 7000 workers, until Maibatsu of America bought out the company in mid 1976.

All the workers there were promised that their jobs would remain vital to the company.

Some say that day in 1976 a piece of Carcer died when the doors were locked and never opened for business again.

The factory remained relatively quiet until late 1987 when the rock band “Love Fist” had a concert in the abandoned factory.

The concert goers roamed the whole factory and destroyed what little stuff the Maibatsu Corporation didn’t sell off.

Small fires were lit in many of the out buildings and chassis’s of old automobiles were pushed out from the upper floors. The tortured metal frames buckling and breaking on impact with the cobblestone street.

On the top floor of building two, a cache of antique 1967 studekard kurumas (Name purchased and used under license by Maibatsu of America) sat undisturbed on the 6th floor until all but two hidden ones were destroyed by the drunken concert goers.

After that faithful night the factory remained open to anybody who wished to enter.

During the gang wars of the late 1990’s many bloody skirmishes were fought in the old building. Instead of a car factory the police had renamed it a body factory.

 

The powerful Sabre was climbing floors as fast as an express elevator.

One courageous police car followed the muscle car into the dark factory.

The old sabre was on the forth floor with the cop nipping at its tails.

As Robert raced down the old moldy shop floor, his car cliped a barrel of engine oil.

The contents of the barrel end up covering the ground.

Roberts sabre makes the turn at the next ramp and proceed’s up to the next floor.

The police car attempts to mimic the maneuver but the tire’s are coated with oil from the spill.

The world starts spinning around as the cops car pirroettes towards a window.

Luckily the cop bails and lands in a homless mans pile of clothes.

The car continues sliding and disappears out of a open window.

The other officers waiting outside panic as they see the black and white sedan fall out the window.

The police car lands in a old holding tank for fuel, the tank explodes as the 30 year old gas meets the cars exhaust.

 

Robert slides to a stop on the seventh floor of the massive building.

He suddenly feels the explosion and also notices the building shift ever so slightly.

Robert: Ohhhh sh*t!!!

The ex cop glances over at a concrete support column, he sees cracks appear in the old pillar.

Robert slams the gas pedal and heads for a blown out window.

Directly across the way building two holds open its arms to anyone escaping the collapse in building one.

Billy: Well I had fun.

Robert: So did I kid, so did I.

The car launches out the blown out window.

 

End of chapter ten.

Edited September 17, 2007 by silvermanblue

[silvermanblue]

Sorry for the bump and the double post, but here is chapter 11.

 

 

Chapter 11 “Great minds”

 

Ralph Little is back at the Arson investigation unit in the carcer municipal building.

He systematically scans every photo of the fire scene.

He finds himself drawn back to the cars trunk.

Ralph: The answers there, I know it.

The investigator picks up his cell phone and calls a Joshua Medemus.

The phone rings three time and is answered by a young woman.

Woman: Hello?

Ralph: Is Josh there?

Woman: Yeah hold on.

Joshua: Yello?

Ralph: Hey Josh, who’s the lady?

Joshua: Oh you know flavor of the day, what’s up?

Ralph: You old dog. Anyways how effective is a Russian rpg against a car?

Josh: It would cause horrendous damage to most newer cars, older ones would fair better. Why?

Ralph: Well I responded to a fire down in the slums. A car had run into an old shop. The weird thing is that that some kind of explosive device detonated in the trunk.

Josh: So some asshole bombed a shop, what’s the problem?

Ralph: I defiantly looks like a projectile hit the trunk, but I will send you the pics.

A couple of minutes pass.

Josh: From what I can see is it was a RPG that hit your car in question.

Something retarded the explosion; it should have done more damage.

Ralph: Maybe a dud?

Josh: No, the explosive charge was weakened. Probably a weapon made for disabling cars without killing the drivers.

Ralph: They use this in the US?

Josh: No, it is primarily used to destroy suspected car bombs in Israel.

Ralph: Is it traceable?

Josh: Unfortunately the charge destroys everything, but the launcher can only be used once. It was probably ditched in the area. Might be a good place to begin looking.

Woman in the background: Josh, come back to bed, I need my injection.

Ralph: I know I know have fun. I will keep you informed.

Josh: Later dude.

The phone goes dead in his hands.

Ralph: I guess I will head down to that side of town and look around. Maybe I will get some good luck.

 

The classic sabre glides thru the air, then the nose of the car begins dropping.

The nose of the car destroys the wall of building two and smashes into a pillar.

Robert: f*ck me that hurt. You ok kid?

Billy: Nothing a joint or I mean beer wouldn’t fix.

Robert: relax kid, a little weed isn’t a big deal.

Something catches Roberts eye in a doorway.

Robert: Hey kid, wait here for a second.

Billy: Ok

Robert walks to his trunk and grabs a flashlight.

He begins walking to the doorway.

Robert: HOLY sh*t!!!!!

Billy: What, what’s wrong?

Rpbert: It’s a 1967 Kuruma, no wait two of them.

Billy: I thought they didn’t make Kuruma’s before 97.

Robert: That name was bought by Maibatsu, studkard was building Kuruma’s since the 30’s.

Billy: How did they get here?

Robert: Probably a missed shipment, studkard was having problems in 1966. They were probably stored here and forgotten. Building two has been closed since the 50’s, well before building 1 stopped production in the 70’s.

Billy: Ok a couple of cool old cars, so what.

Robert: These cars are worth about a Mil a piece.

Billy: NO sh*t!?

Robert: No bull sh*t kid, these cars are really rare.

Robert: I wonder.

He walks back to the ruined saber.

Robert: Sorry girl.

Robert yanks open the crushed hood and yanks out the battery.

He walks back to where the two cars were hidden.

Robert: Kid, go and see what the cops are up to.

Billy walks back to the window and looks out.

The building they left was leaning away from building two, but it didn’t fall.

Billy: The building is still standing, barely. It looks like it could fall at any minute.

Robert: Damn, if the building had collapsed, it would have coverd our escape.

Billy: How in the hell are we supposed to escape, your car is trashed.

At that second an engine starts and settles into a idle.

Robert: Oh ye have little faith.

I am going to throw in the gas from my saber and we will both drive out of here.

You know how to drive kid?

Billy: Yeah, but what am I driving?

Another engine fires,

Robert: Because kid, you are driving this one out.

Billy: Why? We only need one car.

Robert: Because, we can sell one of them and use the money to leave carcer.

Billy: Well ok, what now?

Robert: I got another little plot to play out before we leave this old factory.

 

End of chapter 11